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Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is the first chapter in forever that i havent cried all the way threw. 

only a few tear of happiness this chapter.

extatic bella got to go home and a whoorahh for eyebrows:)

cant wait for an update.

Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 62

i think this is the first chapter in forever that i haven cried all the way threw.

happy happy news for bella and fam.

cant wait for an update



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 62

woo hoo She's home



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it!  It is nice to see Bella so positive.  I loved her declaration to her bed and how she swore that she only cheated on it under durest.  Very funny.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 62

*Two Thumbs Up*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 61

YES!!!!  I loved this chapter big time!  I feel like doing a happy dance for Bella!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 61

I am so glad to have a happy chapter. Yeah!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 61

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 61

Not much to add but want to make sure this story gets all the reviews it so deserves!  Thank you for not letting Bella die.



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Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 61

yay! you ever fail to make me cry sad and happy tears ),:  

keep up the amazing story. cant wait for more



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: grace1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 61

Oh my this has been the most emotional story I have ever read, I have cried so much these past two days.  You are a brilliant writer!  I can't wait to read more from your brilliant mind!  I can't wait for the next update, thank you!



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Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 61

woo hoo..... go bella



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Jennijenjen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

i've to tell you, you are an amazing author. i can't believe this isn't on the top tens lists. i've read almost all your other stories, but i think this is your best yet. not that the others are bad, but because this one is so amazing. keep it up.

 

ps. i'll tell you a secret. people say i'm a really tough person and all. but this story made me tear up more than a couple times. your destined for greatness.



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Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 60

great chapter



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 60

OMG! The end with webcams made me tear up! "You can sleep now, I've got you"...is one of my new favorite quotes!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 60

I am glad that thing are looking better.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 60

awwww that is so sad.....how could there be only 10 more chapters!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 60

awww  Mom's are cool, esp esme



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: TwiRPLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 60

Just wanted to let you know I love this story! I have laughed and cried and been angry! Thank you so much for sharing! Also, I have rec'd this story on my blog! I love it!



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Aw, thank you so much:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 60

That was sweet at the end when they fell asleep together.



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 59

I am so glad Bella is getting better.  I thought the video of her friends from NY was a nice touch.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 58

I loved the dream date.  Very sweet.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 57

I am not liking these last few chapters.  I don't like limbo.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 56

Oh no, please don't say she is dying.  She needs to have her life with Edward and the baby. :(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 55

Yea!  Finally some good news for Bella.  I loved the dream she had!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 54

I'm glad Emmett came through his part of it ok.  Now Bella needs to get better, crossing fingers.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 53

I liked Emmett's POV.  I thought the letter that Bella wrote was great.

Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 59

oh jeez you never fail to make me cry

i love your story

keep up the amazing writting



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I cried alot while writing this story as well:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 52

I loved the web cam confessionals.  Very funny!  It was nice to have a little light since the last few chapters have been very dark.  I worry about the dream Bella had of Renee.  Charlie had dreamed of Renee before he died...is this an omen of things to come?



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Not neccessarily. I believe that our dreams are our way of dealing with our fears.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 59

Aww, this was such a sad chapter. But really good!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: serephina Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 59

I was starting to cry while reading about the dvd part.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 59

great chapter



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 59

the ny thing was a nice touch



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 59

awww this made me cry!!! its so good!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 51

Well, it's official.  You broke me with this chapter.  I am now crying like a little girl and can't read anymore till tomorrow. 

PS.  It was a really good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm sorry I broke you :( I do appreciate you taking the time to read this story, even though it is hard to read sometimes.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 50

I like the idea of others seeing and responding to Bella's blog. Maybe it will help her stay positive knowing that she is not alone in this fight.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 49

So sad. :(

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 48

I like the idea of the blog for Bella.  She will probably be more honest there than she would be with the people around her.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 47

That is too cool that Edward gave Bella the chance to record her music.  And it also checked one more thing off of her list.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 46

First Prom, now Christmas?  They truely are the best family anyone could ever have.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 45

Edward is the best husband ever!  He tested out and now he can be there for Bella every step of the way.  He really is totally awesome!



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I wish they were all like him ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 44

They gave her a prom?!?!?  That is awesome!  Everyone needs friends and family like that.  So cool! :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 43

Another hard one to read.  I don't know how you write this without requiring a heavy dose of anti-depressants.  Her goodbye to Peter was probably the saddest so far. :(



Author's Response:

It was very hard. I cried...alot while writing this story. It was very difficult.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 42

It was sad how she was saying goodbye to all of her teachers.  It seems that she is resigned to the fact that the transplant will not work and this will be her last chance to say what she wants to them.  It was hard to read this one.



Author's Response:

In some ways, she is, I guess. THe transplant is not a gaurantee and Bella knows that. I think she always realizes that she needs to tell those who've made a difference in her life that she appreciates them.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 41

I love the way you have written Edward for this story.  As crazy as Bella is, he is her calm.  He is the water to her fire.  He is amazing.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 40

Thank God the chemo has not killed all of her common sense.  I know the decision to accept the transplant does not come without its downsides, but seriously, if she really loves Edward and wants to stay with him, wouldn't she walk through fire for him as well?



Author's Response:

Yes, but she also feels guitly for making Edward go through all that with her. Is it rational, no? but Bella isn't being rational righ now. Thank you for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 58

kewl dream



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 58

Sweet



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 58

awwwww......for a second i thought they were both dead....but that was cute....i like it....



