Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Wonderful story! I read it back through again. I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
very good can u send link for bracelet so we can see what it looks like?
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Good Stuff, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Oh, Man that Collin is an Ass! What is going to happen next? Why didn't Edward just get up and walk away?! What is Bella going to think?
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
I just knew Colin was setting him up.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
well in a way he had it comming but i have a felling that bella will be taking the matters into her own hands with collin! keep the chapters comming
Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Oh, that was good!!! Colin deserved every bit of that and more but the aftermath not so good.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Oh no! Edward is in some deep shit now. That poor guy. Colin deserved it and hopefully once he tells the court or his lawyer what Colin was saying he won’t be sued. I mean yes he shouldn’t of beat the hell out of him but if Colin wasn’t running his mouth he wouldn’t have had to. :D I can’t wait for more updates. This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the great work. Thanks again bye!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
OMG! Amazing chapter!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
That bastard so deserved the ass whipping he received! I really hope that Edward doesn't get into too much trouble :(
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
Edward has got to control that temper ... first with Charlie, then with Gianna and now he's gone and assaulted Collin. Can't wait to see how this resolves itself.
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
oh no!! edward's temper got the best of him now he and bella both will have to pay. can't wait to read more keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
oh no!, freaking set up! damn, how is he gonna get out of this...! LOVE Capo, good boy!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
ahh man!!! Such a cliffy!!!!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
That was incredible! I really am not happy that Colin made Edward pissed off enough to cause Edward to hit him, but I hope that Edward is cleared of all charges! I have a quick question, can you list all the piercings that Edward has (and maybe Bella too), I keep forgetting. Anyway, Capo was brilliant! I really wish I could have been there, I would have laughed so much! I really cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Nice chapter, but I think Charlie was very rude to Edward. Do you have a pic of this ring that Edward wants to give Bella?
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
I am glad she told him the truth! And I love CHarlie.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Charlie IS a bit of a dick. lol I love the happy dance from the cup cakes though. too cute. I can't wait to see what happens next. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 22 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Oh crap, what is Bella going to do?
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
No need for Charlie to be so extremely rude! i hope he doesn't start with him at the pool hall.....
Date: 21 Oct 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
I thought Charlie was a huge jerk. Loved the chapter though!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Great job! I look forward to see how you have it play out!! :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Charlie better cool it or he could loose his daughter by being stupid. Edward is her life and her future. She doesn't really need her dad. She needs Edward to be happy. Charlie better realize that quickly.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Charlie def does not like Edward. I guess I can see his point but if Bella is happy then he should be happy.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
I'm so glad Bella told Edward about all the threats. :0) Hope Charlie doesn't kill Edward. ha ha
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Wow, that was incredible! Edward is so sweet to do all of these things for Bella :) Charlie reminds me of my own Daddy, I can totally see him doing all of this whenever a guy comes home with me. I really loved all of this, it was perfect. I hope that they can figure out why the video is fuzzy and what exactly is going on with Collin "Asshole" Brady. I also hope that Asshole is gone for good sometime soon :)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Ok my first thought is she needs to tell Edward about the meeting at the gas station. With the paps around there will probably be pictures of it everywhere so there's no keeping it quiet and Collin was stupid for even thinking it could be. :0) While she's at it she needs to let Edward know about the video threat also. I'm afraid to see what happens next. Hope she doesn't let whoever this is tear them apart.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
i hate charlie. in the books, in the movie, in all fanfic. edward should not have to bow down to him and try to prove himself
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
well i think charlie is doing what charlie would do! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
well so much for sweet virginal Bella. Perhaps still sweet.
HMM
is Tommy Lee in the house ?? LOL
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Darn it everything was going so well for them both, well right up to the last paragraph at least. I can't wait to see what trouble Collin is trying to stir up now, but I really hope Bella tells Edward about it, before things get out of hand.
I can't wait to find out more about Charlie and Edwards long awaited meeting. Please don;t keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Bella needs to trust Edward enough to tell him what happened. He will take care of her and the idiot.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
I think it is Rosalie that is stirring up the trouble either that or she gave ammo to Colin.
