Date: 05 Jun 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4
This is crazy. There is no way that Bella cannot have more control over herself. It is unrealistic. If a woman is afraid and in distress, there is NO WAY IN HELL that she could be able to get turned on and cum on top of it. I know that this fiction but come on. So not happening. I'm a little frustrated to tell you the truth.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
Why is Edward sucking of Carlisle any man for a matter of fact. Shouldn't he be with a mistress and not a master unless he is bi or gay. I don't see the reasoning behind putting him in such a scene!
Date: 12 May 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22
BITCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH .. why they hadnt kicked lauren out is beyond me !!!
Date: 12 May 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21
that's a form of brutalism i ABSOLUTELY HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH ..
Date: 12 May 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
GOOOOOOOOOOOOD :D
Date: 12 May 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 56: Renee
the point of divorce is that the other spouse stops nagging you not continuously nag you no matter how long your divorce have been ~
Date: 12 May 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B
i wanna smack some sense into her .. she could have outed both laurent and james right there .. what's the worse they could do more than she's already been through !!
Date: 12 May 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17
how is he any different from a serial rapist .. and i get Victoria's naivety when it comes to him but bella's unfathomable to me !!
Date: 12 May 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A
isnt that what he wanted Carlisle to think .. he thought he could fool the old man and tht Carlisle wont confront bella the same way he did to him ~~
Date: 12 May 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B
she's an idiot .. why cant she speak up .. that was carlisle being merciful ..
Date: 12 May 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
to me Carlisle is the bad guy and blind at that since someone like him should have realized bella wasnt there by choice .. i just hope he smarts up sooon and see james for the monster he is ..
Date: 12 May 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4
i dont think Edward is exactly a sub now is he .. of all the emotions bella feels anger wasnt one of them unlike Edward who is pissed off at Carlisle most of the time !!
Date: 12 May 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
i really hope after all is said and done Bella dumps his nasty ass ..
Date: 12 May 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A
when she receives pleasure from something she hates and despises to have to be done to her that means james isnt the one she's meant to be .. whether being in that school was right or wrong for her , james is DEFINITELY wrong for her ~~
Date: 12 May 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
can i please shake some sense into her .. i get that this is a fic but there are millions of Bellas like this one in the world .. it's one thing to enter such a world willingly and complete acceptance and to be forced into it like that ..
Date: 31 Mar 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 78
wow this is my fav. story so far...
it is a turn on from chapter 1 till the end..
thanx for writing it
Date: 08 Mar 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B
I've enjoyed this story so far, but I'm itching to see something happen to this poor excuse for a human. If I had my druthers, I'd hang him from his heels, castrate him with a dull rusty knife, then stake him out, spreadeagle, on a fire ant hill in the middle of the desert.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 78
Oh Wow I love this story! Thanks for sharing it! Now I will go and find another of your stories to read!
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Ahhhhh! I was just saying to myself that James has that chip in Victoria and is probably tracking her!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
this is so awesome i cant stop reading.......
Date: 08 Dec 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I can't read past the first chapter, the website send me to the warning page with age consent when I click on "next" and then it send me back on chapter one and if I choose another chapter among the chapters list it just send me back on the warning page....Is that normal?
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B
I really want James to meet with a very painful, untimely end.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
This James is the freaking mother of all slime balls.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 78
Excellent story. Well done! I was totally gripped from start to finish. Now I'm going to look for other stories by you Thanks!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 78
Okay...so I couldn't stop reading long enough to comment on individual chapters ;p. Let it suffice to say that...oh my your brain scares me! Even scarier is how much of a turn on it was! What a ride - Whew-ee! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:18 PM Title: Interview with the Master
Loved the interview. Hilarious and Hot.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Is there going to be any Bella/ Edward? Is there going to be much Bella/Carlisle? And why is Bella so stupid and childish?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 78
OMG!!! What a well written story! I truly loved it.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B
I wonder if they know that Bella doenst know why is she at the school.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
wtf she is way to submissive... I hope it gets better for her.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14
Oh I love this story, it's so hot. Can't stop reading. Hope Edward and bella can be together after, and hope Charlie or someone can give James what he deserves. Hit to keep going to find out.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I love this history :D To read!
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
Oh god. I'm at chapter 57 and I *so* don't want this story to end...
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 78
I just have to said I read this story in three days and it was Amazing! I love the ending I loved everything!....I do wish for a sequal *nudge nudge* :)
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 78
me encanta esta historia te juro nque la he leido varias veces
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
God, I feel so late to the party.
