Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 78
I love your story. The ending was perfect. Thanks for all the time, and hard work, and effort you put into this. It is truly a master piece.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 78
I must say that I was pleasantly suprised at how much I LOVED this story. i was sure that it would be a lot of plotless sex. But in fact that story would not have made sense without the sex. I was pleased to see that all the scenes were a part of the plot and did not take over the story. It was a beautiful balance of drama, smut and falling in love.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind coments.. We are really glad you enjoyed it. We are writing the original story to it.. which will be similar but a little different as a series.. we hope you like that as much when it comes out.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 78
I've been reading this story over the past three days... I love it. I want to read more! I'm greedy that way. I really enjoyed the happy ending, and thoughts of what may happen to James made me giggle.
Thank you for writing this story, I really loved reading it.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
What a fucking ass hole.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 78
This is a fantastic story!!! So much details and emotions that really brings this story to life. And the ending wrapped everything up so nicely but still left you wanting more. I was so disappointed when i went to read this story, which i had saved in my favorites, on another "fanfiction" site, only to see that it had been deleted, then to stumble across it hear just made my day. I am definitely going to have to check out your other stories. thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
awww thank you very much.. I am glad you enjoyed it.. yeah I created this site when we were having troubles on FanFiction.net.. it has done okay for itself.. I only created it for rmcrms5 and this story.. when I was writing Volturi Order and knew if they took those off THAT WOULD PROBABLY GET ME BANNED.. but everyone else seems to like it and it has taken off.. So I am glad you have come over and I hope you stick around :) TSO xxx
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 78
This was a awesome story thank you so much for sharing it with us all! I absolutely loved this story a lot. It was well written and not once did I feel shorted by the story or did I feel as if the story line was fading. You did a remarkable job, and you should be very proud of your work! I look forward to reading other stories you post. Thank you again for the sharing of your story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 78
WOW!!! What a perfect ending. I loved the whole story. Sorry I didn't reply untill now but I read the whole thing in 3days along with working...It was sooooo good! Keep your writing up. You're great.
Author's Response:
awww thank you.. I hope you like the Volturi Order as much as this one.. xxx
Date: 22 Jun 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
Chapter 62
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
Wow. I finished the whole story and then came back to this chapter.... It's no wonder she can't have a friendship with Carlisle now. He was terrible to her. It really is OOC for him. He new she was new to this and in his own words "practically virginal", yet he was rough and had no compassion. He fingered her ass with no lube, he was harsh with his words and his actions...
At least everyone else (Emmett, Jasper, Rose, Alice), brought her pleasure in her humiliation, Carlisle just brought fear and in the words of the great & fucktacular Fifty Shades...there is no room for fear in the playroom or bedroom....
I love Carlisle's character in the TwiSaga, so it is hard to see him be so un-loving towards Bella. I understand he is the HeadMaster and has a rep to protect, but he could be leader and Master and still teach compassion. I think his character learned a lot from watching E & B thru the to way mirror. E wasn't as harsh aas Carlisle would have liked, but he was able to be Dominating and loving at the same time.
(("Fifty Shades" belongs to Snowqueens Icedragon and her masterpiece "Master of the Universe over on Twilighted.net))
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I would REALLY love to have Edwards POV on the last chapter. It kind of feels like an abrupt end. How is he dealing with therapy, Bella in college, opening night at the new school, coming home to find Bella submissive near the door??? All the way thru you kept us in everyone's head. I'd really like to see the ending from EPOV. Also....
Did they ever find where the GPS chip was located in Victoria?
And, I thought it was odd that everyone kept apologizing to Bella for "all you went thru" but no one said "I'm sorry for WHAT I DID to you". Rose was riding her face, Carlisle repeatedly threatened and finally did take her in the ass....
What ever happened with Angela & Ben?
Maybe also opening night of the new school from Carlisles POV?
