[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
HIP! HIP! HOURRA!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 56: Renee
un accident! hihi!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 55: Bella DAY 20 PART B
époustouflant!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
enfin!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Aww..bella finally said it !! sweet !!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
$20AUS? or $20US? :P Sometimes it's great to live in the land downunder, but other times you just wish you were closer to western civilization!
Poor Edward. He sounds so distressed! It seems like it has taken him a while to realise Bella and Victoria were gone...3am? That has given James a much bigger head start than i thought, if my calculations are correct!
It seems like the jigsaw puzzle is slowly being pieced together, however, and we are learning how everything came about!
Thankyou for the update. EPOV next? I eagerly await your next installment...
Author's Response:
HAHAHAH...the brilliance of pay pal is that it just doesn't matter. .. it will convert it either way. Thanks... we really appreciate you reading, enjoying and helping.. Love ya.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
FINALLY - they know James has the girls.... what a chapter - full of just everything!
Who was the undercover person in the school? Was is Jacob? If so, what was his name in the school - just so I know which one he was or did he not have a main role in this story until now?
Thanks for a extremely packed chapter - just like all the others - so intense :)
Good luck with the upgrade of your server!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
this jjust gets better and better i hope they get to them in time
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B
super!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B
super!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B
wow
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Aaaah,
cliff again :D I'm sure Jacob, Carlisle and Jasper are going to set out against them and that Aro will be a lot of help because it is his private jet...
OOh, cannot wait!
ttfn
Ardanwen
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward DAY 20 PART A
wow!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A
ouash! pauvre Victoria!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A
si triste
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B
Aïe!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 39: Edward DAY 16 PART A
ah! non! Carlisle s'est arrangé pour les séparer...
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A
je suis si triste pour Bella
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 36: Edward DAY 14
j'adore
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
OMG! The anticipation is killing me. The next chapter is BPOV, right? Oh no, it's going to be EPOV and the anticipation is going to kill me even more!!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
NOOOOO! that's all I can say. lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14
merveilleux
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
naww poor edward
and poor carlise
at least aro had nothing to do with it
anyways awesome chaptrer
UPDATE SOOON!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B
wow!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I am glad to see Carlisle finally admiting to sexual assault.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
maudit fou!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
First, thanks for the update! I can't wait until James gets his just desserts. Is there a way to pick the lock on the cock cage, or otherwise remove it without the key?
Second, it's sad that Carlisle and his school are suffering for the actions of these characters, and I like Carlisle a lot more now than I did in the earlier chapters. However, it looks like he needs to take some responsibility for the failure in the screening process. It makes me wonder what else slipped through the cracks - medical checkups falsified?
Third, I donated to the Java Club. I don't know if you'll be able to match up member pen names and emails.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B
Wow!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Aw, HELL - I think this is the worse cliffhanger of all! Well, maybe not, but I'm gonna go insane waiting...
I love being in Carlisle's mind and seeing his thoughts. I feel for him. He really does feel for those he has wronged, even though it was not intentional. He's a good man.
Emmett still cracks me up, I loved it. OK, I've got my big girl pants on, bring it on!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A
oups!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Damn you and your cliffhangers! Arg! Great chapter, love Emmett.
If we dont pay the twenty dollars, will we still be able to post and read?
Author's Response:
but of coarse... ha ha ha... We would never do that to you guys..
Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
see you soon
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
aaahhhh more more more quick quick quick. :) i just can't get enough of this story. great job and keep up the wonderful words!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
je déteste James
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Ok let's all get together and kick the shit out of James.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A
Aïe!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A
Aïe!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Even though I knew the ending to this chapter I still had adrenaline pumping at the end of it. Y'all are AWESOME!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
That was really tense at first but of course Emmett did his thing..TG! So here we are Edward has called and we know that James has done his thing.... getting good!!!!
