[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait to see what happens!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2016 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
My goodness what a worry-wart B is! Twins gifts very cool. I love all the twists!
AB
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
So glad to see you writing again. I hope you go back to finish some of your other stories.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I just read all 25 chapters. Great story. I was going to check out your other stories, but, I see most of them are not finished. Do you intend to finish them?
Date: 30 Jan 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Why is it that Edward can be angry and jelous when someone touches Bella, but not the other way around. And there are constant mentions of rules, but what are they exactly. Thanks for writing
Date: 30 Jan 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sorry for not rewiewing often, but I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really love this story and often get lost in it. Yesterday I almost missed my bus stops twice reading this story. Going to work and coming home again.
Date: 29 Jan 2016 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm team vampire all the way, but I'm happy they let Leah go and maybe have a truce. Fingers crossed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward and Bella are so much alike. It' funny and sweet
Date: 27 Jan 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think I like this story. It' funny and sweet. I will keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome chapter plots moving now can't wait for next update
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it very much my account has been having problems and thay just got it fixed I was leaving reviews and they were not posting Sorry this is late and thanks for sharing this with us......
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
A little bit confusing this plot : who is betraying specifically who ?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
I have completely forgotten Jessica ! :-) When are Diego & his mate coming ?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I was nearly crying with EJ's scene. It was horrible to imaging it as the words became alive in my head during the reading ! It was devastating. Thanks for Angelica's gift! I hope Rose & Angie are alive and in good shape. Did Charlie get the ending he deserved ?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope Charlie is still the good father Bella think he was. How are they the "resistance" ? Which side are they? The human + wolf against vampire ?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
That's a cliffie really hard on the nerve and with negatives emotions ! I'm just glad the next chapter is already here. I couldn't have waited for it !!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Excellent plot so far. It's just sad that the lemons are ending during the pregnancy. I hope the truce will have a HEA !
Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow...nice set up for whats to come.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very nice and interesting plot. I'm still a little bit lost with all the emotions display and the lack of communication between B&E. Thanks for Alice explanations !
Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
ooh nice! bella's going to be a vampire. this is going great. thank goodness you updated. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! and yes so much is now going to be going on. I am sorry for the delay. i was writing just not much Fan Fic. more to come soon! thanks for staying with me, nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Holy crap, Aro is bloodthirsy and a raving lunatic!
Author's Response:
it's going to get more interesting, now that the cullens will be getting involved. thanks for always reading and reviewing. you are truly wonderful for always doing it. nails233
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow new baby and three crazy visions.
Author's Response:
I had a great time writting this little chapter, next one will be much bigger so i hope you like it! thanks for always reading and reviewing, you're really great!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
please do keep on writing because u have a great talent for it
Author's Response:
Sorry for my delay in replying, life was a little crazy for a while. more to come soon, and the delay will not be as long. thanks for reading and reviewing. nails233
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
In the light of your A/N I make it short and sweet...
I like your plot idea and are eager to follow the story further- you knw how to keep the right amount of suspense by not lying everthing out in the open...I think it is all evolving a bit too fast, but I know sometimes this is really difficult to do and I still don't know where it takes, so no harsh judgement there...
There is one tiny spelling mistake, I found: he messages her tongue, but I think he would rather massage it... I don'z know of your a stickler to those things, but I always think it is nice to know...
