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Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 9:43 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Esme is mama bear!!!!!!!!! Don't mess with her children. 

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2021 9:10 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Esme is all kinds of awesome.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 10:07 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Ugh those two ate disgusting.  Glad Bella and Esme got to hear Edward tell them off and defend B.  Poor Rose having such nasty people in her circle.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Ack he's is Boston.....<biting nails>.

Glad Rose and Em are being open minded. 

Reviewer: AWinglessAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I love this story so far, please update soon

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love Esme and how attentive you made Edward. This was a good chapter 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I can't believe Tia and Leah. Such slutty dresses to Rose's engaggement party. Can't expect better from those two. I'm glad Bella spoke her mind. And Edward gave them a talking to they'll hopefully not forget.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 7:05 PM Title: Chapter Eight

"He" will never admit Bella is not his. I don't think even Edward's collar will stop "him."

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 6:47 PM Title: Chapter Seven

These two just can't get enough of each other. I hope Rose is happy to see her friend happy and doesn't worry too much about the other things.

Reviewer: energizerbunny12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2021 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Nine

oooo... can't wait for the next chapter.  Love how Edward put the twat waffles in their place.  Hope we get to see Esme in action too!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I can't wait to see more of mama Esme. Please update soon.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 2:49 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Oh.....you have to tell us what Esme is going to throw own! Cannot believe Rosalie hasn't seen her bridesmaids dresses!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 2:07 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved it 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 9:00 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Oh, I wish Rose could have seen their dresses...the sluts! It's not always easy to spot the fake friends, especially when they are such great actors. Okay, only around Rose, apparently. Wonder what Esme does to them LOL!

Reviewer: Shruti91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 7:58 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love it can't wait for more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Some of us are wondering why didn't Rose get onto Toa for wearing white and looking like a whore. WOW!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️”’‘

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 2:23 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Can't wait to hear Esme's words to the sluts.  I hope she puts them on notice and actually kicks them out of the wedding party by showing compound video of the sluts to Rose.  Should be fun, huh?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 1:56 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Please tell me we will be privy to the conversation Esme has with the two trollops who pretend to be friends with Rosalie.
Edward is very generous in his outward displays to Bella with gifts and gentle caresses.

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love it! Can't wait to read what Mama Esme says to these two. Thanks for the updates 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 12:56 AM Title: Chapter Nine

I am loving all the characters and the story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 12:12 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter Nine

I hope Esme really lays in to Leah and Tia.  Bella did well at the party.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:36 PM Title: Chapter Nine

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:16 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Do we get to hear what Esme has to say to the2 skanks?

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Love it!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter Nine

OH MY! O.O I love this! ;)

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:47 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I wish Rose would see how her two "friends" really are. I can't for Esme to get a hold of those two whores. Only the bride is supposed to wear white! I don't know who's dress was uglier, Tia or Leah. I think I will go with Tia.
I love that Edward put them in their places.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:46 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I loved it now how will the rest of their evening go

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Time to get out the can of "Bitch be gone".

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter Nine

Ahhh need more

Reviewer: Kreitlow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I really hope you will share the smack down that Esme is going to give those two. Please!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 6:14 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Keep on writing 

Reviewer: Neera_dRD Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 1:36 AM Title: Chapter Eight

OMG!! I'm absolutely loving this!!!!

I got on a 'trip' to re-read some of my all time favorite stories from this site, and I found this new one and the one you just finished. I'm REALLY enjoying it!!

P.S. Just in case you read this... Is there any way you could get the letters in black instead of grey?? I read from this site only on my phone and it kills my eyes. If you can't or don't want to it's ok too I will read this anyway.

All my Love

Neera.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2021 2:29 AM Title: Chapter Eight

WTF!  Him and a cliffhanger. Really?

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Omg loved it

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 2:08 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Omg loved it

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:20 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Will 'he' use the wedding as a distraction and try to abduct Bella?
Shouldn't Edward inform security of the potential threat and show 'his' picture to all?
Not sure Emmett and Rosalie will join the D/s world but they will now be very supportive of Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:28 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Good thing security is being amped up.  

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 10:22 AM Title: Chapter Eight

OHEMGEEE!!! I love this! ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Oh shit!!!!!! Is right. WHO IS HIM??????? It looks like Edward is not going to have to go find "HIM". I think "HIM" is coming to Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 4:15 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Him that’s probably jaspers step brother uuuu I really hope Edward can give this idiot a taste of his own medicine he’s delusional if he thinks Bella will be he’s ever again

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:08 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Trying to picture Emmett as a dom and Ros as a sub.

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️’”‘

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Eight

I hope Edward can keep Bella safe. I would love to see Edward and/or Bella do unto him what he did unto Bella.

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:42 AM Title: Chapter Eight

I hope Edward makes "Him" pay brutally! Please update soon.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter Eight

ut oh

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:16 AM Title: Chapter Eight

:) 

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 11:44 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Every chapter leaves me dying for more! So very good!

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 11:42 PM Title: Chapter Eight

I love to know who the "him" is, very mysterious and intriguing!!!!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Damn paps! A plague on the people they stalk but a perverted kind of blessin' for those of us who can't get enough of a certain 35-year-old hottie who shall remain nameless *snort!*

Not sure Emmett and Rosalie will eventually join the community but it will be fun seein' their reactions at the club LOL!

