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Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2023 12:50 AM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

I really enjoyed this story and have read it several times now. You are incredibly talented and I would love to see more crossovers!

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2023 6:04 PM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

I really enjoyed this story and have read it several times now. You are incredibly talented and I would love to see more crossovers!



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Thanks xx

Alexis

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2023 2:17 AM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

I really enjoyed this story and have read it several times now. You are incredibly talented and I would love to see more crossovers!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm so glad you have enjoyed it many times, thank you xx

Alexis

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 9:37 PM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

I LOVE reading your stories. I have been meaning to leave a review for the last several chapters, but I got so into this story that I kept reading and forgot! Hope this finds you having a good day, and can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I've had a great month off trying to write more stuff and it will be posted as soon as it's done xx

Alexis

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2022 8:17 PM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

I LOVE reading your stories. I have been meaning to leave a review for the last several chapters, but I got so into this story that I kept reading and forgot! Hope this finds you having a good day, and can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

So glad you enjoyed it enough to forget about reviewing, that makes it all worth while.

I do that to and then have to go back and let the author know it was good lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2021 9:35 AM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

That was a great feel good ending to your story.     

You could have taken it 50+ chapters more if you followed "The Originals" plotline outward.    LOL    But I loved Peter's hints to those events and how they will be changed, because of Bella and Ava.

You could even come back to this story eventually and do a sequel if you wanted.   :)

For now, I'm enjoyinging the idea of everyone branching out on their own and living their sexy lives.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed it all and yes there would be to much stuff to wade through.

If anyone knew what mught happen it would be Peter xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2021 10:50 PM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

Thanks for writing and sharing.  Loved it.

 



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Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2021 7:18 PM Title: Ready To Blow This Town

Loved it! thanks for your hardwork, I hope in the future you continue it.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you liked it, not sure if there will ever be more, the Originals is so convaluted lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 11:44 PM Title: A Place For Everyone And All That

Love Elena being put in her place. 



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Thanks,

I didn't like her in TVD, a little to entitled for my taste, oh and whiny lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2021 2:28 AM Title: A Place For Everyone And All That

I think the plans about who is going where and when they are going are great.    'Most' everyone will be happy.

Maybe you will write Niklaus finding someone too since he is being so kind and helpful.   ;)

Elena, of course, is showing her bratty colors.   I'm sure she WILL try to involve Bonnie to do her bidding.    Hopefully Bonnie gets sufficiently threatened about acting on Elena's behalf.    But honestly, I think some kind of spell (a painful one LOL) will have to be put on Bonnie and Elena to not 'mess' with Leah or Damon.     We'll see.

I would love if Ava figured out a way that anyone (even human) had to be invited (or re-invited) each time into Damon and Leah's home.     That would prevent the teen hangout crap.

Thanks for writing and sharing.   :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Niklaus is his own worst enemy and I can see any woman holding him.

I'm sure they'll find a way to put paid to Elena xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2021 6:30 AM Title: The Real Deal

Sounds like the tribe and pack will be stronger for the diversity and trades. Love it. Aww for Charlie



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I think Charlie needs someone, but I'm sure she'll point out a lot of his mistakes with Bella to him lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2021 11:36 PM Title: The Real Deal

Great chapter...   Niklaus and Elijah righted so many things with the shifters.     No more gaping at shifter/imprint sex memories, no more thoughts of Leah naked (thanks to Damon), no more Jake involvement and no more cold ones allowed in their area.       All of it just feels right.

I'm giddy imaging Leah putting Elena in her place.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah the pack mind is a bit squicky really. So now everyone except Jake is happy xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2021 4:11 AM Title: For Fork's Sake!

Klaus did a good thing.. Jacob needs to mature.



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Thanks,

Yes, this gives him time, if he is able to learn and grow xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2021 6:12 AM Title: For Fork's Sake!

Wowsers. Charlie being reasonable, Damon gets a mate, and Seth as alpha.   Busy chapter.  Love it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I can see them being a volitile perfect match lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2021 8:28 PM Title: For Fork's Sake!

Charlie was actually being pleasant to Ava, Bella, Elijah and Jasper.    Call me shocked.    I wonder if it will last.

