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Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2021 12:08 AM Title: Ch 14 All's Well, That Ends Well

Saw you did indeed write a bella/caius and a bella/demetri stories...

Will check them out...would appreciate more of them though..ty



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Thanks,

So glad you liked it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 11:56 PM Title: Ch 14 All's Well, That Ends Well

Bravo!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Loved this story! Any possibility of something similar-but-not w/fierce bella/caius or 

fierce bella/demetri pairing?? There's not any real great fic w/those pairings that

is truly satisfying...thanks for this story๐Ÿ™‚



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Thanks,

I've had a go at everyone but Aro, but maybe one dat xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2021 8:07 PM Title: Ch 5, The Calm & The Chaos!

So hilarious!! Love the undercover CIA agent Bella and her smarts...

 



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Thanks,

So glad you're enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2021 10:07 PM Title: Ch 14 All's Well, That Ends Well

Great finale to your story.....    Carlisle was a stupid moron right to the end.    ugh...    

Bella and Peter are a sweet, sexy comforting match.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you enjoyed it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2021 2:12 AM Title: Ch 14 All's Well, That Ends Well

Glad the sluts got what was coming to them.  Rose turned out wonderful friend. Awesome ending. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Ty



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I could see them being like that, the film just portrayed them like bimbo's lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2021 10:52 PM Title: Ch 13 Last Words! No Last Rites!

Rofl for stripping before killing him.   Love it



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Well when you find the perfect dress and all that lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2021 5:44 PM Title: Ch 13 Last Words! No Last Rites!

Bella just dealt with Edward like a pesky fly.   He was annoying right to his end.   I'm happy that you let Peter burn Edward's pieces, and that Marcus saw the execution and silently sanctioned it.

I wonder what is next for our sexy couple.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, he needed to go, nothing was getting through to him xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 7:22 PM Title: Ch 12, Home Is Where The Heart Is

Edward is such a twit.  At least Anderson seems like a straight shooter.  Can't wait to see abriel take down the Denali sluts

 



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Thanks,

so far they are safe, but you never know xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2021 5:03 PM Title: Ch 12, Home Is Where The Heart Is

Edward could have had a few years to redeem himself or possibly change Bella's mind about his imminent death, but instead he puts his death on the fast track by being as annoying as fuck.    LOL     Carlisle might have to join his son's future ashes in the wind.

Bella and Peter just living a calm relaxing life at the ranch suits them both.   :)

I'm looking forward to their wedding at the ranch in cowboy hats and bare feet.   Comfort will be the name of the game, huh?    I like it.   Since Bella and Peter are going to provide blood, and IF Edward shows up..... the guests will get dinner and a show.   mwahahaha....

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.  



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He's a fool who is about to meet his maker xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 7:22 PM Title: Ch 12, Home Is Where The Heart Is

My nephew just got married.  The venue was a barn made into a very nice place.  The wedding party all wore cowboy hats and boots. The bride was the only one without a hat but she wore boots also.  It was very nice and the pictures were cute.  I thought of it when you described the wedding.

 



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That sounded lovely, I like that you can have what you want nowadays and not be pushed into the traditional norms xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2021 11:37 AM Title: Ch11, Sins Have A Way Of Catching You Up

I loved the instant reactions to the videos that were sent to Caius, Marcus and Aro simultaneously.

A lot of the world is thrilled silly that Aro, Jane and Alec are gone.   And Chelsea doesn't have a power anymore?    That's great.

Do you think Caius and Marcus's warnings to stay away from the Whitlocks or Jasper's single attempt at beheading will warn trouble makers away more?       LOL     There will probably still be some dumb asses eventually.

Bella's engagement ring sounds pretty.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Most will stay away, but there is always one!!! This is it xx

Alexis

 Bella's Ring

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2021 8:45 PM Title: Ch11, Sins Have A Way Of Catching You Up

Buh bye witch twins and Aro.  Glad the wives got away from the nut job.



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Thanks,

Freedom woill be scary for them but long awaited xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2021 4:52 AM Title: Ch 10 Return To Sender

I loved the 'group' training/experimentation in front of the big mirror with Bella's shield and everyone elses powers.   That was powerful and interesting.

