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Reviewer: gaijinvamp Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2022 8:55 PM Title: Not So Funny Now!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seattle_Underground

https://www.google.com/search?q=seattle+underground+trip&client=firefox-b-1-d&channel=cus5&sxsrf=APq-WBu9x-ZBpmYmbTsedh8FZbxd4GcvMw:1647808491646&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjrlbX-xNX2AhVOZc0KHdKpD_wQ_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=1440&bih=702&dpr=2

http://www.undergroundtour.com/about/

I thought you have never used the underground tour in Seattle in a story, that you didn't know about it. Here's info. Unfortunate I never went, (always spent my extra time at Pike Peak Market). Interesting stuff.Now old bitch that I am, can't do stairs.

A great story.



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Thanks,

No, I didn't know about it. I 'll remember that for another one xx

Alexis

Reviewer: MamaBear Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2021 12:12 AM Title: Not So Funny Now!

Love the UK Colloquialisms.   TUPPENCE in the states is either 2 cents or 2 bits (2 quarters) depending on context.

 



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Thanks & Hi,

I've heard that in movies, ours is pre-decimal so 2 old pennies xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 5:12 PM Title: I Do, I Do, I Do!

Love them touring the world that way. 



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Thanks,

Like to end on a appy note xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 2:43 PM Title: I Do, I Do, I Do!

That was a great peak into the future of Bella and Jasper and the others.     Thanks for the wonderful story Alexis.   :)



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Thanks,

Imagine being able to run across continents and swim oceans, the world is literally their oyster xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 12:16 AM Title: Stupid Is, As Stupid Does!

I loved the ass kicking that the four Whitlocks doled out to Malice, Demetri, Felix, Jane and Alec.     They each deserved what they got.

I giggled at Chelsea running away from Bella too.     Aro is too stupid to learn a lesson permanently though.    

Great chapter Alexis.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you enjoyed it all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2021 8:47 PM Title: Stupid Is, As Stupid Does!

Love the guard getting a taste of their own medicine.   Roll for heads to arises. 



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The guard can dish it, but they can't take it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 2:11 PM Title: The Ups & Downs Of Life

Glad Jake is gone. Delusional arsehole. Alice is just pathetic. 



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She really is and soon everyone will know it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 12:50 PM Title: The Ups & Downs Of Life

Jasper really cocked things up with Bella for a while.     ugh....    He learned his lesson though.

I'm super glad that Charlie taught Bella how to defend herself with a gun.   It took several bullets to take Jacob's wolf down though.      scary.....       

Now of course Alice wouldn't try to get revenge on her own.   She's too much of a coward for that.   I wonder what lie she fed the Volturi to get them to do her dirty work.    Hmmmm......

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Just a man after all, but they'll work through it llike adults.

Don't know if it was Jake's think head or the wolf's xx

Alexis

 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 8:15 AM Title: A Holiday To Remember

Thanks for the update. Can’t wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So very glad you are enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 8:35 PM Title: A Holiday To Remember

Wow!    A lot happened in this chapter.    

A great Christmas for Bella and the Whitlocks followed by 2 tragedies.     The losses of her father AND mother, although by different means, is so sad.    

I did laugh at Bella and Jasper's catching perv Edward.    ugh....

I'm relieved the Whitlocks aren't telling the Cullens any of the 'changing' plan.   I don't trust them, esp Alice.   Hmmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

She didn't that kind of negativity in her life and with Charlie gone she's free to do what she wants xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2021 11:56 PM Title: A Holiday To Remember

Wow poor Bella. Glad she told off Renee. 



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Yeah, she doesn't need that in her life xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 1:59 PM Title: Is This Kindergarten?

Love the Quilute backstory you did. 



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Thanks,

So happy you are enjoying it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 6:16 AM Title: Is This Kindergarten?

Another great chapter. Wonder what it'll be like at home once they're back.



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Somethings will change some will not  xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 12:39 AM Title: Is This Kindergarten?