Tell me, fine friends, what should I read next if I'm a FSOG fan who's following the fantastic redredred (sunandsurf here) and also love to bits this story?
What next? I wait your command.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
I am only on chapter 10, but I am surprising myself at how much I'm enjoying this read. I'm on my iPhone, at the beach, and the best news is that there are 30 more chapters still to come.
You have pleased me.
:)
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
I am liking this. Goto fix supper but can't wait to get back and read the next chapter.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Harsh beginning!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 78
This is my first time responding to a story I have read. I just finished reading The Training School and I wanted to let you know that I have spent the last six months trying to find a story that engrossed me as much as 50 Shades of Grey did. I finally did!
Your story was the best one I have read....thank you for taking the time to write, build the characters and sharing the story!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5
Very hot chapter.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Great story
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I originally intended to read this story for the smut but really I was pleasantly surprised by the plot and the depth of thecharacters thanks for a great story!
Date: 04 May 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
Hey Amanda,
I don't know if you still get reviews for this story, but if you do, I just wanted you to know that I can't help myself. I had to read it again. I've missed you terribly for the longest time, and I'm so, so proud of all you've accomplished with TWCS! Congratulations and job well done!
Tammy
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Me encantó! Soy "lemonera pervertida y para nada arrepentida", leer este tipo de ffics es mi pasión oculta!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
interesting
Date: 18 Feb 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
i just found this story, great chapter
Date: 13 Jan 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 78
A perfect ending to an awesome story! Thanks for sharing.
~LL
Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 78
Holy crap!!!! Amazing story!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
this one kept me up late to finish....loved the story:)*
Date: 11 Nov 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I read this a while ago n ff.net, glad to have found it again
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
WOW!
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 78
It was amazng and I loved it although it does feel strange to say that as you took my emotions on a roller coaster of a ride. Thank you
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 78
Totally twisted mind fuck, I loved it! Kept me up all night long reading it in one sitting, thanks so much for sharing!
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B
AWWWWW.....
Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
hot HOT HOT!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
Thats sad. Poor Victoria.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
ughhh who is there with her?????
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B
Ewwww Mike!
ha ha ha ha sorry I shouldn't laugh but that was funny... glad your reading. xx
Author's Response:
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
Wow this is intense!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
HOLY CRAP!! Love me some Dominant Carlisle!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella
I love that Bella was able to let out a little of her fear and frustration on him by beating him into unconsiousness!! =) And I really do hope Jake lets them deliver him to Aro....!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Oh shit the fucking gps chip...totally forgot about that...
I can't wait for the moment everything turns around and he gets his well deserved punishment for all he did...
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Fuck, how the hell did he find her?? This can't be good...
Date: 12 Jun 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
This stupid as fuck Lauren!!! I could kill her right about now!!!! How can anyone be so stupid?? Couldn't they have locked this part of the school up?? FUCK!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22
I hope they won't give him the chance to escape!! He NEEDS to break so that they can kill him (hopefully very slow and painfully)...!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21
Good thing Rose could finally let it all out and what better "person" for that than James? He deserves this and so, so much more...
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21
I definately need to give him credit. Didn't think he'd be able to take that much. But that just makes it all the more fun. I love them torturing him!! <3
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
Poor Victoria...I can't even begin to imaginf waht she must've been through being tied up on a bed with a ball gag and nothing to eat or drink in almost 2 days...Always afraid of James coming back and forcing her to have an abortion...
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
Oh this is better than I could've imagined!! Now he gets to taste his own medicine!! *evil chuckle*
I hope they will make his every second there a nightmare...
Bella and Edward should get a go on him, too...!
But what about Victoria?? Will she be found on time?? But I guess Bella will save her, she knew James was not there, when her mother broke in but knew that someone was...Bet she'll think about that the nbext morning and have someone look in or she'll go herself with Edward...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A
How can one person be so ful off himself?? He really thinks he is godlike and perfect?? He so far from that and so far from being a "real man" like he puts it, it's not even funny anymore...This stupid little shit.
Oh yeah. The baby gives Victoria strenght. Now she just needs an opportunity to get awy from him. And if she does I get the feeling she will go straight to Charlie to tell him what James did. This be great...!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17
Omg, he can't have a kid. He is in no way able to be a father or anything to anyone...He is just too fucked up!!
