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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 7:19 PM Title: Epilogue

Sweet and adorable ending for a traumatic and whirlwind beginning.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2021 2:19 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2021 1:44 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 11:37 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 5:25 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for a lovely story!! I really appreicated reading it.  Well done.  Until the next story!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2021 9:25 AM Title: Epilogue

That was a totally swoony and sweet day.    Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us.   :)   

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

I was wondering what happened to Jacob.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you for the update..Well done..I can't Jessica thought she would have a chance with Edward again..I'm very happy for them..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2021 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Sweet, romantic and lemony....   Great chapter....  Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2021 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

Are they still in therapy for PTSD?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2021 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2021 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.   :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Dr. Heatwave.....Hehehe
Lily will be fending off her friends as she grows up.
Setting up a new home will finally give both Edward and Bella a chance to plan their future.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

the end?    this is just getting going :(

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Date: 08 May 2021 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

put my order in for at least one of those

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

ok so now you make us feel bad for him lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

I hope a wicked witch demise happens to Jacob

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

I always love your stories thay develop at a great pace

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

Meteorology would have been my perfect dream job it fascinates me so I am looking forward to this AND of course Edward

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12

Alot of adjustments, but everyone seems to be coming along OK.   :)     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2021 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love it so much 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

Will Bella and her boys follow Edward to Illinois?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm so relieved that Alec unloaded that secret about his dad.    It was eating him from the inside.    Even though Bella already knew, he still needed that.   Riley probably does too.

Edward and Bella got a crash course into dating beginnings.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

The survivors will probably have nightmares about how Jacob and Paul died.    Even the people who didn't know them are probably disturbed at the very least.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9

Jacob can't let it go. This business of filming the storms will be his end.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella is not giving the asshat, Jacob, even an inch.   She is super smart.   She probably even knew Jasper was a cheating douche.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Keep on writing

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2021 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Did Seth leave with Jacob or stick around to help Bella and Riley?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

The bag of douche is going to get himself killed all right.   Dam!   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2021 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2021 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

That would be scary as all hell.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2021 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting  storyline 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Those kids are in a horrible place during a tornado.   And I don't just mean Oklahoma....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

Really loving the story so far!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2021 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

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Date: 13 Apr 2021 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward having to deal with douche head Jacob.   Shudder...    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

A rash decision by Jacob will cost someone either their job or their life.
Jerk

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

The brain pan of the average high school is more diverse than these less than stellar students. Haha
Alec really owes his brother a big favor in return for this time capsule footage.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wonder if Alice will ever confess her sins to Bella?
Alec really needs to confess his dad's secret. That burden is damaging his relationship with his mom and brother.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

Wonder if Alice will ever confess her sins to Bella?
Alec really needs to confess his dad's secret. That burden is damaging his relationship with his mom and brother.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Jacob reminds all if us of a jerk boss we've had to work around.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2021 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Teenage children are difficult even with two parents involved.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2021 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Children have such limited ideas at that age. They limit their own input into their future.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2021 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Riley.....   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really good

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2021 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2021 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

Children shouldn't have to carry the guilt and secrets of their parents.   Jasper was an extra douche canoe for allowing his son to have to feel that.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Tell her the truth better than hiding and being mean to her.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2021 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

welcome folks to spring and summer in Tornado Alley.. .where I live.. storms are shifting further east this year toward Mississippi and Ga. So

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor WeatherWard is like a lot of people,....having to work for douche canoes that don't know anything for a paycheck.    sigh.....    That's how teaching was for me at 3 different schools through my career.   

It sounds like little Lily doesn't understand Edward's absence at all.   Hopefully he will work it out that she is more important than working for the jerk Jacob.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2021 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ahhh an arsehole Jacob..... just like he always was.  LOL. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2021 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2021 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh love it is that time of the year! I love in Tornado Alley!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2021 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh love it is that time of the year! I love in Tornado Alley!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2021 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Poor Bella and her sons are just grieving and trying to hang on in their own way.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2021 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2021 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hey, girlie. I enjoyed the 1st chapter and looking forward to following along. 

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