As for the sicko watchin' the news, he needs a one-way ticket to hell!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Oh snap will Edward be able to keep Bella safe 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 10:35 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Cannot wait to see what comes next

Reviewer: dana2928 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Loving this story.  Please make the font bigger.  I tried and it wouldn't let me.

Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Oh Damn....."he" will be sorry he found "her" because her new dom will bury him, literally!

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:29 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Love it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2021 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I'm all caught up.
Enjoying the quick pace of this story.
Thought Emmett might become an issue but Rose is the balancing act.
The wedding venue is at Carlisle and Esme's, so that leaves Edward's place free for them to find time together.
21 million reminders of what that bast*#@ got away with; Edward's money better be able to buy some piece of mind by bringing down the family and their attorney.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2021 4:19 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I'm all caught up.
Enjoying the quick pace of this story.
Thought Emmett might become an issue but Rose is the balancing act.
The wedding venue is at Carlisle and Esme's, so that leaves Edward's place free for them to find time together.
21 million reminders of what that bast*#@ got away with; Edward's money better be able to buy some piece of mind by bringing down the family and their attorney.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2021 12:49 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Love love your story can't wait to read more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 12:39 AM Title: Chapter Seven

:) 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2021 1:15 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I've never had sex in the dressing room either!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ’❤️’”‘

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 5:19 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved it ❤️❤️❤️❤️ But I am kind of worried that since he shall not named yet might show up at the party or his parents. Can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 4:20 AM Title: Chapter Seven

You are truley gifted.  You never disapoint.  This story is awesome.  Thank you!!!  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 2:41 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Thank you for the update..Well done..they are going to gave a very nice time at party..Edward is very generous.  I can't wait for his reaction to the dress.  Until you post again 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter Seven

I'm loving this so far! I can't wait to see more possessive Edward. Please update soon.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 10:33 PM Title: Chapter Seven

OMG! ;)

Reviewer: HanaYoshiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 10:24 PM Title: Chapter Seven

❤❤❤❤❤❤

Reviewer: HanaYoshiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Six

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 9:16 PM Title: Chapter Seven

She will be literally dripping in diamonds!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 7:55 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Edward and Bella have the best of both worlds...well, they will as soon as he gets that gorgeous collar on her!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 6:58 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Hot damn they are on fire

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 6:54 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Hot HOT!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 6:34 PM Title: Chapter Seven

They are just too sweet together.  Sadly I think the slimeball will show up at some point.  Rose is such an awesome friend.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 6:19 PM Title: Chapter Seven

another great chapter and I love the new Banner

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 5:07 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Gorgeous dress!!

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 5:01 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved the chapter. I am glad that Rose can see how happy Edward is making Bella.  I can't wait for Edward to see Bella in her red dress and I love that he wants to give her a "girfirend" necklace too.  Bella is going to be so gorgeous I'm afraind she may steal Rosalie's thunder as the bride to be. LOL 

 

Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: cbmorefie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 4:01 PM Title: Chapter Seven

So good!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 3:12 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Can't talk right now, please leave a message after the beep.  Beep.  *runs to the cold shower*

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 2:46 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Loved it. Sexy as hell

Reviewer: mnnlisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 2:25 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Glad Edward to agreed to call her Bella during the non D/s times.  He has completely fallen for her.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2021 1:52 PM Title: Chapter Seven

HOTTTTT!!!!!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2021 8:25 AM Title: Chapter Six

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2021 7:53 AM Title: Chapter Five

I am so enjoying this story. Awesome chapter

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter Six

Loved it can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2021 10:12 AM Title: Chapter Six

Uh, oh.  Rose and Emmett in the playroom.  Who is the sub???

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2021 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Six

If they decide to pursue this I can see Rose being the Dominant and Emmett being the submissive. Now at least Edward and Isabella don't have to hide their relationship from Emmett and Rose. He treats her very well.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2021 8:01 AM Title: Chapter Five

Wow. Mommy and Daddy wanted to make sure she didn't forget that she lost not only with how "He" hurt her, but how much. I hope Edward can help her heal. I also really hope Edward can find some way to make James pay.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2021 12:03 AM Title: Chapter Six

Thank you for the update..Well done..the cat's out the bag now..until you post again

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 5:14 PM Title: Chapter Six

I hope Emmett and Rose don't engage in s D/S relationship so that stays as something special between Bella and Edward. I can't wait to see more of Edward and Bella's relationship blossoming. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 3:16 PM Title: Chapter Six

I am so loving this story. I have only one critcism... the banner and some of the other photoshopped pics are horrible the banner makes Edward and Bella look like little people with gigantic heads as well as one in this chapter. Writing is great but proportions in photos need to be better.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 2:41 PM Title: Chapter Six

:):)

Reviewer: Daiseys Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 2:26 PM Title: Chapter Six

Rose will be the dominant 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 12:44 PM Title: Chapter Six

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter Six

Rose will be the dom

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter Six

Rose will be the dom

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter Six

Rose will be the dom

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2021 12:07 PM Title: Chapter Six

Rose will be the dom

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