Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:08 PM Title: Alice
oh shit this doesn't sound good.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Bella
back to the sexy times! yay for bella.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 8:45 PM Title: Edward
yay eddie has come back and again they will try to move forward. 1 step forward two steps back again. all of the worries would be gone if eddie just changed her....
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:26 PM Title: Charlie
jake's an asshole. plain and simple. yay for charlie!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:12 PM Title: Alice
well what the fuck?!?!
Author's Response:
Hi Sunshine-Sue! Thanks for reading! I hope you are enjoying this story.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:59 PM Title: Rosalie
bella just has to stand her ground and open up the lines of comminication.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:45 PM Title: Bella
well thank god you cleared up the no baby thing. it never really made sense to me. bella's right eddie's swimmers should be and would be dead!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:29 PM Title: Edward
yay they have moved past the i'll hurt you hurdle! back to the sexin'!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Alice
well at least alice and rose were right if eddie can't do it for bella than she can do it for herself!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:03 PM Title: Edward
damit! i told you not to let him go all emo about this bullshit! i mean he can make peace with her banging everything with a third leg but he can't get over grabbing her a little too hard? the boy needs a good smack to the head!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chris
well it looks like all of the old boy toys have been delt with. and now bella is free to love on eddie forever. i wonder how long till one of them brings up changing bella?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:39 PM Title: Bella
you better not have her wake up with bruises and have eddie go all emo 'i'm a monster and i hurt you' !
yay they have finally done the deed!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Jessica & Alex
ok so eddie has been doing some meddling, some good some bad but all in an effort to help bella or her friends.
and he likes road head!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:12 PM Title: Edward & Bella
glad she got to experience the joys of the tongue playing in her girly place. it is by far one of my faves!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 4:02 PM Title: Alex & Jacob
poor jake he has loved her since the beginning. but he has to realize that she has moved on. and she has eddie again.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:52 PM Title: Bella
yeah looks like he likedit more than once. and so did bella!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:39 PM Title: Edward
eddie is finally gonna give it a try. even if it does mean moving slow and getting used to everything.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:27 PM Title: Jeremy
obviously eddie is not following her everywhere or he would have saved bella.
will she tell him what happened?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:19 PM Title: Lance
aww and he didn't even blow a fit when she came home smelling like sex.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:09 PM Title: Edward
oh boy eddie is back and she just let him walk right back in.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:36 AM Title: Zack
well now he has owned up to it wonder what she'll do now?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:29 AM Title: Bella
i am not sure what to think about all of this. kinda sounds like eddie kinda not...
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:17 AM Title: Scott
ok um.... what the fuck?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:07 AM Title: Jacob
what's up with everything being a little off? is it eddie voodoo?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chris
ok if this is eddie stalking her why has he not made a big deal and shit a brick over bella's lifestyle.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 6:03 AM Title: Bella
now is that suppoesed to be 'lots of love' ? as a calling card sort of thing?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:50 AM Title: Alex
is it eddie stalking her or is it someone else?
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:41 AM Title: Cameron
is it jake? can't be eddie he has a pole up his ass and would freak the fuck out if he knew what bella was doing.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:34 AM Title: Jacob
damn i want bella's job! it definately sounds like fun.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Bella
I just finished this story. I apologize for not reviewing each chapter.
My impression of the story during the first handful of chapters was that this was just a smutacular without a lot of plot. That changed as I kept reading. The plot started to develop and I became intriqued. I am so glad that I hung in there and read the whole thing. I really did enjoy it.
Now, your ending was a killer. I can't believe you left it there - you are so wicked! I can't wait to read the sequel now. I promise that I will do a better job of reviewing on it.
Thanks for this story. Great job. Kat
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks for the kind words. Yes, it does seem like that at first, but then we learn Bella's TRUE motives. And as for the ending, I know it was pretty cruel, but what other way to get people to read the sequel? ;)
I hope you enjoy MHD as much as I enjoy writing it. Chapter 17 is the latest and has been posted. I will try and get 18 up very soon. :)
Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Alex & Jacob
oh no.. this isn't going to end well is it.
Author's Response:
For Jasper or Victoria?