Damon got to be sassy to the shifters, make Leah giggle and found his mate.    I wonder where those two will end up.    

Niklaus coming out of the forest to transfer Jacob's magic/power to Seth was a shocker.    Seth will handle everything beautifully, because he is a mature, kind person.     I worry Jake will still cause problems.    A human Jake could still stalk, harass, maim and murder.    I don't feel safe on your characters behalves yet.

I love that Ava found, opened and has Jasper carry her magic books down the stairs.    Hopefully Ava can really use them.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I can't see Damon settling in Washington, so Leah will get to be free of Sam at last xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2021 4:08 AM Title: Is Seeing Double, Likely To Be Trouble

Ava and Jasper are almost as close as Bella and Elijah at this point.   I'm happy for them.    Ava will, hopefully, find a spell book in the attic and be able to use it in whatever way she wants.     Poor Jasper is worried she won't want to change to be with him for eternity.    I want her to be able to keep her witchy abilities too though.   :)

Emmett, Niklaus and Rebeccah have some sweet, loving ideas about their current family/group now.    Emmett's thoughts about Bella not actually living with either group are spot on.    

I love the thought of Elijah relaxing enough to laugh and be his former/human self now, with less worries.    Elijah and Damon joking together was great.

Jacob has totally lost the plot and should probably be put down like a rabid animal.    ugh....

Thanks for writing and sharing.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Lot's happened and more to come, Jake will get sorted but not how people think xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2021 2:27 PM Title: Is Seeing Double, Likely To Be Trouble

Wowsers. Jake is certainly delusional.  Hopefully Charlie will realize all his mistakes and own up to them.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah he's a child in a man's body xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 10:47 PM Title: Well Dang, I Wasn't Expectin' That

Twins.. well did not see that coming.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I like to keep you all on your toes lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2021 10:08 PM Title: Are All Towns Interchangeable?

Hmm I think after what Peter said ... Jasper.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, Jasper deserves a loving soulmate sfter all Alice xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2021 1:54 AM Title: Well Dang, I Wasn't Expectin' That

Glad they are learning about Ava more.  Good Rose learned what she did wrong.  Ooh Charlie has the grimoire.... 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

A hidden treasure handed down, nobody had seen it or knows it real worth xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2021 10:11 PM Title: Well Dang, I Wasn't Expectin' That

Well I can see and understand why everyone was shocked about Ava's appearance during Bella's change, even Bella and Ava.   ;)

There are gonna be some stumbles and miscommunications, but everyone in the group has good intentions and is willing to learn and change.    For example, Rose offering Ava the 4 types of coffee the second time around.

Elijah and Bella are bonded now and are super close.    (Fade to black sexy time-not ok Alexis-LOL)    I hope that means that Elijah is shielded constantly now.     We'll see.....

I'm enjoying Niklaus' teasing relationship with Bella and his with Elijah too.    Maybe we will get to see the other 2 Mikaelsons up and out of their coffins??    Maybe??   

Ava and Jasper are definitely drawn to each other.     I'm kind of nervous about poor Ava having to go see Charlie all by herself to get her book.   I'm sure Jasper will go with her, but stay hidden??

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Lots of changes for them all and new things to learn.

Charlie won't know the difference unfortunately xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 5:51 AM Title: Smoke & Mirrors

Tough gal



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She has to be thrown into another new world xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2021 4:00 AM Title: Life's What You Make It

Sorry reading and not reviewinf! Good story



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you're enjoying it that much lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 3:38 PM Title: Are All Towns Interchangeable?

Holy unexpected twist Batman!   I didn't expect Bella to expel an unborn twin sister.    Shocker for everyone in the room......

Is Ava going to match up with Jasper?    Is that what Peter's cryptic comment meant?    Hmmm....    I do hope so, but you like to surprise us.   ;)

Bella is definitely not impressed with any of the Mystic Falls folks.   I see her and Elijah booking it out of town soon.     Or maybe that's just wishful thinking.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yep, it just came to me as a sudden thought and I liked the idea. She'll be for Jasper cause he deserves it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2021 12:49 PM Title: Are All Towns Interchangeable?