Date: 18 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 78
I freakin LOVED your story. LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it!!! Emmett & Rose were perfect and hysterical. Would have loved more of them, as well as Jasper. Carlisle was great, but could have been sexier, a few times he just came across as a nasty old man...I missed his tenderness. Boy, you girls really took James to the dark side, huh?? LoL You were GREAT getting into his disturbed mind and totally fuck-tastic in his destruction!!! OMGosh...I was looking forward to Rose & Em getting their hands back on him, but sending him off to Aro was ..... I can't find a word .... total fuckery. What a way to go. Thank you for this story. I'm going to look for more stuff by you girls cuz I likey how your brains work. LoL
Date: 17 Jun 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Thank you for your reply. As Aro puts it:
“Now, under normal conditions, you would not be alive long enough to express your restitution, but after having met you, I am more willing to look at your rehabilitation. Yes, I think you should learn from your mistakes, and also be an example to others. Humor us with an update of the missing details!"
Date: 17 Jun 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 78
Hello,
I just read this story and even though it is finished I thought I send a review.
When I first started I was introduced to a whole new world. Besides TV I know nothing about this stuff.
The story was recommended so I read it. Praying to find a good story behind all the kinky stuff I “had” to witness. Training day one, two……..different subs, Doms……. I went through all different kind of emotions - together with Bella. From the very beginning I could really picture her being lost and unhappy and that she pushed herself to do it because she thought she would receive love and a life in return once she was done.
I am still surprised about the tension throughout the story and all the ideas you came up with. I was holding my breath, closed my eyes, I even had to get coffee and chocolates in between because I was so excited with what happened. It almost never got cheesy and the few times when it was necessary you always found really nice ways to make it work.
And last but not least: Thank you for sparing me the “you need more and therefore I am leaving for good - Edward part”. I appreciate when writers want this in their stories. But when you get the story line over and over again than it is nice when someone comes up with something a little different.
I think the last two chapters are missing quite a few details. I am into the dark side of life and I love it when Aro gets involved. I think I was running around with an evil wicked grin on my face after I had finished the Aro chapter. But I would have loved to witness the meeting with him and Heidi. Or more details about James and what happened to him.
Carlisle reopening his school, Victoria and the baby……. Maybe Bella and Jacob/Charlie……
You have spent so much energy with the whole story and put in so many details on the little things to make it work and therefore I think the end came too abrupt.
So if you work on a sequel, please let me know where to find it! I have only registered a few days ago and need to work out what to do :O)
Author's Response:
Awww thank you and yeah we have been critised for ending it so soon... I think we might just add on a bit at the end and keep it going.. not sure.. maybe.. we are throwing some ideas around at the moment. We were intending on writing the original story with nothing to do with twilight but as we were writing it.. we got 1/3 of the way through the novel and it is turning into something else.. so that is now on the back burner and we are writing something totally new..
So... we probably will do a few add on's to the story..... and you might like Volturi Order that is our new one.. totally different and the way you get alerts is to sign the story or author up for favourites. Just make sure you agree on the second page to confirm it. We are re doing the site at the moment and that is one area we want to make alot better it isn't that clear and we don't like it. but for the short term that is how you get alerts when a story updates. oh, make sure you have ticked it to be sent to you in your options in your account info.
Thanks for the review I am glad you enjoyed it.. xxx
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 78
Just Amazing, Loved it!!! Glad that Ar*e James got what he deserved + Some.
I will miss having this story to read :0( its feels like losing a family member......
Well written and extremely Graphic (in the Best possible way)
WHICH IS GREAT!!!!! lol
None of the namby pamby crap like on other Sites. U guys Rock! Keep up the Fantastic Work and This Fantastic Site. MWAH xxxx
Author's Response:
Aww thank you.. glad you liked it.. and yeah it had to end, it was sad to finish it to be honest.. but we are writing new things and it is very exciting some of the new projects we have dreamed up LOL
Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14
UMMM, fuck no. He was just in her ASS and expected her to "clean him up" with her mouth???? Nastiest shit I've read yet.