Date: 30 Jun 2010 3:55 PM Title: Edward
oh wow.. I am so excited... GO EDWARD
Author's Response:
Team Edward all the way! :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:14 PM Title: Edward
Loved the chapter, =)
the progress and the fluff,
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:49 PM Title: Jeremy
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
Hi Linda! Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:43 PM Title: Lance
Loved the chapter, and the slow progress,
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:21 PM Title: Edward
Loved the chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
Hi Linda! Thanks so much for reading. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:55 PM Title: Zack
Loved the chapter, the progress and interaction w/ Edward, =)
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:51 PM Title: Bella
Loved the chapter, =) the plot thickens..
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:39 PM Title: Scott
Loved the chapter, =) he´s evil
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:32 PM Title: Jacob
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chris
Loved the chapter, =) the progress and intro. of Edward,
best wishes,Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:59 PM Title: Bella
Loved the chapter, =)
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:56 PM Title: Alex
Loved the chapter, =) and the building of anticipation..
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:38 PM Title: Cameron
Loved the chapter, =) and the mystery-messager.
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 8:33 PM Title: Jacob
Loved the first chapter, you can tell Edward leaving her
didn´t make her better.. Not his intention, i bet =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 02 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Bella
Omg that was so intense!! I am so gonna go and read the sequel now!
Author's Response:
I really need to check my reviews more. I am SO sorry I didn't respond sooner. I hope that you have read the sequel or are planning to. Lots of fun stuff awaits!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:51 PM Title: Zack
uh oh... and so the fun/trouble begins...lol
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: Jacob
ok so i saw the sequel summary and so of course i had to read this story first. First chapter? wow! i like this "care-free" all about herself Bella. And I noticed that all the chapters are names, hmmm, interesting..
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:37 AM Title: Bella
Hell YES, I want to read a preview of My Heart's Desire. Please send it to me!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:29 AM Title: Alice
Ya know. I was wondering what happened to Victoria. Now I see the beotch is back!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:01 AM Title: Edward
Yea! Edward's back! Again.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:47 AM Title: Charlie
Uh-oh! It's on now!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:32 AM Title: Alice
Oh, no! What's going to happen. Chris said he would leave again & so did Jake. Poor Edward & Bellas.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:17 AM Title: Rosalie
When will he change. Oh, my. Excellent chapter!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Bella
Dang, I wish she was prego.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Alice
Uh-oh. Edward's going to kill the poor vibrator.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:20 AM Title: Edward
That damn Edward! Way too overprotective!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chris
Yeah, mind over matter. Right.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:53 AM Title: Bella
Damn!! She passed out? Edward, needs to make his way to me!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:38 AM Title: Jessica & Alex
Go, Bella Go!! Nothing like giving a man head while he's driving!! It's a wonderful experience. You can really tell if the guy can drive, when you do it!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:23 AM Title: Edward & Bella
Aww, Edward. Give it to the girl! Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Alex & Jacob
Awww, poor Jake. Oh well. Great, chapter!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Bella
Mmmm. Edward gettin' a litlle head action, huh? Go Bella!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 2:21 AM Title: Edward
Get that azzz, Edward!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:58 AM Title: Zack
OMG, OMG, OMG EDWARD!!!!! THIS STORY IS THE BOMB!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:53 AM Title: Bella
Hell, yeah. Edward is very jealous!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:45 AM Title: Scott
Shit!!! Edward, OMG!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:37 AM Title: Jacob
I wouldn't mind taking Jake for a ride! Great story!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:26 AM Title: Bella
Who the hell is it?!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: Alex
OMG! Is Edward back? Ahhhhhhhh!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:14 AM Title: Cameron
Yea, she needs to get rid of Cameron! He's a prick!
Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:02 AM Title: Jacob
OMG! This was AWESOME! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:12 PM Title: Bella
I'd sure like a preview. This last chapter has me all confused.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Here is a preview:
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“Wh-Where are we?” I opened my eyes slowly and took in my surroundings. We were in another hotel, this time a classy one. The bed was a queen-size and smelled of clean sheets. There was a couch in the corner and the television was facing it. There was a figure standing in front of the window.
“Alaska,” the soft voice said. I smiled. Jasper had said he was going to take me to Iceland with a few stops on the way. I asked why Iceland and he replied simply “I’ve always wanted to go there.”
