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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 8:37 PM Title: Epilogue

great

Reviewer: mimigrace Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2010 2:35 AM Title: Epilogue

been a great ride hun.  thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I can't believe it took me almost a year to finish it. I'm going to miss the boys.

Thanks for following me :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

hmmm  wonder if he'll tell him about thebdsm party

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 18

poor eddie.  gotta be confused.

Reviewer: mm60126 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

this is truly an awesome story...complex.. loving , a page turner...I have not been able to put it down...more more more please...the love story is just beginning...the characters are growing and evolving and are like magnets drawn to each other...even tho the road is full of potholes their love for each other will survive...just show me the way...ty for such a beautiful journey...I wish there was a way for u to let me know when it is updated like other sites



Author's Response:

:) Thanks for your review. It makes me so happy to read this. My greatest fear when I started this story was that I wouldn't be able to show emotions (since English isn't my first language), but it has been a fantastic exercise regardless. I can see my English progress with each chapter, and it's really encouraging to have review like yours. So thanks, next chapter is almost done (I hope I'll be able to update this weekend) ;)  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think they need to work on the relationship but they both are ready to try I think



Author's Response:

I think you're right. It's about time these guys got back together!

Thanks for your review ;)

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

I agree you cant fix someone else if you cant fix yourself



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review ;)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

I think Edward is selfish. He has spent his whole life 'taking care of himself' and putting his wants above others which is why he has no friends. Hope his mom can help him and he will in turn help Jasper.



Author's Response:

You could say that Edward is selfish, but I see him more as lost. He doesn't know what to do or what he wants. He's looking for happiness or what he thinks is happiness. Now that he have met Jasper, he realizes his past mistakes and that he is not the man he wants to be.

But his feelings for Jasper are too strong, he can turn his back and forget about Jasper indefinitely ;)

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

This is good cant wait to see what happens when carlisle shows up



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: terriberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think Edward and Jasper both need to go back to New York with Carlisle. Damn those boys need help! And Edward needs to work things out with his parents too. So glad he's making the effort with his mom and trying to get to know Rosalie, but damn his dad, that's harsh. That kind of damage takes time to repair though, and should be done in person really. Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I think the keyword in your review is "time". They both need it to heal and deal with their own problems. Thanks for reading ;)

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Carlisle killed Alec! Carlisle and Charlie, I never would have guessed that. And Charlie is a cop, but he's help to heal Carlisle, does that mean he knows about Alec? Really looking forward to the next update, can't wait to see how their reunion goes. I'm glad Carlisle will be there to help them. Jasper is lucky he had him; Edward has basically had noone to help him.



Author's Response:

"does that mean he knows about Alec?"  Yes, Charlie knows about what Carlisle has done. They couldn't be a couple if he didn't know. You'll see more of their relationship in the future (in chapter 17-18)

 Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like this chapter.

Reviewer: terriberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

At first I didn't like Carlisle so much, he was too detached from Jasper. He seemed to be making the same mistakes with Jasper that Jasper had made with Edward, showing too much emotional indifference, wearing the master mask, but not showing any concern or offering enough reassurance. The Carlisle POV really helped. Now I understand where he is coming from, not just the hurt, but the overwhelming guilt he is feeling. He seems to be in almost the same state of mind as Jasper, no longer a master and no longer a man. So, Alec is dead, hm, interesting. I'm also curious about Carlisle's phone call to New York. Is that something important to the plot?



Author's Response:

It was one of the reason I made the Carlisle POV. I was afraid he seemed too hard with Jasper.

I wanted to show that he's in the same situation as Jasper. He was his master, he was supposed to protect him. Like Jasper, Carlisle is broken.

The answer to your question is in chapter 13. Thanks for reading and for your review ;)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

Jasper said, "He might be dead, but not in my mind." Is Alec dead? What happened to him? Thanks!



Author's Response:

:) You'll have the answer to this question in the next chapter. Carlisle will tell us.

I'll update tonight, if I find time. Thanks for reading ;)

 

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

I think Edward needed to go home if for no other reason but to see that going home wouldn't fix his problems. I really hope he keeps in contact with his mom like he promised. It is never good to burn bridges.



Author's Response:

Edward needed to see that going home was a mistake. At least, in this state of mind. His problems can't be fix magically. Edward has to understand his problems and their sources.

Thanks for your review ;)

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow! I think Jasper should have been honest with Edward. This Dom/sub thing is built on trust. I hope he hasn't really messed Edward up.



Author's Response:

Jasper can't build any kind of relationship, especially a Dom/sub one. He needs help to deal with his demons.

Thanks for reading and for your review ;)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

WOW! So Intense! I really hope the boys can figure this out, I hate to believe Jasper is that fucked up.



Author's Response:

Jasper is completely lost. He doesn't have any control over his emotions. Carlisle is his cry for help. Thanks for reading and you review ;)

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter should be up tomorrow (tonight if I found time) ;)

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update.  I'm really enjoying it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! ;)

Reviewer: badrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm really enjoying this story!!!!!!!!!!!  I just found it a couple of hours ago and it's really good.  Keep it coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you like the story. Next chapter should be up in a couple of days. Thanks again ;)

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