Date: 22 Feb 2021 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 38
Uuuu Edward and Bella need this time even if it’s talking it’s good
Date: 21 Feb 2021 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 38
Glad they are talking about things. I'd be frustrated too. Marcus needs to be taken out and soon.
Date: 20 Feb 2021 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
Glad they are working it out
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2021 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 38
Loving it. Glad Bella got everything out in the open with Edward. She needed to be with him to calm him down since he's so frustrated and angry.
Date: 09 Feb 2021 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
Gotta love Nanna. Glad B got R to understand.
Author's Response:
Nanna is the best! Rosalie means well but she needed nanna to step in and put her straight on a few things xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2021 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again. Gotta love Nana
Author's Response:
Nanna is so much fun! Thanks for reviewing:) I'm glad you liked it xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2021 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 37
Great as always
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :) xx
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2021 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 37
Damn, I love Nana, glad that she was there to support Bella.
Author's Response:
Nanna is the best! She knows how to put Rosalie and Edward in their place xx
Date: 05 Feb 2021 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 36
Rose is cool being protective but she needs to be careful before she steps over a line. AWWW for Nanna
Author's Response:
It's nice to have nanna back. She in top form in th next chapter too. As for Rosalie ... someone is going to put her in her place. Can you guess who? Xx
Date: 05 Feb 2021 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 36
He’s not playing fair he knows her weaknesses Jajaja love it
Author's Response:
Haha he knows what he's doing. Wait until you read the next chapter xx
Date: 05 Feb 2021 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
Edward swoon....
Author's Response:
His hearts in the right place - he's really trying to make amends. Xx
Date: 04 Feb 2021 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 36
Great as always
Author's Response:
Thanks so much xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2021 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loving it. Edward is really trying hard and this is something he and Bella need to work through, Rose needs to back off.
Author's Response:
He really is! Just you wait until the next chapter. As for rose... she's annoyed a few people. Who do we think is going to put her in her place? Xx
Date: 31 Jan 2021 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
Glad Carlisle talked to her about his difficulties as well.
Author's Response:
She needed to hear it :) now begging the process of moving forward together xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
Abandonment and betrayal. What words?! Edward is experiencing this in spades. Bella was the "squeeze." She was used to get to Edward. HE WILL NEVER FORGIVE THIS. Marcus is a dead man walking. Edward understands how Marcus manipulated him. Bella needs to support him while he wipes the earth of this vermine. I hope that Bella has the sense to see how Edward handles this situation and also, of his loss while doing so.
Author's Response:
Marcus will get what's coming to him for sure... it just may take a little time. As for our favourite couple, I think it's safe to say I won't be able to keep them apart for much longer xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2021 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved Carlisle and Bella's talk together, I think it was helpful for Bella and Carlisle may have learned something about Marcus.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I thought it was time to bring Carlisle back into the story and it was good for Bella to hear his insight into everything that's happened xx
Date: 27 Jan 2021 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great as always
Author's Response:
Thanksso much. I'm glad you liked it :)xx
Date: 24 Jan 2021 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 34
Glad they talked some. They Def need to learn to communicate better
Author's Response:
Absolutely this is just the start of them moving on and most importantly learning from what happened- communication is key!!xx
Date: 24 Jan 2021 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
While they need to talk, Esme's advice is spot on. Glad B and the baby are OK
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2021 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for the update..Well done..I hope they work things out..I wonder who interrupts them? until you post again
Author's Response:
You can now find out the answer to that... I've just posted the new chapter. Enjoy xx
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2021 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 34
Weeelllll. I realize that Bella has went through a horrible event and Edward was just plain dumb about how it went down. However, my inner voice is SHOUTING from the rafters. Bella, YOU started all of this. YOU were the one who set all of this in motion by trickery. HOW DID YOU THINK THIS WAS GOING TO TURN OUT??????!!!!!! You wanted a baby soooo badly that you tricked/used a man. Granted, you didn't bank on the unfortunate "victim" that you chose. However, THIS WAS YOUR DOING!!! At this point, I have more support for Edward than I do Bella. She is just frankly a manipulator and spoiled at that. WHY (in God's great universe) would she think she could trick someone to give her a baby?????? It's plain twisted. Bella needs to have a REAL soulsearching because she lost her way loooooong ago. Quite frankly, I'm fed up with her ranting. Grow the hell up. Take responsibility for your choices. Well done as always! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to read your review because I feel like Edward is under attack at the moment. Yes, he messed up but like you said - let's not forget how this all started. Neither are innocent! Xx
Date: 17 Jan 2021 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
Ok. Ok. I'm processing. Still totally with you. Still totally makes sense. Feels very real. Dude!!! Awesome fic! Aaaargh. Can you update soon? ;) Like every day. ;} Alright... I'll stop and go read your recs!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review. I'm so happy to hear you are enjoying the story. I really wish I could update everyday but now I've used up all my banked chapters I'm bk to weekly updates.I've just update the next chapter so I hope you enjoy it :) Xx
Date: 17 Jan 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
Very good
Author's Response:
Thanks so much xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for the update..well done..I hope they find Marcus soon..I want Edward to take his frustration out on James..until you post again
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. There was a lot going on in that chapter. Next up Bella and Edward have that much needed talk ...
