Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
oh the stress of bella being gone!!!! oh the tables are turning on the madman james, he no longer has laurent, he no longer has the gps, he has a multitude of people after him who can now find him, i wonder if he even realises the phone is gone? (with his adrenaline rush) i know he is dangerous but he cant win surely not, more please
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Oh poor distraut Edward. Go get him girl!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
If Jacob handcuffs Edward, I think I'll lose it, that's just James kinda crazy talk.
Looking forward to next chapter!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Short, but some very encouraging information. Please let them get the girls soon!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Yes! He dropped his phone what an idiot! lmao can't wait to read what happens when they find them..i hope edwad rips him a new asshole, or rather SEVERAL new assholes! Freakin douch! Anywayz...thanks for the birthday present i officially turned 22 today!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Holy hell!!! Poor edward :( my heart is breaking for him
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
yes! was dying for an update! :) wondering if the phone thing was left on purpose as a diversion?? god I hope not! poor Bella's been through too much! she needs some love and comfort now. my heart hurts for Edward, that boy has fallen hard! can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Poor Edward, he almost really lost it. Who wouldn't under those circumstances? Good thing Rose was there. She is strong and focused enough to keep things under control, and she did. Also Alice amazing sight, seeing the phone, of which James still hasn't realized is missing yet.
Jacob is right, Edward can't just take off on his own and get things fixed, he needs back up and help, James is a psychopath with a mission and they don't know what to expect. Although, it's true he wouldn't kill Bella just yet.
Lets hope that James' outburst has given them enough time to get to the girls.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
omg he has them now what os goign tohappen edward and them have to find out soon cant wait to see what is going to happen i have another chapter to go still
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
amen for the "dog chip"!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Fuck you for the ending! We didnt get to hear his response...
And I say once more, lets just skip BPOV of whatever James is going to do to her... Please? I read a fanfic that scarred me for life.
Hurry and update please!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
WOW seeing Edward in that much pain made me want to cry. Fuck getting Bella a cell. Try getting that stupid chip out of Victoria. Even though the point would probably be moot seeing as James is gonna die at the end of this. (I'M PRAYING) luv ya too.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
track him down..
let the hunter be the hunted
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
I think this chapter has taught us one very important lesson...TRUST YOUR INSTINCTS. Edward must be killing himself inside that he didn't go with his gut feeling and check on Bella - not that i think he could have done anything to stop James from taking her.
Interesting development with the phone and GPS app. The party is about to begin! BRING IT ON!
Thankyou for the update. I am anxiously awaiting your next installment...
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Poor edward
poor girls, hang in there bella and victoria
I am shocked someone is getting sloppy to be leaving behind a tracking device, maybe the cock cage was cutting off james blood flow and he couldn't think straight.
love it all
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
i cant wait to reaed more they at least now where they are and are goign there to find them and there is going to be many more than just a couple of people
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
i cant wait to reaed more they at least now where they are and are goign there to find them and there is going to be many more than just a couple of people
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
James really isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer is he? He's desperate and making mistakes. Thank goodness. I only hope he doesn't harm Bella or Vicki before they track them down.
I knew he'd drop the phone!!!! ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
ok that wa good cant wait to see wht os going to happen now they now they are missing and i cant wai til they start loooking for them going to read the next chapter now
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Yes they got the phone. Love it. How long before James realizes this and cuts it out of Victoria with a butter knife? I couldn't imagine how they were ever going to find them.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
omg he has them now what os goign tohappen edward and them have to find out soon cant wait to see what is going to happen i have another chapter to go still
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
OH MY GOD!!!! Are you two trying to kill me with this story? I think so, you wrote this story to drive all of us readers nuts (says with a sarcastic tone). Okay, really, I love this and want more, I dropped writing to come and read this. Oh Lord! And the contest, hmm, have to think about that.
Love this story, now watch, you are closing to the end and only have like 10 chapters left. Watch, I love it and will be sad when this ends. But yeah, being on TWCS I can go back and read it again and again and again and again.
