[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2021 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Whew. Well, they got rid of some of the rubbish but I hope Marcus doesn't escape. They will never be able to relax wiith him somewhere out there. And Irina, too. Bella was not only brave but instinctually just plain smart. Well done. :)
Author's Response:
One down, only James, Marcus and irina to go! Our girl has come a long way- James certainly underestimated her xx
Date: 03 Jan 2021 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
woo hoo. Glad they got the girls before something worse happened. B is going to need therapy though I bet. Buh Bye Scumballs.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. The girls are safe and Sam is gone. Only James Marcus and Irina to go... xx
Date: 29 Dec 2020 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow! The drama! Hanging on your words! Great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) It makes me so happy to hear the story is keeping you hooked xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank yu for all the updates..I can't beleive whats happening..Did marcus kill his site and her husband? Did he really think that would help his cause? Bella stay strong, I with you about Irina. Untll you post again
Author's Response:
I'm like you like the updates:) You picked up on that subtle clue, huh? There's more to come on Edwards parents death in the coming chapters xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well, not totally surprised. I knew Carlisle was a stretch but he has always treated Bella with such disapproval and distain for someone who is carrying his grandchild. However, Marcus & James - well, that's a pair made in . . . well, the opposite of heaven. *ha* They both seem to be a bit unhinged. I knew that Irina had to be involved somehow and am not surprised about her. I know Edward will rise to this challenge but I'm curious just how our dear Bella will exact her own type of justice/revenge. I'm looking forward to it. :)
Author's Response:
Carlisle was a few peoples prime suspect but I would be extra mean for it to be him after his heart to heart with Bella a few chapters back. Edward is back in the next chapter so it's going to kick off! As for Bella... she's coming into her own:) xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow, loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad to hear you're liking it xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sneaky sneaky sneaky. Ya got me with Marcus. Glad B is being smart about staying calm and asking lots of questions.
Author's Response:
Damn Marcus! He's going to pay for his betrayal, that's for sure. Bella is coming into her own too; she's not the shrinking violet she once was xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
I guessed Marcus but not the whole story....great.
Author's Response:
A few people guessed Marcus. I'm glad I was able to keep some part of the story a surprise :) xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward is hopefully smart enough to figure out it’s not the Russians I hope
Author's Response:
You will find out in the next chapter, I promise :) Let's put it this way he won't be pleased he's been played xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
shit wheelchair beating time for those as**holes >:(
Author's Response:
Get your wheelchair at the ready - it's about to kick off in the next chapter! The boys are back...xx
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wishing you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year ! Love your story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Bri.I hope you had a lovely Christmas too. The next chapters coming later today xx
Date: 24 Dec 2020 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
I was hoping we would get something on Bella and Rose, at least them starting to look for them. I get that you had to get why Edward acted like he did, but I would have rather seen him explaining to Bella why he acted the way he did.
Author's Response:
Edwards pov was a sort of bonus chapter. The next update picks up with the girls and we finally get to find out who's behind all this xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad Edward realizes how wrong he was about Bella.
Author's Response:
He really does! It doesn't make what he said or did right but hopefully this chapter helps explain why he flew off the handle xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
Enjoy the holiday!!! Looking forward to Edward having his Bella and baby back!!
Author's Response:
Happy holidays to you too :) it won't be an instant fix but we have some progress by the end of the next chapter ... xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Sure hope Ben's not in on it. I like him. At least Em talked some sense into him.
While I love seeing E's POV, Ya still killin me with the cliffy last chapter.