Love Bonnie being put in her place and Caroline too.  I'll get back to watching TVD one of these years.

hmmm Ava.  Flip Flopping on who he should be with.  Think it might be too soon for Jasper.... but then again, maybe that is just what he needs.  ACk.  you make my brain go crazy woman.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I wasn't planning it, but the idea just popped into my head and well why not lol, it will be Jasper cause I love him too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 9:59 PM Title: Are All Towns Interchangeable?

Jasper! Always loved the thought of her having a twin, and being Jasper's mate 

Thanks for this amazing story



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you like it, it was just a flash of inspiration and Jasper deserves someone who would love him xx

Alexis

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2021 9:11 PM Title: Are All Towns Interchangeable?

Jasper deserves someone new and innocent after putting up with Alice! JMO



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you like it and yes he does xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 2:19 AM Title: Being Me & Really Loving It

Love them getting alone time while seeing the little things on the trip.   Gotta love Damon



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Daman is a blast, a shit-trirrer but a blast all the same xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2021 1:59 AM Title: Family Reunions Can Be Tense

Wonderful chapter.  Bella and her family are awesome.  Love them all backing her up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes without the meddlers they are just nice vampires enjoying life as best they can xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2021 5:51 AM Title: Being Me & Really Loving It

I love that everyone (almost) is learning a little or a lot of something.    Carlisle doesn't seem to be learning anything yet.   LOL

So Caroline is the Mystic Falls witch in your story instead of Bonnie.    hnmmm....     I like the twist.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

No it was a deliberate mistake as everyone will see next time. Just setting them up to be childish and immature xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 8:09 PM Title: I Never Wanted To Be A Killer

Very thoughtful gifts.  Love the boots.  Elijah was def caught off guard.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

they are all learning if you give someone something they need it is recieved with gratitude xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2021 1:53 AM Title: Family Reunions Can Be Tense

The little group getting the jump on Niklaus surprised him, but Bella's reactions and non-reactions to him shocked him even more.    Being wary of Bella would be OK, but he, hopefully, will stop being a dick to her.

I think the group coming to Mystic Falls is going to surprise the scooby gang.   Jasper will not put up with their shit.   LOL    I wonder how Niklaus will get along when he shows up.    Is he going to live with that whole big group?

Marcel isn't going to lick his wounds quietly forever.   I'm worried about him.   Hmmm.....

Bella and Elijah, I'm guessing, had a great time in New York.   She liked the accountant and his wife, but no sexy time?   Fade to black, really??    LOL     I am happy for Bella getting a stress free, work free and lovely birthday.

Surely Elijah and Bella aren't going to live/stay in that big house in Mystic Falls with everyone?    They both already know that they like their alone time, right??

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

They will all be together in Mystic Falls, but you're right Bella won't want to be staying with them all.

Of course she could block then and lock them out of their private space xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 7:47 PM Title: I Never Wanted To Be A Killer

Bella and Elijah are going to get their trip it seems.   They are still planning ahead after the witch 'incidenrt'.    He really helped Bella emotionally deal with her actions like she has helped him with his 'red door' curse.   

Rose, Emmett, Jasper and even Rebekkah gave Bella nice birthday gifts that she actually wanted or would use soon.   :)   And Elijah gave the cold ones sun rings to show his thanks for helping Bella and him.   I can see a future where they could all be friends eventually.

Hopefully Niklaus joins them and doesn't try to cause problems.   Everyone, even him, needs more friends.

Marcel just needs to stay wherever he is hiding.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes everything is going fairly smoothly for now xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Motomary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 4:19 PM Title: It's Still A Cage, Even When You Can't See The Bars!

Awesome story.  I’ve been putting off reading this to wait for more to be completed..sort of savoring and anticipation.  After reading a few other authors, I couldn’t stand It anymore and had to succumb and catch up on the events in the latest chapters.