=0 J
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
I already wrote my contest entry. Spent most of my afternoon writing it up and even followed the suggestion of using another fandom :) Matter of fact, I had to check and see if you could add a fandom because you didn't have it yet :) It's off with my beta and will post soon! Great idea guys. This should be fun!
I am so freaking glad he dropped the cellphone! That will make this far less painful. I was afraid they might never find her! Agh...the stress! LOL!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Holy sh*t!! I can't believe James dropped his phone! Talk about karma coming to bite him in the a**!!! I was jumping up and down when I saw this update, now I can't wait for the next!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Holy sh*t!! I can't believe James dropped his phone! Talk about karma coming to bite him in the a**!!! I was jumping up and down when I saw this update, now I can't wait for the next!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
haha what an awesome chapter
i loved jakey at the end
but poor edward
his whole world is falling apart because bella is gone :(
please bring her back
anyways loved it
UPDATE SOOON!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
God, I hope Edward finds them in time! Thank God they found the cell with the GPS! Great update!
LindyP :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Yeah! Edward to the rescue. James is going to get his ass handed to him on a platter.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Thank you for this chapter. I love this story. I can't wait until E & B are reunited.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. Poor Edward... Update quickly, mkay? =]=]=]
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Awesome, glad you kept writing this story. I always look forward to reading the updates.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
oh my friggin' god you guys!!! this is awesome! I vet that stupid son of a bitch doesn't even know he doesn't have his cel phone anymore!! hehehe
much love!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Edge of seat. Please tell me you believe in HEA's.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
I should have know you would be too devious to have them catching the sob in this chapter. Thankfully they now have the GPS tracker.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
I have never been so glad to have someone lose a cell phone before!
OK, I have to say, I like that Edward was the one having the panic attack and throwing up. Usually in fics it's the girl, but reality is, it happens to guys, too!
Jake threatening to handcuff Edward in the car was hilarious - oh, the jokes that could be made in happier times!
Fantastic chapter, I'm glad you were able to update. Now I'll try to be patient for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Great update. I am wondering if the cell phone is a plant/..
Date: 10 Mar 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Great chapter. Please let them nail James soon.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
its a little weird you save three chapter of 74 that all chapter is same content so i think you have to delete the simaler chapeters
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
See, that is why I don't write smut in english...
Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
James needs to be neutered.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Wow! I started reading this Saturday afternoon and just finished all you have so far! This is awesome! Absolutely fantastic. I was on the edge of my seat for almost all of it! I was so desperate for someone to find out Bella was there by force and not choice that there were times I forgot I originally started reading for the sex... very few stories can do that. Just great.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7
This chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
And this is why I didn't care about his POV! Freakin A-hole!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A
DAMN! Jasper was cold!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I have decided to read this perverted masterpiece again....I 'll even read James chapters, although it will give me a headache. But then I get to end it will some Edward. So ...yeah ok!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
great chapter
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I am so anxious right now. I can't wait to see what happens next:)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Wow! I forgot about the chip... James is very very sick, poor Edward:)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
Hi - have to say I've had massive problems finding you after going from the Twilight fan fiction but happy to have finally done so. I am just wanting to check on something because I am getting my stories confused to be truthful. Do you have a chapter in The Training School where Edward is using quotes to Carlisle similar to the Twilight movie - i.e. - "I could never outrun you", "I could never fight you off" etc. ????
Would really appreciate your direction as to which chapter I am looking for.
Many thanks. Terrific to see such great writing from a fellow Aussie !!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Oh you're killing me........Carlisle POV.. I need to know what's going on with Bella and Edward..... God and Alice and Rose were so close..... this is getting so good...... now they need to get to Laurents house right away maybe James will still be there before he takes them somewhere else.. Can't wait to read the next chapter.....
