Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
You've done a great job with this story. It's very imaginative and I'm looking forward to future chapters.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Carlisle is on a roll! It would be good for relatios and the truce if they were to see that he is able to give life and fight to save it. I think the baby will be a boy...I don't know, two of each I guess! Loving the story!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 18
I've been reading and I'll let you know............Bella and Edward are so insecure I could scream....but I like your story very much. It is different from others in so many ways. Good job on the originality. bye
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
cant wait to find out what happens next with the resistance and if Bella does have more children...
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
A little boy for Leah I think.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Im caught up now, and cannot wait for more of this story!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
J'adore votre histoire, je lis avec le traducteur google. Je lis le français.
Fleur50
Montréal,
Québec, Canada
Date: 31 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well.. I love this story... Thank you so much for writing it.
Date: 31 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Your story is so very worth reading ... just saying for anyone out there that's wondering.
More babies ... cool! Glad Tanya is behaving ... wondering what Aro is up to.
Date: 31 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
that was great can't wait to see what will happen next thanks.....
Date: 21 May 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
God I love this chapter! I only wish that Tanya could be torn limb from limb for how she treated Bella and disregarded Edward's feelings about mating. I hate that she made Bella feel so small and unimportant. I can't wait for you to update again. I love all of your stories so much. I was frustrated for about a week with this site. I couldn't read any of your stories or the new chapters. It was killing me! I wanted to throw my computer out the window. Thank god for who ever fixed the problem i had before. Please update again soon.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for bella to be a vampire then she can beat Tanyas butt great chapter update fast plz i love your stories btw
Author's Response:
thanks for reading it! i am glad you love my stories, i needed to hear that today, i recieced a less then glowing reveiw today and your review cheered me right up. thank you for that.
Date: 13 May 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
so there's Charlie wondered if he would make a appearance tense but awesome chapter
Date: 13 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow what a chapter So sweet glad that she made it plus twins yeah
Date: 13 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Unexpected wow great chapter
Date: 13 May 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Curious and more curious wonder why they thought bella would help them
Date: 13 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
So sweet glad that they are both happy
Date: 13 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh that was good and rose finally gets her wish to be a mom awesome chapter
Date: 13 May 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
maybe we got some friends being made wonder why Sam has renee as a pet
Date: 13 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
so that's why makes sense now but still she such a drama queen great chapter
Date: 13 May 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
so sad for Jake but still not understanding y they want bella so bad
Date: 13 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it I do enjoy it curiosity going on with the wolves y they want her
Date: 13 May 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
think Jessica should be gone glad he admitted his love for her
Date: 13 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
that was awesome curious on why aro would try to separate them after the sale
Author's Response:
for the money James was willing to throw at him for her...simple greed. thanks for reading! michele
Date: 13 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
I do enjoy possessive Edward get to the lemons great chapter
Date: 07 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
*Gungan accent* Meesa like!! *end accent* Good story!! B+.
Date: 02 May 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter
Date: 02 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really liked how the story began, but I don't understand the immediate bond between bella and edward, I guess I expected that to take some time.
Author's Response:
i have tried countless times to get back to you on this and i keep erasing it. his bond wasn't instantanious, he had been replaying alice's visions for months before the auction. i am still trying to figure out how to explain my therory on Bella's thinking. sorry i will eventually figure out how to explain my thinking.
Date: 02 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Tanya is such a bitch! I sure hope that she is ripped limb from limb. Great chapter, I can't wait til the next!
Date: 02 May 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
I really liked Maggie's POV.
Date: 01 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Liking that Bella is standing up for herself even if she jumps to conclusion ... although I would too.
Date: 01 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
tanya needs to be on that matress when she burns it haha update soon thanks....
Date: 01 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
so i liked, but i feel a little suspicious of Maggie..hmmm..
Date: 01 May 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
I think you should burn Tanya withthe mattress.
Date: 01 May 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Short but Sweet
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
One thing about Charlie, he can be thick! Even if he sees her though, he still won't believe it. Intersting problem here!! Intense last two chapters....loved them!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was alot of info loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter, i love how just when one problem is solved another incident happens...
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
just knew it was charlie
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow! des jumelles, quelle belle surprise!
On eut allaiter des jumeaux. Mais Bella peut-elle les allaiter?? Le regard d'Edward quand elle allaitera les enfants serait une joie pour Bella et moi!
Pourra-t-elle avoir d'autres enfants?
J'aurai peut-être une réponse au chapitre 16!
