Date: 08 Jul 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
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Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
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Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
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[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
First- Thank you for this wonderfull chapter!!!I know it's pathetic but I'm checking every second day if you have updated.So,thanks again!!!
Second- I totally didn't expected that.I thought maybe Gianna published theire homemade video but not Collin going to some TV-Shown.
Third- I totally love the music your using for your story.It allways fits 'cause I'm allways listening to music while reading.Today it was your song and Dashborad Confessional ft. Juli-Stolen.Try this;it fits perfect to your chapter.
Enough said-please,don't leave me waiting to long.(I think I even memorized some parts of your story-help,I need a real life ;) )
Author's Response:
Hey! Thank you so much for reviewing! I apologize for taking so long for updates, my beta is having internet problems, poor thing. Anyway, I'm getting anxious to post the next chapter. I may just do it unbeta'd. We'll see.
Thanks for the song rec! I'll defintely put it in my playlist!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
I'm addicted to your story. Can't wait for the updates (:
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Wow okay first of all, I have to say: no sex? lol those two are some kinky bitches and for one chapter to go without a lemon, I'm shocked. :) otherwise the shit is hitting the fan now. I thought he broke up with her and now he's whining because she left him? wow this is going good. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Collin is a douche right? I modeled him after that Scott guy on the Kardashians lol. Have you had a chance to check out the outtake?
As always thank you for your continued support!
Laila
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
I have missed you too!! I love
that it is her ex, and not a clip
of their home movie! Thank you
for the brilliant update! :)
Author's Response:
As always thank you for your continued support! I'm so sorry...my beta is having internet problems, so she is backed up to chapter 16 as of right now. I hate that I haven't recieved 14 back yet for posting, but she is working on it!
Have you read the outtake?
Thanks again,
Laila
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
hmmm, the plot thickens....
Author's Response:
I almost feel bad about all the drama...almost lol. Did you get a chance to read the outtake? As always thanks for always taking the time to read and review! Your support means the world to me!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Very nice wording to get Bella to agree to him buying a house. It could have gone up shis creek, but he is one smooth fucker.
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad youliked it! I always look forward to your reviews! I'm Compiling photos to post of the home they chose! Talk to you soon! Did you read the outtake?
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Hey disregard my pm. Its must be just me with the problem. Ugh!! Stupid computer. Anyway, great chapter. When he kept talking about he wouldn't let the whole world see her mouth on him, all I kept thinking was oh boy, that's what Alice wants to show them, their video was leaked. lol Loved the chapter and can't wait for more. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
thank you for letting me know. hopefully it wont take as long for the next update! sorry about that.
kisses,
laila
Date: 07 Jul 2010 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Hey not sure if it's just my computer or if it happened to everyone or if it's how the chapter is meant to be, but the chapter didn't seem to be all there, it ended half way through the song that Edward sings for Bella, so I just thought I'd let you know that something happened, if that's not how the chapter was meant to be finished :) If it's not how the chapter is meant to be, hope I can read the full version soon :)
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the heads up...the chapter was indeed screwed up during upload. It is fixed now!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
love the song so far!
Author's Response:
Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
yay, new chapter! i just wish it was longer :) i love this story, i hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Feel like there's some major drama on the way. I like that they all have each others backs. I hope that continues. Edward singing that song for Bella was so sweet. He's so cool :0)
Author's Response:
Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
damn, i thought we could have gotten rid of Gianna easier
Author's Response:
Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
loved it i would have beat the crap out of peter for that crap but i get why he can't .
Author's Response:
Go back and reread! The upload screwed up, but it is fixed now!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Finally had time to catch up with this. I love it still. I'll have to google a dermal by someone's eye. The thought kinda makes me cringe. Whatev, another great chapter :)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I have bets on Rosalie having access to the computer.
