Date: 12 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Menace
Will you ever finish this story??
It would be a shame not to continue it.
Have a nice day. Arty
Author's Response:
Yes, one of these days, I'll return to this. At least, in this case, you know how it ends, right? :) Thank you for reading.
TMOT :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:26 PM Title: Solutions
AW CRAP?! Did I forget to review?! My bad... I'm liking how it's going so far, I'd say keep at it!! :-P
Author's Response:
Hi there,
well, you still have a few chapters ahead of you, and I'm working on the next one for this story. Thanks for reading, and leaving a review. I'm glad you like it.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:00 AM Title: Edifications
This is great I'm really enjoying reading it.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:55 AM Title: Solutions
Love it!! Such an imaginative read! Keep going!
Date: 28 May 2010 6:00 PM Title: Disclosures
Another great job! Are you planning any more chapters for this? You are SO talented!
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm working on chapter 25. That one's been a loooong time coming, but I hit a roadblock because I couldn't deal with the heartache that chapter holds. I needed to write something else to get that off my chest, and writing Resurrection totally helped with that. Now I can go back, and make my way through the epic heartfail that is Bella's kiss with the mutt. And Edward's pain, seeing that trainwreck, unable to look away.
I'm glad you liked this story too. When I started it, I was only a noob - still afraid to branch out of the original, and it shows in the early chapters. As I got more comfortable putting Edward's thoughts on paper (or a file, in this case), it became easier to write scenes that didn't exist in the book, scenes that I had to create to move the story forward, scenes that didn't even include Bella in all cases. And then I really got brave and extended on the UST and made it my own. I'm not quite as tame as Ms. Meyer with that. <snickers>
I hope to complete chatper 25 in early July. I know that's over a month away, but I hope you'll be patient.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:35 PM Title: Disclosures
Always love EPOV and this one filled in so many gaps from SM's Eclipse, really loved it!! Well done. I especailliy liked the mental asides that Edward did not share with Jacob (only with your readers) it confirmed so much of the deoth of love and passion Edward had for Bella and what I thought would have been going through his mind. BRAVO!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:51 PM Title: Subterfuge
i just clued into this story and i love it :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:48 PM Title: Subterfuge
Damn that was very good!!! I love Edward's POV and I can't waitf or the next chapter. I'm gald that you are showing Edwards humanity by using his POV something that was lacking in the original books.
This has been really well done!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 8:14 PM Title: Covenant
I loved this chapter, and this story becaseu it's from Edwards POV, so much had to be taken on faith in SM's books so I have really enjoyed this.
This chapetr shows us just how much Bella affects Edward in the amount of concern and pain she causes by not thinking of his feeelings until after she has opened her big mouth. Sorry I do like Bella but she was such an ass somtimes.
I also appreciated the need for Edward to let go or the self love as you put it, it's natural and to deny it would be a terrible lie, I saw nothing wrong with it at all.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Covenant
I am absolutely loving this! I can't wait until you update another chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi,
there are two additional chapters out on FFn that will be uploaded to this site when I get the chance. Thanks for leaving a review - I appreciate it very much.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:53 PM Title: Menace
Aww, I read this over on FF and loved it and am so glad I found it over here! I love to hear about Edward's thoughts during the saga, no offense to Miss Meyer, but Bella's thoughts were kind of boring, I would much rather hear Edward's side and hear the thoughts of those around him.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:43 PM Title: Confrontations
I understand in fanfiction that you have to use some scenes and/or dialogue from s. meyers. However I have read quite a few chapts so far and this is just you copying Eclipse. Try to be original if you decide to try another story.
Author's Response:
Hi,
thanks for leaving a review. I thought I had made it clear in my story notes that I have used all original dialogue and scenes from Eclipse, for which both Bella and Edward are present. There is additional dialogue starting in chapter 3 that is not in the book, as I expanded on the visit to Jacksonville. I am a fairly new author, and this is my first big story, and as I got deeper into it, I became more comfortable inventing scenes and dialogue.
As you read on in the next chapters you will see that I have added scenes for which Bella is not present, and tried to further explore the character that is Edward, as well as the surrounding members of his family, and his interaction with them. If you stopped after the first 3 chapters, I would ask that you read 4, 5 and 6 as well to see what I mean.
Thanks for your interest.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:29 AM Title: Menace
This is a good story, good exploration of original work. I only just discovered this site because of stories being removed from ff, and learning to navigate. I suspect there will be I increased readers and reviewers after people find where the stories are migrating. Will definitely continue to follow this story.