Date: 30 Jan 2016 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sorry for not rewiewing often, but I can't wait to read the next chapter. I really love this story and often get lost in it. Yesterday I almost missed my bus stops twice reading this story. Going to work and coming home again.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
I was nearly crying with EJ's scene. It was horrible to imaging it as the words became alive in my head during the reading ! It was devastating. Thanks for Angelica's gift! I hope Rose & Angie are alive and in good shape. Did Charlie get the ending he deserved ?
Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
ooh nice! bella's going to be a vampire. this is going great. thank goodness you updated. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! and yes so much is now going to be going on. I am sorry for the delay. i was writing just not much Fan Fic. more to come soon! thanks for staying with me, nails233
Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Holy crap, Aro is bloodthirsy and a raving lunatic!
it's going to get more interesting, now that the cullens will be getting involved. thanks for always reading and reviewing. you are truly wonderful for always doing it. nails233
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow new baby and three crazy visions.
I had a great time writting this little chapter, next one will be much bigger so i hope you like it! thanks for always reading and reviewing, you're really great!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
please do keep on writing because u have a great talent for it
Sorry for my delay in replying, life was a little crazy for a while. more to come soon, and the delay will not be as long. thanks for reading and reviewing. nails233
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
In the light of your A/N I make it short and sweet...
I like your plot idea and are eager to follow the story further- you knw how to keep the right amount of suspense by not lying everthing out in the open...I think it is all evolving a bit too fast, but I know sometimes this is really difficult to do and I still don't know where it takes, so no harsh judgement there...
There is one tiny spelling mistake, I found: he messages her tongue, but I think he would rather massage it... I don'z know of your a stickler to those things, but I always think it is nice to know...
I will fix the spelling mistake because yes it will bother me it's there. I will have to find it first. As for it evolving quickly no worries there, this is not one of those stories where the fight happens in one night. Remember they are in Alaska and with Bella's new pregancy needing to be dealt with before they do anything. they also need to decided whose side they're on. theres still the siege at Forks. then the dogs from port angles and lastly the threat from seattle. Thanks for such an honest review and i hope you enjoy the rest of the story. feel free to let me know what you think. nails233
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was happy and relieved to see Tanya find her mate, but stil don't care much for Jessica. Bella and Edward don't need anymore girl drama in thier lives. I am glad Edward is back home with Bella and the babies. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
I read your entire story to date today and I have to say I loved it. Please keep writing. I am suprised I hadn't seen it here up until now but I am now a big fan. I look forward to the next update, hope it will be soon!
Hello! I have no plans on stopping my writing, this is one of my favorites to write. i try to update as much as possible but i do divide it between all my stories. Not to mention the originals i am writing for publishcation. But i always finish what i start. there is still so much to tell in this ulternate universe, Thank you so much for giving it a shot. I am so glad you like it! more to come soon. michele / Nails233
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
aww poor Bella. I bet she thinks Tanya is moving in on her territory. lol Welcome back! I was just looking through my favs yesterday and wondered where you were and what was taking so long to update. now we know! :D I love this story. the whole "real vampire" thing is great with the purring and drinking blood. I love it and wow pregnant again. Bella should be a rabbit. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well I just got caught up with this story and i think its safe to say, WOW!!! I LOVE IT!! I'm so happy she's pregnant again and I can't wait till they tell Edward. I absolutely just LOVE the possesive side of Edward. that's too hot. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Your entusiasm is awsome and infectious! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it very much and so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....
So sorry it took so long. the kiddies were home on summer break that add to three weeks of vacations between ma and the beta relly slowed us down but there will be another chapter very soon. its already written. Thanks for being so understanding! Thank you for reading it!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad you're continuing this! Thanks for giving us a new chapter!
Yes I am and I am so sorry for taking so long. I all ready have the next chapter ready to go so I will be posting it very soon. Summer really cut into my writing time. also I was writing three orginal storys for this site. I have started posting two and will start posting the third today. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you so much for the great writing! I am really liking your style- possessive Edward is my all- time favorite! And I always enjoy canon. I'll be honest, I usually wait until a story is done before I start to read it, but after reading one of your completed ones & loving it, I just keep finding myself back here reading more! I hope you plan to continue these gems. And I can't even tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to entertain me! Thanks again! :)
Thank you so much for reading my stories! And yes, after I recently asked my readers they agreed with you, so they will continue. Reviews like your's definitely fuel me to write more. So I hope you continue to enjoy them.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter!!! Man, that was alot. I feel sorry for the Port Angeles pack and the Seattle coven. Team Cullen!! lol
Sorry it took so long to reply to your review I was on vacation with no wifi! Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy my story! There will be a new chapter soon. Thanks again for reading it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have been reading this all night! I'm now pouting like a small child because I have to wait for the next chapter. I like your writing style.
Thank you so much for reading and reveiwing! I am all ready working on the next chapter.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
This brought back the vortex of intrigue as soon an the new posts came. Sucked right back in and ready for more. Great!
Thank You So Much! I always aim to please! next chapter is in the works so i hope you like it!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter. I was so happy when i saw you had a new chapter up. I hope that Bella gets pregnant again before she is changed, a boy would be nice to add to the family.
Keep reading you just might get your wish! Thank you for your reviews!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT.. I can't stand death in stories.. I am a WHIMP.. lol
I just reread this whole story today.. Love it all again.
Thanks for the chapter.
I hate them too! It's too sad if they dont die of old age. Thank you for reading it!, Again! :)
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
GREAT chapter! but now that the threat of Charlie is gone, whats going to happen next in the story?
without giving too much away there is still the stand off in Folks and charlie was a human, not a wolf so he was never in control of the wolves that accompanied him to alaska. HINT HINT ! next chapter in half done so i will hopefully have it up tommorrow.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well good - also, what's with the loooong wait for this Ch.?! A-.
My deepest apologizes for the wait but I had surgery and if that wasn't enough I had a death in my family. You know I hate to make you all wait but it was unavoidable and I will do my best not to make you so long again. Thank you for waiting for it! and I am already on to the next chapter so this wait will be very short. Thank you for taking the time to review! It makes me write faster! :) Michele