Looking forward,
Anna
Author's Response:
I will fix the spelling mistake because yes it will bother me it's there. I will have to find it first. As for it evolving quickly no worries there, this is not one of those stories where the fight happens in one night. Remember they are in Alaska and with Bella's new pregancy needing to be dealt with before they do anything. they also need to decided whose side they're on. theres still the siege at Forks. then the dogs from port angles and lastly the threat from seattle. Thanks for such an honest review and i hope you enjoy the rest of the story. feel free to let me know what you think. nails233
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm happy that now Bella won't have to worry about Tanya now that she's found her mate. I'm really looking forward to seeing what comes next in this story!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
awesome glad she found her mate great chapter
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was happy and relieved to see Tanya find her mate, but stil don't care much for Jessica. Bella and Edward don't need anymore girl drama in thier lives. I am glad Edward is back home with Bella and the babies. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
really liked this chapter, Tanya in love, awww.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please let Tanya be decent in this story. I can't handle a bad Tanya hurting Adam. LOL
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Happy New Years and thanks for the update. you rock. :D I love this story and always get so excited to see it. :D thanks again bye p.s. More possessiveward next time. :D lol thanks again bye
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
well hopefully Tanya wil leave eddie alone now.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
:) thanks for the update.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
WONDERFUL! EXCELLENT! STORY!!!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
I read your entire story to date today and I have to say I loved it. Please keep writing. I am suprised I hadn't seen it here up until now but I am now a big fan. I look forward to the next update, hope it will be soon!
Author's Response:
Hello! I have no plans on stopping my writing, this is one of my favorites to write. i try to update as much as possible but i do divide it between all my stories. Not to mention the originals i am writing for publishcation. But i always finish what i start. there is still so much to tell in this ulternate universe, Thank you so much for giving it a shot. I am so glad you like it! more to come soon. michele / Nails233
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
I love that you review on both sites! Thank you so much!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
aww poor Bella. I bet she thinks Tanya is moving in on her territory. lol Welcome back! I was just looking through my favs yesterday and wondered where you were and what was taking so long to update. now we know! :D I love this story. the whole "real vampire" thing is great with the purring and drinking blood. I love it and wow pregnant again. Bella should be a rabbit. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 23
glad to see you posting again. poor bella
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
A very exciting chapter!! I have to be wary of Tanya...
and I really dont feel like it is the opportune time to leave her.
I cant wait to see what happends next!
Happy Holidays.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
Lets hope they can make a truce. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews, I value every one of them! I am glad you like the story!
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dear me these two need to work on their communication skills.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, everyone seems to be pregnant. Wonderful stuff.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it. Good chapter. Is Leah going to tell them who she is looking for?
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. Jessica should be sent down the mine. Lets hope Bella hears Edwards declaration and recovers soon.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yay they did the deed. I cannot help wonder why James now wants Bella? I hope he and Jessica are not going to make trouble but I think they might. LOL.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love this story so far. Edward is so sweet to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good chapter. It seems Bella was very lucky she could have ended up with James, shudder.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
LOVED IT! a possesive Edward...Yummy!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reviews! I am so glad you like the story! More to come real soon!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
J'adore
Author's Response:
Merci!
Date: 13 Sep 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
poor bree. caught between a rock and a hard place
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it very much and excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! more to come soon. next chapter is in the works! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
not a bad story
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you will check out the new chapters to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing it.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 22
W.T.F?! OH-OH.....
Author's Response:
OH - OH is right! lots of new stuff will be happening to our favorite group of freinds. I hope you stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Go tell DIEGO!! ooh this is soo good and again possessive edward is hot! I love it. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Lets hope she listens to you! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Possessive-ward is always hot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it! He can possess me anytime!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well I just got caught up with this story and i think its safe to say, WOW!!! I LOVE IT!! I'm so happy she's pregnant again and I can't wait till they tell Edward. I absolutely just LOVE the possesive side of Edward. that's too hot. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Your entusiasm is awsome and infectious! Thank you so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it so good can't wait till they are mated them the whole house can relax for a bit lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for all your reviews! I am so glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really love this story it's very good just like all of you'r other stories that i have read .I wonder how the war with the wolves started and why they wanted bella
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have seen this story before but never read it before iam so glad that iam now this looks very good .I can't wait to read more and find out what's going to happen
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
ugh everyone wants bella.
Author's Response:
Yeah but it's not always in a good way! Thank you for reading it!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like it a lot so far.