I know very little about the vampire diaries and the originals stories and lore.  So, I felt like Bella (and the rest of the Cullens due to Carlisle’s lack of communication) in learning about this part of their world in this story.  Your way of making the information flow and avoiding long tedious explanations is wonderful    Thanks for another great story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you decided to give it a go xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2021 4:32 AM Title: Smoke & Mirrors

wowsers.  Yea disposing of Alice is the best thing.  Aro would just be nasty.   Go Bad Ass Bella!!!.  At least Becka is coming around.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I worked myself into a corner with Alice and she had to go lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2021 1:17 AM Title: Smoke & Mirrors

Yay!   Jasper finally had enough of Alice's bullshit.    How strange that her mind just poofed out of existence though.    I'm glad they destroyed her body.

Jasper was not impressed with Rebekah's entitled attitude.   

Rebekah, however, was impressed by him, Emmett, Rosalie and most importantly, Bella.    Maybe she will start making some changes within herself.

I'm so relieved that Elijah is awake and seems OK.   He and Bella are on the same page about things even before they have a chance to discuss.

Those rogue witches knew what they did and to whom.   They had to know their deaths would come soon.    Hopefully Bella doesn't waste time feeling guilty over getting revenge.   They would have kept on attacking if they weren't stopped.

Marcel knows he's up shit creek now.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She'll struggle for a bit but will bouce back. I just had to get rid of Alice she was a waste of space xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:20 AM Title: There Must Be A Joke In Here Somewhere!

Glad they are not all giving Alice a free pass as it were. At least Charlie realizes his screw up finally.  Glad they got through the red door people together. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

yes everyone needs to see, improvement doesn't equal forgiveness and never will xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2021 2:03 AM Title: There Must Be A Joke In Here Somewhere!

Hopefully Bella's healing Elijah a little bit.   Maybe he is at least seeing the past differently now.....especially with the ghost of Tatia....spooky....    Jasper helping Bella to help Elijah is really sweet.

I agree with Rose and Emmett about not trusting Alice one little bit.   She's sus as hell.    LOL

Charlie finally learned his lesson...too little too late though.    Jacob will never learn anything I fear.

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I think a confrontation with Elijah and Jake will be on the cards xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2021 6:43 PM Title: Blood Is Thicker Than Water, My Ass!

ROFL for Rose's opening volley.  LOVE IT.  Hopefully E will learn not to hide stuff from her.  He does have a past to overcome so hopefully B cuts him a little slack.  

Oh Marcel... you've really f'ed up and pissed off the wrong person.  

ROFL for the little picture for Jake.  He is so delusional. Loved Jasper putting him in his place.  Buh Bye puppy.




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Thanks,

He's retreated for now but no doubt he'll try again lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2021 6:23 PM Title: Life's What You Make It

Love Bella putting her in her place.  Nice that B has people watching her back.  Charlie is really a twit.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes the me, me , me culture ain't confined to the vampires lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2021 5:56 PM Title: Blood Is Thicker Than Water, My Ass!

Dear lord, seeing and smelling that Bella had sex with Elijah still probably won't be enough for creepy Jacob.     Bella and her new crew haven't seen the last of him, I bet.    Ugh...

Poor Elijah....   I hope everyone's hints/tips for Bella will allow her to help him.

It sounds like Rebeccah might be on Bella's good side now.   A common enemy will do that.    Marcel fucked up.    Bella is pissed.

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Once Elijah is aware again New Orleans gonna get a shake up lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2021 5:48 AM Title: Life's What You Make It

Rebekkah, Marcel and Jacob all need to grow up emotionally and get a dam life.    Ugh....      Charlie is ridiculous and hopefully realizes the magnitude of his fuck up with his daughter.

I have high hopes for Niklaus.   He's investigating things for himself and not believing every word Rebekkah spouted at him.     Maybe he'll meet Bella with an open mind??

I'm looking forward to Bella/Elijah meeting Peter/Charlotte.    They could be good friends.

Elijah and Bella were totally romantic, swoony and hot in this chapter the way they supported and loved each other through the chapter's conflicts.

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

When you live so long good friends are important and Elijah know he can depend on Peter xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2021 11:02 AM Title: Why Am I Always The Grown-Up

Well the Cullens are officially parting ways.   I feel bad for Esme being stuck with Carlisle.    Can she whip him into line?

