[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2023 6:35 AM Title: Epilogue
Love your writing skills. Thank you once again for sharing your talents with us.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2023 4:05 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for a lovely story!! I'm happy all is well. Edward came home Esme & Rosalie are doing fine now I hope. Edward & Bella are getting married. Jasper & Emmett are still by his side. Great story. Well done. I so enjoyed it. Thank you. I look forward to sequel
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2023 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue
Happy 13the Writing Anniversary!!! Chicky, you nailed this fic to the f*ucking wall. Chapter after chapter you kept me dying to know more. I hated Shaw as much as Bella and wanted her to get her revenge. I despised Ciaus to hell and back and couldn't wait for him to get his. My heart ached for young Edwwrd for the trauma he endured; as welll as the self-blame he inflicted on himself. Don't ever let anyone tell you you can't write mob stories because you wrote a hellava story. I'd love to read a sequel someday. Loved this epi.
Sherry
Date: 11 Apr 2023 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue
So freaking awesome, yet sad to see their journey come to a close. Thanks for sharing it with us
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2023 11:39 PM Title: Epilogue
:) This was a great story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Apr 2023 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Shaw got what he deserved, and Bella got her revenge. E/B are made for each other.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2023 9:28 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story. I hope there will be a sequel
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2023 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
Edward and Bella are just so.....good together. :) Everyone seems to be finding their groove. Thanks for writing and sharing
Date: 06 Apr 2023 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
I love that Edward and family have restored the council structure. Props to Nella for getting vindication from James.
Date: 06 Apr 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
I freaking love how badass Bella was being with James after Edward got him all riled up.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2023 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm happy to read that you have Edward setting into things Jasper and Emmett are too. Bella hopefully will be at peace after she deals with Shaw. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Apr 2023 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Overwhelming is saying it lightly. I couldn't imagine the feelings running through Edward at the moment. He does have one hellava inner circle. He'll do just fine getting into the groove.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 31 Mar 2023 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good for Rosalie, she deserved to feel the vindication of caius death
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2023 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for thr update..well done. Go Rosalie!!!. I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2023 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
I hope Bella & Edward get that piece of shit that raped her.Great writing wonderful chapter !
Date: 29 Mar 2023 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
You're right. Rose deserved to have her moment, but wouldn't it be glorious if Caius has two gunshots; one from Rose and one from Edward's gun. Either way, it's about time the dirtbag got what was coming to him. I'm anxious to see how Edward handles everything as boss.
Sherry
Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh man, my stomach is in knots. Uncle Ciaus is a dead man. Hopefully. Edward better pull himself together and regain control of this situation quickly.
Sherry
Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
Holy cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
!!!!! Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG !! Not nice Lol. Can't Wait Till Wednesday .
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2023 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love Love your story can't for more .
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2023 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2023 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Mar 2023 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
This is getting so exciting. I'm glad that Bella is giving Rose some hope for a better future
Date: 23 Mar 2023 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so geared up for the next few chapters. I want Caius to lose his cool and admit his roll in Carlisle's death and that he knew Edward ran away.
Sherry
Date: 20 Mar 2023 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
Esme's reunion with her son got me a little choked up. I'm so ready for hell to break loose, but I have a feeling things aren't going to go down as smoothly as they hope and plan for it to happen.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2023 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 23
Esme just found another reason to be strong. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2023 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update.,well done. I'm happy Esme got to see her son. Until you post again
Date: 20 Mar 2023 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
That's a beautiful chapter and reunion. Definitely Kleenex level stuff.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update. well done. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope esme gets to see her son soon. I hope the reunion is a good one. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2023 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
"Caius Cullen is a dead man walking." I can't tell you how excited I am to read those words. You have me sitting on the edge of my seat, awaiting for more. Thank you for an awesome chapter.
Sherry
Date: 15 Mar 2023 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
Go get him Edward!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2023 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update..well done.. until you post again. I can't wait to see what happens. I hope Edward can see his Mom today also.
Date: 13 Mar 2023 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
Omg! I hope they are ready! Can't wait for more
Date: 13 Mar 2023 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm sitting on the edge of my seat. I'm dying for Charlie'a reaction when he sees Edward after so many years. Edward is going to be bambarded with quesitons. When Edward does get face-off with Csius, I hope he slips up and says something about he's the one put the hit on Carlisle and he'd killed Edward too if he hadn't ran off. I'm spazzing for the next chapter.
Sherry
Date: 12 Mar 2023 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
I literally said NOoOo... you stopped it there!!! Luckily today is the Lords day and I can say nothing, but tomorrow I've got a bone to pick with you 😆 jokes
Till next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2023 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for the update..well done.. I'm happy they had a talk, I'm sure if they survive bring Caius down they will be together like their Parents wanted. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2023 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't wait for Esme, Renee and Charlie to find out Bella found Edward and he's coming home.
