Date: 29 Nov 2020 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow. Well at least Edward and Emmett are OK.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2020 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
So much going on, loving it. Glad Rose was there for Bella she was so frightened.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much:) Glad you liked it . I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but let's just say this is the start of the drama ... xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad E got home ok. Think she needs to say something about James to him.
Author's Response:
A few people said this. And while it's not mentioned in the next chapter, let's just assume they had that conversation the morning after the raid:) xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hmm why do I think James was behind this showing up if cops. Nice that Carlisle talked with her.
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ugh men like James just makes my skin crawl. Aww for shy Emmett. Nanna is awesome as is mama bear Esme.
Date: 22 Nov 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm going to assume James and Irina has something to do with the raid. And I'm sure that James helpfully pointed out Bella just to push Edwards buttons
Author's Response:
This isn't the last we've seen of James... He will be back! You will have to wait and see if you're correct about him and Irina working together xx
Date: 22 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think Rose nailed it... James. I have a feeling he or someone else will use Bella as a pawn to get to Edward. He showed how he would react to her being in danger when the cop grabbed her. But it seems that each adversity makes them closer and stronger. Can't wait to continue.
Author's Response:
I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but this is just the start of the drama. You will have to wait and see if you're correct about James being involved...
Thank you so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it:) xx
Date: 20 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
Omg that is where u end it ! I am late for work reading this story and I have to go all day wondering the back happen d great story!
Author's Response:
It was a bit mean to end there, but I couldn't resist...
I update every Sunday, so there's only a couple of days to wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much for your message - I'm happy to hear you are liking the story and I hope you weren't too late for work hehe xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lol...The End...lmao I almost sent a search party out for you!
Thank you
Author's Response:
I know it was a mean trick to play ;) That chapter just sounded very final to me- I couldn't resist xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
so do you update more than once a week, because I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I update once a week - every sunday (apart from the odd exception) I wish I could post more, but I am a slooooow writer lol xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved the conversation between Bella and Carlisle. He really is a good man just watching out Edward. Of course there's drama! What's a Cullen family get together without drama?! I'm sure Edward has gotten himself in some extra trouble going after the office who was manhandling Bella. He just showed law enforcement his Achilles Heel, but it was obvious even before the cops interrupted the party. I love love love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I feel like Carlisle has been in the background a lot. It was about time he spoke to Bella- show he's not as intimidating as she thought. Up until now the story has been all about Edward and Bella. Now the next drama begins...
Thank you so much for your kind words- it means a lot:) xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I cannot process a quiet Emmett, which makes it all the more funny. James is obviously a slime ball. I wonder if he's going to try to corner Bella on her way to the bathroom. Hmmm. Momma Cullen is pissed and Irina should be very afraid! I love this story!
Date: 15 Nov 2020 7:25 AM Title: Prologue
I am loving your story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- It's lovely to hear new readers are finding and liking the story. I'm in the process of uploading the next chapter now, so there's not long to wait Xx
Date: 14 Nov 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
She picked the black lace dress!!
Author's Response:
That she did- was it ever in doubt... xx
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..well done..Emmett quiet too cute..I love Nana she is to cute.. I wonder what James is up to? I'm sure we will find out soon. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
Author's Response:
Awkward Emmett is adorable! James, not so much! There is drama to come... Stay tuned for tomorrows update. Thanks for reviewing :)xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2020 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving it, Bella is so funny first time for everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it :) xx
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love a happy giggley drunk, especially when it's Edward.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so happy they had this discussion and are on the same page. So Edward was waiting for her, too! I love that. His fierceness to protect Bella is such a turn on! I can't wait for the time when Bella and/or Edward give Irina the dressing down she deserves.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love how close Bella and Edward are getting! Nonna is awesome and I look forward to a lot more interactions with her. I'm sure it's gonna be Irina that upsets Bella.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, we knew Rose go ballistic! I wonder how Angela will take the news. As a mom, I know I'd do absolutely anything for my kids and to keep them safe. Bella is doing just that, with a lot of hope in her heart for the marriage to be a happy one I time!
Date: 13 Nov 2020 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Uh oh!! Edward and Bella both kept secrets, but of course with Edward that's not something you tell someone when you first meet them. I wonder how long Edward will be gone before he shows back up. What's next...? Hmmm
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
New reader to your story..I'm really enjoying it..Well done..I love the way their relationship has blossom..I'm hoping Emmett and Rosale hit it off..I also want Alice to become pregnant I think Esme will be over the moon if Alice gets pregnant and Rosalie & Emmett become a couple..lol you know they'll get pregnant right away..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review- it's lovey to see new readers reading and liking the story:) xx
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Lol rose is such a good friend. Y know her and Em are going to meet up sometime.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad he opened up a bit to her. I wonder if Renee is going to slink our of the woodwork at some point.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Em has the worst timing. Lol
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
lol for Drunk Edward.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Def a surprise esp how careful and attentive he was with their first time.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Irina is def a jealous skank. Glad Alice found B and tough talked her. LOL for Emmett telling everyone before they could.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
of course there had to be a viper at the party. Hope Grandpa will be ok. Why do I get the feeling that Irina is going to follow her to the bathroom.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love Esme. She's the best. Glad Rose is there to visit. Hope she does move to Seattle. WOuld think there are more places to work there for her too.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Surprised they decided to keep the sex of baby a secret. Glad everthing is ok. Aww for Rose visiting.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad they are talking through things.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad Nanna at least understands her being overwhelmed meeting so many people at once. Hopefully E comes around soon.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loving nanna. At least his family is welcoming.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9/10
Wowsers. Wonder how the family is going to feel being excluded from the wedding. Hope that she will get to continue to see Rose.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Smart doing that in private.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sadly he could make her just dissappear. Wonder what Rose is going to say.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy. Wonder what will happen when he finds out Rose was snooping. At least Bella has some information for the next meeting.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2020 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yes great update and look forward to more!!! :)
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't blame him for being pissed. Although I'm wondering if E had something to do with Charlie's death.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
surprised it took him 5 weeks to find her.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooh you go Bella!!!
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Surprised the girls left B there. woo hoo for first kisses.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Glad she's got good friends in her corner.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 5:06 AM Title: Prologue
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 06 Nov 2020 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Lovin' this SO much!
Date: 06 Nov 2020 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Both take both
Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
she picked the black one haha
Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Definitely the black lace one!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2020 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
So glad to see you here.
What a wonderful update. I knew once they both got their heads ourt of their asses that things would start falling into place. Communication is a vital part of a long lasting relationship. It amazes me how many people don't see that.
Can't wait to see what dress she picked.
Date: 05 Nov 2020 10:45 PM Title: Prologue
Love this story!! where is chapter 22?
Author's Response:
It should be up now:) xx