Rebeccah seems like a bratty 12 year old.    And by the end of the chapter her maturity just kept getting less and less.   She even contemplated murdering Bella already.    Ugh....     Thank goodness Bella can stop that from happening.... and even if it does happen, her and Elijah have a plan B involving his blood.

Jasper isn't ever gonna trust Alice again, I don't think.    And he shouldn't.

Madame LaRue keeping an eye on things where Bella and Elijah live makes me wary.    Hmmm....

Great chapter....    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Everyone is learning the world doesn't revolve around them and they don't like it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2021 4:48 AM Title: Why Am I Always The Grown-Up

Love the ideas rose and esme came up with for teams helping each other.   Reb is such a nasty piece of work. Sucks when the bullying doesn't work for her. Lol



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Thanks,

She's a spoilt brat who's never been told no until now xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2021 10:22 PM Title: How Broad Do They Think My Shoulders Are?

Love the meeting with Ms LaRue. Nice present she gave her.   Carlisle is such a goober.  Love Peter watching out for B.  Loving feisty Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah Peter's being a better friend and he's never met her lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2021 7:51 PM Title: How Broad Do They Think My Shoulders Are?

Wow!   A lot to decompress.....

Carlisle, unintentionally ended his marriage and coven in one conversation.    Is he truly that big of a knuckleheaded idiot?     Peter and Charlotte have his ass figured out apparently.   LOL  

Ms LaRue was touched by Bella/Elijah's gift enough to give her some history and a subtle warning perhaps?

Rebecah's sole mission is to go cause trouble for her brother?   Not ask questions, see what is going on or check on him....but to go stop Elijah's possible new relationship?    That is cold.

I don't blame Elijah for worrying about his famiy's reactions to Bella.   I mean he has lived with them for 1,000 years.   But Bella's stubborness is a new variable for him.   He'll learn not to underestimate her.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Loving that you're enjoying it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: darren81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2021 3:28 PM Title: Schools Out For Ever, Thank God!

great update



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

So glad you're enjoying it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2021 11:25 AM Title: Schools Out For Ever, Thank God!

I like how you write about real people in history, but then make it fictional, but  expanded.  :)

Carlisle should be prepared to be not trusted for quite a long while.

Bella's first time with Elijah was pretty sexy.   They will probably get more and more free with their sexuality.   

I'm relieved that Madam LaRue is going to be civil and polite and invite them over to talk.

Bella graduating early will open the world to her much sooner.  :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I like adding a little realism now and then,

Carlisle is just digging himself a deeper and deeper hole xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2021 2:05 AM Title: Schools Out For Ever, Thank God!

Love Damon.  Interesting backstories.  You go Bella. Yummy lemon



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I like to pad out and make connections where I can xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2021 10:34 PM Title: Lunches, Hunches & Reunions

Marcel really wants to die. Glad b is able to protect them.



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Thanks,

Power has gone to his head lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2021 2:20 AM Title: Lunches, Hunches & Reunions

Bella needs that insurance policy what with Marcel looking to kill her and all.   Grrr...    Not that Elijah or Bella know that or anything though.....

Bella really showed the witches to not mess with her.   LOL

I hope Madame LaRue is going to be an ally and not another enemy.    Bella and Elijah have enough of those.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanksm

Marcal is posturing, he;s forgetting who Elijah is and Madame LaRue will never be  a friend but not an enemy either xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2021 12:56 PM Title: Fathers, Friends & Siblings

Poor Marcus.  Hope that he will get out from under Chelsea's thumb soon. Love he standing up to Charlie 



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Thanks,

Tes time her parents dealised she's an adult now xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2021 11:55 AM Title: Fathers, Friends & Siblings

Bella and Elijah both need to think of themselves more.   I'm happy that they keep finding more and more to love and like about each other.

At least Charlie realized he was taking advantage of his adult daughter's time.   Renee will never see any of her parenting mistakes.

Marcus seems to be heading in the loose canon category direction now, much like Aro.    Hmmm...

Hopefully Edward's death will make Alice learn something for once.

