[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 32
Now Bella has to meet her kiddo. It's going to be so heart wrenching.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 31
I keep meaning to say I think Carlisle will like his nickname the pancake man.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
I still have a bad feeling this is going to be another road block.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yeah York's and his minions need to have their balls removed!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is where the justice system sucks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is where the justice system sucks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Ok.I can take a breath now, Garrett gets it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so glad Sam was not in the hospital!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so.worried she's going to see him in the hospital! Why would Harper not realize Sam would be having surgery.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was just thinking that. Do we even know if that was really sam? And does he escape the hospital? I'm nervous!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my gosh! I wasn't expecting this so soon!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
He's basically a serial killer and that tribal counsel needs to be shot!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for the update..this can be real. There is no way they are married. I hope there is not a marriage license for them. No way. well done. until you post again. Bella has to get herself together to be able to speak on what this man did to her. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
I didn't even think about her not realizing she could shower.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
This guy must have cameras set up and watching from his phone.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh crap! Let's hope he doesn't follow him.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
There might be finger prints on the photos!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that was an extreme response from Peter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder if the baby was still alive when he took it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward and her are so bonded.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Sam needs.to be skinned alive.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Again goose bumps! He might have killed that 10 year old too.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this take charge Jasper!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
I was worried that was the case. So did he sell it?
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope rose remembers someone by that name.
Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 40
Who the hell would marry them? She is a child!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
I wonder if she knows the mans real name? And who was the baby she held?
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was worried she would run.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
I can't wait to see her reaction to Edward!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
The road back to real life is going to be so hard!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have goosebumps reading this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Rose is going to freak when she meets her!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2023 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is it rose's missing sister?
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2023 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 39
Woman. This story has me crying, but I love it. I hope Sam gets locked up and they throw away the key.
Author's Response:
If it helps, I've cried through every chapters. Your tears are mixed with my tears.
Date: 04 Mar 2023 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
I got up this morning hoping there would be an update in my email. I am loving this story. I am glad that she is not upset with Carlisle any more. I truly hope that Marcus can help her. I am also glad that Rosie was honest with her about getting Hope back.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2023 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 39
This is my first review for this story. I promise I will go back and do them all. My plan was to start at the beginning; but this is a special chapter for me.
I am a psychologist and an Art Therapist I truly believe that art heals. We work with dance, clown, paint, movement, theater, music, writing, sculpture... any art element can turn into a healing tool.
Right now I can't find the words to thank you for bringing art therapy into this story. Marcus reminds me of two of my most beloved and dreaded instructors / therapis. They could be the sweetest or the harshest, they always knew what was needed. I can't wait to read how Marcus and Bella's journey will be. For me it will be amazing, painful, joyful, heartbreaking, inspiring, moving... the list goes on...
I will keep my promise and review every single chapter. I just need sometime, RL and feelings will slow me down.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I have done a lot of research for the type of therapy for her, and I want to donit justice. So thank you for your kind Words.
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank you for the update..well ddone..until you post again
Date: 26 Feb 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 38
Poor Carlisle. I hope he can make things right with Bella. I also hope Kate can put Sam away for life. Wish he would get the death penalty.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2023 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thank you for the update..this is going to be a hard road for Bella. I don't know if she will get Hope back. I hope they can work something out where Hope is in everyone's life. Bella, Angela & Ben. I guessing the Cullens also. Edward will not leave Bella. Well done. Until you post again
Date: 24 Feb 2023 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 37
Sam has put Bella through hell for 8 years. She is still suffering. I hope to goodness Sam gets tortured and gets what he deserves.
Date: 21 Feb 2023 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 36
Bella is going to need LOTS of help. My heart breaks for her.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2023 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 36
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they're going to do but I hope it works. Marcus, Maggie I hope they can help Bella get Hope back & heal. Until you post again
Date: 19 Feb 2023 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
My heart breaks for ALL of them.