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Oh this is SO not looking good!!!!! Thanks for the chapter and please update again soon!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
wow it has Been FOREVER!!! lol no I'm kidding. what a comeback but Edward is going to be PISSED soo freaking PISSED!!! Bella should just tell him from the get go. oh well can't wait to see where this goes and do you have a link to that video of them in the theroes of passion? lol I'm kidding honestly. lol thanks again so much. can't wait for more and you want some love? how about this: LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVELOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it! is that enough for now? lol thanks again :D
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loving it!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Hurry and update! I love that she is calling Lizzy!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
I wish she would tell Edward, he needs to be prepared. A sew video is hardly going to ruin his career. Lovede the fact that they got 2 puppies.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Holy effing shit....Please, please, PLEASE don't make her keep this shit from Edward out of some regard for his safety!!!
Edward is perfectly capable of staying safe and this is to effing HUGE to keep from him and not to mention that video involves Edward and the sender is right it would ruin EDWARD'S career, not Bella's so she really, really, really needs to tell Edward....IMMEDIATELY!!!!!!
We don't need this situation to cause angst between Bella & Edward because she didn't tell him; lord knows the whole situation is angsty enough!!!
So, what Bitch sent Collin the video???? I am going to guess it was either Tanya or Gianna...and am leaning more towards it being Gianna!!!
Anxiously awaiting Edwards wrath on this shitstorm and am really hoping you are going to ease my concerns by having Bella tell Edward the goddamn truth of what Collin said to her so that Edward can get on this shit immediately and handle it!!!
I will be chewing all of my fingernails off while anxiously awaiting your next update!! I effing love this story so much and their relationship is so effing HOT in this story....especially Edward's possessiveness - it is just the right amount and so god damn SEXY!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
well hes going to figure it out ! cant wait to see what happens next ! keep the chapters comming
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Nope, no angst, fix it!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
i knew that damn video was gonna make an appearance. great, keeping this from Edward is gonna cause a HUGE fight!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
the ending was intense!!!!!! edward is going to freak!! how did he even get that footage?? that guy is a creep, i can't believe that he would do all that for his five minutes of fame that will obviously ruin his reputation! gosh! i loved the house and the dog and the car :P it was really cute, esp. when they got the two dogs and edward was trying to be all gruff about it. it was a really good chapter, and i hope the next one doesn't take so long to get!!!!!!!!!! update soon? please? pretty please? with sugar on top? :)))))))))
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Wow, that was totally worth the wait! Do you have pictures of Lily and Capo on the blog? Just wondering ;) Amazing job, once again! I really cannot believe Colin, such an asshole! Grr! I really hope that they can figure out what to do next! I loved all of this so much!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
I hope that bella will not let this asshat run her life i hope she tells someone what is going on but i bet she wont and edward will think that she doesn't want him any more . i just want bella to not run from him lol iam so not an angst type of girl lol but i know in the end it will all work out i hope great story .and trust me ppl will wait for an update for this story and if they give you any crap will thats on them love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
Can not wait for them to get to Seattle! Post again soon!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
loves it bb
Date: 17 Sep 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
I have a bag like that... I even have nappies and a change of baby cloths in there... oooh and a stapler!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
i can't wait till they move in. i think a Doberman is perfect!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
thanks for clearing the topolino thing up... when i googled it, I came up with mickey mouse... I didn't quite get it.... but I do now!!! I am really enjoying this story so far!!!