My father always had live trees for us and I can see my first tree on Google Earth.  As I am 70 now it is quite large and still beautiful!  Too bad more people don't do this.  Your story is great and I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you are enjoying it all so far, we used to do it too, when I was younger xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2021 11:32 PM Title: Is This Kindergarten?

Wow!  Your 'new' history of the wolves and Quileute people sure made Ephiriam Black sound monstrous.   The Uleys and Atearas were spineless lackies.      This sure rings a bell as true in America's 'Trump era' as well.   ugh...

I love how Lara and Anders righted the shifter hierarchy with Leah Clearwater as the new alpha.    Then the rest fell in line.

The virgin Bella sexy times with Jasper made me jealous.  hehe...   It was pretty romantic.

Bella is getting along with Peter and Charlotte amazingly and vice versa.   Those will become eternal friendships hopefully.

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So pleased you are enjoying it all so far and my new back story xx

Alexis

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 5:15 AM Title: I Thought This Was My Life

Another great chapter. Can't wait to see the wolves brought down.



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Thanks,

So happy you are enjoying it all so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 11:12 PM Title: I Thought This Was My Life

So Edward is gonna get his ears back.   That probably won't decrease his whining in any way.   Poor Esme....

Charlie learned a lesson about being manipulated.       Jasper amd Bella have had enough of the crap caused by the Blacks.      I'm glad for both things.

The couple and son that were sent from the council seemed polite, friendly, but business-like.     I can't wait to read the wolf shifter's doggy complaining about everything.   

You can't end the chapter there Alexis.   pouts.....

Jasper and Bella's quick shopping trip was what I imagine both of them would enjoy....quick and to the point.

Great chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He needs to shut up and listen or here's a novel idea, use his brain lol,

Yeah, dash in grab what you want and get out again, my kind of shopping. 

Except on holiday and then I just browse and window shop xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 8:15 PM Title: I Thought This Was My Life

Glad B talked to Charlie before too much damage was done.  I know there is some bit hopefully not too much.  Ah new shifters... Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yerah, she's more angry with them that they would try to turn Charlie against her. They are in for a awesome smackdown xx

Alexis

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 7:40 PM Title: Why Do I Get This Sinking Feeling?

Another great chapter as always.



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Thanks,

So pleased you are enjoying it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 12:19 AM Title: Why Do I Get This Sinking Feeling?

Edward isn't the only annoying jerk in this chapter....  We can definitely add Jacob and Billy.   ;)     

I love Charlie and Bella's relationship in this chapter.    Hopefully Tiffany will have the same even fair minded personality as Charlie does.     

I wonder if anything will come out of Renee hanging up on Bella.   Did she just space out?   Was she mad about Charlie dating?   Hmmm....

And the way Peter and Charlotte accept Bella already, and vice versa is so great.    I can't wait to see the Whitlock holiday.

Thanks for writing and sharing Alexis.     



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Thanks,

She's just jealous, she never thought he'd move on at all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 7:48 PM Title: Why Do I Get This Sinking Feeling?

Love that Charlie put his foot down about Jake.  Jerk.

Love idreamofeddy! 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, they all behave terribly in other's houses and I hatte that, so making it better here xx

Alexis

Reviewer: smurff88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2021 7:36 PM Title: Memories To Remember

Dam ! I was really enjoying your story,hope you get the chance to finish it! Good Luck!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

So glad you like it and no worries I always finish my stories,

It's a promise I made in the beginning to never leave one unfinished xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 6:22 PM Title: Memories To Remember

Bella and Jasper's date was really sweet.   I gagged at the idea of Edward and Alice spying on them.  

Removing them from the school probably won't be enough to keep the evil duo from trying to hurt Bella and Jasper.   I'm starting to believe that Carlisle is in on it too.    Hmmm...

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Carlisle is too stupid to see encorouging them could be his death. He is acting as if they are all human xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 1:59 PM Title: Memories To Remember

What an awesome date.  I'd love that bed too. 



