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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2024 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2024 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

The First Gentleman has super sperm. Twins!

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Date: 20 Mar 2024 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

There is always an asshole

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

What a life

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

I want her as President>

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2024 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

John is a tool. it is good Bella has class

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

to close

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thats a lot of work but bwell worth it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

That chapter made me tear up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19

So happy for Alice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Sweet loving this story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

That is the way it should be lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2024 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

So much to handle WOW

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2023 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) Happy Holidays to you 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2023 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2023 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2023 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for the update and at least I know here the reveiews are going through, lol. Caius was not a graceful loser in his race for presidency but in this case the best person for the role was elected by the people, though I do wish you'd written Alabama as a state for President Swan. (lol). Till laters, Pam b

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2023 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 22 Sep 2023 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 27 Aug 2023 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: mystic258 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2023 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

I was 17 the first time I was in NY. My older brother had been home there for 10 years by that point. It didn't matter what direction I looked: those Towers were always there. My second trip I was in my early 30s, on a bus trip, and it was 2003 or 2004. There was still debris where the Towers once stood. I recall walking through a tunnel with news clippings, pictures of the missing, and notes to those lost on a black painted piece of plywood on one side and glass on the other overlooking Ground Zero. Fast forward a couple years and I was in NY for the thrid time, visiting with my brother. The only sign of what once was embodyed in a bronze statue of the world and a plaque. The true memorial hadn't been started yet. We walked along the Hudson River, in Battery Park, and he pointed out the places of triage he passed that day, and told me how close his office truly was to Ground Zero. In those moments I remembered my fear for the two or three days after the attack: there was no communicaton, so I had no clue if my brother was okay. I was lucky. He was lucky. My heart goes out to those that weren't. Thank you. You've told someone's story in this chapter.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2023 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter.  I hope all goes well for Alice's recovery 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2023 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2023 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG ! Your story is wonderful I can't wait to read more. I don't know what else to say but don't stop writing .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2023 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2023 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2023 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 17

FF would not let me post (says I already had) so I'll just do here..lol... I appreciate the update. If things progress in their frienship, will Rosalie be a bridesmaid consideration I wonder? See ya in Minneapolis!!!! Pam b.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2023 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 22 May 2023 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2023 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update. I'm glad Madam President and Edward are offically engaged. I'm hoping Bella will be able to throw Mr. Charles for a loop when the announcemnt is made public. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy Shit

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Alice that sucks

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG fun times a head

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2023 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 10

She know how to get what she wants

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2023 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2023 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I was sweating bullets with that intense chapter. Can't wait to read more soon 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2023 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, I was sweating bullets with that intense chapter. Can't wait to read more soon 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2023 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Alice 

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Date: 03 Apr 2023 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2023 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

Very good 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2023 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love Love your story can't wait for more.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2023 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 11

Keep writing faster please 

Great chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2023 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2023 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

Very good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

Keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2023 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2023 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

Well damn......

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 9

OMG NOOOO

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2023 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loving this story

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

Not nice, don't like cliffhangers

Write faster please 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2023 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter, keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2023 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

Very good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2023 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

She needs him more now than ever

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Date: 05 Feb 2023 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

She is so lonely

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2023 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

There has to be away

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2023 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very very good 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2023 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2023 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sad, keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: gajujubee Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2023 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can"t wait to read more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) Merry Christmas to you 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my keep on writing faster please 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

He is in deep shit

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2022 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well damn....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting storyline keep on writing 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2022 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wow so many changes

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2022 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

loving it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2022 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2022 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds great thanks so much

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2022 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter and I'm looking forward to following along. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2022 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

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