Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 78
I just finished reading your story and wanted to thank you for writing and sharing it. For many chapters, I was sure I knew how Bella's story would come out. I was certain, for whatever reason, she'd sign the papers for the extreme pain play and Carlisle, in his quest to keep Edward and Bella away from each other, would make him be the one to dish out the severely painful session, ending with both, Bella and Edward, safewording their way out of the school after an immense amount of angst and pain. I'm glad you chose a different path.
One thing that had be wondering, thought, is that the issue of Edward's proclaimed bisexuality is never broached again once he starts a relationship with Bella. It leaves me wondering if he's completely fulfilled in his relationship with her since he's deeply in love or if he's hoping she'll open up to group play or something along those lines again so he might get his rocks off. I hope it's the first and since it's not in the story, I'll just pretend that's the way it works for him ;).
Once more, thanks for writing and sharing. I really enjoyed the read.
Date: 08 Apr 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
I think I hate Carlisle as much as Bella does, though my hatred comes from the fact that he is a terrible dom and is utterly failing her as her trainer. I mean, come on, things like aftercare and checking your sub's mental state are dominance 101! Not to mention that a brand new sub is in no way ready for half this shit.
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 78
FUCK...that is so NOT the way to have ended this story. Though it was tense & exciting to keep reading down to his response.
Damn....my nerves were jangling.
LOVED YOUR STORY....would love to see some kind of a sequel as to what happens to their lives.....& just 'maybe' their reinvolvement into the school.
Thanks so muches for sharing your story with me....
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Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
Good story but I kind of take issue with Carlisle constantly yelling. The kind of Dom who can make thousands per student at a school like this would never have to raise his voice even with the most unruly of trainees. If she had even a submissive bone in her body all he would have to do is use "The tone" of voice that will just make her bend. Don't get me wrong I get that unlike others here she didn't know what she was getting into, because James is a total douchebag and didn't give her a choice. But I take a small bit of offense at howw you are writing these supposidly professional Dominant/submissive trainers. Other then that it is an awesome story that I wish I could actually make myself get into reading, but I just get mad everytime you have Carlisle yell at her.