Author's Response:
Haha that cliffy was evil but don't worry all will be revealed very soon! I'm updating today!!! And we will finally get some answers about who's behind all this... x
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2020 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yea, I don't think Edward will take kindly to being made a tool. At this particular point, (if it's a man) Carlisle or Marcus. If it's a woman, Irina (or the person she was talking to in the bathroom) in a wig, of course. I'm wondering. Did we ever really know under what circumstances Edward's parents died? Was it an accident or a hit job? I don't remember the details of their deaths ever being eluded to during the story. Maybe I've forgotten it if it was told. *shrugs*
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Edward will be out for blood for being tricked!
it's funny you mention Edwards parents, as that gets touched upon (very briefly) in the next chapter. I've kept that side of Edwards story very vague for now - if I remember correctly it was only in Bella and Edwards date in chapter 21 that he spoke about it. But there will be more on this later ;) xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my. Merry Christmas to us. Thank heavens. I get why he flew off the handle before, but I still want to smack him. Can't wait for the next chapter! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas! I hope you had a lovely Christmas :) I'm glad this chapter helped explain why Edward flew off the handle. It doesn't make what he said okay but it gives you an idea why he reacted like he did xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
As happy as I am to have Edwards point of view I'm still angry that we don't know who the big boss is
Author's Response:
That's coming very soon, I promise! I'm sticking to my Sunday updates so you will find out today who's behind all this xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
Omg, evil cliffy. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx
Date: 21 Dec 2020 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG That was just evil woman!!!
Author's Response:
I know, right! I couldn't help myself- hopefully an early update makes up for the Cliffhanger!!!Xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
:O :O :O :O :O NEED MORE ASAP PLEASE
Author's Response:
I've just posted the next chapter- this time we're hearing from Edward!!! Xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
I hope you update soon, that being said. I think it's Irena makes sence since she had been staying in NY with James. I know you don't want to reveal to much but you can tell us soon.
Author's Response:
Believe me I know how frustrating it is but I promise all will be revealed soon. The next update is Edward pov but after that it's the big reveal!!!xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
So mean. Loved the chapter but please update soon!
Author's Response:
I know, right? I couldn't help myself hehe! All will be revealed soon. Next chapter we are catching up with Edward... xx
Author's Response:
I know, right? I couldn't help myself hehe! All will be revealed soon. Next chapter we are catching up with Edward... xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
My first thought was Garrett...maybe he didn't die. No one would
Think if him... I don't want to say Carlisle. not sure....
I like this story
Author's Response:
I like your thinking!! Your the only one to suggest that :)it's lovely to hear your enjoying the story - thank you!!x
Date: 19 Dec 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 29
Darnnnnn! Your cliff hangers are a beast!
Author's Response:
I think people either love them or hate them but I've gotta leave you guys with something to think about between updated :) xx
Date: 19 Dec 2020 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
Way to leave us hsnging. Carlisle? I hope not
Author's Response:
I know right, that cliffhanger was evil!!;) Carlisle is top of most people's list but are they right ... xx
Date: 19 Dec 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
Could it be Jacob?
Author's Response:
You're one of a few people to suggest him. All will be revealed soon xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2020 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG ! Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, that means a lot :) Next chapter is with my beta so hopefully the update won't be too long xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh come on! Please update soon
Author's Response:
It's all kicking off now! There's more revelations in the next chapter. xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG...Sam is in on it
Author's Response:
Damn Sam! We'll get to see who else is involved in the next chapter ... xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well is Sam with the other side or, is he tring to protect her? I would really hate to see one of the guys she trusted turned on her, and got Paul killed. I hope this is just elabort plan to get her to a save house without her causing trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You'll get the answer to that in the next chapter... It's with my beta so hopefully the update won't be too long xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
poor Paul. Sam need to die.... slowly and painfully. f'ing jerk. Lemme guess Sam stole her bankcard and has been making suspicious purchases...like hotel rooms and other things that made E even more suspicious.