Angel
PS I'm joining but after payday..lol
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Thanks for the update. I'd be interested in contributing, but would like to do so anonymously & not join a club. Sorry, nothing personal, I'm just not a club person..you know the saying don't want to be a member of a club that would have me as a member.haha
Author's Response:
absolutely...I mean you would have to use paypal and make it a donation instead of membership...but we would not post your name for sure... also...when we send the banner..you have the choice as to whether you put it up.
Thanks so much for your support...we really appreciate it.
**** side note... I love your pen name... those were my all time FAVORITE comics... ****
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11
oups!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
OMG how much time has passed Please help him OMFG I am going to have an attach of some kind LOL This story is so amazing. Hurry with more
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Great chapter!I hope they find Bella soon!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Thank you for this update. Where has James/ Laurent taken Bella? Please update soon.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
This chapter was interesting, and I look forward to the drama that is sure to follow.
Now about Club Java, will joining ensure us to get e-mails when our favorites update as well as everything you have listed? I'm just trying to make sure that I'm not shelling out $20 and having nothing change, you know?
Anyways, good work. I absolutely love this website and would love to join Club Java if you could just answer my question above. Can't wait til you update again!
Author's Response:
Hey there.. and thanks for the question... Here is what has happened...
We have grown so fast... our current server only puts out the first 500 emails. We are having to buy a dedicated server...which should be up and running soon. so you will get all your emals and alerts after that.
Thanks again for reading and enjoying the story.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Poor Edward. He's going to feel so guilty that Bella was taken right under his nose. Will be interesting to see what happens when Aro arrives.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
So Aro was kept in the dark, has no idea who James is, thought Heidi had something to do with Carlisle and his school, she took money and his jet, and there has to be some more information he hasn't shared yet. He wants to come and meet face to face. What else can be involved?
At least Carlisle is already suspecting Laurent. They need to work faster!!!! And Edward's call? He knows it was James, but now what???
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Loved it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
holy. shit. what. next!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Laurent that evil evil mastermind. I'd love for him and James to get into it and take each other down in the cruelist way possible! They. Must. Pay!
I openly sob when I read that last line. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. Poor Victoria. I hope they get to them before the sick bastard can do any more damage. I hope the girls find a way to stand up to him, it'll help with the healing process if they ever get out of his clutches *closes eyes and prays for an eventual HEA*
Yay, just became a member of Club Java!!!!! Woo! You gals have done awesome work with this site, I hope I am just one of many that back you up!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11
merci, merci à l'auteur pour cette belle histoire qui nous fait rêver...
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
ahh a cliffie omg noo! lol wonderful writing as always can not wait literally im already running in circles trying to figure out whats going to happen next ah always on the edge of my seat as i read your wonderful story =)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Okay so I went ahead and signed up. I do not know anything about paypal it took me a couple of cards and 3 email accounts later, but I finally signed up.
Okay back to the story. I am curious did it really take edward till 3 am to notice the girls where missing. the last I remeber it was morning and they gotten up and he left the girls alone to visit. so it would have been mid afternoon when he last checked if they needed anything. I can't imagine him not checking on her for that many hours. they can't stand to be away from each other. James man I want to gut him. I can't wait to see what happens next. thank you for writing. love it
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
love it!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Uh-Oh
Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
So, the plot thickens, but we still need to know about Bella and Victoria! Poor Edward must be beside himself!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Poor Edward. He must be freaking out....not as bad as Bella and V I'm sure but still.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
UGH Update soon please.
I don't know if this helps anyone not getting emails but I do know that my emails for this site and Twilighted were being sent to my junk file.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Aw shit, how much worse can this get? But the worse it gets for the characters, the better it is for the readers. Love it.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Edward's phone call just made me tear up. That is the sweetest thing ever. This is getting so intense. How will they ever find her.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
It's all falling into place now! Heidi worked for Aro but was working with Laurant as well. Aro does not know James, Jacob had heard of Heidi. Now everyone is aware Bella and Victoria have been taken by James. I can't wait to see what is next!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B
je suis toute contente comme une adolescente!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Wow, The Master has spoken. So many twists and turns. Wow. Keep it coming. Going right now to pledge my support. This site rocks and I love you ladies for starting it.