Marcel is a complete ass.   I hope he gets surprised (in a bad way) when he meets Elijah and Bella.  ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you;re enjoying it. Marcal feels wronged and in a way he was xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2021 11:28 AM Title: Just Desserts Or Sour Grapes

I am so relieved that pychopath Edward is gone and ashed.   I was afraid that Aro would try to keep him, and then he would escape.   whew!     :)     Marcus and Caius are relieved too, I think.

Carlisle still has a lot to learn about how Emmett, Rose and Esme want things to go from now on.    I don't trust him at all.    I'm wary about his future reaction to Edward's execution also.

Jasper is not gonna put up with any of Alice's crap.    She is pretty thick headed though.

Elijah and Bella's date was sweet and loving.   But the dry humping in the car was sexy.   It's hot imagining serious Elijah coming in his pants.   ;)   

Thanks for writing and sharing.



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He's not in total control for once and is behaving like a man, not an Original and he likes it lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2021 12:23 AM Title: Just Desserts Or Sour Grapes

Glad Edward's I'd dead. Aro did the right thing in thend;thank goodness. Carlisle does have a lot to answer for. Aww for the car games at the end. 



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A little bloodplay, harmless and erotic lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 7:40 AM Title: When Your Differences, Are Less Different

Edward is one sick puppy if even Aro thinks he is.   ugh....    After hearing everything in his sick head, why would Aro vote to keep him though?   

Bella and Elijah are definitely getting along and understanding each other.   :)

Peter does deserve a break with his Charlotte, but I have a feeling things are about to go to hell in a hand basket.

Jasper and Damon meeting and appreciating each other's military styles was nice to read.   Hopefully they will get to meet again.

I didn't like Marcel on The Originals either.   It seems you're writing him as a douche canoe also.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

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He did feel justified, because they did leave him, but in their defence they thought he was dead,

letting go of his grudge was hard and then it all went pear shaped.

Hated TVD, mainly because Stephan was a Edward wannabe, hate Eddie, hate Stephie, love Jasper, love Damon lol

I appear to like the bad boys, naughty me lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 6:44 PM Title: When Your Differences, Are Less Different

Aro is going to get them all in a world of trouble if he's not careful.  Ah Damon appears....he is a hottie



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yes he is, never liked TVD but him hell yeah xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 11:50 PM Title: Those That Can, Do!

Another information packed chapter....    :)     

So Peter thinks his time helping Bella is done?   Aro's scheming plans will nessitate him having to help Bella/Elijah again, I bet.   Why would anyone even consider keeping Edward, the prick, alive???   Of all vampires???   ugh....   I hope Marcus and Caius keep on top of his scheming ass.

It sounds like Alice isn't sorry for anything she did, she's just sorry her plans didn't work out.   She isn't going to learn, is she?

I like the idea of Kol's penis bed.   ;)    A man would have to be pretty confident in his own cock and how to use it to feel comfortable in a dick bed.   LOL   You might have written Bella with the wrong brother.   wags eyebrows....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



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I think Kol might have been to much for Bella to handle lol. 

The bed is real, it's called the Kamasutra bed and can be googled xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 9:47 PM Title: Those That Can, Do!

Aro is going to get them all killed if he's not careful. At least Alice is finally realizing her huge mistakes. Woo hoo for the V takingdown Edward. 



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Yers it wouldn't have been hars though as he would be to busy postulating to see Alex coming xx

Akexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2021 6:29 PM Title: Quid Pro Quo

Glad the Major is dealing with Alice.   He has a long road ahead of him I think.   Wow Marcus angry is so unusual that the others better take stock.   Aww for Elijah taking care of her scar



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Yes, I always wondered why Carlilse took Edward's word the venom was gone, I'd have cheacked if I'd been a doctor xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2021 9:17 AM Title: Quid Pro Quo

Elijah gave a good dressing down to the Volturi kings about Edward Cullen.    Marcus will hopefully speak up and be more vocal now, and should feel vindicated about his knowledge.     I wonder if Demetri will find and catch Edward.

Esme and Carlisle have a lot of work to do on their relationship.    But Carlisle has a lot of work to do with everyone though.

Elijah healing Bella's wrist was nice and will probably draw them together more in a way.   They sure are learning a lot about each other.