Author's Response:
I have to agree that Rosalie is indeed a bitch, that would seriously suck if she did it though. Thanks for reviewing...I love to hear your theories!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I'm really enjoing this story! Esme and Carlisle are written so well. It's fun to see a unique version of the couple :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really wanted them to be different, yet still the same. I also wanted Edward to be a product of his upbringing, so it is clear that he is very much capable of being in a loving and monogamus relationship. I think this is really the only way it is believable, I mean, if he saw his that Carlisle is able to maintain his bad ass self and still love his mother completely...then surely he can too. Thank you so much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I wonder if Rose or Tanya got onto his laptop to get that video. That could cause some problems. Loved the tats.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I know it was totally cliche and corny but c'mon, they have to have matching tattoos! lol! Thanks for taking the time as always to review, your support means so very much to me! Laila
Date: 15 Jun 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Oh ugh. I foresee Gianna rearing her ugly head... So much love, love, love. Time for the angst???
Author's Response:
I don't think it will be very easy to get rid of Gianna because now...not only does she feel rejected and hopeless, but she also feels anger on top of that. That can be a very dangerous combination. I'm just saying... ;) Anyhoo, our couple has kind of been in a bubble haven't they? I expect that they might find a few little bumps as real life starts to seep in, Bella is still young afterall...
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
G is a f**king Di*K, I know she has the video.
Edward is a real man. He is doing a great job with Bella. He deserves an Oscar for his perrmance in taking care of her needs with the exception of the one slip up.
I love this Bella, the best one ever and I have read many of these stories on both TWCS and FanFic.
Alice suprises me much! She seem to be low keyed in this story.
Rose, what can I say Rose! She seems to be coming around. However, she has some low self esteem issues that is different in this story.
Emmett finally is striking back. Way to go Emmett!
Jasper is my main man. You can never go wrong with his cool and peace giving personality. He too is a real manly man.
Mr. & Mrs. C., are what I would like to be when I'm their age. Kool and sexy.
Last but not least Tanya! Still brainless!!!!!!
All in all you have written the best story I've read on these sites. My hats' off to you!
Author's Response:
Yay! I can't even begin to tell you how much your words mean to me. This is the first story I have ever written and I am still learning but your words are so encouraging! OK...
Yes, Gianna is a dick...it would be very scary if she does have the video :-0
Edward has really been trying. I can definitley say that he really loves her
Bella is cool and sexy and she doesn't have the same issues she has in the book but she is also only twenty to Edward's thirty five...I wonder if that will ever be an issue?
Alice is much more subdued in this story, it annoys me when she is bossy and bouncy
I think alot of people forget what a bitch Rosalie is in the books...she is jealous because she was never able to capture Edward's attention and she practically gets him killed! She doesn't even start to come around until the middle of Eclipse and doesn't really accept Bella till Breaking Dawn...so we'll see how this goes.
Emmett is a natural flirt and I think he doesn't know where the line is sometimes and is a bit lacking in compassion...
Jasper has been cool so far, but he was also initally weary of Bella in the books so we'll see what happens here (not that anyone else is really cannon besides Rosalie).
Mr & Mrs C are pretty fantastic...I hope she gets her grandbabies
Tanya has been so easily dismissed...as a matter of fact, Bella never really saw her as a threat.
Thank you again for reviewing...I look forward to hearing more of your theories as the story progresses!
Laila
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
C is to die for. It dosen't get any better. That man makes me want to jump his BOD real bad, LOL
Author's Response:
Me too! Yum... Can you believe how he was checking her out! lol
Thanks for reviewing ;)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
great story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! and thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
So now something is going to try to bring them down. Someone leaked thier video online didn't they? I love how in love Edward and Bella are and I hope that they cling to that through whatever happens. It would be great it the video leak doesn't have the desired effect they were going for. I mean Edward and Bella are kind of exabisionist anyway so maybe they can brush this off. (Just trying to stay positive here) lol As I mentioned before I love the depth of thier love, you write it so well. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always look forward to your reviews! You are right what goes up, must come down but I have confidence that they will stick together.
Thanks again,
Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Very damn good chapter as always. I so want this story to never end. One of the best. And I have reviewed ALL if the other chapters but for some fucking reason I keep getting a message saying error code 3 already been reviewed. Just wanted you to know that I have been sending you love. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Thank you! and i truly appreciate the reviews...Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
wow hot almost sex at the beginning finishing up with matching tattoos and a question. lol I for one am dying to know who was watching their videos if Edward isn't sure it was him? keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks! I always look forward to your reviews! Too bad their hot make-out was interrupted by Charlie! lol Talk to you soon...Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
What did the Skanks do with the video?