“That’s nice,” I replied. He moved from his spot and stood in front of me. His cool hand brushed against my forehead gently. Since we left, I’ve gotten to know Jasper better. He really is wonderful and has been great to me. And I can’t stop looking at him. I’ve seen him without his shirt twice. Nice, firm abs, toned arms and low-slung pants that only enhance my imagination.
I closed my eyes. I have to stop thinking this way. It’s Jasper. Alice’s Jasper. She would kill me if she knew I was having sexual thoughts about her husband. Not to mention it would destroy Edward. Edward. I didn’t know if he was safe or even alive. Jasper told me very little about what happened. I would do whatever it took to keep Edward safe, even if that meant being changed.
“Are you okay?” he asked quietly. He was still stroking my forehead but saw my eyes were closed. I opened them and nodded. He smiled. “Lie with me?” I asked.
He did. He was very cautious, very hesitant. He slowly removed his hand and unbuttoned his shirt. His muscles stretched his tee shirt tight against him and he crawled into bed next to me. After a moment, he put an arm around me.
I snuggled back into his chest. I craved contact. We had been gone eight weeks and I was desperate for a man’s touch. I shouldn’t be thinking of him this way, but I couldn’t help it. I knew he was attractive, but he had never held so much desire in me as he did now. I wanted him. All of him.
I sighed. He shifted so he was hovering over me, his weight on one arm. I knew that wasn’t painful at all for him, being the vampire that he is. I slowly brought my hand up, careful to not make any sudden moves, and ran it down his arm, feeling his skin warm at my touch. His eyes, consistently black these days, closed and he moaned softly.
“That feels amazing,” he whispered. I continued the movement. He opened his eyes. The blackness was still there, of course, but something else as well. They were full of depth, passion. Desire. I could only stare into the black void. I was lost, mesmerized by the passion I saw there, the beauty. I could not look away. Nor did I want to.
Then, very gently, he lowered his lips to mine.
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Bella
Um heck yeah!!! how can you leave us hanging like that?!?! :)
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reading. I hope to get My Heart's Desire up soon. The preview:
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“Wh-Where are we?” I opened my eyes slowly and took in my surroundings. We were in another hotel, this time a classy one. The bed was a queen-size and smelled of clean sheets. There was a couch in the corner and the television was facing it. There was a figure standing in front of the window.
“Alaska,” the soft voice said. I smiled. Jasper had said he was going to take me to Iceland with a few stops on the way. I asked why Iceland and he replied simply “I’ve always wanted to go there.”
“That’s nice,” I replied. He moved from his spot and stood in front of me. His cool hand brushed against my forehead gently. Since we left, I’ve gotten to know Jasper better. He really is wonderful and has been great to me. And I can’t stop looking at him. I’ve seen him without his shirt twice. Nice, firm abs, toned arms and low-slung pants that only enhance my imagination.
I closed my eyes. I have to stop thinking this way. It’s Jasper. Alice’s Jasper. She would kill me if she knew I was having sexual thoughts about her husband. Not to mention it would destroy Edward. Edward. I didn’t know if he was safe or even alive. Jasper told me very little about what happened. I would do whatever it took to keep Edward safe, even if that meant being changed.
“Are you okay?” he asked quietly. He was still stroking my forehead but saw my eyes were closed. I opened them and nodded. He smiled. “Lie with me?” I asked.
He did. He was very cautious, very hesitant. He slowly removed his hand and unbuttoned his shirt. His muscles stretched his tee shirt tight against him and he crawled into bed next to me. After a moment, he put an arm around me.
I snuggled back into his chest. I craved contact. We had been gone eight weeks and I was desperate for a man’s touch. I shouldn’t be thinking of him this way, but I couldn’t help it. I knew he was attractive, but he had never held so much desire in me as he did now. I wanted him. All of him.
I sighed. He shifted so he was hovering over me, his weight on one arm. I knew that wasn’t painful at all for him, being the vampire that he is. I slowly brought my hand up, careful to not make any sudden moves, and ran it down his arm, feeling his skin warm at my touch. His eyes, consistently black these days, closed and he moaned softly.
“That feels amazing,” he whispered. I continued the movement. He opened his eyes. The blackness was still there, of course, but something else as well. They were full of depth, passion. Desire. I could only stare into the black void. I was lost, mesmerized by the passion I saw there, the beauty. I could not look away. Nor did I want to.