Date: 06 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Ok i was thinking how the hell did Laurent get to Victoria... well that made sense......this is so messed up ........James is truly a sick bastard..but now what is he gonna do ..take Heidi too so now he will be traveling with three prisoners... the man doesn't think which is a good thing i am hoping but what will Edward think when he finds them gone?? And I am totally lost on where James planted this GPS on Victoria unless it was somewhere nasty in her body. but u would think she would feel that...... Oh not good at all.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh come on how the hell did he find them??? Did he follow Jacob?? Did they trace their phones?? Did Carlisle tip him off? I just knew something was gonna happen but if they don't come down soon Edward will come back up and check on them... what does he plan on doing shoving them out the window? I mean how is he planning on getting out of there with two women one pregnant.. and who the hell is it James or Laurent?""
Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
hmm that was a interesting chapter.....So maybe Carlisle wasn't involved but if two girls we know of Leah and Bella were forced into this school and Carlisle didn't know who knows how many others . maybe it is time Carlisle closes this place forever........ Jacob was a bit of a ass about everything but not to bad.Why do i have a bad feeling about Bella going upstairs?????????
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
aaaw, poor edward...
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
Carlisle is a very confusing man, i don't like him and he is cruel and actually a dick but then when he acts like this he seems like he truly does care for these people....I am glad he didn't really go off on Lauren as much as I can't stand her it wasn't her fault stupid what she did but not her fault....I am a bit surprised everyone is so scared of one man......
Date: 06 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Oh i'm so behind again........ I couldn't think James would be this stupid to try and come take Bella back knowing Edward was there....but then again u would think after what he just escaped from he would just run away and be happy he got out but i'm sure James isn't that smart..... I am so happy Bella was able to tell Edward she loved him too..... And Poor Victoria but idk something about her just doesn't sit right I got a feeling she might be stupid enough to forgive James if he came around..... which would get them all in trouble.....
Date: 05 Mar 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
so far very good.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I can't see the chapter!! What's going on with this site today? I can't see the latest chapter of The Perfect Wife either.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
how will they find the girls now
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
omg!!! finally someone notices huh??
much love!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Eek! I hope they can get to them soon. I'm glad questions are starting to be answered.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
So glad this story found a new home! Love it!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Eep! Mesmerizing as always, and keep up the good work!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
So some long to be answered questions. And ones that still need to be answered. How are you going to play this out? I can't wait for your next chapter!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
LOVE this story... I am honestly FREAKED OUT by the ripple that has occurred with the kidnapping of Bella and Victoria... I just have an image that Bella will have something to do with killing James... please say it's so! as always definitely looking forward to more as soon as possible!
All because of one well written story... with plenty of interesting turns... and one one pain in the ass web sight that chose to turn into "asshats" and then the creation of this wonderful place that has definitely been a welcomed place in my daily life of reading! I'm addicted HAPPILY and I was more then happy to donate --- or become a VIP member... looking forward to reading this story along with the all the others I have really been enjoying thus far!
Much gratitude for the work put forth on this web sight... I know I am not the only one that is happy that you all did this!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...and we are enjoying having a place to create and write without fear of removal. I am so glad you are enjoying the story and the others on here. HAve a wonderful week.
Thanks again.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Can't wait for more.... I am still so hooked on this story, so good
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
S.O. & Foot
I'm worried for Carlisle now!!!!!
Edward sounds lost at the end there!!!! Great chapter!!!!!
So if I'm reading corretly, you need some new equiptment in order for everyone to get the notices of new chapters. Is this correct?? Because I keep checking daily for updates since I don't get notices.
Cory
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I'm so sorry that I can't help, but I'm not from the U.S and don't have and international account, but know that if I could, I would do it in a heartbeat.
Author's Response:
Hey...no worries... You won't miss a thing... Thank you so much for enjoying the story... we are so thankful to have such wonderful readers. See you next chapter.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Great chapter!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
How in the world did Heidi get away with Aro's private jet???? Laurent is alot smarter than we all realized.
