[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2022 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 31
Overall, this was a lovely story. However, the writing needs a great deal of work. It lacks descriptors and details, so I had no idea what the characters were thinking or feeling, how we got from one point to another, or what the location(s) were like. Descriptive Words: Adjectives, Adverbs, & Participles.... https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/word-lists/list-of-descriptive-words.html
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2022 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm not usually into reading stories like this. But I loved this story. I've read most of your stories and love them all. Thanks for being a gifted writer.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2022 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm not usually into reading stories like this. But I loved this story. I've read most of your stories and love them all. Thanks for being a gifted writer.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2022 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm not usually into reading stories like this. But I loved this story. I've read most of your stories and love them all. Thanks for being a gifted writer.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2022 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for a wonderful story well done
Date: 02 Oct 2022 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thanks for sharing this story with us. This is a lovely ending.
Sherry
Date: 02 Oct 2022 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love them so much
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2022 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
:) loved this story
Date: 26 Sep 2022 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
Life's full of changes.
Sherry
Date: 26 Sep 2022 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love them so much I dont want them to go lol
Date: 20 Sep 2022 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good riddance to the Kings, but something tells me we've not heard the last of them, or at least James. The incident with Mary Smithers made me think about how back in those days something like what happened to her ruined a good woman's reputation and standing.
Sherry
Date: 18 Sep 2022 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love them and will be sad when they say goodbye
Date: 16 Sep 2022 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
I love when a community pulls and works together to take care of each other's needs. E/B have a lot of family and friends to help them recover.
Sherry
Date: 16 Sep 2022 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
So happy for them
Date: 16 Sep 2022 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
Relax folks Kit was in the wrong not you folks. Smile you are all alive.
Date: 14 Sep 2022 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
This could have been worse. He could have killed Caroline as well.
Date: 14 Sep 2022 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good riddance Vic Kitt. Good thinking on Bree's part and got to give Alister his kudos for shaking down Edward and putting him in place.
Sherry
Date: 14 Sep 2022 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
If your going to be shot the liver is the place lol. Bree was amazing and Alistair is a good man. love it
Date: 14 Sep 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Baby so exciting
Date: 13 Sep 2022 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Things are heating up in Rosewood. Vic Kitt is about to make himself known and I can hardly wait for the showdown. Miss Bella learning to shoot will come in handy soon enough.
Sherry
Date: 13 Sep 2022 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Life stands still for no one.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2022 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella is trying her best to be brave..until you post again
Date: 28 Aug 2022 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
love them so much
Date: 28 Aug 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thinga have went too easy for a while now. Something is about to give.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2022 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
Date: 21 Aug 2022 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Something big coming to Rosewood?
Sherry
Date: 18 Aug 2022 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bree is home and a blessing
Date: 18 Aug 2022 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Family means everything
Date: 18 Aug 2022 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
so glad he is home
Date: 17 Aug 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
Divine intervention, indeed.
Sherry
Date: 13 Aug 2022 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
Keep on writing
Date: 13 Aug 2022 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bree could make Bella a great housemaid.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2022 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
Date: 06 Aug 2022 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
She's determined to not let her attack/kidnapping deter her from her duties. She's a strong woman and quite capable of many things. Edward should be proud.
Sherry
Date: 30 Jul 2022 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Never a dull moment in Rosewood.
Sherry
Date: 22 Jul 2022 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
She misses him so
Date: 22 Jul 2022 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
She wants all to feel welcome
Date: 22 Jul 2022 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
So sweet love them
Date: 21 Jul 2022 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
I keep expecting Vic to appear and abduct Bella without anyone knowing it happened. Good chapter, thank you.
Sherry
Date: 19 Jul 2022 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
As happy as they are right now and things had been going good for a while, I think something bad is about to happen. Time will tell if the King's have anything to do with it.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2022 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for the update..well done
Date: 14 Jul 2022 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
I can just imagine life back then with a day like this.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
They're so cozy in their marital bliss. They're so happy now, I bet something is about to disrupt their happiness.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2022 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thak you for the update..well done..things are moving right along..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2022 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
This wedding and wedding night is perfectly written. It's not overdone as it is in some fics.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2022 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for the update...well done..They are pleased with one another..until you post again
Date: 04 Jul 2022 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
They are finely as one love it
Date: 25 Jun 2022 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
so sweet I'm so excited for them
Date: 25 Jun 2022 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love this fic. The pains they go to make sure they keep appropiate decorum for the time setting of the story. A lot can happy in four days though.
After thinking about Edward getting shot. I'm wondering if the bankers' son is behind it. The banker was pretty insistent she meet his son.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2022 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
aww thank you for the update..well done..to cute..I can't wait for them to be married. until you post again
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2022 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you for the update..yay they are getting married..until you post again
Date: 11 Jun 2022 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why oh why did they shoot him
Date: 11 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
I kinda thought something was going to happen before Edward got back home. A red-headed shooter? Hmm, wonder who that could be.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
Date: 05 Jun 2022 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
Why do I feel like she may have just jinxed them by speaking a little too early.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2022 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..well done..Things are progressing nicely with Edward & Bella. I hope there trip is quick & safe..until you post again
Date: 28 May 2022 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I have a feeling the prisoner escort won't go as smoothly or quickly as Edward thinks it may.
Sherry
Date: 28 May 2022 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
So glad he lisend to Angela
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2022 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..what came over Edward? The cups will do it to you..lol..Bella handle it well. Rosalie is my girl . Edward did remember what happen but when Rosalie got back he knew. lol..Alice reassurred her they would be married in the spring. I hope that happens for Bella since her first marriage ended so soon after marriage. loving this story until you post again
Date: 24 May 2022 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward needs to give up the drink.
Date: 24 May 2022 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Another great chapter. Thank you.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2022 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
Date: 15 May 2022 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Rosalie and Bella seem like they'll be fast friends. I've wondered if Edward is intimated by Bella's wealth. They could surely buy the land they saw and build their own house big enough for a big family on it. Looking forward to their traveling to the wedding and the Whitlock wedding.
Sherry
Date: 14 May 2022 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
They are getting along so great
Date: 10 May 2022 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I couldn't help but to laugh at Carlisle's conversation.
Sherry
Date: 03 May 2022 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great way to start dating
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2022 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Such an amazing story. I'm a huge fan of westerns and period fics. I'm so excited to see how Edward and Bella continue their courtship.
Sherry