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Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

This is crazy. There is no way that Bella cannot have more control over herself. It is unrealistic. If a woman is afraid and in distress, there is NO WAY IN HELL that she could be able to get turned on and cum on top of it. I know that this fiction but come on. So not happening. I'm a little frustrated to tell you the truth.

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

Why is Edward sucking of Carlisle any man for a matter of fact. Shouldn't he be with a mistress and not a master unless he is bi or gay. I don't see the reasoning behind putting him in such a scene!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

BITCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH .. why they hadnt kicked lauren out is beyond me !!!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

that's a form of brutalism i ABSOLUTELY HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH .. 

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

GOOOOOOOOOOOOD :D 

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 56: Renee

the point of divorce is that the other spouse stops nagging you not continuously nag you no matter how long your divorce have been ~

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

i wanna smack some sense into her .. she could have outed both laurent and james right there .. what's the worse they could do more than she's already been through !!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

how is he any different from a serial rapist .. and i get Victoria's naivety when it comes to him but bella's unfathomable to me !!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

isnt that what he wanted Carlisle to think .. he thought he could fool the old man and tht Carlisle wont confront bella the same way he did to him ~~

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

she's an idiot .. why cant she speak up .. that was carlisle being merciful ..

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

to me Carlisle is the bad guy and blind at that since someone like him should have realized bella wasnt there by choice .. i just hope he smarts up sooon and see james for the monster he is ..

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

i dont think Edward is exactly a sub now is he .. of all the emotions bella feels anger wasnt one of them unlike Edward who is pissed off at Carlisle most of the time !!

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

i really hope after all is said and done Bella dumps his nasty ass .. 

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

when she receives pleasure from something she hates and despises to have to be done to her that means james isnt the one she's meant to be .. whether being in that school was right or wrong for her , james is DEFINITELY wrong for her ~~

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

can i please shake some sense into her .. i get that this is a fic but there are millions of Bellas like this one in the world .. it's one thing to enter such a world willingly and complete acceptance and to be forced into it like that .. 

Reviewer: flightlessbirdje Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 78

wow this is my fav. story so far...

it is a turn on  from chapter 1 till the end..

 

thanx for writing it

Reviewer: rainsong54 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B

I've enjoyed this story so far, but I'm itching to see something happen to this poor excuse for a human. If I had my druthers, I'd hang him from his heels, castrate him with a dull rusty knife, then stake him out, spreadeagle, on a fire ant hill in the middle of the desert.

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 78

Oh Wow I love this story!  Thanks for sharing it!  Now I will go and find another of your stories to read!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Ahhhhh!  I was just saying to myself that James has that chip in Victoria and is probably tracking her! 

Reviewer: erica313 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 78

loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: erica313 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

this is so awesome i cant stop reading.......

Reviewer: teratome Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

I can't read past the first chapter, the website send me to the warning page with age consent when I click on "next" and then it send me back on chapter one and if I choose another chapter among the chapters list it just send me back on the warning page....Is that normal?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

I really want James to meet with a very painful, untimely end.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

This James is  the freaking mother of all slime balls.

Reviewer: SophieIsobelleHollie-Liam Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 78

Excellent story. Well done! I was totally gripped from start to finish. Now I'm going to look for other stories by you   Thanks! 

Reviewer: purlysurly Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 78

Okay...so I couldn't stop reading long enough to comment on individual chapters ;p.  Let it suffice to say that...oh my your brain scares me!  Even scarier is how much of a turn on it was!  What a ride - Whew-ee!  Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Shae1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:18 PM Title: Interview with the Master

Loved the interview. Hilarious and Hot.

Reviewer: DayDreamerCozmo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Is there going to be any Bella/ Edward? Is there going to be much Bella/Carlisle? And why is Bella so stupid and childish?

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMG!!! What a well written story! I truly loved it.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

I wonder if they know that Bella doenst know why is she at the school.

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

wtf she is way to submissive... I hope it gets better for her.

Reviewer: Sue2265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

Oh I love this story, it's so hot. Can't stop reading. Hope Edward and bella can be together after, and hope Charlie or someone can give James what he deserves. Hit to keep going to find out. 

Reviewer: MarceStylo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

I love this history :D To read!

Reviewer: nincyh Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

Oh god. I'm at chapter 57 and I *so* don't want this story to end...

 

Reviewer: Satiah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 78

I just have to said I read this story in three days and it was Amazing! I love the ending I loved everything!....I do wish for a sequal *nudge nudge* :)

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 78

me encanta esta historia te juro nque la he leido varias veces

Reviewer: nincyh Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A

God, I feel so late to the party.

Tell me, fine friends, what should I read next if I'm a FSOG fan who's following the fantastic redredred (sunandsurf here) and also love to bits this story?
What next? I wait your command.

