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Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

You've done a great job with this story.  It's very imaginative and I'm looking forward to future chapters.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think Carlisle is on a roll!  It would be good for relatios and the truce if they were to see that he is able to give life and fight to save it.  I think the baby will be a boy...I don't know, two of each I guess!  Loving the story!

Reviewer: kat-ryn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 18

I've been reading and I'll let you know............Bella and Edward are so insecure I could scream....but I like your story very much.  It is different from others in so many ways.  Good job on the originality.  bye

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

cant wait to find out what happens next with the resistance and if Bella does have more children...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

A little boy for Leah I think.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Im caught up now, and cannot wait for more of this story!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

J'adore votre histoire, je lis avec le traducteur google.  Je lis le français.

 

Fleur50

Montréal,

Québec, Canada

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well.. I love this story... Thank you so much for writing it.

 

 

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Your story is so very worth reading ... just saying for anyone out there that's wondering.

More babies ... cool! Glad Tanya is behaving ... wondering what Aro is up to.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

that was great can't wait to see what will happen next thanks.....

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

God I love this chapter! I only wish that Tanya could be torn limb from limb for how she treated Bella and disregarded Edward's feelings about mating. I hate that she made Bella feel so small and unimportant. I can't wait for you to update again. I love all of your stories so much. I was frustrated for about a week with this site. I couldn't read any of your stories or the new chapters. It was killing me! I wanted to throw my computer out the window. Thank god for who ever fixed the problem i had before. Please update again soon.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 17

Can't wait for bella to be a vampire then she can beat Tanyas butt great chapter update fast plz i love your stories btw

Author's Response:

thanks for reading it! i am glad you love my stories, i needed to hear that today, i recieced a less then glowing reveiw today and your review cheered me right up. thank you for that.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

so there's Charlie wondered if he would make a appearance tense but awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow what a chapter So sweet glad that she made it plus twins yeah

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Unexpected wow great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 13

Curious and more curious wonder why they thought bella would help them

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

So sweet glad that they are both happy

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh that was good and rose finally gets her wish to be a mom awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

maybe we got some friends being made wonder why Sam has renee as a pet

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8

so that's why makes sense now but still she such a drama queen great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

so sad for Jake but still not understanding y they want bella so bad

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

love it I do enjoy it curiosity going on with the wolves y they want her

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

think Jessica should be gone glad he admitted his love for her

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

that was awesome curious on why aro would try to separate them after the sale

Author's Response:

for the money James was willing to throw at him for her...simple greed. thanks for reading! michele

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

I do enjoy possessive Edward get to the lemons great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

really like it

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Like it so far

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

*Gungan accent* Meesa like!! *end accent* Good story!! B+.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

great chapter

Reviewer: nola80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really liked how the story began, but I don't understand the immediate bond between bella and edward, I guess I expected that to take some time.



Author's Response:

i have tried countless times to get back to you on this and i keep erasing it. his bond wasn't instantanious, he had been replaying alice's visions for months before the auction. i am still trying to figure out how to explain my therory on Bella's thinking. sorry i will eventually figure out how to explain my thinking.

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

Tanya is such a bitch! I sure hope that she is ripped limb from limb. Great chapter, I can't wait til the next!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17

I really liked Maggie's POV.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

Liking that Bella is standing up for herself even if she jumps to conclusion ... although I would too.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17

tanya needs to be on that matress when she burns it haha update soon thanks....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

so i liked, but i feel a little suspicious of Maggie..hmmm..

Reviewer: moose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

I think you should burn Tanya withthe mattress.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Short but Sweet

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 16

One thing about Charlie, he can be thick!  Even if he sees her though, he still won't believe it.  Intersting problem here!!  Intense last two chapters....loved them!

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 16

good chapter

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

That was alot of info loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks.....

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

wow! j'adore.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

great chapter, i love how just when one problem is solved another incident happens...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 16

just knew it was charlie

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow! des jumelles, quelle belle surprise! 

On eut allaiter des jumeaux. Mais Bella peut-elle les allaiter??  Le regard d'Edward quand elle allaitera les enfants serait une joie pour Bella et moi!

Pourra-t-elle avoir d'autres enfants?

 

J'aurai peut-être une réponse au chapitre 16!



Author's Response:

Oui, edward regarde son everytime pour deux raisons, garder son sûr et parce qu'il aime le voir. parce que vous avez demandé je dirai un point de veiw quand il fait !

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

quelle belle façon de provoquer un accouchement!

Edward est un crétin jaloux, en ce moment!



Author's Response:

Je suis entièrement d'accord mais il est autant d'amusement à la droite quand il est !

