[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 2:48 AM Title: Captive
Super sexy and naughty, loved every minute of it.Great story.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:50 AM Title: Captive
I loved it, it's beyond hot! It sizzled and smoked! Thanks for writing. =) K
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:01 PM Title: Captive
I loved this. Loved the Bella and Edward. This was hot and amazing.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:04 PM Title: Captive
That was incredibly hot! I want Edward as my bartender! (Though he wouldn't be tending the bar so much since he'd be tending to ME... A girl can dream, right?)
I loved this story, and it's going on my go-to-lemons list. For when I need a pick-me-up. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol! I know, right? Where's Edward when you need him *sigh*
Anyway, glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review :)
- tanya xo
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 7:13 AM Title: Captive
I want him as my bartender! WOWSA that was FUCKHOT!
Author's Response:
Lol! Glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for the review.
-tanya xo
Date: 28 Jun 2010 3:56 PM Title: Captive
WOW!!! LOTS OF FUN ;) Thanks
Author's Response:
Lol, not a problem and THANK YOU, for reviewing :)
-tanya xo
Date: 17 Apr 2010 10:28 PM Title: Captive
hot!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks a lot for the review ;)
- tanya xo
Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:25 PM Title: Captive
I really like this entry. There are some totally amazing parts that made my tummy clench - always a good sign :o)
“Edward,” he panted, gazing up at me through his long, dark lashes. “When I fuck you, you’ll moan out the name Edward. - This almost had me racing to the bedroom! So hot!
I love the use of the term "Colossal bulge" in reference to Edward's equipment! (licks lips and sighs)
“Impatient would be fucking you on this doorstep - Oh yes please Edward, right here right now!! Would be the standard response from me!!
I liked how you put in there about the sunscreen being on the bed. Of course this is a pre-requisite of the comp and you snuck it in there at a crucial point. Pure brilliance!!
I really like the Romeo & Juliet quotes. Edward is often compared to Romeo and of course the story between him and Bella is forbidden too, so to hear him quote a Romeo verse is absolute win. I adored it.
I really thought the beginning part with Rosalie was so sexy and then the smut itself was really well detailed. The descriptions left little to my imagination, and I thoroughly enjoyed it!! lol
Excellent one shot, Tanya, I hope people don't forget to review. You've set the bar for the competition with this one.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Captive
That was great! Very hot. I love how discriptive of everything you are. Amazing!
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks a lot! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ;)
- tanya xo
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:58 PM Title: Captive
He could capture me any time Fuck I would like some of that.
Author's Response:
You and me both *sigh* Thanks for the review!
- tanya xo
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:11 PM Title: Captive
Great!! The lemony gallore left me panting! ;)
Marianne
Author's Response:
Ah, so my evil plan worked ;) Thanks a lot for reviewing! I appreciate it.
- tanya xo
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Captive
good one shot really enjoyed it
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it :) Thanks for the review.
- tanya xo