This story is pure brilliance and sexy
as hell! Thank you! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always look forward to your reviews. Which one do you think got it???
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
loved it em is an ass if he cheats on rose even if she is a witch
Author's Response:
Yep, I agree. They are both selfish and inconsiderate! lol
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
OMG! F*cking Tanya got into his computer and copied their video. What will she do with it? Please tell me she won't try to replace Bella with herself in the video, right? I'm sure if it can be done, she will do it. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review! So, I'm not sure it was Tanya...but it might be ;) as for what she will do with it, I guess it depends on whether or not she is working alone and what the ultimate goal is...I guess we will have to wait and see!
See you next time!
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Loved their matching tattoos! Also curious to see if someone was actually in his computer and stole some of their home movies!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! As corny as it is, I love the tats too ;) If someone stole their videos, that could be dangerous!
See you next time!
Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Matching tattoos! just don't think they'd really take aspirin after- that causes bleeding...
Author's Response:
Pretty big step huh? Thanks for the review, I always look forward to them :)
Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I am so happy for them. I am not a tattoo and piercing person, but I do know that is a big step.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! And yes it is a big step. I hope that they get to enjoy their happiness for awhile, even though it isn't likely...
Thanks again,
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
loved it
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Great chapter. I feel like this is the calm before the storm, I feel like stuff is about to hit the fan.
Author's Response:
Thank you, as always, for your review! I hope our couple gets to enjoy being happy for a bit, even though it isn't likely :-/
Thanks again,
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
oh crap their first fight i hope he goes back and talks to her
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
loved it
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
loved it
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
...and then the other shoe drops....
Author's Response:
Right? lol...Thanks, as always, for the review! I look forward to them
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
loved it poor em to be second in his wifes eyes sucks he needs to drop her
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I loved belloa's pov that was so good how she told rose off and iam glad she has aliuce on her side
Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Nothing can bring him down except for those videos that are about to be released. I know it's coming and I wonder if it will jeopardize that scholarship that Bella got not that she needs the money to pay for school but still. Hey I know her family is mafia, is that where all her money comes from?
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for your support and reviews! Bella was just rambling off a bunch of shit when she was drunk...I don't think they really are mafia, but who knows? The money actually comes from her Italian grandparents, they own and operate a very successful vinyard, she also recieved a bit of an inheritence from grandma Swan. Don't forget about her best selling book as well. and although she does have some money, it is nothing compared to what Edward has.
That video is dangerous! lol
See you next time,
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
loved it rose is a big bitch she needs to get over her self
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I am so glad edward told her all about his past and didn't wait till it was too late i loved it very hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
That was awesome so glad bella told rose off and has chosen to be with edward
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I loved it that was such a great chapter i don't think i have ever read a first chapter of any story and was hooked as fast as i am with this story really great job!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
OMG wHO GOT THEIR PAWS ON THAT VIDEO????(TANYA?????)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Scary thought huh??? It has the potential to ruin our Bella's reputation :-/
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
What can you say about perfection?? Oh yha, more please!!! Can't wait for the next chapter..... Wendy
Author's Response:
Yay! Thank you as always for your support...I hope the next chap will be finished soon :-/
kisses,
Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Awww!! Matching tattoos isn't that love? I think Edward should get another one because it's super sexy. Great Chap Update soon
Author's Response:
Me too...and he is, he is ready to finish his forearm...I wonder with what ;) Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Nice ideas with the tats. Crap, someone has that video right?
Author's Response:
As always, thanks for reviewing! God, that would suck. That video does not need to be floating around the internet! lol
Thanks again and see you soon!
Laila
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I have a feeling that Tanya may have stolen some of their homemade movies......
Awesome story though. I absolutely love it:D
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreciate the support... gosh, that kinky shit is really dangerous! our Bella so doesn't need that shit floating around the internet!
Thanks again,
Laila
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Another fucking perfect chapter, I wanna live in your fucking head!
Bella's piercing is it like under the skin and just the diamond is visible?
