Date: 09 Jun 2020 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 78
La historia fue simplemente grandiosa, tuvo de todo, fue increíble.
A qué te refieres cuando dices, esto no es el final... Es solo el comienzo...?
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
Me encanta ojalá .. hubiera secuela oh...otra historia parecida para leerlo
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2020 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
Me encanta ojalá .. hubiera secuela oh...otra historia parecida para leerlo
Date: 04 Apr 2019 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 78
Oh how I have loved this story! I wish there had been one more chapter as a kind of few years later, but this ending was great too!
thank you for writing this story!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2018 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 78
After this time still a wonderful story. It was exciting and suspenseful also erotic. Well done.
Date: 18 Jun 2016 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 78
Couldn't stop reading lots of twists and turns really enjoyed your work many thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2016 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
I can't believe Bella, "Say Something"!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 78
I just finished reading your story and wanted to thank you for writing and sharing it. For many chapters, I was sure I knew how Bella's story would come out. I was certain, for whatever reason, she'd sign the papers for the extreme pain play and Carlisle, in his quest to keep Edward and Bella away from each other, would make him be the one to dish out the severely painful session, ending with both, Bella and Edward, safewording their way out of the school after an immense amount of angst and pain. I'm glad you chose a different path.
One thing that had be wondering, thought, is that the issue of Edward's proclaimed bisexuality is never broached again once he starts a relationship with Bella. It leaves me wondering if he's completely fulfilled in his relationship with her since he's deeply in love or if he's hoping she'll open up to group play or something along those lines again so he might get his rocks off. I hope it's the first and since it's not in the story, I'll just pretend that's the way it works for him ;).
Once more, thanks for writing and sharing. I really enjoyed the read.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A
Hi i stared to read this history in Spanish the translated but the girls only have the translation at chapter before this, and I confess I love this history, thanks so much for share with us.
Date: 08 Apr 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
I think I hate Carlisle as much as Bella does, though my hatred comes from the fact that he is a terrible dom and is utterly failing her as her trainer. I mean, come on, things like aftercare and checking your sub's mental state are dominance 101! Not to mention that a brand new sub is in no way ready for half this shit.
Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A
So far this is slavery.
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
I hate him more and more.. such a bastard!
Date: 05 Jan 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5
I hate James. That is all.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6
Where can I find The Training School Retained Edward's POV?
Date: 28 Aug 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 06 May 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
Good
Date: 18 Mar 2014 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
This stuff was mad dope yo. Feelin it big time. Really messin with my high though.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 78
FUCK...that is so NOT the way to have ended this story. Though it was tense & exciting to keep reading down to his response.
Damn....my nerves were jangling.
LOVED YOUR STORY....would love to see some kind of a sequel as to what happens to their lives.....& just 'maybe' their reinvolvement into the school.
Thanks so muches for sharing your story with me....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
jdcm0630@yahoo.com (new email)
Date: 17 Feb 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 78
Perfect ending!
Date: 05 Feb 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
Good story but I kind of take issue with Carlisle constantly yelling. The kind of Dom who can make thousands per student at a school like this would never have to raise his voice even with the most unruly of trainees. If she had even a submissive bone in her body all he would have to do is use "The tone" of voice that will just make her bend. Don't get me wrong I get that unlike others here she didn't know what she was getting into, because James is a total douchebag and didn't give her a choice. But I take a small bit of offense at howw you are writing these supposidly professional Dominant/submissive trainers. Other then that it is an awesome story that I wish I could actually make myself get into reading, but I just get mad everytime you have Carlisle yell at her.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
yay vengence
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 75 - Bella
a prequal of bella would be nice
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
hope his dick falls off
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
track them
Date: 03 Feb 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
id rethink my ways too
Date: 03 Feb 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
stupid james
Date: 03 Feb 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
oh shit
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
keep running
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
evacuate
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
yay reinforcements
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23
sweet edward
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 65: James DAY 22
black and blue suits him
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 64: Bella DAY 22
take victorias tracker out
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22
edward the white knight
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 62: James DAY 22
hee hee
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 61: Bella DAY 21
theyre safe
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21
nice punishment
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21
hee hee
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
save victoria
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
james should be castrated
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 56: Renee
james is dangerous save victoria too
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 55: Bella DAY 20 PART B
safety
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
shit hits the fan
Date: 02 Feb 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B
run away
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B
james has to be stopped
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 51: Bella DAY 20 PART A
james is up to something
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 50: Edward DAY 20 PART A
better than james
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A
james is an ass
Date: 31 Jan 2014 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 47: Edward DAY 17 PART B
edward wants bella
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B
shes right
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A
now what
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 44: James DAY 17
victoria should know
Date: 31 Jan 2014 7:12 AM Title: Interview with the Master
suspicions are good in this case
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A
dumb bella
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B
good edward
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 41: James DAY 16 PART B
very bad james
Date: 31 Jan 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B
eek no branding
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A
maybe victorias allergic to the tracker or getting pregnant
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A
james is a cruel man
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 35: James DAY 14
too bad she didnt puke on him
Date: 28 Jan 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14
james wouldnt approve of edward
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B
edward is better than james
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
stalker level 8
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B
yay no rape
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A
good edward
Date: 27 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A
bad james
Date: 27 Jan 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A
bad mike
Date: 27 Jan 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11
kinky alice
Date: 26 Jan 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11
emmett isnt a bad dom
Date: 26 Jan 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 23: James - DAY 8 PART B
mean james
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B
edward is gentle
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A
grumpy esme
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A
bella wouldnt have consented
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A
i dont like james
Date: 25 Jan 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B
dom edward
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7
ouch
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7
strange version of edward
Date: 25 Jan 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A
happy angela
Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7
poor bella
Date: 25 Jan 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6
wierd tonyas so willing
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6
bad mike
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5
cheater
Date: 25 Jan 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5
something bigger than a plug maybe
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
a selfish lover
Date: 25 Jan 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4
sounds sore
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B
ew
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
thats scary
Date: 24 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A
bad boyfriend
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A
no gag reflex
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B
maybe james doesnt handle bella right
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A
james tricked her
Date: 24 Jan 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1
what happens if she has to pee and she is tied up
Date: 24 Dec 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 78
I have absolutely loved this story!!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14
dear lord that was intense and hot
Date: 14 Dec 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 78
Ladies I just wanted you to know that I read your story again. It is still amazing.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 78
ah wow ths was a amazing story, it was just waw
keep writing an posting
Date: 16 Sep 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B
omg.... its emmett...