Date: 15 Sep 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great story, but you didn't finish by posting the sequel. I'll keep you on alert just in case
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking for the sequel?? Is it on another site?
Date: 18 Jun 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
love it! :) great story...and i love bella's power, epsecially the twist you've given it and the conection it has to anger..very clever...because after what james did...shes going to have lots of anger and pain.
im hoping bella's memories are all intact and she was just scared because of the whole james thing. I cant wait for volturi's pet and to see how long it takes bella to learn her gift and how aro uses her! and im intriged with your idea that she draws people in...it is some sort of seduction like being a succubus or something?
please please post volturi's pet up soon....and maybe could you please do a AN on here so i know when its up...im rubbish at checking that sort of stuff! :)
Date: 15 Feb 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
I enjoyed your story. Thanks for posting!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Where's Volturi Pet? I can't find it!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank God it's back to normal, I would've hated if this was a J&B story!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is this a James&Bella story? Please tell me that it would eventually go back to Edward&Bella Romance
Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well Edward doesn't have a choice now, does he.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
So is Alice not seeing her because she's pregnant?
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Don't give in Bella.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
No one could break her bond to Edward.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Victoria will somehow betray him. She wouldn't like him having Bella.
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward may be able to exist with it, but will Bella?
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
wHAT I anticipted JAmes doing. He would never be satisfied wwith jus killing her. Oh Bella, death wouls vw much easier
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
So glad that James is gone.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
just neat & written well also
Date: 13 Aug 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
very great & awesome start this here is
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aro scares me.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome!! Posting today would be good!! I bet it only takes a couple of hours instead of 3 days since she's already mostly changed!!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh dear me! Edward finally did it...now hopefully they can get away from Aro. Great job!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
update tommorrow! love this story you have had me hooked since i found it!!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter! Well worth the wait! Please don't hold us in suspense for too long, though! :)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story, sad to see it ending :(
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
So Bella is already gaining her powers, hmmm I wonder how Aro will hold her to him? Will he use Edward...
Thanks for the update.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
:) yes please update soon.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
I liked Emmett's thoughts in this chapter. I always wanted a big brother like Emmett *sigh*
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait until Edward kills this crazy, disgusting, asshole.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
DAMN! I didn't expect James to rape her so quickly. Ugh, he disgusts me.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope Edward finds Bella before James gets a chance to rape her :(
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ew, I wouldn't want James to touch me either. If he tried to kiss me, I would've tried to fight back, and ended up hurting myself lol
Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
ummm can you post now? please?
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
One chapter left?? I'm so torn!! But since I THINK you said you were making a sequal...POST TOMORROW!! I love this story! :-) You rock :-)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Should you post tomorrow???? YES! :0) Great chapter. I love seeing them all pull together as a family. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
it was worth the wait
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay Bella is now changing. Lets hope she will be powerful enough to knick Aro's arse and the rest of the guards.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay I am hooked, really like it so far.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow what an awesome turn! I really really enjoy this story! And your writing just keeps getting better! Keep up the fantastic work!! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Excellent chapter. Edward and Bella fell into Aro's trap.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love what she did with her powers. I bet Aro is thrild with her powers so far and they are doing what he wanted. What next I cant wait.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
oooohhhh its gettting interesting
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow that was an intresting chapter! cant wait till the next one!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
AHHH!!!! NOOO!! Bella can't join the guard! sigh...great job as always...
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Enjoyed the chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
You've done a wonderful job with this story. You've done an impressive job of structuring and pacing it. You have a real talent! I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
A minor correction: When you talk about the Cullens as a group, you don't need an apostrophe (Cullen's). You just need to make it plural (Cullens). Example from this chapter: " . . . the chances of acquiring the rest of the Cullen’s would increase . . ." It should read " . . . the chances of acquiring the rest of the Cullens would increase . . ." Do you see the difference? If you are talking about something like the Cullen's home then you need the apostrophe. I hope this is helpful!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
What is Bella thinking?? Ahhh...this is killing me! That was a killer chapter, btw...no pun intended. I'll def have to head on over & read Haunted Memories! I'm pumped about it! Update soon!! Xoxo!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Bella's going to be a really powerful vamp. I think she used so much power there in the throne room her human body gave out. Will the Cullen's join the Volturi also???
Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 17
I knew something was wrong but I was thinking because he feed on her and did not feed her she was just very sick this is a cool twist. Aro is a sick fuck i would not want to guess what he will say. Your kiding only three more chapters???
Date: 20 Jun 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well that was pretty cool. Looking forward to seeing what Aro's decision is. :0)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah, I'd figured out why Alice's visions weren't working. ;)
Date: 19 Jun 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
AHHHH!!! OH NOS!!!!!!!!!!!! What a cliffy! but great job! I can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Now everything makes sense! I feel like such an idiot...I was sitting there thinking, "the Volturi doesn't have a shield..." Hahaha. Are you going to write a sequel to this story? You should...it's fantastic. Update SOON! :)
Author's Response:
There will be a sequel although I havn't started on it yet. I hope to start on it in the near future but I'm afraid my fanfiction's have taken a backseat to my latest project. I've started writting my own novel that I plan to enter in the TWCS contest so my fanfiction's will updated on a less regular basis. It is my dream to become a writer and do what I love to do for a living. Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you like the story. Be sure to check out my original work once I start posting. I've got the prologue completed and am in the final editting process. Still trying to think of an appropriate title though.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story. I love Aro! You have done well so far! I hope the Volturi will give the Cullens a hard time! In most of the ff stories the Cullens get Bella back too easy! LOL
Date: 10 Jun 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
as always I hope nothing bad happens so that bella and edward can have their HEA .. and the rest of the cullens as well :)
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Aro is a total creep How are the cullens going to get away?????