Author's Response:
Aww Paul :( You picked up on that, huh? We'll learn more in the next chapter xx
Date: 14 Dec 2020 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
I guess the Russians really want Edward for Irina. Sorry that Sam was a traitor
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, for reviewing :) We will learn who's behind all this in the next chapter xx
Date: 14 Dec 2020 3:04 AM Title: Prologue
<3 this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) xx
Date: 08 Dec 2020 2:41 AM Title: Prologue
Ok so I think Rosalie is getting to know emmet I also believe that James or someone else was brainwashing Edward into believing she was cheering with James obio he planned everything I really hope Bella makes Edwards eat he’s hurtful words she should leave he’s ass and have him grovel on bloody knees for not believe in her and for hurting her with those awful words
Date: 08 Dec 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well if I was Balla I would leave and not let him know where I was going, I wouldn't even tell Rose, either. I know he's part of the mob and proble won't have a promblem finding her if he wants to, but that's what he should have to do to prove to her he loves and believes her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
All will be revealed - I'm about to load the next chapter so you can see what Bella did next xx
Date: 07 Dec 2020 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG you are killing me.
Author's Response:
The wait is over! Next chapter is about to load xx
Date: 07 Dec 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hate it when authors make characters do stupid things. Why on Earth didn't Bella text Edward to say James is here said you told me to meet him here. Why didn't you warn me when you know I don't like the guy?
Author's Response:
In Bellas defence she is still very naive- she has a lot to learn. Especially over the next couple of chapters xx
Date: 05 Dec 2020 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ack what a crappy time the family is having. Glad B is there for him.
Date: 29 Nov 2020 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow. Well at least Edward and Emmett are OK.
Author's Response:
It was a bit of a shockers wasn't it? The next chapter is a tough one too xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2020 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
So much going on, loving it. Glad Rose was there for Bella she was so frightened.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much:) Glad you liked it . I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but let's just say this is the start of the drama ... xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad E got home ok. Think she needs to say something about James to him.
Author's Response:
A few people said this. And while it's not mentioned in the next chapter, let's just assume they had that conversation the morning after the raid:) xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hmm why do I think James was behind this showing up if cops. Nice that Carlisle talked with her.
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ugh men like James just makes my skin crawl. Aww for shy Emmett. Nanna is awesome as is mama bear Esme.
Date: 22 Nov 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm going to assume James and Irina has something to do with the raid. And I'm sure that James helpfully pointed out Bella just to push Edwards buttons
Author's Response:
This isn't the last we've seen of James... He will be back! You will have to wait and see if you're correct about him and Irina working together xx
Date: 22 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think Rose nailed it... James. I have a feeling he or someone else will use Bella as a pawn to get to Edward. He showed how he would react to her being in danger when the cop grabbed her. But it seems that each adversity makes them closer and stronger. Can't wait to continue.
Author's Response:
I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but this is just the start of the drama. You will have to wait and see if you're correct about James being involved...
Thank you so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it:) xx
Date: 20 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
Omg that is where u end it ! I am late for work reading this story and I have to go all day wondering the back happen d great story!
Author's Response:
It was a bit mean to end there, but I couldn't resist...
I update every Sunday, so there's only a couple of days to wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much for your message - I'm happy to hear you are liking the story and I hope you weren't too late for work hehe xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lol...The End...lmao I almost sent a search party out for you!
Thank you
Author's Response:
I know it was a mean trick to play ;) That chapter just sounded very final to me- I couldn't resist xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
so do you update more than once a week, because I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I update once a week - every sunday (apart from the odd exception) I wish I could post more, but I am a slooooow writer lol xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved the conversation between Bella and Carlisle. He really is a good man just watching out Edward. Of course there's drama! What's a Cullen family get together without drama?! I'm sure Edward has gotten himself in some extra trouble going after the office who was manhandling Bella. He just showed law enforcement his Achilles Heel, but it was obvious even before the cops interrupted the party. I love love love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I feel like Carlisle has been in the background a lot. It was about time he spoke to Bella- show he's not as intimidating as she thought. Up until now the story has been all about Edward and Bella. Now the next drama begins...
Thank you so much for your kind words- it means a lot:) xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I cannot process a quiet Emmett, which makes it all the more funny. James is obviously a slime ball. I wonder if he's going to try to corner Bella on her way to the bathroom. Hmmm. Momma Cullen is pissed and Irina should be very afraid! I love this story!