Reviewer: nincyh Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

I am only on chapter 10, but I am surprising myself at how much I'm enjoying this read. I'm on my iPhone, at the beach, and the best news is that there are 30 more chapters still to come.
You have pleased me. 

:)

Reviewer: Spamula69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

I am liking this.  Goto fix supper but can't wait to get back and read the next chapter.

Reviewer: GRLTRP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Harsh beginning!!

Reviewer: Afrierson Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 78

This is my first time responding to a story I have read.  I just finished reading The Training School and I wanted to let you know that I have spent the last six months trying to find a story that engrossed me as much as 50 Shades of Grey did.  I finally did!

Your story was the best one I have read....thank you for taking the time to write, build the characters and sharing the story! 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

Very hot chapter. 

Reviewer: Trm Cullen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Great story

Reviewer: charliesTeam Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

I originally intended to read this story for the smut but really I was pleasantly surprised by the plot and the depth of thecharacters thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: drtammy1511 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

Hey Amanda,

I don't know if you still get reviews for this story, but if you do, I just wanted you to know that I can't help myself.  I had to read it again.  I've missed you terribly for the longest time, and I'm so, so proud of all you've accomplished with TWCS!  Congratulations and job well done!

Tammy

Reviewer: Jo Ulloa Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Me encantó!  Soy "lemonera pervertida y para nada arrepentida", leer este tipo de ffics es mi pasión oculta!

Reviewer: robinsonmr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

interesting

Reviewer: robinsonmr Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

i just found this story, great chapter

Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 78

A perfect ending to an awesome story! Thanks for sharing.

~LL

Reviewer: mrsjlcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 78

Holy crap!!!! Amazing story!!!!!! 

Reviewer: shadowbride Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

this one kept me up late to finish....loved the story:)*

Reviewer: steffiiii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

I read this a while ago n ff.net, glad to have found it again

Reviewer: Robshandsmonkey Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

WOW!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 78

It was amazng and I loved it although it does feel strange to say that as you took my emotions on a roller coaster of a ride. Thank you

Reviewer: brandys0524 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 78

Totally twisted mind fuck, I loved it! Kept me up all night long reading it in one sitting, thanks so much for sharing!

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

AWWWWW.....

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

hot HOT HOT!!!!

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

Thats sad. Poor Victoria.

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

ughhh who is there with her?????

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

Ewwww Mike!



Author's Response:

ha ha ha ha sorry I shouldn't laugh but that was funny...

glad your reading.

xx

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

Wow this is intense!!!

Reviewer: lemons01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

HOLY CRAP!! Love me some Dominant Carlisle!!!

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella

I love that Bella was able to let out a little of her fear and frustration on him by beating him into unconsiousness!! =) And I really do hope Jake lets them deliver him to Aro....!

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Oh shit the fucking gps chip...totally forgot about that...

I can't wait for the moment everything turns around and he gets his well deserved punishment for all he did...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Fuck, how the hell did he find her?? This can't be good...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

This stupid as fuck Lauren!!! I could kill her right about now!!!! How can anyone be so stupid?? Couldn't they have locked this part of the school up?? FUCK!

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

I hope they won't give him the chance to escape!! He NEEDS to break so that they can kill him (hopefully very slow and painfully)...!

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21

Good thing Rose could finally let it all out and what better "person" for that than James? He deserves this and so, so much more...

 

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

I definately need to give him credit. Didn't think he'd be able to take that much. But that just makes it all the more fun. I love them torturing him!! <3

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21

Poor Victoria...I can't even begin to imaginf waht she must've been through being tied up on a bed with a ball gag and nothing to eat or drink in almost 2 days...Always afraid of James coming back and forcing her to have an abortion...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

Oh this is better than I could've imagined!! Now he gets to taste his own medicine!! *evil chuckle*

I hope they will make his every second there a nightmare...

Bella and Edward should get a go on him, too...!

But what about Victoria?? Will she be found on time?? But I guess Bella will save her, she knew James was not there, when her mother broke in but knew that someone was...Bet she'll think about that the nbext morning and have someone look in or she'll go herself with Edward...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A

How can one person be so ful off himself?? He really thinks he is godlike and perfect?? He so far from that and so far from being a "real man" like he puts it, it's not even funny anymore...This stupid little shit.

 

Oh yeah. The baby gives Victoria strenght. Now she just needs an opportunity to get awy from him. And if she does I get the feeling she will go straight to Charlie to tell him what James did. This be great...!

 

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

Omg, he can't have a kid. He is in no way able to be a father or anything to anyone...He is just too fucked up!!