So Marcus and Caius know most of Aro's bullshit, but they can't do anything because of Chelsea's power?    Aro has to be scared shitless on almost a daily basis that things are going to go tits up.   LOL     Hint Hint Aro....   They are.   mwahahaha.....

This is going to be a miserably long week waiting for your next chapter.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.



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Thanks,

I think he was too arrogant to believe anything would topple him from power xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2021 1:09 PM Title: Ch 10 Return To Sender

Oooh that is an evil place to leave it.  Love abriel enhancing all their powers. 



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Like that they could be all that they could be xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2021 5:46 AM Title: Ch 9, Roman Holiday

I love how Bella, Peter, Jasper, Abriel, Charlotte and Garrett are all working together to get rid of Aro and any complications.    They don't step over each other, or on each other's toes though.   

I giggled at the thought of Edward getting the video of Bella fighting/killing Jacob Black so easily.    I wonder what the vampire equivalent of shitting or pissing your pants is.   hehehe....

Another funny image is Boris threatening Carlisle to go along with Esme's divorce request or die.   

Thanks for writing and sharing the great chapter.



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Thanks,

Yeah,  he gave him an option he would be a fool to refuse xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2021 1:53 PM Title: Ch 9, Roman Holiday

Awesomeness she is.  Glad Umberto is taken care of as well.  Chauvinistic pig.  Can't wait for Aro to go down



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, at least Jasper and Abriel's trash is gone, only half of Bella's to go and of course Aro xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 11:21 PM Title: Ch 8, Here I Come, Ready Or Not!

I'm imagining Boris scooping up Esme without a 'how do you do?'   LOL    

Jake's ending was probably a let down in the fight department for Bella.   But at least the vamps got some information about shifter fighting/non-fighting, although that might have just been Jake.

Thanls for writing and sharing.



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Thanks,

I think it was just shifter arrogance and Jacob in particular xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2021 8:34 PM Title: Ch 8, Here I Come, Ready Or Not!

Woo hoo for esme getting a hunk.  Buh bye Black 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I thought she deserves one after putting up with Carlisle xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Granny Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2021 7:25 PM Title: Ch 7, What's The Time Mr Wolf?

enjoyable read..please continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hello over here,

No worries I've never not finished a story xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2021 4:14 AM Title: Ch 7, What's The Time Mr Wolf?

I love that Bella and Peter are getting a nice little vacation while chasing Jacob Black.    I wonder if he is scared.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



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Thanks,

I think he thinks he can outrun her and even beat her in a fight xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:21 PM Title: Ch 7, What's The Time Mr Wolf?

Glad they are having some fun along the way and meeting new people. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

nothing like mixing business with pleasure. Well not for Jake xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2021 5:42 PM Title: Ch 7, What's The Time Mr Wolf?

When I was a child we played "What time is it old witch?"  I wonder if that is a version of your game.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Probably, we also have a similar game called British Bulldogs, they seem to all be about the same xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 4:38 AM Title: Ch 6, The Ultimate Revenge Takes Time

Well I wonder if stupid Carlisle will stay with and/or try to hide stupid Edward.    LOL    It won't work, but good try.   ;)    

Bella has Edward and Jacob in so much fear waiting for the proverbial axe to fall, that they will almost think being killed is a mercy.  

Arial is a bad ass!   I'm imagining Alice as a shar pei dog now with a grumpy face photographed and sent worldwide.   mwahahaha.....

When Bella gets her ends tied up, (CIA, Edward, Jacob) her plan to restore books and things sounds like a great job and/or hobby.  :)  

Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Abriel lives up to her surname well. Bella's just looking for peace and she'll get there xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2021 1:28 AM Title: Ch 6, The Ultimate Revenge Takes Time

Glad Jasper and A got to get rid of Malice once and for all.  Nice shot from Rose to Fuckward



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah Rose is underestimated even by herself sometimes xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2021 10:36 PM Title: Ch 5, The Calm & The Chaos!

So glad Jasper has his mate now.  Aro needs to pay for sure. Poor esme stuck with Carlisle. 