Poor Edward. At least it did not take him as long to figure out that the girls where missing. I was afarid it was going to be a while. I am scared. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
James is such an egotistical maniac. He just killed the one person who was willing and able to help him. I can't wait to see him go down.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I love seeing how this whole scenario plays out. Some many little pieces that are quickly coming together. Nicely done.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
That picture of Carlisle at the top of the chapter is so fitting. I think it expresses really well what might go on inside of him. More Carlsile, that's all I'm saying :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
omg no please tell me tha he will find her and ave her and protect her i am so upset i can not take it they were doing so well e really loves her and wants to be with her keep me poste onnext chapter denisesexton@verizon.net
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Thanks for filling in on what was going on with Carlisle and the others. Now I'm anxious to find out what's going with Bella and Victoria and what the gang is going to do to find them.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
They were all scamed! Great job...I love it...thanks!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I hope Aro can be useful in tracking them down. I'm still hoping Heidi will free the girls & the 3 of them will kick James' *ss
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Great update! I hope Lauren does get what is coming to her!
LindyP :)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I absolutley adore your story! I can't wait till the next update!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
another fine chapter, heidi well ripped aro off but at least he's on thew right team as it were, god poor edward sounded empty at the end, i'm praying they can get bella and victoria back, maybe heidi will help the girls now that james has killed laurent, more please
ps joined club java and it sounds great
Author's Response:
Girl.. I think you joined before ME even.. Thank you so much for you support and help with this... We are so thankful to have such wonderful readers.
I am also thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter...MORE TO COME!!
Thanks again
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
oh no
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
J'ai de la peine, dernier chapitre...
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
ah! non!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Damn ! She stole a cool mill from aro!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
Ça me fait peur, Victoria a une puce d'implantée et elle ne le sait pas.
L'auteur est un génie!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
Oups!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
super
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
i don't like the idee of paying because of reading a fanfiction...
but i love your story and if you adopt this then i can't read your
story anymore...
thx for this amazing chapter...
Sema..
Author's Response:
I think you have miss read what we were saying...we are not asking anyone to PAY to read this story...This story will be here forever with or without donations. The only thing we were asking was help in upgrading the site. None of us are weathly...(I am a teacher...for gosh sakes...haha) so maintaining this site was getting costly. But if you chose not to donate...you will not miss out on anything. This is and will always be a free site for the love of fan fiction and orginal works.
Sorry if we gave you the wrong impression, and if you chose not to continue to read even though...We surely understand.
Glad you liked the chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
merci, merci pour cette merveilleuse histoire
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I had to laugh that the key for James cage is around Rosalie's neck. That will be the last place he will ever look for it. Poor Edward. I can only imagine what he is going through. I would what will happen now that Aro is going to be coming into town now. I know Carlisle feels really bad for everything that happened under his nose at the school but he just didnt see the signs it he is not the one that found away around his system of securities that he put in place. He thought he had people working for him he could trust. I wonder how they are going to track them down now. I cant wait to see what you will throw at us next as this story continues to twist and turn.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Oh my God! Edward is so devastated! I hope kenxt chapter will be his point of view. Good job! ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22
j'ai les larmes aux yeux!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22
je déteste tellement James, qu'il créve!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Glad Alice and Jas made it there safely. What's to happen with Aro's visit?..
Poor Edward...he sounded so lost. Can't wait for his POV of these.
Hope Carlisle and the guys can get to the bottom of things before that bastard does something horribly irreversible..
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
impressionnant
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21
wow!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Oh no...poor poor Edward....He sounded so lost at the end.
I loved the chapter, I'm glad that Aro wasn't just ignoring everything. I hope they are able to get Bella and Victoria back, and that James doesn't do anything awful to them.....
Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
I loved it as always poor Edward, Bella, Victoria and even Heidi's dumb ass.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
MERCI, MERCI pour cette i brelle histoire.