Date: 28 Nov 2021 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this healing, warm chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Nov 2021 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good to see Bella taking charge of her life.
Sherry
Date: 28 Nov 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am really enjoying this and I hope you had a great Thanksgiving
Date: 28 Nov 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm hoping Bella will be able to get past her past on get it on in her future. While she may never be great friends with Alice, hopefully some kind of tolerable relationship can be found with her...Not only with Bella but Edward and her parents as well.
Date: 26 Oct 2021 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Seth def has some talking to do but I get why he is so angry. Glad B&E got some lemony time.
Date: 26 Oct 2021 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
Your chapters could NEVER be too long. I love the trust and love that Bella is having in Edward. I do not blame Seth for his reactions. But he does need to talk to his therapist. Can't wait for more as always.
Date: 25 Oct 2021 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Seth needed his chance to express to Alice how her actions affected his life as well as Bella's. It could take years before Isabella and Seth are able to interact freely, probably limited, with Alice.
Hot tub sex can result in pregnancy. I dont remember if Bella is on birth control?
Edward's having a good Christmas.
Date: 25 Oct 2021 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Seth and Bella will need counselling for a long time to deal with everything that's happened and their feelings about everything.
But I can definitely tell they are both getting better.
Alice might even be actually learning something and changing her behavior too. We'll see......
Love the growing physical intimacy between Edward and Bella.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Good luck with your play. :)
Date: 24 Oct 2021 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update. Do you know how many more chapters there will be?
Sherry
Author's Response:
To be honest, I'm not sure. I've written through chapter 24 and we're not near the climax of the story. If I had to hazard a guess, maybe 30 chapters (included an epil).
Date: 24 Oct 2021 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter, I'm so happy to see Bella is becoming more brave and trusting Edward with her body.
Date: 24 Oct 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks muchly for the update.... and for the record, i'd like to have drooled over Chris Hemsworth too!
Date: 23 Oct 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
loving this
Date: 15 Oct 2021 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they got some family time and some fun adult time too.
Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
My heart feels for Seth.
Sherry
Date: 11 Oct 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
Several steps forward, an occasional step backwards. All great signs of bonding through unconditional love.
Esme and Seth each had a misstep. Will we read about his time with Carlisle and Esme?
Still waiting for Jacob to rear his ugly head.
Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update well done. I can't wait for next chapter..until you post again
Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update well done. I can't wait for next chapter..until you post again
Date: 10 Oct 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
I think they will "seal the deal" she has to trust him at this point and they are in love
Date: 10 Oct 2021 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
It turns out that Edward is just what Seth needs also. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Oct 2021 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
Beautiful chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the scene with Edward and Seth!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2021 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
I have to say, I'm sort of looking forward to a Bear, jake encounter
Date: 28 Sep 2021 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I can't wait until Bear tears into Jacob.
Sherry
Date: 27 Sep 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
A great Thanksgiving involving everyone that needed a family due to different circumstances.
Will Jasper ever find someone to love?
Bear is a beautiful guard dog.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella is very thankful for the life she has now. She did not think she could ever be this happy. I can't wait till they have Bear home with them..
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
they are progressing nicely
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful everyone pitching in for the holidays. Bear sounds awesome.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella had a moment where she recognized everything/her life/her son's life etc... was good for a change, and she got overwhelmed.
It's wonderful to recognize those moments.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ugh poor Emily. Sad her kid has a scummy sperm donor. Seth is such an awesome kid.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad that they have Bear.
Date: 26 Sep 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hopefully Alice understands the mess she made. Love the dog idea. Shepards are awesome dogs, esp Anatoli's. House sounds awesome
Date: 20 Sep 2021 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
She wants magic... Alakazam Alakazoo. Abracadabra.
Sherry
Date: 20 Sep 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Does Jacob have access to Bella's new address? He's obsessed with the idea that his privilege deserves Bella's wealth. He will become a bigger threat soon.
Seth and Rose were able to convince Bella that it's time to tell Edward how she feels. The I Love You's were so sweet.