Date: 15 Nov 2020 7:25 AM Title: Prologue
I am loving your story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- It's lovely to hear new readers are finding and liking the story. I'm in the process of uploading the next chapter now, so there's not long to wait Xx
Date: 14 Nov 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
She picked the black lace dress!!
Author's Response:
That she did- was it ever in doubt... xx
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..well done..Emmett quiet too cute..I love Nana she is to cute.. I wonder what James is up to? I'm sure we will find out soon. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
Author's Response:
Awkward Emmett is adorable! James, not so much! There is drama to come... Stay tuned for tomorrows update. Thanks for reviewing :)xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2020 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving it, Bella is so funny first time for everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it :) xx
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love a happy giggley drunk, especially when it's Edward.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so happy they had this discussion and are on the same page. So Edward was waiting for her, too! I love that. His fierceness to protect Bella is such a turn on! I can't wait for the time when Bella and/or Edward give Irina the dressing down she deserves.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love how close Bella and Edward are getting! Nonna is awesome and I look forward to a lot more interactions with her. I'm sure it's gonna be Irina that upsets Bella.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, we knew Rose go ballistic! I wonder how Angela will take the news. As a mom, I know I'd do absolutely anything for my kids and to keep them safe. Bella is doing just that, with a lot of hope in her heart for the marriage to be a happy one I time!
Date: 13 Nov 2020 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Uh oh!! Edward and Bella both kept secrets, but of course with Edward that's not something you tell someone when you first meet them. I wonder how long Edward will be gone before he shows back up. What's next...? Hmmm
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
New reader to your story..I'm really enjoying it..Well done..I love the way their relationship has blossom..I'm hoping Emmett and Rosale hit it off..I also want Alice to become pregnant I think Esme will be over the moon if Alice gets pregnant and Rosalie & Emmett become a couple..lol you know they'll get pregnant right away..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review- it's lovey to see new readers reading and liking the story:) xx
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Lol rose is such a good friend. Y know her and Em are going to meet up sometime.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad he opened up a bit to her. I wonder if Renee is going to slink our of the woodwork at some point.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Em has the worst timing. Lol
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
lol for Drunk Edward.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Def a surprise esp how careful and attentive he was with their first time.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Irina is def a jealous skank. Glad Alice found B and tough talked her. LOL for Emmett telling everyone before they could.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
of course there had to be a viper at the party. Hope Grandpa will be ok. Why do I get the feeling that Irina is going to follow her to the bathroom.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love Esme. She's the best. Glad Rose is there to visit. Hope she does move to Seattle. WOuld think there are more places to work there for her too.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Surprised they decided to keep the sex of baby a secret. Glad everthing is ok. Aww for Rose visiting.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad they are talking through things.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Nanna at least understands her being overwhelmed meeting so many people at once. Hopefully E comes around soon.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving nanna. At least his family is welcoming.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9/10
Wowsers. Wonder how the family is going to feel being excluded from the wedding. Hope that she will get to continue to see Rose.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Smart doing that in private.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sadly he could make her just dissappear. Wonder what Rose is going to say.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy. Wonder what will happen when he finds out Rose was snooping. At least Bella has some information for the next meeting.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2020 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yes great update and look forward to more!!! :)
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't blame him for being pissed. Although I'm wondering if E had something to do with Charlie's death.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
surprised it took him 5 weeks to find her.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooh you go Bella!!!
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Surprised the girls left B there. woo hoo for first kisses.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad she's got good friends in her corner.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:06 AM Title: Prologue
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Lovin' this SO much!
Date: 06 Nov 2020 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Both take both
Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
she picked the black one haha
Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Definitely the black lace one!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
So glad to see you here.
What a wonderful update. I knew once they both got their heads ourt of their asses that things would start falling into place. Communication is a vital part of a long lasting relationship. It amazes me how many people don't see that.
Can't wait to see what dress she picked.
Date: 05 Nov 2020 10:45 PM Title: Prologue
Love this story!! where is chapter 22?
Author's Response:
It should be up now:) xx