Love your story, by the way.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 78
Love love love the chapter, and the ending, =) i loved the journey,
thank you, for that,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 08 Jun 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 78
Thank you for writing this beautiful and smoking hot story, and for staying loyal to it right through the end of 78 chapters! What an accomplishment. I love the ending, love that Carlisle was able to go back and start his school again, safer this time. Love that E & B can get back to some play time without baggage. Love that Victoria is enjoying motherhood.
Reorganizing all the POV's into one cohesive chronological story really helped the flow. You always did a great job overlapping without repeating details and dialogue unless it made sense to do so.
Glad you will keep this story up, because I could see rereading and enjoying the story all over again. Good luck with your next ventures and your original fics. Thanks so much for writing this story for us!
~BOH
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
agh i was all happy for them for getting away them i remembered that james has her chipped, fuck.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 78
This has been an incredible journey, I just read this last chapter for the 2nd time. You did such a great job and I loved every single chapter (even the hard ones). Thanks for sharing.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 78
What an incredible ending. Perfect.
Love you ladies. Thank you so much.
x x
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Somehow I managed to missed these last two updates. WTH??? Well I think that was a very HEA for James.
hehe
You have both done amazing things with this story. *clapping and cheering*
x x
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 78
Loved it, I can't believe it's over....
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG that's just mean.... And Edward really is stupid....
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 78
C'est une histoire vraiement extraordinaire et passionnante. J'ai passé de merveilleux moments en votre compagnie. J'ai lu avec l'aide du traducteur google.
Fleur
Montréal, Québec
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
"I never did worry about the little things" Point of No Return
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Holy Crap!! How glad am I that I can cruise on over to the next chapter and not have to wait for an update??!!! Excuse me....................I am going, no running to the next chapter................
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I first heard about this story from a reader's review at FFFW. Of course it still had this story as listed on FFN. Well, with all that crap going on over there, naturally I saw the story was gone. So, I looked it up and found the blog and read the first 65 chapters there. From there I found a link to the TWCS forum, pm'd you guys and finally got here. I am so happy that I tracked ya'll down!!!
Now if that doesn't show you that I am interested in your story, I don't know what will! LOL!!
Author's Response:
That is so much fun.. Thanks so much for following us all over the WORLD... I hope you like the site, we have some wonderful stories on here.. So welcome..
Thanks again for reading
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
Well this story has been one of the most interesting ones I have read. I love the characters. Rosalie is really something else. This is a role just made for her! LOL!! But the other characters have been developed equally as well. Curious concept for a school. But, why the heck not?
Date: 31 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 78
That is really one of the best fanfiction ever. In my top 10. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. You have doing very great.
Date: 30 May 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 78
A perfect ending. Thank you for sharing your gifts.
Date: 30 May 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5
Wow, James is...a dick.
Date: 30 May 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 78
I am sorry I am disappointed in the ending. Per your prevois notes it was to be long and all questuions answered. Instead it was short and unanswered. What happened with Heidi, how bad did Aro punish James, how did Jacob cover up Laurent's death, what was the actual excuse they gave Bella's parents, the above was very vague, it just seemed lacking, sorry the story was so great the ending just didnt live up to the actual story.
Author's Response:
I am so sorry that you didn't enjoy the ending, but I have to ask.. .. did you read the chapter before this. Most of the other questions were answered in that chapter. We tried to tie up all the loose ends. Hope that helps. Thanks for reading.
Date: 29 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
Poor, Bella. Totally clueless as to what a monster James is and what he's thrown her into.
Date: 29 May 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
You do realize I really hated James and Carlisle and Esme with this first chapter. James totally deserved my hate.
Love ya!
Date: 29 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 78
Yes, Edward, I would love to play *evil grin*
Love you ladies. Mwah!
Date: 28 May 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 78
You leave us like this!!!! Argh!!!!! Lots of love to you both for this wonderful story!
Date: 28 May 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 78
You should write a comeback scene...i'm so selfish please!!!
Date: 28 May 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 78
There is a spanish translation of this up on fanfiction.net. The author is citricos. I don't know if they are posting it with your permission or not but I thought I would let you know just in case.
