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Reviewer: debslmac Signed

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Date: 05 Sep 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 04 Sep 2021 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

Why is Tanya working there? Seems beyond her faculties. She must be related some how.
After last chapter, it took me a bit to figure out the conversation was between Bella and Emmett. Reread beginning once that was established.

Reviewer: Ranrk Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2021 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Like it..!

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Date: 31 Aug 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

Reviewer: Moltz Signed

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Date: 31 Aug 2021 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is Bella equally affected by Edward's presence?
Will she ward off advances from every potential suitor?
Are Edward's feelings for Isabella unrequited?
What will be the tipping point in their davor? The Christmas party?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed

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Date: 29 Aug 2021 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Sir....seems to stir up something for the brooding Mr. Cullen.
Emmett seems to be a good friend as well.
Jasper's position confuses me a bit. Is he a subordinate to Isabella or and equal? He has his own title but seems to be her assistant?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed

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Date: 29 Aug 2021 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 25 Aug 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love me some Older-Ward!
Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed

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Date: 24 Aug 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more

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