Then, very gently, he lowered his lips to mine.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:14 AM Title: Bella
Ooohhh! Yummy cliffy. I'm intrigued on soo many different levels. I can't wait for the sequel.
Author's Response:
I'm working on it. Chapter one is done; just making edits. :)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:05 PM Title: Bella
oh come on thats just cruel to end part 1 there.
Author's Response:
Sorry. I hope you will stick around for the sequel; chapter one is completed. :)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:46 PM Title: Jessica & Alex
This is such a cute story! I can't wait for Edward to finally give it up! LOL
Date: 10 Apr 2010 7:08 AM Title: Bella
yes i so want a preview
Author's Response:
Great! Here you go:
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“Wh-Where are we?” I opened my eyes slowly and took in my surroundings. We were in another hotel, this time a classy one. The bed was a queen-size and smelled of clean sheets. There was a couch in the corner and the television was facing it. There was a figure standing in front of the window.
“Alaska,” the soft voice said. I smiled. Jasper had said he was going to take me to Iceland with a few stops on the way. I asked why Iceland and he replied simply “I’ve always wanted to go there.”
“That’s nice,” I replied. He moved from his spot and stood in front of me. His cool hand brushed against my forehead gently. Since we left, I’ve gotten to know Jasper better. He really is wonderful and has been great to me. And I can’t stop looking at him. I’ve seen him without his shirt twice. Nice, firm abs, toned arms and low-slung pants that only enhance my imagination.
I closed my eyes. I have to stop thinking this way. It’s Jasper. Alice’s Jasper. She would kill me if she knew I was having sexual thoughts about her husband...if she was still alive. I don't even want to think about what it would have done to Edward. Edward. Jasper told me very little about the battle that ensued; just that everyone of the Cullens was dead, minus him.
“Are you okay?” he asked quietly. He was still stroking my forehead but saw my eyes were closed. I opened them and nodded. He smiled. “Lie with me?” I asked.
He did. He was very cautious, very hesitant. He slowly removed his hand and unbuttoned his shirt. His muscles stretched his tee shirt tight against him and he crawled into bed next to me. After a moment, he put an arm around me.
I snuggled back into his chest. I craved contact. We had been gone eight weeks and I was desperate for a man’s touch. I shouldn’t be thinking of him this way, but I couldn’t help it. I knew he was attractive, but he had never held so much desire in me as he did now. I wanted him. All of him.
I sighed. He shifted so he was hovering over me, his weight on one arm. I knew that wasn’t painful at all for him, being the vampire that he is. I slowly brought my hand up, careful to not make any sudden moves, and ran it down his arm, feeling his skin warm at my touch. His eyes, consistently black these days, closed and he moaned softly.
“That feels amazing,” he whispered. I continued the movement. He opened his eyes. The blackness was still there, of course, but something else as well. They were full of depth, passion. Desire. I could only stare into the black void. I was lost, mesmerized by the passion I saw there, the beauty. I could not look away. Nor did I want to.
Then, very gently, he lowered his lips to mine.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 6:59 AM Title: Jacob
whaaat?! what happens?!?! will edward and bella no longer be together?!
what happened in the vision? what happened to his shirt?
aaahhhhh i NEED to know!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 12:29 AM Title: Jacob
OMG Edward messed Bella UP! I can't wait to read more! WOW Edward is going to lose his ***T when he comes back and sees what Bella has become!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:56 AM Title: Charlie
Yay! Knew he couldn't stay away.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:38 PM Title: Alice
Poor B. And while I feel bad for E he really needs to stop being so emo! Um, but won't she change? Maybe all the venom she's, um, consumed, is slowly changing her. Maybe that's why he felt warmer to her.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:16 PM Title: Alice
Lol. How has she never used one?! And edward, even nice girls use them.
Author's Response:
She never used one because she sought out guys to get the job done. After Edward's abstinence, she needed some relief. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:30 PM Title: Edward
LMAO glad Rose's idea worked
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:28 PM Title: Jacob
Can't believe Bella is Jakes first.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Alice
I was wondering about the rest of the family. They haven't been mentioned
Author's Response:
Well, they hadn't been until this chapter. Rose, Alice & Bella go shopping later (see chapter titled Rosalie). Jasper will have a title himself.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:25 PM Title: Bella
Glad they finally had sex. I wondered how much longer it would be.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:24 PM Title: Bella
love this story