Date: 27 May 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 78
well done all of you xx this story was excellent and i was washed away with each chapter xx will you be doing a follow up of james in the future ? x
Date: 27 May 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 78
*sniff, sniff* so sad to see it end.
So approriate to end it with that line. Eddie and Bella do still need their play time :)
Love you ladies and can't wait to get more into VO
Mwah!
Date: 27 May 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 78
Thank you for the last chapter. I have also enjoyed your journey through writing this story, watching Bella, Edward and the others grow and deal with their issues, and most especially deal with James. And I am glad that he is gone from their lives for good!
I will be looking for your VO chapter!
Date: 26 May 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 78
I love the end , I wanted more is normal nobody wanted the end lol it was great AND HOT LIKE HELL I hope can read your stories and maybe have one epiloge??? the end is always very sad but it was really amazing congratulations for your great job here!!! keep going you guys have a great imagination and I love can join it reading!!! ;D
thanks for let me read it and sorry my English :P
Date: 26 May 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 78
OK, I started reading this on FFn and I got behind and then it was removed. I just found it here and reread the whole thing and finished it. Why, oh why did it take me so long to read the whole thing? This was amazing. I love that Bella has come so far in her recovery taht she wants to play like that again...especially when that wasn't what she wanted in the first place. I'm amazed that James thought he was above recieving any of the treatment that he was dishing out to Bella and Victoria.
thanks for sharing this :)
~Susan
Date: 26 May 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 78
i just finished this story. It was good but i wished that you would let see how there sub/dom relationship ended up. and them discussing there past sex life. how did Bella feel about him being bi and how she felt about it. maybe you can do an outtake on it. or a part two...
Date: 26 May 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 78
It's over!! I'm sad but it was a great ending. Good job ladies. I look forward to hearing more from TTSS when the original version comes to fruition.
Date: 26 May 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 78
GREAT ENDING~PERFECT!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 78
very very well written story!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
sounds like "Geschichte der O" ("story of the O"?)...
Date: 25 May 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 78
:D awesome story you had me from chapter one and kept me on the edge of my computer desk chair the whole way thru.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 78
im sad the story is over. i wish it had continued.
Date: 25 May 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 78
What a way to end it! "So, Isabella, you wish to play?" Good job at wrapping it all up with a bow on top.
Again many thanks and much gratitude to you both for sharing your time and talent with us and for bringing us TWCS Library as an alternative to Fan Fiction. It was a wild ride and very much appreciated...
Date: 25 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 78
awe, i'm sad its over but you lovlely ladies did an amazing job. this story will always have a special place for me. it was totally original and wonderfully written.
i can't wait to see what else you girls come up with!
-roxy
Date: 25 May 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 78
What a nice wrap up!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 78
Wow. I had been dreading the ending to this story for a long time. I didn't want it to end, but this... this was the perfect ending. I can't wait for the original Training School. This was fantastic.
~Jessi
Date: 24 May 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 78
OMFG!!!!! I can not believe that htis is the end. That is so sad. I can not believe that it is over. I LOVED the ending. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!! You girls have done a terrific job writing this story. I have loved every chapter. I am sad that it is over. But I guess, Every good thing must come to an end. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!
I look forward hearing from you girls on the VO.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 78
I'm so happy for all of them. Thank you for this amazing story.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 78
OMG OMG OMG...hyperventilating...can't believe it's over...i just want to keep reading...your stories are just too amazing for them to end :P
Thankyou for the journey. It has been an absolutely unbelievable ride to experience with you! I have loved every high and low, every twist and turn. I will sorely miss this incredible piece of literature. You women are amazing. Never stop writing!
Date: 23 May 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 78
I enjoyed every single chapter of this story. I'm so happy they are healthy enough to start playing again. I think this was a perfect ending. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.
Date: 23 May 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 78
Wow i wanna cry so badly right now!!! I'm gonna miss these two, i'll read anything u guys write about them so bring it on lol I'm looking forward to it!
Date: 23 May 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 78
Loved, loved, loved this story from the very beginning! Thank you for taking this on this awesome journey with you guys. That was a perfect ending to a great story! I am sad it is over! I hope James is enjoying his payback in hell! Looking forward now to your next installment of VO!
