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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ugh where is the hidden sniper deadly and not dead



Author's Response:

Deadly for sure

Reviewer: Ksamuraix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2021 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

Is there really a support group for this story? wow!! I mean you did say in the beginning that nothing is as it seems...so how is it that people are freaking out:( this reminds me of games of thrones freakout support group:)



Author's Response:

There is, it's the Angst Freak Out Room. Not just because of the stress, but because they love to talk about who the mole is and what they think truly happened to Bella, whether she's dead or alive... 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2021 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

OK I wannt to know, is Bella  still alive.?



Author's Response:

That's what everyone wants to know!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 



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Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2021 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

Ok, I'm kind of confused.  Who is Zion....a terrorists group, right??? Who is in charge of Zion???? Is Charlie working for Zion??? 



Author's Response:

They are a terrorist group with roots in the mafia, yes. Holden explains a bunch of it in chapter 9. Ivan is the man in charge, but they've just learned Charlie was involved.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 25

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm sick



Author's Response:

Then I don't think you'll like the next chapter either.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 25

I need LOTS of WINE and a few cookies.  You are stressing me out. WHY is Quinn not attacking Edward??? What has happened to Bella???? Are they just going to leave her body there?????? Is she really dead????? WE NEED ANSWERS!!!!!!!!! 😘😘😘



Author's Response:

Quinn might need time to process what happened, but he definitely goes after Edward a few times.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2021 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

I hope Edward hasn't killed her 



Author's Response:

We'll have to see!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2021 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24

Charlie?  Please fix this. She can't be dead



Author's Response:

It could be!

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Unbrlievable..... Don't know if I will continue this story. This is a HARD LIMIT



Author's Response:

It's a matter of trust. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2021 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

What is going on?????????? This is a little different than the beginning of the story.  There is more here than in the 1st chapter.  I went back and read it last week. What the hell has Edward done? How and why did he bring Quinn to watch his dad shot and kill his mother.  That is just wrong.  



Author's Response:

It's a little different because I expanded on it, but the dialogue was copied. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2021 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

So stubborn.  So hard headed. 



Author's Response:

Maybe!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2021 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Babydoll516 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2021 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm beginning to not like this story. I read to decompress. This is pissing me off. And if Edward actually shoots Bella in the chest I might be done with this. I love u as an author .  But the anxiety I'm feeling from the anger at putting a wedge between those 2 is getting to be too much.



Author's Response:

I won't be upset if you need to take a break. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2021 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

My heart breaks for both of them.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella may be hurting but she has no right to blame everything on Edward. She was as much a part of the mob as he was. She is just being childish and acting like a spoiled brat. Edward should spank her butt and make her listen to him. He should throw Jacob and Leah out too. She needs someone to knock some sense into her before she ruins her marriage.



Author's Response:

Well, he's never going to spank her for actual punishment ...

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2021 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

They need to figure out who the mole is and take care of him or her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, they do!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2021 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I trust you.  But my heart is hurting for both Edward and Bella.  



Author's Response:

I don't blame you.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2021 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

They should have locked Gianna up and kept her as a prisoner. She's probably in with Zion anyway. She told the info she knew wasn't any good. I wish Bella had beat her ass and then gave Edward a good slap or two. He's worried about her so he's trying to drive her away I believe. He really had no business letting that bitch put her hands on him. He's destroying his marriage and he doesn't seem to really care. I hope how soon they get to destroy Zion and all of the people who are with them.



Author's Response:

Yes, they probably should have locked her up.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Come on. Where is this headed

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19

Come on. Where is this headed



Author's Response:

I can't tell you that without spoiling it.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2021 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2021 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm still mad at him. Good chapter 



Author's Response:

That's okay! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was soooo intense!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think Edward met with Seamus.  What does Gianna think she can do to help?



Author's Response:

That's an interesting guess!

Reviewer: britter18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2021 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

I just read all this in 2 days. I loved the first one! I'm betting jasper although I'm not sure. Maybe em? It's a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

What is Bella's problem.  I understand there is alot at stake and under pressure.  But everyone is.  



Author's Response:

They all are, for sure.

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Damn!  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2021 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

My guess he was speaking with Jasper?



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon!



Author's Response:

We'll find out soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2021 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2021 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward and Bella are headed for troubled waters in their relationship.  



Author's Response:

Sadly

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2021 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2021 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

Do they have a mole among them?????? 



Author's Response:

It sure seems like it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

If Quinn dies Bella will kill every person that has anything to do with Zion.  



Author's Response:

That's exactly what would happen.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2021 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

They both are hard headed.  



Author's Response:

I would say that's true!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2021 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

She should have known that Edward would not allow her to steal the bomb back. 



Author's Response:

I think she did, but she wants to do it anyway.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2021 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lol. Love Edward and Bella.  



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2021 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Still so many questions 



Author's Response:

I bet!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2021 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow.  Hopefully this is legit.  



Author's Response:

Hopefully!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2021 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

CIA.. Clowns in America.. bad bunch



Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2021 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh NO.. don't kill Bella.. Please



Author's Response:

Thank you for reaidng!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2021 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella.  I would be in a constant state of panic. 



Author's Response:

I definitely would too.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2021 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait to see what the family comes up with. 



Author's Response:

It better be good!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2021 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love this just don't kill Bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love Sioban. I hope nothing happens to her during this war. I know there will be death but I hope it's not her. 



Author's Response:

She's staying put so she can be safe.

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 4

Where is Carlisle, Esmeralda and Alice?



Author's Response:

They all died in Fallen Angel.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

Is there a mole in Edward's family???? WHO is watching them? Can't wait for more.  



Author's Response:

There might be!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2021 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2021 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Who has contacted Edward and Bella ??? 



Author's Response:

Good question!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2021 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was scary



Author's Response:

Yes it was!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm excited to see where you are taking them. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:22 AM Title: Prologue

What???????? Please tell me this is a dream/ nightmare.  



Author's Response:

It's not!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2021 4:55 AM Title: Prologue

cant be 



Author's Response:

It really is!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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