=0 J
Author's Response:
THank you SOOO much... it means so much to us... well...to everyone who enjoy this site... We really appreciate it
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
You ladies are such a tease!!! No fair!! :P
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B
Enfin! Bella & Edward!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A
super Edward!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A
J'espère que James et Laurent se feront prendre.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A
Aïe! Qui est là?
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
impresionnant, Edward sera tout un Dom, j'ai hâte de lire la suite
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
dégoutant ce James, j'espère que Carlisle le découvrira!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7
quel plaisir de vous lire!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
époustouflant!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7
Bella a-t-elle le droit de dire ses limites au contraire des autres?
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
moi aussi, j'ai hâte à demain!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6
wow!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
im so glad i found you all again xx but now i am dying to find out what happens i hope you plan on letting edward kill james i hate him so much xx
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
This is getting good, although I hope nothing truly bad happens to Bella. I think she may have already been through enough. I hope Edward comes for her soon. James really needs to be put out of everyone's misery.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG! That was insane...I started reading this on FF...I'm sad the psycho has Bella now. Ugh!
Please fix it soon...
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMG! Can't believe James has got them!! Noo!! I had forgotten all about V's chip!
Please update soon, lol!
Awesome chapter!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Holy crap that was intense!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Eeeek!!! Great chapter!! Now i'm all anxious :P
Date: 27 Feb 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
that was fantastic... i just read through the entire thing... i cant wait for more.. thank you so much for the wonderful reading experience.. i followed you over here from fanfic.net and i couldnt be happier...
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
HOLY SHIT!!!!! I have spent the past week reading this story from the beginning. First of all.....THIS STORY OWNS ME....THIS STORY IS HOT AS HELL....and now I am freaking out with this cliffy!!!! OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
NEW CHAP SOON PLEASE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111
Date: 26 Feb 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Oh man, really now he has 3....how could they get in so easily...I want to personally kill that fucker! Thanks for the adreniline rush!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I am so glad that you guys are able to continue this story! I always check to see if there are updates, etc.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
This was definitely the worst I could have expected. How exactly did both of them get out of the house with Bella and Victoria in tow? Was Edward blasting music or something? It was all very intense and I think I was about to die... again. But... HE KILLED JAMES?!?! He is so going down! Now that Aro is in on it... I think that was all very confusing... I want answers so bad. This was a turn of events I wasn't expecting... and for a fraction of a second I thought this story was winding down. GAH! I hope they are all right.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
WHAT! NO!!! I can't handle this! No, nope I am a goner! I just died right in front of my computer screen! You can't do stuff like this! Deep breathes indeed! GAH! I can't wait to read your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
OMFG How insane is that???? Thank you!!!!! Cann't wait for the next chappie. How do you make James so damn EVIL
Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Well now it just keeps getting better. Great job. Love that Laurent was the original mastermind. Can't wait to see how James handles everything now. And Edward's reaction to finding the girls missing will be scary.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
OMG! That is an evil cliffie! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Ahhh I told myself I wouldn't forget about the gps chip but I did. Lol. Once again I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
>VERY GOOD AS ALWAYS
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow this is big!!! Lurent is dead !! and poor Edward not see anything
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Well, I don't know if they were better off with Laurent or James. Oh my.
Thanks for updating;))
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
James? Laurent?
Some how, I don't think James would use the word pleasure.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
shit! this was a very scary-awful chapter... left me reeling and a yucky feeling in the pit of my stomach!
VERY VERY anxious for the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Damn Laurent got the worse of James. Poor Heidi where does that leave her? Maybe while all this fighting is going on Edward & co will catch up with them or Jasper, Carlisle, Jake & co. Man James' dick is still in the cock cage though too funny! Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Fuck! Damn it James and all your hunter and survivalist ways. Bastard I hope Edward has a gun around or can at least kung fu James' ass? This is not looking good.