Vous remercier autant de pour lire mon histoire !

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter

Reviewer: Indianprincess28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh I loved it! I also loved the fact that you didn't give one of them the name Renesme, I hate that stupid name. I hope that Edward can work through his issues or he will screw everything up. Can't wait til the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading i try not to use the same baby names in my stories. i like to ever keep them changing! look for edward to make big improvements on his issues they have only started improve.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

I am so glad that Edward saw the error of his ways before it was too late! The twins were a nice suprise.  I am really enjoying this story! :)



Author's Response:

thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

yea Bella survived, and with twins! didnt see that coming! thank you for the quick update.



Author's Response:

was there any doubt that she would survive :) i am glad you liked my surprise! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

YAY TWINS!!!! 



Author's Response:

i think one of these days i am going to write a story where the have triplets or qaudrupletes! that would be hysterical! thanks for reading it...

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

that was great thanks for sharing and those two could drive anyone to drink them selves to death update soon thanks.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it. i know they could drive me to drink just writting them!! but i love to do it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

imteresting names...... backstory or you just like them?



Author's Response:

angelica because she must have an angel on her shoulders. she is the one who had to be revived/ anastashia because she will be their princess.  i had wanted to my daughters this but hubby veto-ed my vote!

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

Well that was not a happy chapter I just Hope that edward gets his head out of his ass before bella and the baby die please update soon don't leave us here for long thanks...

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

WOW Edward really overreacted to that internal exam and Bella didn't respond well.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

i loved it! i like the creative way that Bella went into labor..this cliffy was a great one,now im too excited to see what happens next.  Curious what the plan for Bella is, was it planned that she would be turned after birth or were they planning on more kids?



Author's Response:

i like to make each of my stories differant and since i had never heard of a story that did that i went with it! thanks for reading it. the next chapter will be up tomorow but i can tell you this: the way the laws are written humans are to have children up to a minimum age of 18. bpw which stands for 'breed with a purpose' are no exceptions then only benifit to being a bwp is that you are turned when you turn 18, but one can be turned early if the life depends on it. so tomorrow you will find out if it was needed..i know i am evil! but one good thing is i rarely  do a cliff hanger with out having the next chapter ready. thanks again michele 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

wow hes such an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter ! 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

j'adore

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

good chapter

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

im glad that you chose to kill of James, Victoria and Laurent in just 1 chapter...i find it annoying when authors drag on the kill although it has little to do when adding to the plot of a story...thanks... two more weeks til Bella's due date, Yea!  Excited to find out what James was talking about when he mentioned the resistance.

Reviewer: old bat Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

My guess would be that Charlie is with the wolves in Port Angeles.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved it thanks for sharing update soon can't wait...

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks....

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

merci, merci pour cette belle histoire

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

génial

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 11

good chapter

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11

that was great can't wait to see what happens next thanks for sharing .....

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow..all this is just the first chapter...wow

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: tameas Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3

You've done such a great job making me care about these characters! WOW @ 2 days full of Edward! That's swoonworthy!  :)  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it!  Michele



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading it!  Michele

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

I like the story a lot, but Bellas insecurity is getting old



Author's Response:

dont worry she just needs to see for herself that she doesn't need to be in secure. the last chapter was sort of an awkening when she realised it was both of them that was insecure. so look for them to fix each other as the chapters progress. thanks for reading and always please feel free to tell me what you think. i am listening...michele

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

quelle bonne idée, un bébé pour Roslie et Emmett

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

i cant wiat to see what happens in the next chapter this is going to be funny watching edwards reaction to bellas baby bump and is she going to start craving blood like the baby i cant wait to find out how this is handled so please update soon

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

good chapter

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

well crap and they won't be there update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

good chapter

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

super chapitre!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow!

Reviewer: kova_aly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

I finding that Bella is overly emotional

does she some kind of abandoning problem?



Author's Response:

yes because she raised in a house for those with latent abilities and lives in a world where when you get old you disapear...both her parents have been cast out already. i am slowly adding info onto each chapter so the first wouldn't be boring 

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

1 test de grossesse/mois... quelle bonne idée!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

c'est si triste!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

What a bonehead LOL can't wait to see whats next thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

Three babies in one chapter!  I'm thinking there's osmething in the water!  Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: ting_ting Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 6

Just started reading your story and I'm loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 6

wow that was great can't wait to see what happens next update soon thanks...

Reviewer: kolobusamanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Evil Jessica, I hope James ends up with her! I can't wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response:

OOHHHH i like that idea! i just might have to borrow it! LOL

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