Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:51 PM Title: Bitter Sweet Symphony
great job!!!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:37 PM Title: Plug in Baby
hope Lauren gets the memo
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:49 PM Title: Goodbye My Lover
sniff sniff
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:21 PM Title: Jealous Guy
well he did kiss Lauren how mad can he get
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:04 PM Title: Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
can you say over react
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:39 PM Title: See You Again
just curious How can she afford all this designer stuff she wears?
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:44 PM Title: Hear You Me
is she going girlie
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:22 PM Title: When the Wind Blows
awwww
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:21 PM Title: Hot n' Cold
paybacks are hell
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:19 PM Title: Another Heart Calls
poor eddie
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:17 PM Title: Dirty Little Secret
tanya blech
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:16 PM Title: Red Morning Light
a+
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:14 PM Title: Sex on Fire
such a tease
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:13 PM Title: Supermassive Black Hole
deserves more reviews
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:12 PM Title: Butterflyes and Hurricanes
so much alike
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:11 PM Title: Shinny New Toy
excellent
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:49 AM Title: Take me on the Floor
I am really starting to hate Bella
Date: 07 Nov 2011 9:37 PM Title: All I Need
you really need a beta or at least spellcheck
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:05 PM Title: Use Somebody
can we say cocktease
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:09 PM Title: Tainted Love
but he will die happy
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:56 PM Title: New Begin
great start
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:05 PM Title: When the Wind Blows
i think bella got what she deserve. thats what happens when you play games like that. you get burned.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Supermassive Black Hole
that was hot !!!! loved it
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:11 PM Title: Butterflyes and Hurricanes
loved it
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:02 PM Title: Shinny New Toy
loved it
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:41 AM Title: Jealous Guy
aww poor bella!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:01 AM Title: Dirty Little Secret
This chapter drove me crazy. It was like the computer just cut out whole sentences. I don't mind spelling errors but there were plenty of times I was just guessing at what u were trying to say.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:17 AM Title: Bitter Sweet Symphony
that was a good story really different
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Bitter Sweet Symphony
Thanks for your story Carol I enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
hey
tks so much for reading and reviw
I am really glad you liked it,it means a lot to me!
xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 6:58 AM Title: Bitter Sweet Symphony
talk about a drama filled relationship.. haha. i wasn't too crazy over the whole bella/rosalie thing, but i loved the sweet moments between bella and edward. they're adorable. nice job with this story :)
Author's Response:
hey
tks so much for reading and review!
I am really glad that you saw that B/E had was true love
and sorry for not warning about the 3 slash!
I hope you saw the outfit sets as well
xx
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:22 AM Title: Bitter Sweet Symphony
wow! there were some grammar errors but the story was so good. I wasnt into the whole lesbo thing, there shouldve been a warning but edward and bella were so sweet. i cried alot at the end of the story. im glad i read it!
Author's Response:
hey
tks so much for reading and reviw
yeah I should have put a small warning about those 3 chaps with slash
but thanks anywya,it was my first fic,and english is not my first language,but I am glad you liked it!
xx
ps) I cried a lot when i wrote it
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:04 PM Title: Dirty Little Secret
I've been enjoying your story, and I would've enjoyed this chapter, too, I'm sure - but it is FULL of errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation). I don't know what happened here because it's certainly not consistent with how well the previous chapters were written, but I actually had a hard time reading this chaper or making sense of some of it. Was it not beta'd or was it sabotaged? I'll stick with it as long as I can read it, but another chapter like this and I'm afraid I'll have to move on.
Author's Response:
hey
I am so sorry
My computer cutted some words and I didn´t see it
The rest of teh story is ok,I will try to fix this chap mistakes today!
Tks for the heads up
Keep reading,you will like it!
xx