Thanks for writing andf sharing.



Author's Response:

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Happy you're liking it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 1:13 AM Title: How Did It Come To This?

Of course Elijah would know Caius! Can't wait to read more.



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It'a a case of keeping your enemies close and all that xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2021 2:32 AM Title: How Did It Come To This?

Wow!   We even got a Peter Whitlock point of view this chapter.   claps hands in glee...   :)    Peter working with Charlie and then subtlely with Emmett and Rose is making Bella's protection even greater.

Carlisle maybe got wise?   We'll see.    Hmmm....

Alice is not learning very fast.   Poor Jasper/Major....   I so wish he could break his mating bond with her.    shudders....

Bella and Elijah are getting down to the basic information now.   Hopefully they will be able to communicate well and love to be around each other.  

I wonder what exactly Elijah will request from Caius Volturi.    I can't wait to see.     rubs hands together in excitement.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

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Oh I couldn't leave Peter out of it, this is just his cup of tea xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 1:16 PM Title: How Did It Come To This?

So awesome everyone working together to help B.  LOVE Malice being put in her place.  LOL for the Paul/Rachel tidbit.  oooh Elijah knows Caius.....<3 it



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Oh he knows him, but not as friends. Glad you're enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2021 5:01 AM Title: Flying Free, Never Felt So Good

I loved all of the POV's giving us information from all locations/minds.

Charlie, despite not knowing about the supernatural, sure does have Edward and Carlisle figured out.    He undersrtands Bella so well too really.

Bella has a new mystery or two.   Why are the witches attacking her, and why is she attracted to such hot ass vampires?   ;)

Edward is a clueless, delusional moron.    Hopefully it will be a long long time before he gets a hint about Bella's location.

Esme has had enough and has made a stand.   Good for her.....    Will Carlisle ever pull his head out of his ass?    ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

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I'm relly enjoying doing this way too. Lots happening in the next one, hope you like it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2021 7:44 PM Title: Flying Free, Never Felt So Good

Lol for Bella stumping Edwin.  Love Charlie putting him in his place too.  Glad Esme left him.  Totally deserved it too. 



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so glad you;re likking it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TigerBoo2U Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2021 11:43 AM Title: Flying Free, Never Felt So Good

Go Bella! Loving this new story, can't wait for the Mikaelsons to really come in. Loved the whack a witch thing Bella had going on, I found the witches somewhat like the Quiluettes in the series, full of it and interfering in everyone business, so can't wait to see where you go with them.wonder if Bella will mess up the harvest?



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I can do crossover's like you, so might not be to in depth. But I can steal the characters lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 11:53 PM Title: It's Still A Cage, Even When You Can't See The Bars!

Ooohhhh, I love Twilight, of course, but I also love all of the Mikaelsons on The Vampire Diaries and The Originals.

I'm excited that you are setting your own path with Bella and Elijah.    The Original's history (1000 years) and the show WAS very complex, so I don't blame you for choosing to use parts of it that suit your story.

I'm sad that poor Jasper is going to get stuck with Malice.    Even though he is going to take care of Vicky now and deal with Malice too, I still wish a better pairing for him....maybe Rebecah M.??    Hmmm....   

Your Edward is delusional as ever, but also an abusive bastard.   Ugh....    Jasper's idea about Edward's parts being buried all over the world is a great idea.

Peter's advice will probably be a big help to Bella.   I love his character too.

I'm thrilled silly about this story and can't wait for Bella and Elijah to meet.   I wonder how it will happen.   Hmm...   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.   Is it Saturday yet?



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm really enjoying this one and everyone gas something to say, writing chap 3 as we speak, soit's going well.

I never could get into TVD, Stephan reminded me to much of Edward, in looks and morose suffering and I went straight to The Originals and loved it.

Elijah was definitely my favourite character and Marcel as well xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2021 12:45 PM Title: It's Still A Cage, Even When You Can't See The Bars!

Awesome start.  I'm not familiar with the originals but gonna read anyway.

Love me some Major



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, I'm just stealing Elijah and will only give basic backgroung stuff for him and his family.

Glad you like the start xx

Alexis

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