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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 1:15 AM Title: Jacob

Thank you!

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Date: 04 May 2021 1:15 AM Title: Jacob

Thank you!

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Date: 15 Feb 2017 2:16 AM Title: Bella

Huh?



Author's Response:

Hi.  Sorry about delay in replying; just saw this.  The ending of this story sets up the sequel, My Heart's Desire.  I hope you read it if you have not.

Reviewer: rosesblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 9:29 AM Title: Bella

What! Oh there needs to be a sequel :D enjoyed reading :) 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2015 11:01 PM Title: Edward

So she gets rape and she wants to have sex with E. Wth? Not normal! Not even fulling around is ok

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:02 PM Title: Bella

WTF!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!! i don't know if i can read the sequel if it ends up being a bxj story sorry ;)



Author's Response:

It is not really a Bella/Jasper story.  It is canon with the couples.  Of course, there are a few differences and it seems like she'll be with Jasper, but it doesn't happen.  Give it a shot.  :)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:22 PM Title: Lance

i don't know if edward would be this understanding unless he has been intimate with someone else in the 4 years ;D

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 11:09 PM Title: Edward

ok that was too easy!!! his he going to get revenge on her for what she did? and why did he wait 4 years to show up? ;D

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:54 PM Title: Cameron

wow when i read the beginning i thought it was ah!! ;D

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:07 AM Title: Bella

WOW! What an ending!!! Can't wait for the sequel...

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:24 PM Title: Bella

wow

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Date: 26 Apr 2012 1:55 PM Title: Bella

its a wonder she didn't break a tooth

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:29 PM Title: Edward

So glad he came back:)

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:25 PM Title: Edward

Such a lovely chapter:) Loved your writing

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 12:18 PM Title: Edward

Wow! Finally the victorian is giving in:)

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:54 AM Title: Lance

Sweet:) Good that she's not immediately getting back in to her old role.

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:44 AM Title: Edward

I love your story. It's really sad about what happened to Bella, I'm glad Edward is back.

Reviewer: twilightgirl1690 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 8:57 PM Title: Bella

love the chap and yeh im intered in the preview  xx



Author's Response:

Hi Twilightgirl!  Thanks for reading.  Which preview are you referring to?  Another chapter or the introduction to My Heart's Desire?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 2:33 PM Title: Alice

Poor Bella! Poor Edward! Well, he did good with the control thing if only, he could see it for himself!

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Date: 21 May 2011 6:07 AM Title: Bella

I hope that she is pregnant at some point though!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 3:25 AM Title: Alex & Jacob

I suppose the Dog is gonna make some trouble now? And, are the rest of the Cullens going to make it into the story?

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 1:14 AM Title: Bella

I think, maybe, Edward is trying to scare away the competition - scare not hurt - because if E wanted Alex hurt he would havve been badly hurt or dead!

Reviewer: minervacullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:39 AM Title: Bella

yes please more!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:59 PM Title: Bella

:)

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:53 PM Title: Alice

:)

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:44 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:35 PM Title: Edward

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:26 PM Title: Charlie

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:11 PM Title: Alice

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 10:03 PM Title: Rosalie

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 9:45 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 9:35 PM Title: Edward

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 9:23 PM Title: Alice

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 8:58 PM Title: Edward

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chris

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:53 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:39 PM Title: Jessica & Alex

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:10 PM Title: Edward & Bella

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Reviewer: Lustin4aCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Jacob

she told Jacob she never fucked a guy twice in a row...but Cameron (?the selfish bastard?) wanted to go a third time before she told him she had things to do and he had to leave...



Author's Response:

Yeah, Bella was a bit of a liar to get what she wanted.

 

Thanks for r & r!  Hope you continue to enjoy.  :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:42 PM Title: Alex & Jacob

:)



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Glad you are enjoying!  I hope you will be able to finish the story.  :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:31 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:20 PM Title: Edward

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Jeremy

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:51 PM Title: Lance

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:27 PM Title: Edward

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:12 PM Title: Zack

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:02 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:56 PM Title: Scott

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:46 PM Title: Jacob

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chris

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:33 PM Title: Bella

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Alex

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Cameron

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Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:54 PM Title: Jacob

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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:30 PM Title: Bella

okay thanks for the story!  i really enjoyed it i can't wait to see what happened.  now the lucky bella is going to get to have sex with jasper.... she is always so lucky.. is ed dead?  alice dead?  i can't wait.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:34 PM Title: Alex

edward is watching you F everyone bella!!!  what a perv!