Date: 19 Feb 2023 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
I feel so bad for Bella she wants her daughter back. It's also going to crush Angela and Ben as well I can't wait to see how you take this how far you go. She's going to need lots of there before she gets her daughter back can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Feb 2023 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella needs a lot of mental help. Bless her. My heart breaks for her
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2023 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
Aww thank you for the update..Bella is crushed 😣 I don't know if there was any other way to tell her. I don't know what they're going to do. How does Bella get a chance to see Hope? Until you post again..well done
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2023 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for the update..well done..I don't know what they can do either. I hope there is a way for everyone to be happy. Bella has to get better. until you post again
Date: 10 Feb 2023 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
Bless ALL their hearts. No one really wins in a situation like this.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2023 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update..thank god they found Hope. I hope Bella gets to keep her daughter. Angela & Ben can still stay in Vanessa life but Bella needs her Hope to recover from the hell she'd been in. Until you post again!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm also happy Samm didn't kill the baby.
Date: 07 Feb 2023 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
They found HOPE!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2023 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh my gosh!!!!! I hate it for Ben and Angela but o hope that is Bella's baby girl.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2023 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the update... well done..I sure hope tha that's Hope. I can't wait until the next chapter..until you post again. BRAVO!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my!!!!! Is this Bella's little girl. Did Sam send the bear with the baby?
I am glad that Bella and Rose are starting to have a relationship. They need each other!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2023 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update.. Forks police Arrgg..until you post again
Date: 25 Jan 2023 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am so glad to Jasper lite into the 3 from Forks. I wonder if Jasper will talk to Sam and see if he could possibly get any information out of him. I want to know why Sam did all of what he did. He is just sick.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2023 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow Thank you for the update..I think they have enough info. What if Sam killed hope how is finding her going to help, I guess DNA but Bella would be crushed. Until you post again. I can't wait. They bettere find something they can hold him on.
Date: 22 Jan 2023 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
I want to say WHAT THE HELL????? To Kate. But she was just stating facts. I hope someone in jail kills him.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2023 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for the update..Well done..I don't know why the Forks police felt they had to tell that Bella was found. I agree she needed a little more time..until you post again
Date: 21 Jan 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope Bella will be able to tell everyone what happened to her. Bella needs to know that she NEVER did anything wrong.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2023 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for the update..well done.. I wonder if Edward wll tell Bella how he feels? He knows she is damaged and young, been through hell & back. I hope they can help each other. I want them to find Bella's baby. I hope she is alive & well. can't wait to see what happens next. until you post again
Date: 18 Jan 2023 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward is so sweet. Their age difference is nothing. My husband was 18 and I was 14 when we started dating. Lol. Dated for 4 years, during my high school years and then have been married for 35 years.
Date: 16 Jan 2023 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love love love this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2023 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for the update..Edward & Bella went to the hospital to see James..that was huge for Edward. Maybe he will heal also..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2023 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
New reader to your add story..Well done..let's hope he doesn't get away . No more deaths. If he gets away someone Has to kill him before he Can hurt anyone else. Until you post again. Great story
Date: 13 Jan 2023 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Poor little thing
Date: 13 Jan 2023 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Find that bastard
Date: 11 Jan 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
For some reason I thought Jasper and the others had killed Sam. I hope he doesn't get lose or let out on a technicality. I hope Sam smart's off to the wrong person in jail and is killed.
Date: 08 Jan 2023 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving this!!
Date: 08 Jan 2023 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am loving this story so much. It is like an addiction I can't wait for you to put up another chapter everytime i find one i am so happy. i Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! This story is all I think about!
Date: 08 Jan 2023 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
What????? They got Sam!!!!!!! I can't wait to read about that!!!!!! I want you to know that as soon as I see my update about this story I immediately stop what I am doing and go read this story. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
It will be quite the tale!!! Thank you for all of the reviews.
Date: 07 Jan 2023 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Sam is an evil evil person. He needs to be stopped. I am worried about the Cullens.
Date: 05 Jan 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is so good! Can't wait for the whole story!!
Date: 04 Jan 2023 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella and the whole family are going through so many emotions.
Date: 03 Jan 2023 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no. I am guessing Jacob came looking for Sam and found him but Sam killed Jacob first. Wow, Sam has killed Charlie and Renee, Harry, Billy a d the other little girl he had. Leah and Emily both killed themselves because of what Sam did to them. How many others that we don't know about.