Date: 24 Jan 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow. So glad they got that hell hole closed down. Poor girls. Yet for him getting her to stay
Date: 16 Jan 2021 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I have been reading fanfiction for about 10 yrs. and have never reviewed. I've never felt the need to until now. You are the first. God bless you for promoting civility, freedom and kindness.
BTW, I do love your stories!
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Beautiful chapter, so glad that they used their superior abilities to help those poor women.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Beautiful chapter, so glad that they used their superior abilities to help those poor women.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved the take down.
Date: 16 Jan 2021 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you so much for this new chapter! I appreciate this story so much! There is so muchvcharacter development inbit and you have such a sensitive way of writing - it is very, very Special. I Wish You and Your family all the best!
Date: 10 Jan 2021 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmm now I'm wondering who the Mercer's are selling them too. Prob some slave trade, but I'm wondering about the Volturi wanting pregnant blood? Ack wracking my brain
Date: 10 Jan 2021 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Just riveting.
Date: 05 Jan 2021 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
When I had my daughter the dr took four months to tell me karo syrup with brown sugar she instantly started sleeping through the night and was way less fussy. Just a few drops in every bottle helped tremendously. The clingy that might be q little rough my daughter still preferred me over other people but it gave me enough space to not go crazy good luck!
Date: 04 Jan 2021 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love that Edward got the first evie smile. Hoping he comes to his jealous senses and tells Bella he likes her too.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it's a phase you are going to have to go through:(. Maybe if you have a worn shirt or something next to her it might help.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww They are so cute together. Love Esme. Of course Rose would love Evie. Never thought otherwise. The Mercer's need to pay, thats for sure.
Sorry to hear about the colic. It really sucks. Sadly I have no advice.
Date: 03 Jan 2021 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow, thank you so much for still writing with all the "crazy" in your life. I hope your husband gets well soon and your little needy girl has a quick "mommy" faze. Take care of yourself !
Date: 02 Jan 2021 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm sure Rose will.be on board with the plan for those people. Ugh. Now I was thinking it was the pack was the issue. Silly me
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. I love protective Edward. bless him for finally sucking up his pride for Bella and evie's sake.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love this story.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not what I expected but glad to see it.
Date: 29 Dec 2020 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yess! I can’t wait for the family to come and the hunt. As usual, I really love your story. 😊
Date: 26 Dec 2020 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Warmth to the stomach hold them with their legs hanging down on your arm. That helps. Sometimes on your lap. Always tummy toward what they are laying on. There is a rememedy of a bottle of half seven up and half boiled water. Shake it up a little getting some fiz out and try that. It does help with gas. and when the m.. stuff is getting out of the bowels.
:-) grandmother here





Date: 24 Dec 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
:) Merry Christmas to you
Date: 23 Dec 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Colic is def a biatch. Thank gawd I didn't have to deal with it with my kiddos. Nice to see thier relationship/friendship growing.
Date: 23 Dec 2020 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter, I'm really enjoying how the two of them are bonding.
So sorry to hear about so many covid deaths of your acquaintances. Scary times right now.
Stay safe and healthy.
Date: 15 Dec 2020 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
As always, this story is well written and has the best cliffhangers. I also wish you good health and yes this is exactly how I escape. Thank you in advance for more chapters.
Date: 15 Dec 2020 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh what a Maury cliffhanger, who's the daddy!?!
Date: 15 Dec 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Glad they came to an agreement. LOL. Whirlwind Alice appears.
Date: 14 Dec 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Jake is the father
Date: 14 Dec 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have a feeling Jake is the father
Date: 05 Dec 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love Bella's snark. Glad she let Carlisle see Evie. Wondering about who Evie's dad is and when he's going to be back in story.
Date: 03 Dec 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Im so happy to see Carlisle and hopefully the rest of the family soon.
Date: 02 Dec 2020 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Soooo good
Date: 30 Nov 2020 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hope you are safe and I’m absolutely invested in this story. Great story! I can’t wait for more chapters. 😊
Date: 29 Nov 2020 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lol for his whiplash moods. B is too funny
Date: 24 Nov 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is changing.I like it very much! Thank you for this new chapter! Happy Thanksgiving!
Date: 24 Nov 2020 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Mais mais, mkre, more.... please?????
Date: 21 Nov 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love their interactions. E was awesome with the shopping. That manager was probably dancing an Irish jig when e left. Lol
Yea she's going to flip when he finds out he reads minds I think.
Date: 19 Nov 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
that part of Stephanie's story Bella not wanting to accept help seems far off when she has a helpless baby. She needs diapers wipes formula soap. Clothes. blankets .. Perhaps a trip to a doctor for a clean bill of health.
Date: 19 Nov 2020 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this story. I can’t wait for more chapters!
Date: 18 Nov 2020 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent story, I'm so intrigued.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this story already. Edward bumbling his way around as he tries to figure out what he's doing is really cute. Bella is fiercely proud, but determined to do what's best for baby Evie. Can't wait to see what all Edward buys and what the family will say about Edward being there with a human and baby!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Perfeito, eu espero mais em breve. See you!!
Date: 11 Nov 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awww glad they are both learning about each other.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome chapter. I love reading more of Edward's inner turmoil about what to do and how to react.
Date: 07 Nov 2020 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I am excited for more! ;)
Date: 07 Nov 2020 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
I’m liking this very much! I can’t wait.





Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 06 Nov 2020 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sooooo good!!!





Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start. Had to laugh out loud at the spin art comment. Can't wait for more.