Author's Response:

Lol.  He's not actually watching; he's just aware of Bella's...hobby. 

 

Thanks for r & r.  Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:30 PM Title: Cameron

edward?

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:27 PM Title: Jacob

hummmmm bella you trashy woman!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:22 AM Title: Bella

You left us on the cliff.. bad girl. Yes I will read the sequel.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:08 AM Title: Bella

Well Edward has arrived finally.  so much for vampire speed. LMAO

 

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:33 PM Title: Alice

Bella just cant win. Better change her or leave. This sucks.

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Bella

I am glad she is not pregnant, that is just so weird.  Well, anyway think about it if they are permanently hardened then how does he get it up?  It should be one way or the other always. Either permanently up or permanently down,  just a thought. I think Edward straightlaced is so funny with the blow job. Another story I have read with his point of view and getting one is so darn funny. 

 

 

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chris

.. oh my.. is Bella crazy? LOL, is it really Eddy boy? GAH! I hate not knowing if it was him...

Chris sounds like a good guy but I don't think he's the guy for Bella, if Edward hadn't come back I'd say give them a chance.. but now... now things are diff. But I have to say if Edward left again or is just a hallucination, then I'd say Chris would be the guy to start a relatioship with :)



Author's Response:

Lol.  I hope you are enjoying this story.  :)

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:30 PM Title: Bella

.. is it Edward? GAH! this is so frustrating... I NEED TO KNOW o.O

 

Gonna keep reading xD

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:26 PM Title: Alex

OMD *oh my dracula* Is it Eddy boy!? Is it? or is Bella of her bunker??? LOL, not gonna lie, Bella comes off as a total bitch and I love it. She's using men as many men use women, I like that.

Alex came off as cocky and I think Bella enjoyed herself more with Jacob than with that dude. But what the heck, let Bella have fun.. even with married man, they're the most fun when it comes to cheating xD. And she doesn't care about him, yep let Bella use the sucker xD.

But what if it's Edward that's come back.. OmD

Reviewer: DaShadow_Kissed Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:17 PM Title: Cameron

:o I have no idea who that might be but.... I think it could be Jacob or Edward. Just that Edward wouldn't text something like Lol, maybe 'love' but not lol. LOL, anyhoo. Enjoyed the chapter.

Hate Cameron, he sounds like he just needs an opening to trust his member in so he can get off... ugh! totally disgusting guy. Don't know why Bella is just now scratching him off her list xD

Anyhoo. goona read some more!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:30 PM Title: Bella

Now, that's just MEAN!  You can't just leave it there.



Author's Response:

Oh, but I did.  Perfect way to read the sequel, huh?  ;)

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: Bella

that was good cant wait to read the next one and i like how you end this one and  ii liked how you got bella and edward back together

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was getting sick of stories where Edward was a man-whore.  I thought "why can't Bella be a whore?"  That's where this story came from. 

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:23 PM Title: Bella

Oh my god! So not nice to end there! I'm glad the sequel is almost done, I'm heading there now!

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:54 PM Title: Alice

oh man, these two just can't catch a break and have some peace, can they?

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:27 PM Title: Bella

Yay! No more angsty Edward! And he's going to get over changing her too!

Love!

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:44 PM Title: Edward

Yay, he's back!!

Now for presents!

Balti K

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:27 PM Title: Charlie

Ah, everyone's in love with Bella. And she still has low self esteem? Silly girl.

Moving on!

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:01 PM Title: Alice

Oh, so sad. Too bad he has to stay away for a while.

Boo.

Balti k

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:42 AM Title: Rosalie

Well, I'll guess she'll just have to watch out for shower sex. Bummer, that's lots of fun. But again, communication is key.

Onward,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:29 AM Title: Bella

I'm glad she's not pregnant. Thaat would suck.

Good that he's thinking of forever too. He should be selfish and change her.

