Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man
Love Brown eyes meeting Green eyes poor Emmett. Alice is such a little firecracker she is priceless More more More
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review each chapter, the feedback means a ton!! You will learn a lot more details in the upcoming chapters, I hope you like them! :)
Katie
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort
My heart is breaking for them. great story so far I love it. It is funny with Emmett not being Mr. Superstar and Edward is the bad boy that beats Emmett so sad.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 The News
To have your whole world change with a trip to the hospital wow what a blow to a 16 year old. So sad I cant wait for more
Date: 08 Apr 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man
Well after seeing Edward's POV, it sounds like things at home aren't good for anyone. I'm looking forward to seeing what happened to make their family the way it is.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! You will get more EPOV in the future chapters and learn more about his situation. Hope you like the upcoming chapters! :)
Katie
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how Edward fits in with all that is going on and what he did that has his parents all in a tizzy.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! We will get to meet Edward very soon :)
Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort
Good chapter. It's a good thing Bella has such great friends to help her get through this. I'm very curious about what the deal is with Emmett and Edward and their parents. I'll be interested to see how that plays out. Of course I hope Charlie beats his leukemia.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! You won't have to wait too long to see what the deal with the parents is ;)
Katie
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 The News
Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!