Date: 24 Oct 2022 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my!!!! Why didn't she remove his mask and find out who he was? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well......the end was explosive!!!!!
Date: 04 Oct 2022 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
So glad Bella got her chance with Tito.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ok, I am ready for them to get Quinn back and put Holden in his place.
Date: 04 Oct 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
So glad Quinn is not being tortured. He seems to be doing ok.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Tito is making me nervous. I hope all the Cullens come back home.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
He finally got Holden!!!!!! Lol.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Holden is still an ass.
Date: 03 Oct 2022 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
Such anguish.
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Was not expecting that lol
Date: 01 Oct 2022 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella's radar is still going off and I'm still suspicious as hell. Hmmm..... I think Holden might have even had a fake explanation ready if he was caught with that phone. I'm becoming extreme paranoid of your characters. LOL
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 01 Oct 2022 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Keep writing faster please
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, what happened to their son????
Date: 18 Sep 2022 3:14 AM Title: Prologue
Oh I can't wait. I love all your other stories.
Date: 17 Sep 2022 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hopefully Edward's devil side will be even better to kick kidnapper ass now. ;) Dam!
I'm still sus as hell of Holden. Hmmm.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Sep 2022 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, keep writing
Date: 30 Aug 2022 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can I ask a question? Why is all the languages on here every chapter? Just wondering. Please write a new chapter soon
Date: 27 Aug 2022 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good riddens to the ass hole
Date: 26 Aug 2022 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Tito is a smarmy asshole that didn't think he would get caught not apologizing or attacking Bella. He sure didn't expect her to kick his ass. What a douche....
And Holden, af all people, is guarding him?? I'm sus as hell. Hmmm....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Aug 2022 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
my heart is breaking for them
Date: 11 Aug 2022 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad to see a new chapter, keep on writing
Date: 11 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wondeer what Holden gets out of mocking Bella and Edward. Hmmm.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
What Quin is doing is important and someone has to do it, but it sure seems like he is having regrets and missing his wife and daughter.
Hopefully everyone working with him is loyal.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 01 Jul 2022 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
That Ass is going to get shot in the face he has been warned lol
Date: 29 Jun 2022 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Is that Tito dude really that much of a sexist, harassing pig? Or is he testing Bella in some jerkish way? Either option is not cool. So maybe it's something else. Hmmm....
Edward and Bella both, are going to have to be brutal to get through this.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 15 Jun 2022 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
They will be ready to kick ass
Date: 15 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love that Edward surprised the trainers too. James defintely had that ass whoopin' coming. :)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Jun 2022 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward is scared for his wife..but Edward will succeed since it's his family
Date: 05 Jun 2022 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yes James is a dick lol can't wait for next chapter
Date: 31 May 2022 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holden is definitely an ass. Ugh.... Hopefully they all get bulked up and/or trained up to go to the middle east. It sure will be different. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 25 May 2022 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thnk you for the update..well done..until you post again. great story
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Thanks so much for reading!
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