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Thanks,

Me too, I love carved wooden stuff xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 12:57 AM Title: Memories To Remember

this is a great story, thank you for your hard work.  A strong Bella is always best!



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Thanks,

Yeah I prefer that too xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2021 11:36 AM Title: Not So Funny Now!

Everything is going to well and peaceful for Jasper and Bella....   I have this ominous feeling that you are getting ready to be a big meanie pants writer to my 2 favorite characters.   LOL

Great chapter Alexis.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I'm trying not too, but you never know what's around the corner and neither do I lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2021 7:42 PM Title: Not So Funny Now!

Love love love her shattering all the kids perceptions of E & A.  Esme is gonna be an awesome coven leader. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, just a word in the right ear and they do the rest. Let's see how they like being emotionally tortured for a change xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2020 5:33 PM Title: Truths To Be Told

Bella let Jasper know, in no uncertain terms, that she would not be staying with the Cullens AT ALL.     Jasper took all of that well considering he was 'groomed' to be a Cullen and not have any of his own opinions.

But he is aware now, and planning some revenge of the petty variety.   hehehe......   

Thanks for writing and sharing this awesome chapter.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

He's beginning to see how much they controlled him and he's not happy xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2020 7:11 PM Title: Truths To Be Told

I hear ya about bullies.  We all had those problems. Great chapter as always. Love Esme taking over



Author's Response:

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Yeah, bullies are everywhere it's so sad. Esme will do well, but she won't be able to hold Jasper there as he'll go wherever Bella goes xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2020 5:24 PM Title: The Truth Will Out

Woo Hoo Go Esme!!!  Glad all of Alice's machinations were brought too light..... unless there are even more.....



Author's Response:

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They are pathetic children trying to look like grown-ups and failing that's all, they don't have the brains for much else xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:57 AM Title: The Truth Will Out

Even though all (maybe) of Alice's plans were revealed, I'm still wary of her unless I read of her being burned.   Hmmm....     Edward seemed all apalled, but I'm sure he will be back to working with Alice as soon as his ass kicking is over woth.

Kick-ass Esme taking charge of the 'coven' is awesome.    Will Carlisle change from being a shit stain?   Or will Esme dump his ass?   The world may never know.   LOL

Bella and Jasper have a lot more serious talks in their future.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

I don't think Carlisle should ever have been a coven leader he's to wishy-washy xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2020 7:53 AM Title: No Competition

Love the baseball scene...   Jasper sussed out that Vicky and Laurent were both victims of James also.    Glad that James is gone though......

Carlisle, Alice and Edward are all 3 ridiculous.    ugh....    I'm pleased that Esme and the others are fully onto them.

Jasper and Bella's hot kiss was a great ending.    I hope their 'discussion' goes well.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you're liking the way I'm taking this xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2020 8:17 PM Title: No Competition

Love seeing the magor coming out to play.  Yummy 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, he's Jasper 2.0 lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: frances13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2020 5:53 PM Title: No Competition

Love it! You did great work for this chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you like it so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2020 6:24 PM Title: Game On

Omg loving the start to this. Snarky Bella and Uber hawt Jasper. More soon plz



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So pleased you enjoyed it and will like where we go xx

Alexis

Reviewer: TigerBoo2U Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2020 10:27 AM Title: Game On

Another brilliant Bella! Great start I can't wait to see what comes next, I love your take no shit Bella's and Jasper always a favourite of mine. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you enjoyed it, lets see where I can take this one lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2020 2:58 AM Title: Game On

It sounds like the decent side of the Cullen family is finding out the crap that the shitty side has been doing.      I sure hope that Bella can get away from fuckward and malice and even Carlisle.   He seems suspicious too.

Charlie is very funny in this so far, as is Bella.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you liked it so far xx

Alexis

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2020 5:16 PM Title: Game On

great start as usual! you are such a good writer. I wish I could do it too but... well at least I can read



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed the beginning xx

Alexis

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