Author's Response:
I hope you continue to like it! Thanks for reading it and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
So sorry it took so long. the kiddies were home on summer break that add to three weeks of vacations between ma and the beta relly slowed us down but there will be another chapter very soon. its already written. Thanks for being so understanding! Thank you for reading it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad you're continuing this! Thanks for giving us a new chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes I am and I am so sorry for taking so long. I all ready have the next chapter ready to go so I will be posting it very soon. Summer really cut into my writing time. also I was writing three orginal storys for this site. I have started posting two and will start posting the third today. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this story. Good writing!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you so much for the great writing! I am really liking your style- possessive Edward is my all- time favorite! And I always enjoy canon. I'll be honest, I usually wait until a story is done before I start to read it, but after reading one of your completed ones & loving it, I just keep finding myself back here reading more! I hope you plan to continue these gems. And I can't even tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to entertain me! Thanks again! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my stories! And yes, after I recently asked my readers they agreed with you, so they will continue. Reviews like your's definitely fuel me to write more. So I hope you continue to enjoy them.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
family is a force of love and can beat hatred's ass if given the chance
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow misunderstanding! these two need to learn to stop jumping to conclusions and talk to eachother!
Date: 10 Aug 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
goodness all those prego hormones and no sex?!? wow poor eddie and bella
Date: 10 Aug 2010 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
why do the wolves want her?
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
yay the deed has been done! they are bonded together and in the funnest way possible.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
eddie has to pee on her! heehee.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
well at least he made a point of waking her to tell her it was nothing to do with her.
Date: 10 Aug 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
well now it would seem that eddie still has a few control issues
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter!!! Man, that was alot. I feel sorry for the Port Angeles pack and the Seattle coven. Team Cullen!! lol
Author's Response:
Sorry it took so long to reply to your review I was on vacation with no wifi! Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy my story! There will be a new chapter soon. Thanks again for reading it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Just found this story and wanted to tell how great it is! Keep going...
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have been reading this all night! I'm now pouting like a small child because I have to wait for the next chapter. I like your writing style.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reveiwing! I am all ready working on the next chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
This brought back the vortex of intrigue as soon an the new posts came. Sucked right back in and ready for more. Great!
Author's Response:
Thank You So Much! I always aim to please! next chapter is in the works so i hope you like it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
thankgod for the pack
Author's Response:
I like them as the good guys! They will not take a back seat in the future.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter. I was so happy when i saw you had a new chapter up. I hope that Bella gets pregnant again before she is changed, a boy would be nice to add to the family.
Author's Response:
Keep reading you just might get your wish! Thank you for your reviews!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
whats going to happen???
Author's Response:
Now if i told you it wouldn't be a surprise...but lots to come, thats for sure. We just entered into the war so hold on to your booties! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it very much and the end was really HOT can't wait to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Already working on it. so glas you liked it! thanks for all your reviews!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT.. I can't stand death in stories.. I am a WHIMP.. lol
I just reread this whole story today.. Love it all again.
Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response:
I hate them too! It's too sad if they dont die of old age. Thank you for reading it!, Again! :)
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
GREAT chapter! but now that the threat of Charlie is gone, whats going to happen next in the story?
Author's Response:
without giving too much away there is still the stand off in Folks and charlie was a human, not a wolf so he was never in control of the wolves that accompanied him to alaska. HINT HINT ! next chapter in half done so i will hopefully have it up tommorrow.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow that was intense hope Charlie's death was extremely painfull great chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh I was shocked when I realized that Rose was gone and Ej hurt ... gasp. Glad all will be well.
Date: 08 Jul 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh my god!!! that was so sad!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ugh. Glad Charlie is gone.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it like always thanks for sharing update when you can thanks....
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well good - also, what's with the loooong wait for this Ch.?! A-.
Author's Response:
My deepest apologizes for the wait but I had surgery and if that wasn't enough I had a death in my family. You know I hate to make you all wait but it was unavoidable and I will do my best not to make you so long again. Thank you for waiting for it! and I am already on to the next chapter so this wait will be very short. Thank you for taking the time to review! It makes me write faster! :) Michele
Date: 03 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
awww i hope she makes it!!! this is comeing along great!!! i really like it!!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
yeah they should make it and lets have another boy great chapter
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
you have to write faster .... what is happening in port angeles is charlie's doing or not . . .