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:21 AM Title: Edward

Adorable.

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:15 AM Title: Alice

Fantastic! And look, it worked!

Awesome.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:06 AM Title: Edward

Damnit! I was afraid of that, but you lulled me into a false sense of security with the last chapter. Damnit!

Moving on!

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chris

Yay for no angsty emopire! Handled like adults.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:50 AM Title: Bella

Rut roh, Shaggy! What's going to happen in the morning when he finds the bruises? I hope there's no self-loathing vampire shenanigans, like removing himself from her life again, or not having sex anymore.

Great job on this one.

Cheers, Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:36 AM Title: Jessica & Alex

Aha! I was right, he did get Jeremy! Good, asshole deserved it.

Nice to see Edward without the redwood tree up his ass. I like your version.

Onward, ho!

Balti

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Edward & Bella

I want an Edward between my thighs! Hot!

Balti K

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Alex & Jacob

Yup, pissed off Jake = out of control werewolf. I don't trust that that's going anywhere good.

Onward,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Bella

Aww, shucks, Bella, could you do that again??  Uh huh. (I''m sure that sounds funnier in the Droopy Dog/Edward voice in my head, than on the screen)

Cute! Lovin' it!

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:03 AM Title: Edward

Intriguing. Is Edward going to hunt deer, or Jeremy? But some good lovin's for Bella! Yay!

Onward,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:55 AM Title: Jeremy

Now would be a good time for him to give in to the monster and kill Jeremy. Where was he earlier anyway? hmmm.

Onward,

Balti k

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:50 AM Title: Lance

Well, he's certainly working it, isn't he. At least he's giving her the time she needs. Can't wait to see what he's got up his sleeve next.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Edward

Edward's back! And seems to have grown a set while he was gone! And a libido too!

Goodness Gracious!

Moving on....

k

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Zack

Dun dun dun! About time he man'd up and revealed himself.

Now what's she going to do about it?

Movin' on!

k

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:34 AM Title: Bella

Hmm, why would he be hurting her old flames while standing by and letting her hookups happen at all? Crazy vampire!

Cheers,

karina

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Scott

Is he trying to drive her insane or get back into her life? He's a bit fucked.

Onward and upward!

Balti k

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:23 AM Title: Jacob

Good for Bella. She needs to get hers too. Too many schmucks leaving her unsatisfied, though I was beginning to wonder if it was a psychological block on her side at the beginning of the chapter.

Keepin' truckin'!

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chris

I wonder how he's doing with not being spotted in sunny LA? Hiding in her neighbors yard no doubt.

Moving on!

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:47 AM Title: Bella

Well now, is he watching her in person, or through Alice? I think he must be close, since she's dreaming him again. Just my thoughts.

Cheers,

Balti K

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Alex

I'm digging it. She's got the total "woman scorned" attitude and taking the revenge that would probably hurt Edward most. Nice.

BTW, noticed a mistake up above. You used conscious instead of conscience. Simple typo, no doubt. May want to edit that if you ever have a free second.

Cheers,

Balti K



Author's Response:

Ooh, thanks for the catch!

Reviewer: bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:43 AM Title: Bella

what the hell was that! holy shit. Jasper, really. what the hell? who did he eat? where is edward and Alice. what is the blood. ok i need a preview of the sequel PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! with an dending like that holy shit. so did not see that one commin! what the hell does he want? i gatta know. PLEASE tell me how to get the sequel!! i gatta read it!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it.  :)

Reviewer: msaubreydrakegraham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:36 PM Title: Bella

as if you left the ending like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! are you serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg what happens next!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi!  I'm guessing that you finished the story?  If so, check out the sequel, My Heart's Desire, to find out more.

Thanks for reading!  :)

Reviewer: msaubreydrakegraham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:54 PM Title: Edward & Bella

this is a gr8 story it made me laugh when bella couldnt even stand and the whole story had me on egde. you're a brilliant writer

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:17 PM Title: Bella

well that was so not a nice way to end it off! but lucky for me you have already started the sequel! off to that now!

thanks for sharing your story with me :)



Author's Response:

Well, thank YOU for reading it.  I hope you enjoyed it and the sequel as well.  :)

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