Go Jasper!

Edward can really be an ass, he has a bit of an attitude.

I must say bella is getting on my nerves. how are you going to be talking shit to em when you need his help? He doesn't have to help her ass. also the sun does not rise amd set on your ass take it down a notch. I understand that your mad bella but everyone handles things differently eveyone is not edward. i wish em would kick his ass one time because the way I read this he has been getting bullied by edward. I love jasper and alice but bella is being a drama princess. dan is cool too. until next time. sorry I couldn't sleep since heavy d died so I maybe a little emotional riht now.

i love this story :)

Thank you for sharing this beautifully written story. Really loved reading it.

wonderful ending.   Hurray for renee and phil.   Poor Em though

Thanks for taking the time to write and share with us. 

What a wonderful life that have made.  Thanks for the great story I have loved reading

I would love an Epi but I love how this ended so far.

This was an amazing story... I have been following it, I knew you were close, to the end. epi, how about 10 years later, maybe a child or 2 :)

Thank you for sharing this beautifully written story, really loved reading it.

Love the story. Can't wait to read the rest.

EPOV, EPOV, EPOV!!  Did I mentioned I'd like to hear EPOV ;).   Really, Bella's story is kinda done...she can only move forward with Edward.  Edward needs to move out and get closure from his Fu%*ed Up parents before he and Bella can move on...I just see the story ending with EPOV.  But, you're the writer, so you know what you need to do to end it.Ü

Yay, I missed this story!  I'm glad things are better with Edward's mom, but I definitely understand why he's not all sunshine and roses about her.  I'm so happy for Bella that Edward's back.  It's such a hard time in her life right now, but I'm really glad she's got some happiness back now.

I don't know who's pov I'd like to hear more in the last chapter.  I like both perspectives!

both POV's half and half in the last chapter.. the end approaches.. thanks

Thank the Lord!!!  Finally they're back together!!!  Can't wait for an update!!!!!  WOOOHOOO!!!!!

yeah they are together forever now great i am loving this story keep it coming you are a great writer i await the next chapter

Loved it!  So glad that he is finally out and back!

poor bella.  gotta say though you portrayed her pain well

Well I still think his mom is nuts but at least she is willing to try I hope.  I love the way Carlisle called them on there bullshit.  I cant wait till he sees Bella.

still dont trust mom

ugh....have the cops ready .....

Well at least Edward knows that Bella has not gave up on him and is trying.  I cant wait for the show down.

why would you do that to edward why not let him out see the evidence against his parents and set him free why not save him and have him and bella together i really want an hea at the end for them i await the next chapter please get him out of there

awwww, i luv edward!

I loved Edward Sr being cuffed and stuff that was great.  Did they have Edward committed??????  Thanks for having Emmett admit he is a big pussy.

Woo Hoo  smart Officer Dan.     Now she needs to call officer dan and tell him where eddie is so they can take CPS there.   And then run over Ed sr and momma with a hummer.

Go Bella and Jasper for calling Elizabeth out on her lies.  I'm really glad Jasper was there.  I think his reaction to Edward's mother helped snap Bella back to reality and realize that he wouldn't leave her like that. 

I hope they find him soon!

Oh my Lord! I am so nervous!!! Please update soon!! The suspense will literally kill me!!!!

I am trying to do the tweetter thing not sure what i am doing I sent you a tweet about how I love your story. 

Good God his parents are insane!!!

Author's Response:

They are! I have a plan though, promise! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

ugh.   Hope hell reigns down on Em for ratting him out and that man (notice I didnt say father) goes to jail if he lays one more hand on that kid.

Oh my, what can i say your great at cliffie's on both your stories. Keep up the great writing :-)

His parents are fucking crazy and need to be put away and emmett is a big pussy.  Where is Edward going to go???  Bella is going to go crazy if he does not contact her.

That was really nice of Edward to be on the look out for his brother.

That is terrible that Alice's own father doesn't know how old she is!! I really hope that Emmett doesn't get into trouble for skipping school becuase something tells me that he shouldn't be asking for things to get into trouble for.

I am so glad they got there closeness that they both needed.

Poor Bella. Hopefully Edward will be able to help her through this tuff time like he has been so far. Hope his parents aren't too awful when they find out about football.

I think Bella is beginning to heal and realize she can continue to live.

wow. I don't think I have cried while reading a story in a really long time. Sad it was, but it was written I think in the best way possible. Good job!

I love Edward what a man.

hmmm  what is ed's mom gonna pull at the funeral I wonder.

I knew Charlie would not make it. I was hoping for his death because he was suffering. Sometimes when you love someone you hope for their death so they can be at peace and without pain. Charlie would not want to live like he was in that hospital. He was an outdoorsmen. He fought a good fight and now he is free again.

So this chapter had me in tears.  I'll admit that this isn't what I hoped would happen, but you did a beautiful job writing this.  Thank goodness Renee and Bella have such a great support system.

Heartbreaking chapter, but very well written. :-(

I really don't even know what to write now.  I'm in tears.  That was by far the saddest, but best written chapter yet.  I can only imagine how hard that must have been for you to write.  Excellent job!

Why do you torcher me?

Beautifully written chapter.  It was so bittersweet.  Christmas in the waiting room was such a nice thing for Alice to do.  I'm glad Bella has Edward to lean on.  I was so choked up reading this one.  It's sounding more and more like Charlie isn't going to make it, and it's just breaking my heart.

Uh oh, this doesn't sound like it's going to be a happy ending for Charlie.    I just hope that Bella is going to be okay with all of this; she loves her dad so much and she's not going to take this really well, whether she's prepared or not.   I'm just glad that Edward has been able to spend all this time with her to keep her mind off of things.

Loving this story.

I feel so bad for Bella and Renee right now.  That's so sad that Charlie is so sick.  It would be devestating to think that this bone marrow transplant was the answer you were looking and praying for only to then have to deal with this horrible infection. 

Edward's parents are just beyond words at this point.  They're just cruel.  I'm so glad they're both gone so he and Bella can have some time together.

I thought their first time together was very sweet.

Looking forward to reading more!