LindyP :)
Date: 23 May 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 78
OMGEEE ITS OVER!!!
I CANT THINK OF LIKE NOT GETTING ANYMORE UPDATES SAYING TTSG HAS UPDATED
THATS SOOO SADD
I THINK IM GOING TO GO CRY
OH WELL HOPE YOU WRITE MORE
THAT WAS FANTASTIC
I LOVEDDDDD ITT
AWESOMEST STORY EVERRR!!!!!!
Date: 23 May 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 78
my gosh, i had been in pins and needles the whole story, man i had to admit that James got what he deserved, please post soon, Jasper, Edward and Emmett are hot and Carlisle its not so bad neither.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 78
Amazing, very good ending. You given the info, but not all of it, some imagination is required but you can see that everyone will get through it!
And I cannot wait for the original!
ttfn
Ardanwen
Date: 23 May 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 78
ARG! You are sooooo evil! Damn you. I was looking forward to that scene. DAMN IT!
So sad to see this done. Are you planning any sort of sequel or outtake?
I think this is one of those stories that I can only read one time... Like The Red Line. Read it once, can never read it again. Of course, that was sooooo much more worse than this story... And now Im babbling.
Please post another chapter here if you have another story like this coming out.
Date: 23 May 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 78
Thank you for the wonderful journey. I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
I have truly loved all about this story. I have read all pov. this was truly a rollercoaster at times. At times I would have strung James up, most of the time. My hate for him was undeniable. the emotions one felt when reading this story was unbelievable. at times I could not read it at work cause I would be so pissed. Or sad. This was alot of fun and enjoyable. thank you for writing this story. I look forward to any stories in the near future. love it thank you
i am glad the girls went back to school. i am glad bella and edward are still together. i love that they re-opened the school. it is good carlisle and esme are taking a more hands on approach and interviewing the applicants. I really believe one day that bella and edward will be back. i think that rose and em being instructors there are great. i have loved it all. thanx
Date: 22 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 78
Great, loved it! Though I am sorry we didn't get to see them play, but I see how it needed to end right there. Maybe you might consider selling the scene for a charity auction...
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 78
great ending!!!
Date: 22 May 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 78
this story was really good. they've come so far. and the end was great lol.
Kristi
Date: 22 May 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 78
I love the ending. It was perfect. You know they would have such a hard time after everything they went through. I have been reading this story ever since last summer. It is one of my favs and I am sad to see it go. I will definitely be reading all of your other stories.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 78
Wow, I'm really going to miss this story as I love me some Domward.
Date: 22 May 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
S.O. & Foot
Sad, that it's over but, I just have to remember it's here to re-read over & over!!!
Maybe one day, you'll give us the one last scene that Bella started at the end of this chapter!!!!
Great story!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!!)
Cory
Date: 22 May 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 78
that was good i liked it upset it was over but i liked it
Date: 22 May 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 78
Loved the ending!
Date: 22 May 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 78
It was nearly perfect. I wish you gave us one last scene though.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 78
OH MAN!...ah I mean WOMEN!!! I have chills running up my arms! Ending this on a high note is the cherry on top :-) I am so happy I took the journey through your utterly entertaining, thought prevoking and down right fan-f*cking-tastic fan-fic beyond all fan-fics :-) Through your writing you have summoned every concievable emotion form my heart, soul and kinky twisted libedo! :-P A thousand thanks for writing and sharing this phenomenal story...and creating this fine ass website to showcase it properly and by doing so saying a great big f*ck you to however those ignorant witches that did their "worst" to derail it...but not end it! Not gonna lie. I will miss the shit out of this story :-( Enough ass kissing on my part. Will the two of you give your computers a much needed vacation! Be Well :-) Mora
Date: 22 May 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 78
wow, congrats, you made it. and what a beautiful endingt to a unique story!
Date: 22 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 78
Nice ending! But no epologue? Does this mean a nother story??! I hope so!