Plus he just hit another low for deciding to not even tell her about her pregnancy. Didn't expect him to turn around his attitude or even giving her a choice in the matter, but not even telling her? Asshole...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:27 AM Title: Interview with the Master

That was a funny chapter! I loved the interview. And I'm glad to know that Carlisle was a little suspicious from the beginning and even more so since the meeting. I loke him a hell of a lot more. =)

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

She should really start to look around. I get why she's feeling the way she is, all alone not able to trust. But the freinds she's seeking are right in front of her eyes - Angela and Alice. And if she thought really haard about it, the school wouldn't seem half as bad to her if she realized that the others are here on their own accord and enjoying it. She just can't enjoy it cause it wasn't her wish to go there and she didn't know what to expect...Poor girl.

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

Mike got exactly what he deserves...He really didn't understand what it means to be a dom...He proved that with his "You fuck women who don't want it all the time. I thought that's the fucking point."

He rally thought they give him a free pass to rape women...Stupid jackass...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B

Oh please let him get suspicious...No one can be that blind to not see Bella is afraid to death of him and not at all pleased with the thought of pain play and being branded...

And this call to her father...He simply needs to doubt her words and go in looking for her...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

I can't believe how smoothly everything went for him so far...But with his ever growing ego he made a couple mistakes like the meeting with Carlisle and getting the needle from the vet by saying he was a friend of one of the doctors...I hope they'll be noticed soon and all comes crashing down around him...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

Good, Edward caught Mike, I hope in time...BEFORE Mike had the chance to rape her...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

I hate James more wwith every chapter in his POV...

I sincerely hope Renee and Charlie will be able to blow this abusive fucker's cover.

Good to know Victoria still has a tiny bit of sense left in her...It won't so her any good since it will only make him increase his efforts to break her, but nevertheless it good...Hopefully he won't be able to break her comletely...

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

I loved the lesson Bella had with Edward. I could totally understand her frustration with Esme, she would have tried my patience too if I were in her shoes...

I hate that stupid as fuck Mike...I hope he'll be caught in time and get the shit beaten out of him...!

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

I had guessed Alice was into pain from her reaction in the dungeon, but I was a little surprised at the extent. But I think it suits her and Jasper. =)

But I guess Bella wouldn't like the intense pain of clips...but who knows what she'd explore with Edward...?! =)

 

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

Sooow cute how they both don't realize that the're falling for each other... =)

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

Ohh how sweet. Bella deserved some care after all she went through without agreeing first. =)

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

Poor Bella...Hope they'll find out soon what James did...

As hot as her training sessions are (and they are REALLY hot) James got way too far with the pain play without her being asked.

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

Omg, I so love your story.

But this guy infuriates me so much, I'd wish I could meet him and beat the shit out of him...

You're really an awesome writer. =)

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

What a sick fuck he is even thinking about dog tags with a chip in them...But this is so like him it shouldn't even surprise me...

He'd need a lesson in submission at the school, too. He should experience for himself what he wants the women to do for him. He'd appreciate it a hell of a lot more...

 

Reviewer: xXxAllegraxXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

Wow, James is such a pig...I really don't like his attitude...Cheating on Bella while she goes through that training for him...

Reviewer: DreamsHunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

Wow I loved!

 

kisses from Colombia! ♥

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 78

any chance of a sequel ... maybe of how their relationship strenghthens and grows

Reviewer: cuali Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

OMG !!!!!...i love it....

Reviewer: nat3968 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

i2;l5;k l5;lk2;k4;l0;m0;l9;n3;

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 78

Wow!  What a fantastic fic.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:24 PM Title: Interview with the Master

You wish!!!

But then ... don't we all?

Reviewer: bazzinga Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

I can say that I'm pretty excited to start reading this!

Reviewer: JLW4108 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Wow. Great story. I'm glad that I stuck with it because it sure was hard to take at times. James was a disgrace and deserved everything he got! And I have to say, Carlisle & Esme both disgusted me for most of the story. I realize they had no clue that Bella was not there of her own free will...but their behavior was atrocious as well..Esme had no compassion,,, I wanted to sock her & beat Carlisle senseless for his disgusting attacks on Bella!! :(

Reviewer: Twilightmum69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

Jeez i hate Jams lol

Reviewer: Twilightmum69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

wow

Reviewer: tattedgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

Ok I have been hooked on this story for 2 days straight and the site went down for a bit and I went nuts! I was at Bella about to attack with the shoe so you understand why... lol

I wasnt sure i was gonna stick with this one because James literally made me sick to my stomach but OMG the past 2 chapters have me bawling and I cannot wait til tomorrow night when I can finish this story!

Reviewer: caroled Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

How is it that he acts 180 degrees different with Rachel then he did with Bella.  Of all of the people at the school, with the exception of Mike, he was the only one that was cruel to her, after all he raped and beat her. This trip to the office was the first time he was kind or compassionate with her. There were 4 people who were at fault for what happened to Bella..James, Laurent, Carlisle and Bella herself.  Carlisle should not have been allowed to reopen the school in the end.

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