Plus he just hit another low for deciding to not even tell her about her pregnancy. Didn't expect him to turn around his attitude or even giving her a choice in the matter, but not even telling her? Asshole...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:27 AM Title: Interview with the Master
That was a funny chapter! I loved the interview. And I'm glad to know that Carlisle was a little suspicious from the beginning and even more so since the meeting. I loke him a hell of a lot more. =)
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A
She should really start to look around. I get why she's feeling the way she is, all alone not able to trust. But the freinds she's seeking are right in front of her eyes - Angela and Alice. And if she thought really haard about it, the school wouldn't seem half as bad to her if she realized that the others are here on their own accord and enjoying it. She just can't enjoy it cause it wasn't her wish to go there and she didn't know what to expect...Poor girl.
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B
Mike got exactly what he deserves...He really didn't understand what it means to be a dom...He proved that with his "You fuck women who don't want it all the time. I thought that's the fucking point."
He rally thought they give him a free pass to rape women...Stupid jackass...
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B
Oh please let him get suspicious...No one can be that blind to not see Bella is afraid to death of him and not at all pleased with the thought of pain play and being branded...
And this call to her father...He simply needs to doubt her words and go in looking for her...
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
I can't believe how smoothly everything went for him so far...But with his ever growing ego he made a couple mistakes like the meeting with Carlisle and getting the needle from the vet by saying he was a friend of one of the doctors...I hope they'll be noticed soon and all comes crashing down around him...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A
Good, Edward caught Mike, I hope in time...BEFORE Mike had the chance to rape her...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
I hate James more wwith every chapter in his POV...
I sincerely hope Renee and Charlie will be able to blow this abusive fucker's cover.
Good to know Victoria still has a tiny bit of sense left in her...It won't so her any good since it will only make him increase his efforts to break her, but nevertheless it good...Hopefully he won't be able to break her comletely...
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A
I loved the lesson Bella had with Edward. I could totally understand her frustration with Esme, she would have tried my patience too if I were in her shoes...
I hate that stupid as fuck Mike...I hope he'll be caught in time and get the shit beaten out of him...!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11
I had guessed Alice was into pain from her reaction in the dungeon, but I was a little surprised at the extent. But I think it suits her and Jasper. =)
But I guess Bella wouldn't like the intense pain of clips...but who knows what she'd explore with Edward...?! =)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B
Sooow cute how they both don't realize that the're falling for each other... =)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B
Ohh how sweet. Bella deserved some care after all she went through without agreeing first. =)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A
Poor Bella...Hope they'll find out soon what James did...
As hot as her training sessions are (and they are REALLY hot) James got way too far with the pain play without her being asked.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
Omg, I so love your story.
But this guy infuriates me so much, I'd wish I could meet him and beat the shit out of him...
You're really an awesome writer. =)
Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
What a sick fuck he is even thinking about dog tags with a chip in them...But this is so like him it shouldn't even surprise me...
He'd need a lesson in submission at the school, too. He should experience for himself what he wants the women to do for him. He'd appreciate it a hell of a lot more...
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
Wow, James is such a pig...I really don't like his attitude...Cheating on Bella while she goes through that training for him...
Date: 27 May 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7
Wow I loved!
kisses from Colombia! ♥
Date: 15 May 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 78
any chance of a sequel ... maybe of how their relationship strenghthens and grows
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
OMG !!!!!...i love it....
Date: 21 Apr 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
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Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 78
Wow! What a fantastic fic.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:24 PM Title: Interview with the Master
You wish!!!
But then ... don't we all?
Date: 10 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I can say that I'm pretty excited to start reading this!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Wow. Great story. I'm glad that I stuck with it because it sure was hard to take at times. James was a disgrace and deserved everything he got! And I have to say, Carlisle & Esme both disgusted me for most of the story. I realize they had no clue that Bella was not there of her own free will...but their behavior was atrocious as well..Esme had no compassion,,, I wanted to sock her & beat Carlisle senseless for his disgusting attacks on Bella!! :(
Date: 21 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
Jeez i hate Jams lol
Date: 21 Mar 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B
wow
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
Ok I have been hooked on this story for 2 days straight and the site went down for a bit and I went nuts! I was at Bella about to attack with the shoe so you understand why... lol
I wasnt sure i was gonna stick with this one because James literally made me sick to my stomach but OMG the past 2 chapters have me bawling and I cannot wait til tomorrow night when I can finish this story!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
How is it that he acts 180 degrees different with Rachel then he did with Bella. Of all of the people at the school, with the exception of Mike, he was the only one that was cruel to her, after all he raped and beat her. This trip to the office was the first time he was kind or compassionate with her. There were 4 people who were at fault for what happened to Bella..James, Laurent, Carlisle and Bella herself. Carlisle should not have been allowed to reopen the school in the end.