Date: 19 May 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually read one shots but this was good any chance of making a whole story out of it? I think it has potential!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
too bad you did not make this one full length it was a great start
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
are u going to write more to this?
Date: 27 May 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow, i think i need to stop and take a breather after that one!
Date: 22 May 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nooooooooo! I want to know how she did it, if she caught E. What was his reaction? And what about everyone else when B is suddenly w J!? Come on...just one (or more) chapter?
Date: 15 Apr 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!! So hot!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
awww you totally want to continue with this don't cha!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was really good...Please Continue!!!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like dom Jasper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice one-shot. THX
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
sexy...really sexy
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm usually not a big fan of Jasper/Bella, but this was amazing!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Poor Edward, what a looser, did I really just say that!..
Loved it!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yum...that was hot! Is this a one-shot? I would love it if you continue it and make it a full-length story!
Date: 07 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am looking forward to reading more.
Date: 06 Feb 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Man some DOMsper always does the trick good Lord yikes. That was freaking hot. Man I love Jasper he is so I don't know but God do I love it! Way to go ladies. Whew wee!
Date: 04 Feb 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please keep going!!
Date: 03 Feb 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dom Jasper...YUMMY!
Date: 02 Feb 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow you two are such pervs. Great story! Loved it!
Date: 02 Feb 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was awesome. Are you continuing?
Date: 01 Feb 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Footroza and TSO, the flowers in Spring are really beautiful.. Just saying.. ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Shit! That was H.O.T. I love the mix up of the couple. A Jasper/Bella story is great. Oh, this is going to be another fun ride. Keep it coming!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I loved it, and I LOVE the Jasper you created! So hot!!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww man I was so ready to see Edward's shit get handed to him :(
I was "Jasper" back in high school. Man I wish it all ended that well for me too. But it was all for the better, I ran into my "Bella" a couple weeks ago man he totally peaked in high school.:-!. So sad....
I'm not sure if my brain is really that perverted but I couldn't help but notice Jazz's Dom tendencies. Again, very hot. ;)
Date: 01 Feb 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
S.O. & Foot
I hope you carry forward with some type of ending for this one!!!!
Cory
Date: 01 Feb 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
that was sooo toatlly hot but kinda freaky at the same time
jasper can be scary, who knew
but that was totally awesome
loved it
is this just a one shot or a story?
UPDATE SOON!!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful. Between a sneaky Edward and a dominant Jasper...who could ask for more?! I love your Jasper! He's everything witha naive, innocent Bella that he should be. She's been feeling it, but until Jasper takes the upper hand (and the reins!) she has no clue. Edward's in for a rude awakening!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was great, nothing better than a dommineering Jasper! I hope you continue this it has great potential!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. Are you going to be continuing it after the challenge? I'd love to see Edward get caught!
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Assward is going to get his balls handed to him on Saturday! Looking forward to more please.
Date: 01 Feb 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, Normally I don't like reading stories that are not canon, or at least BxE but after reading this chapter I am going to give it a chance. I liked that Jasper isnt completely pussy whipped by her, even thought he wants her, and I also liked that even though Edward is a shit head cheater, he still has kind things to say about her. I kind of hate that Edward is a cheater though, but Im glad he is getting whats coming to him and at least Bella has kind of gotten him back by cheating on him, even though she doesnt know he did anything wrong to begin with. Maybe Edward will see what he had once its gone.
Date: 31 Jan 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh I like it. Not really a Jasper/Bella fan (unless Edward is in there somewhere!) but I like this aggressive Jasper for some reason.