Taryn
Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
wow its been FOREVER!!! lol I was really missing this story. I like the comeback though. not love but like. because there weren't any lemons. :( you comeback and Bella's on her period? totally not cool for perverted people like me. lol but seriously I love this story. I was soo afraid you abandoned it so I'm happy that you didn't so thank you for that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
Glad they are getting ready to go to the house.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
Great chapter! I love lhow close their getting.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
Wow, that was amazing! I am so glad Edward told her about the house and the financial situation. I really hope the interview with Barbara really did go well. I wonder why Charlie isn't talking to Bella? Amazing job, once again! Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
well i cant wait till they start tp settle in seattle and life starts to calm down for the both of them keep the chapters comming
Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
I am glad that Bella has calmed down about the house and money. It was almost like she was doubting the relationship as well when she would not accept all of him. His generouslity is part of him. She needed to realize that and accept that it hurt him having to fight over it all the time. Bella needs to have a serious talk with Renee. She is crazy and will continue to cause problems if the don't do something about her.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
Love the chapter, Edward is funny. I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
I think edward must be crazy if he thinks the media will give them peace lol.I can't wait till they get home i just know Collin will show up and try to cause problems for bella and him.But i think they can make it i love this story !!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
love the chappy and it has one of my fave billy idol songs as the title. can't wait to read more.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
I truly do love this story. I laughed when he thought she was talking about sleeping with another man and not the dog she was actually talking about. How very Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
i found this story earlier today and I have done nothing but read it!!!! I fucking love this story and adore this Edward and Bella. You are the queen of smut and I bow down to you. I cannot freaking wait for the update.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Edward is the perfect man!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
lol oh my i reacted the same way when bb my coach purse died i almost wanted to burry her i had had her since i was a freshman in highschool and i am 33 now and she died last month so that was a long time to develop a purse/woman relationship. love the story :)
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Glad some of the ban stuff got sorted out. I loved the back stage antics, and the shoes. I can't wait to see what happens during the interview.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
Thrilled to find this story here. Not to mention how far ahead it is compared to whats posted on twilighted. I love this story, and I am glad to read the progress Bella and Edward are making in their relationship, Thanks to her grandparents and Carlisle.
Very entertaining, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
I loved it! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Wow! That was hot and so worth the wait..... Next chapter, Please!!!! Pretty please??? Pretty pretty please... Wendy
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
That was HOT, double damn HOT!!! I love it when Edward is so damn controlling, demanding, dominating when it comes to sex...fuck what I wouldn't give for one night alone with him ;)
The ending was brilliant; I love this Bella...LMAO @ Bella crying because her bag broke but not giving a rats ass about what her mom said to the magazine....priceless!!!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
oooh awesome story so far will add it to my faves when i get caught up :)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
lol I loved that photoshoot and then the aftermath too. lol now as for her mother that bitch has a lot of nerve. I can't wait till they deal with her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Great, Renee had to open her big mouth! i could just imagine what she said
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Great interview. I'm glad they got to tell their side of things. Wish I could really see those pics. :0)
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
That photographer was so funny. I love it when Edward is in the Dom mode. He is so sexy that way. I love how protective he is of Bella. Renee needs to get her own life and stay out of her daughter's.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
I always do a little squee/jump/clap thing when I see an update... and yet again you did not dissapoint.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
I gotta say that I love your Edward. I cant stand it when (in other stories), Edward does nothing at all when the skank brigade touch him like they own him. At least your Edward has the balls to tell them where to go and stop touching him (the first and only one yet that I am aware of).
Another great chapter. Keep up the great work.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
GREAT chapter!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
I love how Edward puts up with all the crazy things coming out of Bellas mouth. Now that it love. Update very soon!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Amazing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Please write faster, I love reading your story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Loved the chapter! Loved the fact that she was crying over the bag and not the article. Can't wait for the next chapter and I wear my Rose-made blinkie with pride!!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Great chapter....and what can I say about the lemon. yummy I feel for Bella regarding (lola), I'm the same way with my bags. lol
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
well that was an intresting chapter and im excited to see what the next chapter has instore for us! keep them comming
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
Wow, that was amazing :) Poor Bella about her mom and Lola! Just a question, what do the initials in the interview mean? Do they mean that the camera was pointed at that person or what? Just asking :) I wonder what will happen now?
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
I love the story! The interview
was a bit hard to follow. I think
I need to reread when it is not
so late. Thanks for the update! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Just read this today. I really enjoyed it.
I look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Excellent chapter. One of the best.
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
More, More!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
Wow, that was incredible! I loved it so much!
Date: 08 Aug 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Wow, I am so happy Bella and Edward are having a good time so far in Italy. I am not very happy about Mateo though, grr. Love that Edward can speak Italian ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
OH SNAP! I wonder what in the world is going to happen now? Amazing job, once again :)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
I love the idea of matching tattoos. Especially the matching tattoos that Bella and Edward are getting :) What is the new piercing that Bella has? Is it an anti-eyebrow or what? Just wondering ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
Daddy "C" is hilarious! Mama "E" is funny too. I think that Bella and Edward should have babies but I am not sure of how soon or how far away that should be ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
I loved Edward's surprise, that was hot! I am happy that Rose is getting a little bit nicer. I wonder what Emmett's deal is though. Great job!