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Thanks,

She's a corker that's for sure. Esme will break free and be happier eventually xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2021 9:38 PM Title: Ch 5, The Calm & The Chaos!

Oh, I like this Abriel character.    She is a whole lot like Bella and Charlotte.    The three couples work well together right off the bat.

I love the translations placed next to the text too.   It makes it so much easier to read without scrolling down and back up.   Thanks for that.

I guess Alice knows her ass is grass now.   But Edward is probably clueless, and Carlisle just assumes he will be OK.    I bet Esme even wants him gone now.    hehehe.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Catlisle will keep his head down just hoping to survive this,

but he might be on his own soon enough xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 2:42 PM Title: Ch 4, Who's Afraid Of The Big Bad Wolf?

Bella, with the help of the others, has set a good plan in motion.   I wonder if everything will fall in place.   Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter.



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Thanks,

She good at what she does and Jasper's there as backup xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2021 11:28 PM Title: Ch 4, Who's Afraid Of The Big Bad Wolf?

Awesome chapter.  Glad Jake finally ran and all the current wolves saw what he did.  Edward really wants to die 



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He's a coward who killed a human, the rest are disgusted with him xx

Alexis

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2021 4:37 AM Title: Ch 3, Crisis Averted, For Now

I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait to see what the rest of the story holds.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 So glad you're enjoying it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2021 1:01 AM Title: Ch 3, Crisis Averted, For Now

Dam!   Edward and Alice are in the shitter.    But Alice is already 'flushed' and she doesn't even realize it yet.    That's really ironic with her being a seer and all.     LOL

Bella's bad ass self is an amazing planner, and I bet she will be vicious with any revenge she deals out.

I'm relieved that Garrett is on scene now for Charlotte and the group.

There aren't too many unmated female vamps for me to picture with Jasper.   Hmm....   Who did Alice keep Jasper from meeting?   Someone from the Volturi?    Maggie?   Mary?   One of the Amazon coven?     I'm probably not even remembering all of the possibilities though.    

I can see Emmett and Rose kicking the rest of the Cullens into line quickly.    Edward and Alice will probably be dead soon knowing their total crapulence.    LOL     But Carlisle and Esme won't ever get to be leaders again if I'm guessing.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing a great chapter Alexis.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

All will be revealed soon, but she's taking her time with those 2 idiots xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2021 8:05 PM Title: Ch 3, Crisis Averted, For Now

Love your Bella so much.   Glad she put Rose in her place as well.   Awww got skate getting to have Garrett there. 



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Thanks,

Glad you like it and the gang is almost complete xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2021 1:16 PM Title: Ch 2, Did You Dot Your I's & Cross Your T's!

I love the bad ass blunt personality of Bella.   It matches with Peter's.   I hope Jasper wakes up and comes along for the ride.    

Thanks for writing and sharing. 



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Thaks,

She nobody's fool and yes he will xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2021 8:56 PM Title: Ch 2, Did You Dot Your I's & Cross Your T's!

Omg. I am so loving this outspoken confident Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She's pulling no punches, at 26 she shouldn't have too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:35 PM Title: Ch 1, Who, What, When, Where, Why?

Good story so far!! Hurry



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you're enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 4:27 AM Title: Ch 1, Who, What, When, Where, Why?

I love how Bella, in all her CIA spy wisdom, has the number of every Cullen, Whitlock and Jacob Black almost instantaneously.    Plus she is really a bad ass too.   ;)

I can't wait to read more of this story.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She more than a pretty face and they are aboout to find that out xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2021 3:59 AM Title: Prologue

This sounds hella good.    ...rubs hands together in glee....    Thanks for writing and sharing.



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Thanks,

So glad you like the start and enjoy the ride xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 9:25 PM Title: Ch 1, Who, What, When, Where, Why?

0mg I'm soooooooo loving this.   Def need to get Jasper away.



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Thanks,

His been brain-washed for too long xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2021 8:38 PM Title: Prologue

Ooh interesting start.  Can't wait to see where you take it. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Setting up the story, showing who and where they are xx

Alexis

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