Sherrh
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
I feel for poor Rose. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..well done. I can't wait for the next chapter. Esme needs to see her son. I can't wait for Caius to get his comeuppenced. until you post again
Date: 06 Mar 2023 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Rosalie is in a dark space. It's good she has Esme, even though she's struggling too. Things with the plan needs to come together quickly or Rose will not make it.
Sherry
Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Time for Edward to get down to business since he's going back to face Caius. I don't blame Rose one bit for wanting to abort a pregnancy due to rape. I think that would be a common response for anyone in her situation. Time's ticking, and I'm excited for a showdown.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
I feel so terrible for everyone but nasty cruel Caius. Ugh... He is just awful. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
I feel so terrible for everyone but nasty cruel Caius. Ugh... He is just awful. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2023 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update..well done.. I can't wait for the next chapter. until you post again
Date: 28 Feb 2023 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward needs to kick some ass
Date: 28 Feb 2023 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
It's time Edward gets over his fear and channels it to take down Caius. Bella had good instincts of starting small and working Em and Jasper up to the more deadly arsenal.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward has a lot of buried trauma to deal with. Bella seemed to help him sleep after his nightmare. Jasper and Emmett definitely over stepped with Edward telling him not to have sex with Bella. Ugh....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 24 Feb 2023 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Caius is the worst; he does need taken down/dethroned. I can barely wait for Caius to realize Edwrard is still alive.
Sherry
Date: 22 Feb 2023 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
What a ride. I hope time flies a little bit and Caius eats his own dick before too long.
Sherry
Date: 22 Feb 2023 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Both of them has been hit with a tidal wave of emotions. A lot to process for both of them. Hopefully Jasper and Emmett can help make a plan to get Edward back on the throne.
Sherry
Date: 22 Feb 2023 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward just had a happy birthday.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update.,well done..Bella has Edward and will train him & his brtotherrs...until you post again
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
ooh my Go bella taking charge.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Bella is such a bad ass in her own right. Wonder if B will be able to keep the secret of his being alive and well.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Bells has held on. Poor Rose. Glad when Caius and his group of nasites are taken out.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella. Caius needs to die horribly and painfully.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww for the beach day. Lucy sounds like a total skank.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Em and jazz are there to help him. Also that Charlie will be carefully watching Caius.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Heavy indeed. Poor Edward. Mind must be going crazy. Guess Caius was far enough for E to not hear him. Glad Charlie and Renee don't trust caius' account
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ack poor Edward. That's going to leave a scar. But I thought both parents died.... Or is that next. Ack
Date: 16 Feb 2023 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad kids understand they screwed up royally. Martial arts are great idea.
Date: 16 Feb 2023 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see how it all unfolds...Will they be able to tell Esme & Charlie that Edward is alive? I hope so, maybe not right away. Until you post again
Date: 13 Feb 2023 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ugh can't wait for Wednesday! Loving this story more and more...
Date: 13 Feb 2023 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Holy Hell!!! I'm excited!!! Is it Wednesday yet? i couldn't help but get a little emotional myself while reading this chapter. I really hope they talk long enough to surmise Caius was behind Carlisle's murder. Did I mention I'm excited!? I can't wait for more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you so much for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next..until you post again
Date: 10 Feb 2023 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11
You just made me giddy to the point of chills running up my arms. Yes!! It's on like Donkey Kong.
Sherry
Date: 06 Feb 2023 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thought I couldn't dislike Caius's character anymore, until this chapter. I want to kill him myself. I can't wait for Edward's return.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Keep writing,when will he Bella again?
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Keep writing,when will he Bella again?
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Keep writing,when will he Bella again?
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2023 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens next. Until you post again
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm grateful for the time jump. The beach scene got to me a wee bit. I keep holding out hope Edward will open up to Jasper and Emmett about what happened and who he truly is. I think the pseudo brothers would make some awesome guards for the prince. I think Edward was imgining Lucy as Bella and that's why he put up with her so long. Lucy definitely wasn't any good for him. I'm dying for more.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2023 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..well done..unil you post again
Date: 30 Jan 2023 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
I kinda thought Edward would end up with Emmett and Jasper, but when you interduced them in this chapter and their eating habits I cracked up. I couldn't help but imagine Timon & Pumbaa. Will you be time jumping a little here and a little there to get us up to Edward's return? I'm kinda holding out for Bella to accidentally running into Edward when they a little older.
Sherry