Date: 10 Dec 2017 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
Just found and read this all today, great story
Date: 14 Nov 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 34
This story was AMAZING! I loved every word!!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 34
AWESOME!!! story thanks for sharing ;) i liked how they named the kids with his initials ea ;) and only 1 girl ;) although 4 different eye colours? btw edward mentioned elliott was 10 then in the same paragraph said he was 8? and the last 2 chapters felt a bit rushed but great anyway ;D
Date: 20 Sep 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
AWESOME!!! so far ;) so he got her a 'handcuff' and she got him a 'collar' haha ;D
Date: 29 Apr 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it!
Date: 29 Apr 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 34
My daughter recommended this story and I'm sure glad she did! It was fun to read, sexy as hell and exciting as all get out!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
What a nice way to wrap this up! Naming the baby after Axl Rose was kind of cute, too! I love that they are finally worry free, at least for now!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 32
Those sorry excuses for reporters are just awful, I'm surprised they are allowed to be listed as human beings! I'm so glad Gianna didn't kill Edward or Jacob, but it's a shame about the paralysis!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
The photos are just the evidence they needed, but I still see Gianna as a viper, and I really hope they are careful around her. She's absolutely crazy!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
I suppose it was bound to happen and I'm glad they talked it out. The situation is really awful, but they can make it if they stick together!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 29: Barracuda
Weird how the law works sometimes. Makes no sense to me! I hope they find way to thwart Gianna and her bullshit.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 28: Patience
Just after finding out about the baby, that lying, evil bitch pulls this crap!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 27: Woman
I was so sorry to read about your fire and losing everything! That has to be about the worst thing, without losing anyone in the family! You were so brave to keep sending us this story!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 26: All or Nothing
I'm so glad there is extra security for Bella, even if she thinks it is too much. The fact that Gianna wrote all that awful stuff she wants to do to Bella is pretty damn scary. The night at the gentlemans club was fantastic!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady
They aren't totally free from troubles, but this chapter was a welcome respite from them!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
Thank heaven Rosalie isn't a total bitch and wanted to keep Edward out of jail. She doesn't seem to have changed her attitude all that much about Bella, though. I knew the red emerald would be an instant hit and never doubted she would say yes! Now we just nee to get this damn phoney trial out of their hair!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 23: Miss You
I knew this three week separation was going to be tough for them both. Maybe it helped a little that he got Bella's ring. Now he just has to hold it together until he gets back to her!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 22: Black Hole Sun
It started out bad but got much better toward the end. Charlie's change of heart surprised me just a bit. Good thing Bella has all the support, she may need it!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
That miserable damn Collin, just can't wait to get his filthy hands on Edward's money. That must be the reason he goaded Edward in to beating on him!
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20: I Want You
Charlie seems to still have some reservations about Bella being with Edward. If they can't come to some sort of understanding, it will hurt her, but I would bet she chooses Edward. Her birthday was quite something, for both of them! I'm so glad she told him about Collin's thtreat and the fuzzy video.
Date: 15 Apr 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 19: Rev 22:20
Boy, the crap just keeps coming! First Collin the creepy lying bastard and then the video and threat! I guess life has been too nice for them so now they have to have some misery!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
I can see why it might be a bit overwhelming for Bella to accept all this spending, it sure has happened fast! It sounds like they are working things through pretty well despite that speed!
Date: 14 Apr 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
The interview went well and the photo session was just hilarious. At least the pictures turned out the way they wanted. Poor Bella, more upset over losing her favorite purse than seeing evidence of her mother's stupidity.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
It's really good that Edward and the guys got themselves squared away. It might have ruined their relationships if it had been ignored. Victoria seems to have been a good addition to this traveling circus, even if she has the hots for Bella.
Date: 14 Apr 2016 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
I think he ought to just quit worrying about finding his balls and just enjoy the ride! The time with her grandparents went really well, once Mateo was out of the picture!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 14: Here Is Gone
Bella sure has had crap luck with men, until Edward, that is!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
Okay, who or what put him up to this? The asshole never considered her his girlfriend in the first place, plus he treated her like a whore! Looks like the troubles are not over yet!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Blackdog
As I read that last sentenc, it struck me that the home videos have been hacked and one of the bitches(Gianna) is going to cause trouble with them! The matching tats sound awesome!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 11: Physical
His parents are somewhat of a surprise, but they seem thrilled that Bella and Edward are together. Nice when the family is accepting! That bitch Gianna nearly got beaten. Good thing they tossed her out. Makes me curios, though why Tanya was smiling over it all!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sorry
This was good chapter for several reasons. First, because they made up and talked. Second, Roalie is just a tiny bit more human and even civil to Bella. Emmett is getting his revenge by flirting with other women, I guess. It seems to hurt Rose more than I thought it would.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
You absolute idiot! The girl tells you she loves you and it devolves into that acidic little rant? What a jackass! you better go throw yourself on her mercy and ask forgivness!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
Renee appears to be her usual flaky self in your story. The red carpet went rather well, except for the perv ogling Bella's boobs! Gianna is kind of worrying Edward and Rose still is playing mega-bitch! Poor Emmett!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
Come on Mr. Hot Rock Star, man up and tell the girl you love her, out loud and everything. As to who messed with Bella's dress, my main suspect is Rosalie, followed by Gianna.
