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Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2024 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 51

Loving the story. Thank you. Waiting For more.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2023 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 51

I wish I had seen this continuation story earlier.
I thoroughly enjoyed catching up with LawyerWard and Business Girl Bella.
They have come a long way since her early days at the firm.
Will there be a third installment? Your sign off eluded to the possibility. Hope so………

Reviewer: Frosticles Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 51

Aww what a fab tale.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Thank you for a lovley story.  I really enjoyed it. Bravo!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2023 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 51

These two...   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2023 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 51

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the next part 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2023 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 50

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2023 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 50

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2023 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2023 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 50

Glad they discussed "someday".   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thank you for the update. Well done. Until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2023 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 49

:) 

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2023 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 49

I love it. Ding dong - the witch is dead! Well, dead to them! And lava cake sounds yummy...

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2023 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 49

Edward and Bella so so so deserve some time to relaz together and get better acqyainted.  ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2023 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 48

Thank you for the update..I loved this chapter. Edward got to take Bella away & she is enjoying herself.  Well Done.. Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 48

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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 48

Thanks for the update. I'm glad you post on multiple formats especially since FF is being quirky. 

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 48

That little minx, Bella...she knows what she's doing to him - lol! Thanks for the update. I'm glad you post at different sites, or we'd never have been able to read this one today the way fanfic. net is acting! 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2023 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 48

Bella and Edward's get away is going very well.   ;)     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2023 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 48

Nothing is better than a full body massage.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 47

They are both so patient and comfortable and loving with each other.   :)    Sigh ....      I'm jealous of fictional characters.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2023 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2023 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 46

Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2023 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 46

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2023 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

Edward seems to have his technique of easing Bella into surprises down.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2023 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 45

Thank you for the update..the witch is gone.  YAY!! until youi post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2023 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 45

It sounds like Jasper was very entertained.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2023 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2023 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 44

I could feel the whole room breathe a sigh of relief.   The whole building probably will when it finds out that she is finally gone.    :)     

Iwonder what Edward is planning now.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2023 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 43

Bella was Edward's cheerleader at their lunch.   He needed a pep talk.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2023 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2023 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 42

Hmm....   But will Alice's added information change the waste removal plan in any way?   LOL    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2023 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2023 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 41

Hopefully they can get rid of her now.   ;)   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2023 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 41

Thank you for the update..She gotta go. I like that they're  taking out thed trash 😂😂😂until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2023 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

Rebeccais evil?  ignorant?    I wonder which one describes her better.    If it's both....lord help that firm/      But smart and evil might be more difficult to deal with.    We'll see.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

Rebeccais evil?  ignorant?    I wonder which one describes her better.    If it's both....lord help that firm/      But smart and evil might be more difficult to deal with.    We'll see.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2023 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2023 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thank you for the update.  Well done, The fight is on. Until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2023 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2023 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 39

Bella nipped Edward's silent temper tntrum in the bud.    LOL     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mousekemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2023 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 39

You are killing me!  What did that shrew do?!?!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2023 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 38

Everyone at the firm fighting together should be able to get rid of re-bitch.    But she is probably going to make it ugly before she goes.   

Shrew indeed....  

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2023 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2023 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 37

Starting out to be a great day for Bella and Edward...   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2023 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

Thank you for the update..well done. Bella will get her own space. Although I don't know for how long lol Like Edward said closer. I guess it's to soon to move in with him. until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2023 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

Thank you for the update..well done.  Rebitch is out.  YAY!!!..until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2023 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 36

Renee and Charlie even seem to have jumped on the "let's get rid of re-bitch" band wagon.   But I jumped on long ago.   ;)

I love Bella's parents getting to know all of Bella's co-workers.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2023 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2023 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2023 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 35

Re-bitch is having a feeling the firm wants her gone, so she is gonna cover her ass now.   I hope actions up to this point have been documented.

Why the hell did they hire her anyway?    No one every gave a good reason.    The partners themselves are the ones leading the charge to get rid of her now.   shrugs...

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2023 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 34

Thank you for the update..I thought they already got rid of her.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  until you post again

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2023 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2023 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 34

Well....Charlie and Renee are getting to see all of Bella's coworkers and friends interact.     Hopefully they are getting along with everyone.

Now Carlisle and Jamie need to send the shrew packing or fire her ass finally.    Ugh...

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2023 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 33

Thank you for the update..well done.  until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2023 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 33

The "air" is starting to clear.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2023 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2023 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2023 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 32

It sounds like Charlie and Renee owe Bella an explanation for their 7 year absence in addition to an apology for the previous night.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2023 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 31

Bella and Edward DID have a perfect Saturday morning.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2023 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2023 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

Well....they are both feeling in a much better mood this morning.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2023 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 29

Edward is the best kind of supoort and love for Bella.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2023 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you for the update..well done..Bella got spunk. Her parents have a lot to think about. Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2023 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 28

I'm happy Edward and Bella talked and are getting fed now.    I wonder if Renee let Charlie have it.   Hmmm....     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2023 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 27

Charlie didn't just over step.   He rudely yelled as he walked off the dam cliff.    Renee is probably mortified and will tear into him next.   Can he even learn better behavior?   

Bella will probably apologize to Edward on her dad's behalf, but it isn't her responsibility.    I hope Edward, as a good boyfriend, makes her feel better about the horrible dinner.   And gets her something else to eat.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2023 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2023 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

Good for Bella for drawing that line in a very non-argumentative way.   Hopefully Charlie gets the message and starts seeing his daughter as the grown up that she is.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2023 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you for the update..well ok Bella, I quess she told Charlie.  LOL Until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2023 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

Jasper might be a calm buffer between sibling annoyance with Emmett and Edward.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2023 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2023 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad that they all have each other to blow off steam with.   :)    I do wonder what is up Emmett's ass though.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2023 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 30 Apr 2023 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2023 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

Best boyfriend and dinner chice ever!    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2023 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

At least Bella has competant loyal co-workers, friends, bosses and a great boyfriend.    :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2023 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 21

Go Edward...   Run the hag out of town...    Ugh...    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank You for this chapter! Edward ist great! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2023 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for the update..Rebecca gotta go. Until you post again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

FFS....    Rebecca is a moron.    How did she pass the bar and get hired by the executives?    LOL     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2023 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for writing and sharing.  :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2023 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for the update..well done..I don't  know Carlisle.  She is going to cause trouble..until you post again

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