Date: 09 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
I like scheming Aro more than out and out creepy/cheerful Aro. Good characterization.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have really enjoyed your story! Thank you for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
As long as he doesn't hurt any of them but they won't want to be split up. Naughty Aro.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no!! This is not good! Great job! Can't wait for more...
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
I so don't like Aro lol. He's so evil although he does kind of have a perverse interest in Bella. Hope you update some more soon
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ahhh how can you stop there?? This is getting too intense! I'm just curious how Aro's able to block his thoughts from Edward for such an extended period of time. It seems like a very difficult thing to do. Edward has to know something is wrong or that Aro can't be trusted - simply for the fact Aro's attempting to block Edward. I can't wait for the next chapter...please don't keep us waiting too long! This is too good to draw it out :) :) xoxo
Author's Response:
I like to believe that since Aro has been around for such a long time he is well versed in being able to cloak his thoughts. Also, due to the fact that he is so fascinated by Edward's ability to read minds from a distance that it is something that he has intensely researched. Maybe it's just the fact that you have to be actively thinking something for Edward to hear it. Take your pick.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Can't wait to see what Aro has up his sleeve and how the Cullen's will react. I sure hope they all get out ok. :0) Great chapter.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
thank GOD James is gone!! I can't wait to see what happens next! Aro's character always seems to surprise me in fanfiction, so I'm sure your Aro will be surprising, too :)
Date: 31 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
They should have buried Jame's head. Why does no one ever bury the head? It's not like they couldn't go back and burn it later!
Date: 30 May 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
GOODBYE James! Not gonna miss him a bit. lol Wonder what will happen now that the voltur have shown up????
Date: 30 May 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
That was perfect so glad to see that bastard go up in smoke. I cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Grrr... evil cliffy
Date: 30 May 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad James is gone, he was a sick pervert!! I hope Bella doesn't have to join the Volturi though. Hope you update more soon
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well thank goodness that James is toast but Aro is really bad news. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 30 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
YES!!!! James can burn in hell! But Aro certainly isn't finished with Bella yet...this is gonna be interesting...
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
VERY glad to see James go! But I'm hoping Aro comes to his senses and let's Edward show him that it wasn't any member of the Cullen family that told Bella of their existence, but Jacob on accident. So no one is at fault. Lord....hasn't Bella/ the Cullens been through enough? :-) Loving this as always. Update!
Date: 28 May 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Poor James! I really want him to end up with Bella, 'cause Edward's so "perfect" and all.
Date: 28 May 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
I have always liked (ish) Aro. Like a creepy old uncle who tries to be charming. I think you written him well.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
Interesting story so far, I really hope Bella ends up with the Cullen's.
Date: 28 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
James has finely meet someone that is more evil than him Aro. I cant wait for more.
Date: 28 May 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh hell.....I really don't want Bella turned by Aro!!!! Yeah, I hear u about work...big pain in the ass...amen 4 weekends!!! LOL
Date: 28 May 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
hmmmm...here I was, thinking that Aro would be another enemy for Bella, but in actuality, he might just be an ally! awesome! She needs something good to happen soon...
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
You did a great job of writing Aro. He seems a bit more humane in this story, but I like it. I also love the fact that he wants to get rid of James and seems to have an open mind before passing judgment on the Cullens. They seriously need a break. Bella especially. Question: Is Bella being so passively quiet now because she feels strongly that the Cullens should be coming to rescue her at any time, or because she has reached a broken, helpless state...feeling like all hope is lost? I assumed the first, but I thought I'd ask...because I can misread things easily :) I freakin love this story. I know I always say that...but I mean it :) I hope you will be able to update sooner for the next chapter...I'm on the edge of my seat :-) Can't wait. See you then :) :)
Date: 28 May 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, Aro is more devious than James. Poor Bella is it out of the frying pan into the fire? What about the Cullen's what will happen to them?
Date: 28 May 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
I knew Aro would want Bella for himself. :0) James has no idea he's about to be double crossed. haha sorry that's just a little funny to me. I want to see him get what he deserves. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 25 May 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Whoa, totally intense. I'm thinking, for Alice's visions, that the answers can be possibly related to what happens in Breaking Dawn. When she was preggo with Renesmee in BD, Alice couldn't see what was going to happen.... corrolation there?!?!
Can't wait for more!
Date: 24 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
I feel sorry for Alice and for Jasper. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
James scares me. Can't wait to find out more and more.
Date: 24 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
The Cullens to the rescue!!!!!!
Date: 24 May 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad that Bella really did get to talk to Carlisle. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
ITALY?! Oh this is not going to end well...sigh...can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm jumping out of my seat!! The Cullen's need to HURRY it up if they are going to save her in time. If James and Bella get on that plane, Bella's a goner. Ahhh...this is killing me. And WHAT is going on with Alice and her visions? The only thing I could guess is that maybe she's having difficulty seeing the vampire that turned her. But then I second guess myself because she didn't have that probalem in the book. But it's your story...you can do what you want with it...which means, that could definitely be the problem. :-) Either way, I feel bad for our little Alice at the moment. Even worse for Bella. I'm surprised Edward didn't freak out at her for not showing him her vision. I'm guessing that will come next chapter. I'd be freaking out if someone knew some information that I wasn't privy to. You HAVE to update this soon....it's getting so good! :) :) :) I'll be waiting :) Have a great day
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
This was an excellent chapter. What is that pyshco going to Italy for? Cannot wait for the next update.
Date: 21 May 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
ahhhh!! Italy?!?! Why, James?! URGH!! What a daft prick!! ahhh!!
Great chapter!!
Date: 21 May 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
James is crazy I was so hoping they would catch up with him and kill him but off to Italy and the Voltari did Alice see them killing Bella ???????