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for your support and reviews! Yep, the piercing is exactly as you describe, really pretty if you have seen one up close.
Your words make me so fucking happy, and they make me wanna keep writing, lol!
Talk to you soon,
Laila
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
Esh. Anytime a chapter ends with a line like that something always comes around and kicks their asses. Maybe I'm a pessimist. Who knows. can't wait till next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreciate the support. And you know what they say...what goes up, must come down :-/
Thanks again,
Laila
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I so love this story. Hurry with the next chapter i am addicted love how ooc they all are.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
OK....I gotta admit. The more OCC the characters get, the more I love this story. Wasn't sure about the age difference at first, but it has definitely grown on me. I'm waiting anxiously for your next chapter and have you on alert! Thanks so much for sharing it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Hi there!
I just wanted to drop you a review to say I love love love your story. I'm sorry I haven't been able to review all of the chapters, but I usually read on my phone and that makes it tough.
Your story is so differen from anything else that I am reading right now. I really like your Bella. Sure, she has moments of insecurity, but she stands up for herself and doesn't take any shit.
Oh and Edward, such a badass but underneath there is a sweet side that no one really gets to see. :-)
I'm hoping we get to see more of his parents, but especially his sister and Alec. They seem fun and it would be great to see what you can do with them.
This last update is exactly what I needed. I feel like I'm in the middle of an emo fest with everything else that I'm reading. Your story has been the perfect break from that.
I really appreciate you taking the time to write and share. I can't wait for the rest of the story. I'm sure it can only get more addicting from here!!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
DAMN indeed... I am so in love with this story I just wanna hug it and kiss it and roll around in it. I do love me some inked mom and pop.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I just loved this chapter, Daddy "C" is the best. I found him and Esme funny as can be. I loved Edwards whole family. I was happy as a peach that Bella and Edwards sister jumped on that wrench.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I agree with carlisle "damn"
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
hahaha love the new take on Carlise and Esme!!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
thats a great chapter love the fun lovin and tattooed daddy c! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 08 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I love daddy C that was so good
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Loved the chapter. Especially Daddy C, he sounds yummy. Can't wait for the the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Daddy C is hot as Fuk!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
LMAO!!! Love his parents!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I hope Edward deleted those pictures and hid the video because I can see Giana leaking those to the press. She is very vendictive.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I've read the chapter twice already and damn that was hot. What the hell was everyone doing in their room though? I loved that Carlisle and Esme are not only inked but just as horney as E and B. I can't wait for Alec to ink the both of them and to see more of Lizzy and Es banter. What the hell are Tanya and Gianna up I don't think that is the last of the fitting but I was glad to see Lizzy right there with B. All in all great chapter I am anxiously awaiting the next update.
I hope you post Carlisle and Esmes tats on your blog.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
What a great chapter. Doesn't everyone wish they had such cool parents.
Kat
Date: 08 Jun 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I totally feel a sex tape leakage coming on. That sounds way nastier than I meant it to....
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Damn, I want a Daddy C like that! Sigh....Esme is too funny!
Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Daddy C is definitely a DILF!! Edward has great parents. So glad they threw Gianna out finally. I wonder what kind of trouble she may cause when E fires her ass. Great chapter.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
You have done it once again, his whole family is crazy!! I LOVE IT!!! iT makes them seem realer (if that is even a word), but yes they seem real. Keep doing what you doing
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Laila, What an awesome chapter !!!! I cannot wait to see what the trouble makers are up to….. Does Tanya have that sex tape??? I am already tapping my foot impatiently for the next chapter !!! Wendy
PS Wonder what the Tat is going to be..
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I love an inked Carlisle and Esme. Esme just wants a grandbaby bless her heart.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Daddy C seams Hawt
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Oh my god.I've read each chapter like 10 times while waiting for a new one and it's still getting hot in here.
Damn girl-that's one of the best fucking stories I've ever read!And Daddy C is even hotter than E.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Well nobody ever explained what the hell the whole click was doing in his room in the first place. That seems a little suspect to me
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
That is just awesome!
I can't wait for more!
Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
DAMNNNN!!...I like this don't give a fuck Bella and Edward.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I freakin love this story! Great work
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I love Carlisle, he seems really cool with his ink and guitar playing skills. I loved how Edward is all smug to him after he kisses Bella, even though he knows his dad is harmless. I love that the 'rents are so laid back. Oh and at the beginning when Emmett was like wow I didn't think they'd really do it, that made me laugh, and that whole part was really hot. Still loving their public affections, it never gets old ;) and the last bit of this chapter was seriously hot, he turned so feral all of a sudden in his thoughts and the whole papi thing...whew, please continue from that point next chapter haha. I love, love, LOVE this story. It's my favourite at the moment, I look forward to reading every chapter. Please update soon. :)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
I love his parents! Heck, I love his whole family! I can't believe Bella and Edward starting having sex while everyone was in their room that morning. lol It was pretty hot though. Why was everyone in their room anyway??? Looking forward to seeing more time spent with the family. :0)
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Daddy C and Mommy E are just awesome, but I think from this photos won't come anything nice...
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Edward's parents fucking ROCK!! forgive the language but dang. that was hot and Carlisle checking out Bella's ass was hilarious. I love that everyone likes it. lol keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
i really love this story I love the ooc bella & edward and the hip badss cullens. It's on of my favourite stories adn I eagerlly look forward to the pdates
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
omg, Edward's parents are awesome! love how Esme took out the 'trash' ...lol ..i wonder what the hell Tanya is up to....evil sneaky bitch
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Soo Tanya found the video camera, I feel like she does in my heart. And Gianna is dumb and i want to slap her. and Daddy C = HOTTT ;) Great Chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
Holy FUCK! So hot!!!
Date: 31 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
They were doing so good! And then they let shit jump in the way again! Fuck just talk to eachother!!!
Date: 27 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
is it laughable that when i read 'una bella ragazza italiana' that i giggled and thought to myself i know what that means! and it is all because of reading EMANCIPATION PROCLAMATION' see fan fic is not just smut and stories it teaches us all!
loved the costumes i can picture each and every one. can't wait for the awards show!
Author's Response:
haha! I have to agree that Emancipation Proclimation is a fantastic fic! I have thouroughly enjoyed each of your reviews, it makes me so happy that this story is being enjoyed...I have never written before this so it is nice to hear that my efforts are appreciated. If you would like to see the costumes, you can get to the links on my ff.net account or on my blog: lailab-faithfully.blogspot.com.
Again thank you for reading and for your kind words...it makes it so much easier to keep going!
I look forward to hearing what you think of the next one!
Laila
Date: 27 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
so sweet! and the way b let him off the hook with saying 'i know...' just awesome.
Date: 27 May 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
oh boy these two! that was awesome!
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
HOT!!!!
Author's Response:
Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 27 May 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
i agree with alice i am so shocked and amazed that they have not 'gone all the way' but that poor boy is probably gonna burst! man is he walking into something good!
Date: 26 May 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
very hot! these two have some major chemistry
Date: 26 May 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
OK I was on the edge of my seat waiting for this update and then through the fight and it was so worth it, the last lemon alone was so hot!!!
Author's Response:
Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!
Date: 26 May 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
very hot and he even followed through and was sorta a 'gentleman'
Date: 26 May 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
I hope no one gets these videos. You know how celebrity videos are leaked to the pap. and the internet.
Author's Response:
I know, that would seriously suck. Lets see how Bella fares with the parents...It will be interesting to say the least! ;)
Date: 26 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
ok you had me wondering who the brother was for a while there. jazz - no, em - no, jake - no embry - no, quil - no, seth - yes! we were running outta guys. and that is never a good thing in FF! heehee. loved how b delt with rose. but i don't think your rose is good enough for emmy-bear. :( maybe he'll find a new hunny?
can't wait to see how much of a 'gentleman' eddie is gonna be, but unfourtunately it is past my bedtime. :( *pouts*
oh well i'll just read offline at work! *evil laugh*
Date: 26 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Omg, I can tell I'm going to stay up far too late reading this tonight. Loving it already.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you enjoyed the rest of the chapters :) I look forward to hearing what you think of Chapter 11 it will be out hopefully by Wednesday!