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Reviewer: Kcampos2497 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 78

La historia fue simplemente grandiosa, tuvo de todo, fue increíble.

A qué te refieres cuando dices, esto no es el final... Es solo el comienzo...?

Reviewer: Albaduarte9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

Me encanta ojalá .. hubiera secuela oh...otra historia parecida para leerlo

Reviewer: Albaduarte9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

Me encanta ojalá .. hubiera secuela oh...otra historia parecida para leerlo

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2019 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 78

Oh how I have loved this story! I wish there had been one more chapter as a kind of few years later, but this ending was great too! 

thank you for writing this story!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 78

After this time still a wonderful story. It was exciting and suspenseful also erotic. Well done.

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 78

Couldn't stop reading lots of twists and turns really enjoyed your work many thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

I can't believe Bella, "Say Something"!

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 78

I just finished reading your story and wanted to thank you for writing and sharing it. For many chapters, I was sure I knew how Bella's story would come out. I was certain, for whatever reason, she'd sign the papers for the extreme pain play and Carlisle, in his quest to keep Edward and Bella away from each other, would make him be the one to dish out the severely painful session, ending with both, Bella and Edward, safewording their way out of the school after an immense amount of angst and pain. I'm glad you chose a different path.
One thing that had be wondering, thought, is that the issue of Edward's proclaimed bisexuality is never broached again once he starts a relationship with Bella. It leaves me wondering if he's completely fulfilled in his relationship with her since he's deeply in love or if he's hoping she'll open up to group play or something along those lines again so he might get his rocks off. I hope it's the first and since it's not in the story, I'll just pretend that's the way it works for him ;).
Once more, thanks for writing and sharing. I really enjoyed the read.

Reviewer: EmdreamsH Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A

Hi i stared to read this history in Spanish the translated but the girls only have the translation at chapter before this, and I confess I love this history, thanks so much for share with us.

 

 

Reviewer: migliassi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

I think I hate Carlisle as much as Bella does, though my hatred comes from the fact that he is a terrible dom and is utterly failing her as her trainer. I mean, come on, things like aftercare and checking your sub's mental state are dominance 101! Not to mention that a brand new sub is in no way ready for half this shit.

Reviewer: WardlyMan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

So far this is slavery.

Reviewer: kmbkmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

I hate him more and more.. such a bastard!

Reviewer: kmbkmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

I hate James. That is all. 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

Where can I find The Training School Retained Edward's POV?

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Greeneyedlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 78

AMAZING!

Reviewer: Countrygirl2014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Good

Reviewer: fanficlover88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

This stuff was mad dope yo. Feelin it big time. Really messin with my high though.

Reviewer: kaylade22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 78

 

FUCK...that is so NOT the way to have ended this story. Though it was tense & exciting to keep reading down to his response.

Damn....my nerves were jangling.

 

LOVED YOUR STORY....would love to see some kind of a sequel as to what happens to their lives.....& just 'maybe' their reinvolvement into the school.

 

Thanks so muches for sharing your story with me....

 

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)

jdcm0630@yahoo.com  (new email)

Reviewer: Indianwalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 78

Perfect ending!

Reviewer: darkmoonsfalcon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

Good story but I kind of take issue with Carlisle constantly yelling. The kind of Dom who can make thousands per student at a school like this would never have to raise his voice even with the most unruly of trainees. If she had even a submissive bone in her body all he would have to do is use "The tone" of voice that will just make her bend. Don't get me wrong I get that unlike others here she didn't know what she was getting into, because James is a total douchebag and didn't give her a choice. But I take a small bit of offense at howw you are writing these supposidly professional Dominant/submissive trainers. Other then that it is an awesome story that I wish I could actually make myself get into reading, but I just get mad everytime you have Carlisle yell at her.

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 78

nice ending

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

yay vengence

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella

a prequal of bella would be nice

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 74: James

hope his dick falls off

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

track them

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

id rethink my ways too

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

stupid james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

oh shit

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

keep running

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

evacuate

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

yay reinforcements

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

sweet edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

black and blue suits him

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22

take victorias tracker out

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22

edward the white knight

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22

hee hee

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21

theyre safe

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21

nice punishment

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

hee hee

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21

save victoria

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

james should be castrated

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 56: Renee

james is dangerous save victoria too

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 55: Bella DAY 20 PART B

safety

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

shit hits the fan

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B

run away

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B

james has to be stopped

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella DAY 20 PART A

james is up to something

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward DAY 20 PART A

better than james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A

james is an ass

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 47: Edward DAY 17 PART B

edward wants bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

shes right

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A

now what

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

victoria should know

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:12 AM Title: Interview with the Master

suspicions are good in this case

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

dumb bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

good edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B

very bad james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

eek no branding

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A

maybe victorias allergic to the tracker or getting pregnant

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A

james is a cruel man

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14

too bad she didnt puke on him

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

james wouldnt approve of edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B

edward is better than james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

stalker level 8

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B

yay no rape

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

good edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

bad james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

bad mike

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

kinky alice

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

emmett isnt a bad dom

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 23: James - DAY 8 PART B

mean james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

edward is gentle

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A

grumpy esme

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A

bella wouldnt have consented

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

i dont like james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

dom edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

ouch

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

strange version of edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A

happy angela

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7

poor bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

wierd tonyas so willing

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

bad mike

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

cheater

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

something bigger than a plug maybe

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

a selfish lover

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

sounds sore

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

ew

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

thats scary

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

bad boyfriend

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

no gag reflex

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Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

maybe james doesnt handle bella right

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

james tricked her

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

what happens if she has to pee and she is tied up

Reviewer: volturigirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 78

I have absolutely loved this story!!

Reviewer: raissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

dear lord that was intense and hot

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 78

Ladies I just wanted you to know that I read your story again. It is still amazing. 

Reviewer: Leenf Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 78

ah wow ths was a amazing story, it was just waw

keep writing an posting

Reviewer: TwilhardedDirectioner Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

omg.... its emmett...

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 78

Ah nice epilogue

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