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
Only one slight problem I can see. He better tell her how he feels instead of worrying about scaring her away. He doesn't seem to realize, you could scare her away from him with a whip and a chair!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5: In Your Room
I fear for that dress for the MTV Awards, it would be just like Rose to lose it or ruin it! I'm glad Bella had a heart to heart with Alice, she'll get the truth from her. Looking forward to the success of the seduction!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
Rosalie is certainly a bitch on steroids! Good thing he saw through her and Tanya 's little trick. I knew that woman would be trying to upset things and it didn't take her long! It's a wonder she hasn't turned green all over!
Date: 13 Apr 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
I think she was brave to take him and his history on, but it sounds like they have no choice! The pull between them is powerful, and as she said, he will be worth it!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 2: Desire
I can see the battle lines drawn between Bella and Rosalie right off the bat! There will undoubtedly be some major problems down the road from that direction, but it sounds like everyone else seems to get along okay!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
Sometimes it just happens that way!
Date: 07 Apr 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved this story. I had to reread the whole thing to get the total effect of the story.. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
good
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home
good
Date: 20 Mar 2016 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 21: Deep Inside Your Heart
good
Date: 20 Mar 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 34
So glad you added an epilogue and finished this story. I just read the entire story again today. I had read it awhile ago. Don't stop writing on this site please.
Date: 18 Mar 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16: I Smell Sex And Candy
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 15: With Or Without You
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 13: Crack the Shutters
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
good
Date: 18 Mar 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm so glad we got a final look at this family. It's nice to see that after all the drama in the beginning, that they got their nice family life. Even if it will never be "normal".
Date: 18 Mar 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 34
Loved it, its sad its over, but like all great thing they must come to a end.... Thank you for finishing this story, ive missed it.... mwh
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loved this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hate to see this story end. always one of my favorite from the first time I found it. Great story and great final chapter before the epilogue. Thanks for not giving up on this story and for sharing it.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You
please finish this story
have followed it from the start and your a fab writer
pretty please
Date: 04 Mar 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 32
She needs to rot in prison for what she did. I hope his shoulder will still have full movement and no major organs were damaged in his abdomen.
Date: 03 Mar 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thanks for the updates!
Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 32
your fantastic
thankyou !!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love the new chapter and I can't wait until Gianna gets her just deserts! Honestly, I hope and pray that you let Bella finally be the one to 'unmask' her farce....Please let it be publicly humiliating too lol! Such an amazingly written story, and I'm thrilled that your writing this again! Take care and can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
I just discovered this story yesterday and I have to say I really enjoyed it. I see that it was first published in 2010 and just updated a few days ago. I hope it doesn't take long for you to update again. I'm very anxious to see what happens to Gianna. But I will keep this in my favorites for how ever long I need to so I don't miss anything. Thanks for the great story. Maria
Date: 28 Feb 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loving this story, can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Feb 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love Love the story!!
Date: 27 Feb 2015 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 31
Omg I love this story but it's srill on chapter 31 i read this last year please update
Date: 26 Feb 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
I've really missed this story, thank you so much for the update! Looking for to the next chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it!!! I so have missed this story, I hope ur back for good:-) can't wait to read more . Happy Writting!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2015 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
please update
love this story
Date: 08 Jan 2013 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
If your still around could you please finish this story. I have been waiting so long for it. So please finish. Thanks
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
God all his fucking is coming back to bite him in the ass. Poor Edward and Bella. Gianna is such a fucking whore and bitch if she thinks that anyone would belive that Edward slept with her and fathered her baby and especially if they think that he would cheat on Bella!!!!! Stupid ass cunt!!!!!!! Love the story and wanna know what's gonna happen with the whole Gianna thing!!!!!!! Can't wait for an update!!!!!
Date: 07 May 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot
hope everything is ok with you i really hope you update soon!!!!