[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:30 PM Title: The Google Search
loving this
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:04 AM Title: The Google Search
That was amazing! I loved how she found out! I cannot ewait to see what will happen next!!
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:01 AM Title: The Google Search
Very good chapter! I look forward to Bella leaving Renne. Will Edward see her picture?
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:19 AM Title: The Google Search
Love love
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:03 AM Title: The Google Search
looking forward to more
Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:43 AM Title: The Google Search
excellent chapter, getting close
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:14 AM Title: The Royal Duties
I hope it doesn't take too long for them to be reunited. Great job. Looking forward to next update.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2014 4:41 PM Title: The Royal Duties
I love this story can't wait to there us an update. Awesome sitting until next time thanks :)
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:20 PM Title: The Royal Duties
Alice and Jasper made me so mad. They should not have yelled at Edward, especially since he just regained consciousness. They could have waited and had a normal discussion. I think they forget that they work for him. Yes, he shouldn't have run away, but maybe if they gave him room to breath he would be happier. They should trust him more. I hope he gets in touch with Bella, so she knows he is alright. She was so frantic and Alice and Jasper just dismissed her. They should talked to her and gotten information from her.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 3:30 AM Title: The Royal Duties
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really hope Bella and Edward meet again very soon!
Date: 17 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: The Royal Duties
I'm really enjoying this story! I hope that Edward doesn't have to wait too long to find Bella again. Keep up the great work!! :)
Date: 17 Mar 2014 12:13 AM Title: The Royal Duties
Great chapter can't wait to see what's to come
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 10:05 PM Title: The Royal Duties
This was a good chapter filled with lots of information. I'm glad that it shows that Bella is still on Edward's mind. Can't wait to see if he gets to see/talk with her when he returns to Seattle or does he have to wait until she gets to school in his country. Good job.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 6:39 PM Title: The Royal Duties
They are so far apart. I'm worried about Bella. What is going to happen to her? How will you bring them together?
Date: 16 Mar 2014 4:40 PM Title: The Royal Duties
awesome...can not wait for him and Bella to meet again
Date: 16 Mar 2014 1:37 PM Title: The Royal Duties
I love love this story!! Every time it updates, I drop what I'm doing and read it!!!
This is definitely my top favorite story I'm reading!! You are such a great writer! When I read the words you wrote, I picture it all so clearly in my mind!!
cant wait for the update
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:51 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Thanks!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:11 PM Title: The Unspoken Promise
I hope she sees Edward again
Date: 10 Mar 2014 5:50 PM Title: The Unspoken Promise
I am so happy that Bella has Caleb and Carmen. Their mother is such a shrew. I can't wait until Edward finds her again.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:11 PM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Love it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2014 6:30 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
loving this story
Date: 10 Mar 2014 4:01 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Oh wow, that was amazing! I cannot wait to see what will happen next for Bella!
Date: 10 Mar 2014 3:51 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Poor Bella. Why does her mother hate her so much? How is Edward?
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:31 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2014 12:31 AM Title: The Unspoken Promise
Ooh very clever i like where this is going!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2014 3:51 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
I feel so bad for Bella. She didn't know of his allergy and now she is sitting in her brother's car not knowing what is happening to Edward. I hope once Edward is ok, he will go to the art store. Carmen knows how to find her.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:57 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
I am loving this. Can't wait until the next update.
Date: 24 Feb 2014 2:38 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
Thanks!
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:37 AM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
Oh snap!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 10:10 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
You through me for a great loop NICE
Date: 23 Feb 2014 8:17 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
Love it, oh shit he is alregic to chili...well I hope she can see him soon
Date: 23 Feb 2014 6:35 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
Poor Bella. That was unexpected and exciting!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2014 3:09 PM Title: The Unforeseen Consequences
loving this story. Have a good trip and good luck in your finals
Date: 21 Feb 2014 6:01 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
This story sounds really good. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing. Next update will be up on Sunday ♥ xo Mina
Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:40 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
Love it
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 11:24 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
I love the new update and can't wait for the next update! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2014 10:14 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
I am liking this story. I want more please.
Author's Response:
I update every Sunday. Watch out for the teasers on Tuesday or Saturday over at Fictease.com
Thank you for reading and reviewing. xo Mina
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 7:38 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
Love it story my new favorite!:-)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:51 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
Charming. Looking forward to much more. Thanks.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:47 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
Wonderful chapter! Thanks ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2014 1:03 PM Title: The Impulsive Chase
looking forward to more
Date: 14 Feb 2014 9:31 PM Title: The First Meeting
man i LOVE this story so far! im so sad there were only 3 chapters. cannot wait for more! i love how captivated edward was that he just couldnt stop himself. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I update every Sunday, so you'll have an update in around 40 hours. xo Mina
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:22 AM Title: The First Meeting
Fascinating. I think I'm going to love this. Thanks.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 1:46 AM Title: The First Meeting
LOVE IT
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:24 PM Title: The First Meeting
loving this
Date: 09 Feb 2014 4:48 PM Title: The First Meeting
I am obsessed with this story! You have me totally hooked! Cannot wait for the update!
Date: 04 Feb 2014 2:49 PM Title: The Idealistic Painter
Thanks!
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:53 PM Title: The Idealistic Painter
I need to stop comparing it to the first draft. It's like I knew the bones but now it's fleshed out and a much better version. I am so pleased with the changes you've made. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your lovely reviews. Yes, I believe the first draft was a bit rushed and, honestly, I didn't know better. I do prefer this new version, it has a bit more depth, though the first two chapters were loaded with information. I couldn't avoid that. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, I'm pretty excited to share it again. xo Mina
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:49 PM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
I love the changes you've made. I am soooo excited to take The Perfect Girl out of my "Loved But Lost In Limbo" file. I adore this story. I'll be following you here on TWCS and peeking in on your blog. Thank you, thank you, thank you for coming back to this story. I'm totally dancing around the room. :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2014 1:27 PM Title: The Idealistic Painter
Poor Bella. The school board have been very unfair
Date: 02 Feb 2014 10:06 AM Title: The Idealistic Painter
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2013 9:47 AM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
I am hoping there is more to the story if not that is to bad. I was looking forward to some future to their dating life. But other that great story. This one and Madam Esme are a some of my favorite. Keep them come, looking forward to more chapters.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 2:48 PM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
I like this story. I tried to view the album, but is taking me to your logon and asking for your password.
Author's Response:
I moved all my pictures to my blog: http://minariveratwific.blogspot.com/
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:31 PM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
This sounds like it is going to be fun. I feel sorry for Bella having to put up with all the bullshit from the school from her mom Her brother is a good guy that loves her.
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:05 PM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
I can't wait to read more
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:44 PM Title: The Pragmatic Gentleman
:)