Date: 19 Sep 2021 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
this is so good
Date: 19 Sep 2021 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful chapter, i hope she and Edward get their magic soon.
Date: 19 Sep 2021 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awe... Edward and Bella declared their ILY's. Hopefully that will help Bella's security in the relationship.
I'm pleased that Caius is coming to Thanksgiving at Bella's house. :) And Jasper met a new woman. Hopefully she will be his one. :)
Seth getting the part in the musical and receiving help and support from Edward was really sweet.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Sep 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
This was a busy chapter but a fufilling one. More trust gained, I love You's spoken.
Date: 19 Sep 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 19 Sep 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again
Date: 19 Sep 2021 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved this chapter. She told Edward she loved him.!!!!!!!! That was a huge step for her.
Date: 14 Sep 2021 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Date: 14 Sep 2021 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love Bella's reaction to Edward being there.
Date: 13 Sep 2021 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
Jasper's ex and her new partner are an interesting addition to the usual characters.
Bella's worst fears were confirmed when Sue's body was discovered.
Some form of legal action against Billy and Jacob needs to happen.
Date: 12 Sep 2021 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just knew that Billy or Jacob had done something evil to poor Sue, just for helping Bella. Ugh....
Poor Bella is getting swamped with evil. Finally owning her own home and reuniting with Edward will do her good.
Hopefully Alice's trip away from work will help her attitude and future decision making skills.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 12 Sep 2021 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad that Edward is there for Bella and that he is already in Seth's good graces.
Date: 12 Sep 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
I truly hope they find a way to charge Jacob for the death of Sue. I'm glad Edwrd is sticking by Bella.
Date: 11 Sep 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was afraid Sue was dead.
Loved Jasper & Moira
Date: 11 Sep 2021 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob is getting aggressive.
Sherry
Date: 06 Sep 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes he is dispicable but she has Rose and Emmett, Jasper and now Edward. I was once in a abusive relationship he did not abuse my daughter nor did he want her but for 5 years my life was pretty bad.
This is a very good story, I am not sure how you juggle ao many stories at the same time but you are amazing.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
Caius seems like a good fit as Bella's pseudo father figure. He and Edward will be very active in Seth's future. Equally as much as Jasper and Emmett as male role models.
Bella's journey will be a rough one until Jacob is removed from her life.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella has waaaaay more people who love and support her and Seth than when she was stuck with Jacob's slimy abusive ass.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yes sadly Jacob won't go away easily. She totally needs a place with excellent security. Caius is a cool dude.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am liking Caius in this story so far. Loving all the support Bella and Seth have.
Date: 05 Sep 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, I adore Caius. I'm so glad that Bella has him as her advocate.
Date: 02 Sep 2021 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor B. She def needs therapy. Paul and Jacob both need to be run over by a tank...a bus isn't good enough.
Date: 30 Aug 2021 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Tribal law is limited to the lands where the tribe members reside. They have no jurisdiction outside of this area. In the case of your imaginary world, Bella has never been a member of the tribe. Therefore Jacobs claim of her having no legal right to her son is false.
It would also be in Bella's favor to find Jacob's sisters so their stories can be told. Nothing can be done from a legal perspective but the president set would paint William Black and the other males of the tribe in a very negative light.
Maybe Alice can redeem herself by turning over all the false claims sent to her email by Jacob.
Bella's in for a big fight.
Wondering how much Seth will be involved in protecting his mother and damaging his father's plans?
Date: 30 Aug 2021 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob is disgusting and he and his father need to be in prison. Ugh....
Poor Bella... I would have shut down too.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Aug 2021 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I knew Jacob would pop up somewhere. He sees Bella as free money. I'm surprised it wasn't a slander lawsuit, climbing she defamed his character with her book and movie.