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 57

WHAT THE FUCK!!!! WHY WOULD YOU END IT THERE!!! THAT JUST PISSES ME OFF!!! BUT I STILL LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 39

Damn, that girl is stubborn.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 38

Is Bella trying to die?  She is susseptable (spelling, I know) to illness but she goes put in the cold rain with no shoes or coat.  Is she giving up?



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That's exactly what she is doing. She's given up at this point.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

Poor Edward.  I feel so bad because you know he would do anything to help Bella through this.

Reviewer: Elle M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 57

 I don't want to creep you out, but I am in love with your story. It is truely touching and inspirational to me  as I'm sure it is to many others as well. I have to admitt I have laughed as well as cried when it comes to your story.  I just really wanted you to know you are a great writer! Keep it up! :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It doesn't creep me out at all:)

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 57

Interesting!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 57

Edward is so exhausted. He can hardly function. Bella's fever needs to break soon.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 57

great chapter



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Thank you :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 36

The song Bella sang was beautiful!  And I love the fact that she wouldn't accept the scholarship money.  Very Bella.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 35

I love how the group has bonded together instead of becoming catty as can happen in a competition like this.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 57

interesting dreams



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 34

No offense, but I hated this chapter.  It was hard to read the journal entries.



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No offense taken:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

Damn, this girl can't catch a break.  I am shocked that Edward didn't rip Cauis' head off.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 32

That was really hard to read the part where Bella wants to give up.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 31

Those sorority girls were a bit forward with their questions.  I loved Bella's response as to where her hair was and why it was there.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 30

Edward's interview broke my heart.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

A penthouse facing Central Park?  Not too bad for a couple of kids from Washington.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe how brave Bella is to make this trip and keep up with her treatments.  Chemo is a bitch!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

The mini pep rally was a nice touch.  I think it is so important that Bella knows all these people support her.

I love that these two, even with all the drama, are just as horny as your typical teenagers.

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 56

Sniff Sniff!!  Crying again!!!  Hopefully we can get past this soon and everything will work out just right!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 56

Fevers can make you have the weirdest dreams.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 56

Fevers can make you have the weirdest dreams.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 56

wow ! is all i ahve to say about that! cant wait till the next chatper 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 56

Hoping it's not the end for Bella. She's fought so hard & has so much still to live for.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 56

Hoping it's not the end for Bella. She's fought so hard & has so much still to live for.

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 56

great chapter



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

Head injury and bruised hip doesn't stop Bella from shopping for new cloths and panties. LOL.  I love it. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 25

Stupid freshmen.  I'm surprised non of the guys pummeled him.  I love Bella's story about the guitar.

Reviewer: cullenarymasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 56

Okay, awful cliffy!  Please update soon!



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Thank you for the review:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 56

poor Bella.   And the other for seeing it.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

I loved Charlie's letter to Bella.  It was sad but very loving and just what she needed to hear.



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Thank you for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

It doesn't surprise me that Bella and Edward had a bit of a blow up.  With all the emotional tension from her sickness and the deaths and funeral, I am surprised it took them this long.

Carlisle had cancer too?!?  Whoa.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

That was almost as hard to read as the last chapter.  I don't know how Bella was able to sing much less at her father's funeral.  Very sad.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

So sad. :(

I liked the dream that Bella had.  It was a nice touch.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no!  They both get invited to NYU and now Charlie is in an accident.  Crap, how much can this girl take?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

Edward is the best hubby ever.  Goes to school then football practice and when he comes home he makes his wife dinner and gives her mind blowing orgasms.  We need to send all men to the school of husbandry that Edward attended.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Bella.  You have to wonder how much worse it is going to get before it gets better IF it gets better.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ahhh, he bought her a house?!?  That is beyond sweet.  Love it!!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

I can't beleive that E&R and J&A couldn't go through normal chanels and get a license and get married there so Bella could be there.  It's not like they are dying too.

Nice ending..I'm glad the chemo isn't killing her sex drive. ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

These two make some super hot lemons together. ;)

Holy crap!  Now Rose and Emmett are getting married?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Homecoming queen is married to the quarterback of the football team..little cliche, but it works for these two.  They have so much shit being thrown at them right now that they deserve something good.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

So Jessica gets the uber-bitch award this time.

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Date: 26 May 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

I like that Bella and Edward are making a bucket list.  It is something positive to focus on.

I wonder why Bella is so hesitant to tell people.  Everyone can see something is wrong with her and everyone who knows is nothing but supportive.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella.  At least Lauren has become part of her support system instead of uber-bitch.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

Don't mess with Bella.  She is a bad ass. LOL.  I love that she doesn't need Edward to stand up for her, but I love that he does it anyways.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Whoa, Bella is like wicked smart.  I wonder what it is like for Edward to have Bella be the better student?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow, I am surprised how well all the teachers took both pieces of news.  I'm glad Bella is still planning on going to NY.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

The honeymoon is over..back to reality.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

Excellent!  A vegas wedding.  Glad to see Charlie got behind them.  Count on Edward to give Bella what she needed even when she didn't realize she did.

Reviewer: TwiRPLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 55

I am hooked on this story! :)



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Thank you :)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Whoa, that was a hard chapter to read.  Charlie is a real ass for not telling Bella and Emmett the truth.

I wanted to let you know if at some point I stop reviewing it is because the story became too hard to read (hitting too close to home).  Please don't take offense.  If anything, it is a compliment to the realism of your writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will warn you now that this story gets very diffecult in the later chapters.

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