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Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

They are so good for each other, they make such a great couple.

Loved the outtake! ;)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

B.B.

Humina, humina, humina!!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

lmao:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think they like it LOL

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

ooooh thts a good one!!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

why learn when you both win either way great chapter

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

a resounding sucess all round so it seems lol they both loved it great outtake thanks tracy and no they dont learn it seems the bets keep coming lol



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 14

B.B.

Way to go Seth!!!!! I knew you could take it!!!!

Now they're betting on Bella's baby. I wonder if Seth wins this one????

That was hot, hot, hot!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

B.B.

I can't believe I missed a chapter!!!!

In the gym for a hot workout!!!! (two thumbs up!!!)

Off to read the next chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

this was funny and a good one... hope there r more....



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

good chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

good chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

really great



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

hey great chapter, in the gym great location all so  very sexy all sweaty & hot, and right before the big finish  bella barges in ha ha ha, so no orgasm this time but i bet they made up for it since, thanks tracy



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lol, thanks;)

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

How does one do a banner?  Yours looks groovy and your story is good.  :)



Author's Response:

I don't know, someone made it for me through Mybannermaker.com I think.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

well that is embarassing but they seem to think it was well worth it and they gave the kids a good laugh, thanks tracy



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reveiws:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter, they really connected all four at once, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

i think the girls were quite happy with the sight in the bedroom,  i like that they were promising things to eachother also, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

this might be the hardest four to gell and become together, with all the baggage from their pasts, but fingers crossed love can do amazing things, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

great stuff, they are kind and considerate lovers for each other, i think this arangement is good for all of them, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

it's good that catherine and william  took the time to work out what they wanted and wer'nt pushing esme ans carlisle into anything,  but it seems they all on the same page, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 6

yep definatly going to need to buy those vitamins on mass lol,  thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

i think the parents will be on the same vitamin mix as all the kids lol everything going well for the four of them as they enjoy all that sexing, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

great chapter, i cant imagine how that feels watching your parents at it on your own sofa like bella, but they weren't mad or upset and thats what counts, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

that is loads for a first time and what's with in the park for a first time,  outdoors,   they just couldn't wait?  ha thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

i've been meaning to read these outakes for ages, fab stuff  let's hear it for the ladies thanks tracy

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

B.B.

I love the outtakes!!!!

Hope your muse has more in store for us readers!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Oh, They do ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

That was funny



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

ha! LOL that was awesome! :)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

Makes me curious good chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I did enjoy it

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lol, good:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

That is so Emmett....



Author's Response:

I know, right!!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

that was great! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

So they say the family that plays together stays together lol



Author's Response:

And they certianly play together!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 7

That is some hot momma and poppa loving going on.



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lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow look what Bella Alice, Edward and Jasper started LOL 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow that is a whole lot of fuckin suckin and pushin the stool in LOL.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 4

nothing like getting caught by your kids but to be swaping when caught that would be really weird if they were different kids. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well they were getting to know each other better much much better. 

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

Again, I just recently discovered this story and its outtakes. I am thrilled that you have chosen to write these alternate POVs! Can't wait for the next ones.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

i am guessing they had a little fun while they were out! LOL



Author's Response:

lol, yes, they did!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok I told you I would read it... I must admit that I am not as freaked out about Charlie as I thought I would be but it was a cold shower... I'll get used to it!

I like it in a twisted sort of way if I forget that Charlie is DAD.... So I;ll get over it ;)

xoxo

Marianne

I can't wait for Mr C.... ***glazed eyes daydreaming about Carlisle coevered in choco syrup and on his chest written DILF with caramel***

***snaps out of it***

***blushes***

C u!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks for reading it, even through Charlie is a dad! You crack me up!

We still have a few more before we get to Mr. C:) Now, I'm really hungry for choco and caramel...

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is a family unit like no other, but saying that it works for them, and even though its the parents its its cool (i worried it might be weird eveb though i said yes to reading) thanks tracy lets hope that little town of forks is ready for some scandal



Author's Response:

Thanks! Let's hope that Forks is prepared:)

Reviewer: SaraK Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!

Check the rating on the main screen....it's listed with a T-rating.

 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

very good



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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