Date: 22 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 78
Great story, sorry to see it end. You guys did an awesome job with this story.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 78
*sniffs* so sorry to see it end, but it was such a great story
It was educational for me, whether you intending that or not, not only about that lifestyle, which mader me curious enough to google to read more on, but with the relationships, trust and love.
Lovely story ladies.
Looking forward to more from you two!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 78
Absolutely loved it! You couldn't end the story with a better line than that! Perfect!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 78
A fucking awesome end to a fucking awesome fic. I have stayed with this fic since the very beginning on the other website which shall remain nameless. This was truly a good ending. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME STORY AND I WILL MISS THE CHAPTERS. Maybe, we may get an outtake or two. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 78
you guys are the greatest writer i love this story i have from the beginning i want them to be in the playroom in the next chapter and both pouring all their love into their dom/sub relash and i would have loved to have them get married to but what ever you write i await with excitement
Date: 21 May 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 78
Is this the last chapter or will there be more? Great story!!!
Date: 21 May 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 78
What a journey these 2 have taken! Thanks for the story, and I look forward to the VO update.
Date: 21 May 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 78
Oh Holy F**k!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 78
An amamzing ans sensational journey! One I thoroughly enjoyed... Thanks so much to you girlies for this work of art......
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 78
*applause* Bravo! Loved it what a great ending. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us. *hugs*
Date: 21 May 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 78
Did you have to end it there??? Come on, one more smuttake would have eased the pain of the story ending just a little!!! Great job girls! I am really sorry to see this story end. Can't wait to see what you two come up with next!!!
Date: 21 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 78
Loved it! I'm so glad that they started a new school. I was sad when they had to close the other one. I really enjoyed seeing how everyone seems to be healing. I thought the end was perfect with Edward saying "So,Isabella, you wish to play?" It would have been one of the many fan fic moments I wish I really could have seen. Great job. I really enjoyed the story and always looked forward to the updates.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 78
i'm like - just one more scene with e & b PLEASE!!! I loved this story - the tough bits were tough to read and I'm sure to write, but you two have done a most outstanding job. Thank you so much for bringing these characters into our lives. Absolutely awesome - I can't tell you how I am going to miss the rush when the update alert would sound!!
Okay, now to VO!! You just keep us hanging on...hmmm I wouldn't want it any other way. I hope that you write again soon - you are an awesome combination.
Michele (peoplelikeus).
xoxo
Date: 21 May 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 78
Great ending! Thanks so much.
Date: 21 May 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 78
fabulous finish ladies fabulous finish, it's amazing what has occured whilst this story has been being created, from finding you on ff, following you to the blog, to following you moving here as you created this magnificent website & library FOR WHICH I AM SO THANKFULL , loved the ending you put together for this and cant wait for your original training school to be published through your publishing house i will be one of the first to buy, thanks for an exciting ride ladies it is much appriciated, tracy
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 78
wow, guess everything fell into place huh?
i will miss this...*puts*
much love!
Date: 21 May 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 78
Wow, it really has been a journey. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I wish there were more to look forward to.
Thanks for this incredible ride, and for this wonderful site. Y'all are the best!
Date: 21 May 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ending it like that was sweeter than I would have expected. Thank you so much for a fun ride.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 78
Fan-effing-tastic!!! Perfect ending to a wonderful journey. Good luck with the Orginal TSS. Cannot wait to see it in print!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 78
It's really over... You must be happy, and most of all proud of yourselves. What began as a story and a collaboration, took on so many turns and dives, it has to be difficult to grasp. But after all that happened from the start to now, I am certain happy and proud are two of the most used and repeated words.
Thank you for trusting yourselves and keep the story going even when things began to look so dark. Thanks for not giving up. For delivering such an amazing story and let us be part of it and all that it brought with it.
It will be missed, but not for too long hopefully. And as for its amazing writers, keep on working you excel at it.
Date: 21 May 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 78
That was a great story with a great ending! That was well written and intense. James' character was awesome as a bad guy! You guys did wonderful. Can't wait for the next piece of work you do....I am an avid fan!