Author's Response:
Oui, edward regarde son everytime pour deux raisons, garder son sûr et parce qu'il aime le voir. parce que vous avez demandé je dirai un point de veiw quand il fait !
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
quelle belle façon de provoquer un accouchement!
Edward est un crétin jaloux, en ce moment!
Author's Response:
Je suis entièrement d'accord mais il est autant d'amusement à la droite quand il est !
Vous remercier autant de pour lire mon histoire !
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh I loved it! I also loved the fact that you didn't give one of them the name Renesme, I hate that stupid name. I hope that Edward can work through his issues or he will screw everything up. Can't wait til the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading i try not to use the same baby names in my stories. i like to ever keep them changing! look for edward to make big improvements on his issues they have only started improve.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad that Edward saw the error of his ways before it was too late! The twins were a nice suprise. I am really enjoying this story! :)
Author's Response:
thank you for reading it!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
yea Bella survived, and with twins! didnt see that coming! thank you for the quick update.
Author's Response:
was there any doubt that she would survive :) i am glad you liked my surprise! thanks for reading.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
YAY TWINS!!!!
Author's Response:
i think one of these days i am going to write a story where the have triplets or qaudrupletes! that would be hysterical! thanks for reading it...
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
that was great thanks for sharing and those two could drive anyone to drink them selves to death update soon thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it. i know they could drive me to drink just writting them!! but i love to do it!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
imteresting names...... backstory or you just like them?
Author's Response:
angelica because she must have an angel on her shoulders. she is the one who had to be revived/ anastashia because she will be their princess. i had wanted to my daughters this but hubby veto-ed my vote!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well that was not a happy chapter I just Hope that edward gets his head out of his ass before bella and the baby die please update soon don't leave us here for long thanks...
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
WOW Edward really overreacted to that internal exam and Bella didn't respond well. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
i loved it! i like the creative way that Bella went into labor..this cliffy was a great one,now im too excited to see what happens next. Curious what the plan for Bella is, was it planned that she would be turned after birth or were they planning on more kids?
Author's Response:
i like to make each of my stories differant and since i had never heard of a story that did that i went with it! thanks for reading it. the next chapter will be up tomorow but i can tell you this: the way the laws are written humans are to have children up to a minimum age of 18. bpw which stands for 'breed with a purpose' are no exceptions then only benifit to being a bwp is that you are turned when you turn 18, but one can be turned early if the life depends on it. so tomorrow you will find out if it was needed..i know i am evil! but one good thing is i rarely do a cliff hanger with out having the next chapter ready. thanks again michele
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow hes such an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter !
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
im glad that you chose to kill of James, Victoria and Laurent in just 1 chapter...i find it annoying when authors drag on the kill although it has little to do when adding to the plot of a story...thanks... two more weeks til Bella's due date, Yea! Excited to find out what James was talking about when he mentioned the resistance.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
My guess would be that Charlie is with the wolves in Port Angeles.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
loved it thanks for sharing update soon can't wait...
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks....
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
merci, merci pour cette belle histoire
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing .....
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow..all this is just the first chapter...wow
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
You've done such a great job making me care about these characters! WOW @ 2 days full of Edward! That's swoonworthy! :) Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it! Michele
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it! Michele
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like the story a lot, but Bellas insecurity is getting old
Author's Response:
dont worry she just needs to see for herself that she doesn't need to be in secure. the last chapter was sort of an awkening when she realised it was both of them that was insecure. so look for them to fix each other as the chapters progress. thanks for reading and always please feel free to tell me what you think. i am listening...michele
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
quelle bonne idée, un bébé pour Roslie et Emmett
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
i cant wiat to see what happens in the next chapter this is going to be funny watching edwards reaction to bellas baby bump and is she going to start craving blood like the baby i cant wait to find out how this is handled so please update soon
Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
well crap and they won't be there update when you can thanks....
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I finding that Bella is overly emotional
does she some kind of abandoning problem?
Author's Response:
yes because she raised in a house for those with latent abilities and lives in a world where when you get old you disapear...both her parents have been cast out already. i am slowly adding info onto each chapter so the first wouldn't be boring
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
1 test de grossesse/mois... quelle bonne idée!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a bonehead LOL can't wait to see whats next thanks for sharing....
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Three babies in one chapter! I'm thinking there's osmething in the water! Sweet chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just started reading your story and I'm loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow that was great can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Evil Jessica, I hope James ends up with her! I can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response:
OOHHHH i like that idea! i just might have to borrow it! LOL