Sherry
Date: 29 Aug 2021 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob needs to have someone beat him half to death. I hope the lawyer runs him into the ground. He is only wanting to profit from Bella after all of the horrible things he did to her. I hope he rots in hell and Bill and Paul with him.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
taking Seth is just a way to get money he really does not want him he is just the means to an end
Date: 28 Aug 2021 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
i could and probably did predict this.. if no other place than my mind. LOL
Date: 28 Aug 2021 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
What the ????? I knew Jacob would come after her when he found out about the movie. If just for the money. He doesn't want Seth. All he wants is money. I hope someone on this story gets to knock the hell out of Jacob. I really hope Bella gets to inflict some pain on Jacob. Maybe a couple hits or kicks to his balls to do enough damage where he can't reproduce any more.
Date: 28 Aug 2021 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the update. How old is Seth? I don't know if I ever saw an age. The story started 8 years after leaving La Push.
Author's Response:
He's eleven, turning twelve ...
Date: 28 Aug 2021 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ohhh not a fan of Jacob and paul. Shady characters for sure. Poor Bella. I'm so glad she has Edward and Jasper, Em and Rose to support her and Seth
Date: 23 Aug 2021 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Rose guided Bella in the most caring way. Honesty is a difficult approach when the opposite is all that has been shown in the past.
Date: 22 Aug 2021 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved this chapter!!!!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2021 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella needs to begin her therapy ASAP so she fully allow herself to go forward with her relationship with Edward. She'll always hold onto her fears and feelings of worthlessness and self doubt untill she seeks professional aide. I've never been to Disneyland or Disneyworld, can I tag along on their next visit?..lol
Date: 22 Aug 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Bella got to make new memories. They are too cute together. Therapy will be good for her and Seth.
Date: 22 Aug 2021 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
This chapter made me cry. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. :)
Date: 22 Aug 2021 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the update.
Sherry
Date: 22 Aug 2021 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
I would not mind 30,000 words but this was a good chapter and I can't wait for more
Date: 21 Aug 2021 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think Seth like Edward. Glad Aro is being so nice to Bella. Can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Aug 2021 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Seth is such an awesome kid. Glad Jasper got his feelings out. Sadly I think Jacob is going to show up soon to screw with Bella and Seth.
Date: 17 Aug 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Seems like eveyone is on the same page about the movie and taking care of Paul. Seth's protectiveness of his mom is endearing. Edward and Seth, I think will have a special bond. I don't see Alice being redeemable; no matter the effort she puts into trying to redeem herself.
Sherry
Date: 15 Aug 2021 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
Alice is redeemable.
Who know how long it will take for Jasper to forgive her.
It seems Bella has chosen that path already, Edward is still on the fence but Jasper is no where close to that decision.
Seth and Bella definitely need the outlet of therapy.
Date: 15 Aug 2021 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 Aug 2021 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad that Alice finally got her head out of her ass. I hope Alice is being honest with Edward and Bella about giving Bella a chance. As always, can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Aug 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
It's a start for Alice.
She needs to come up with a plan that Jasper likes and plead her case.
When does Jacob try to m ake an appearance?
Will Seth get the chance to tell off his sperm donor?
Date: 08 Aug 2021 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
you have a lot on your plate, Iknow I am reading at least three of your stories and they are all great
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update..Well done..Bella finally got a chance to tell Edward her story..sad as it is Bella made it out to the other side..Bella is definitely strong she endured more than she should have. Charlie is rolling around in his grave. I hope the tribe gets what they deserve for treating their women that way. I'm on the fence about Alice I hope she is sincere. I'm sure she misses Jasper. Paul got what he deserved I wish it could have been Jake, but I m sure he will get his.. u ntil you post again
Date: 08 Aug 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she talked to Edward about everything. Not sure I trust Alice either, but I guess we'll see.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she talked to Edward about everything. Not sure I trust Alice either, but I guess we'll see.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she talked to Edward about everything. Not sure I trust Alice either, but I guess we'll see.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella trusted Edward enough to tell him her horrible, beginning with little Seth. I'm still wary of Alice. We'll see. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 08 Aug 2021 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Things are on the right track again.
Sherry
Date: 08 Aug 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yes Alice you don’t worry about Bella because she’s got Rosalie to put you on your place I say let Rosalie loose
Date: 08 Aug 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think Alice is repentant