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
Thank you for the update..well done..I hope they find Marcus soon..I want Edward to take his frustration out on James..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2021 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 33
Yikes, but this chapter didn't let me increase the text-size! TOO small for these old eyes!!! I didn't feel this was the appropriate time for Edward & Bella to address their personal relationship issues. They both were running "high" on adrenaline and emotions. Wait for cooler heads to emerge. I also don't have so much desire to vindicate Bella. She totally used Edward from the very start. Remember, Bella? Entrapment. Pot- Kettle? No one is perfect. Edward has some learning to do, also. Thank goodness, the baby is well and (for the most part) Bella. Take the time to heal and the patience to let it happen. Love endures all. Now, let's find that traitor Marcus. He REALLY needs to pay for what he did to this family. Well, done. :)
Author's Response:
I think so too- so much has happened in such a short space of time. They need time to settle before they talk. Your review makes me so happy because I fear a lot of people are coming down too harshly on Edward. Yes, she messed up but let's not forget how this started. Like you say with Bella using him. They've both got a lot of learning to do Xx
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2021 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
So much happening between them. Glad the baby and Bella are okay and she does have a support system with Rose and Edward's family. Edward knows how badly he messed up and is going to have to work to get Bella's trust back which he willing to do.
Author's Response:
It really has. They need time to settle before having that all important conversation which is coming in the next chapter xx
Date: 11 Jan 2021 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 33
Very good, can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thabks so much, It makes me so happy to hear you liked it xx
Date: 11 Jan 2021 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome chapter! I totally get Bella's thought process. Anyone who has ever been truly hurt by someone you love knows you can't just bounce back. I love that Rose tore into him the way she did. Perfect BFF behavior. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much- I'm glad you liked it. I think rose did what a lot of people wanted Bella to do! They have a lot of talking to do which will come in the next chapter xx
Date: 07 Jan 2021 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bin gehört von der Geschichte. James ohne Worte, der Feindeicht unsympathisch, grrrrrr. Markus ist Machhungrig erwartet er gehört tief. Irina muss ihre Straffe bekommen. Edward zieht sich seinen Sturen Kopf aus dem Arsch.
Warte sehr ungeduldig auf dein Update
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review- the next chapter is coming soon xx
Date: 06 Jan 2021 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think he is .... I don't know
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Date: 06 Jan 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great. Good storyline I would like for them to fall in love before she gets pregnant.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2021 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it, knew Edward was going to get Bella and make them pay for what they did to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it 😊xx
Date: 04 Jan 2021 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow. That was insane (in a good way). What's going to happen to James? How will Edward make it up to Bella for doubting her and the cruel things he said to her? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It was all happening in the last chapter!! Edward has some grovelling to do that's for sure. Thanks so much for your review. The next update will be later today xx
Date: 04 Jan 2021 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 32
Uuuu glad everyone is good yes someone get James and Marcus
Author's Response:
One down; only Marcus, James and Irina to go... xx
Date: 03 Jan 2021 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
damn :O
Author's Response:
It's all kicking off now xx
Date: 03 Jan 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 32
Loved this chapter...looking forward to James' torture and Bella/Edward talk/reunion.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. This chapter was a struggle so it makes me so happy to hear you liked it xx
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2021 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you for the update..Well done..I happy everyone is safe, I'm sure the family is safe. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. There was a lot going on. The next chapter is coming very soon 😊xx
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. There was a lot going on. The next chapter is coming very soon 😊xx
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. There was a lot going on. The next chapter is coming very soon 😊xx
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2021 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Whew. Well, they got rid of some of the rubbish but I hope Marcus doesn't escape. They will never be able to relax wiith him somewhere out there. And Irina, too. Bella was not only brave but instinctually just plain smart. Well done. :)
Author's Response:
One down, only James, Marcus and irina to go! Our girl has come a long way- James certainly underestimated her xx
Date: 03 Jan 2021 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
woo hoo. Glad they got the girls before something worse happened. B is going to need therapy though I bet. Buh Bye Scumballs.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. The girls are safe and Sam is gone. Only James Marcus and Irina to go... xx
Date: 29 Dec 2020 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow! The drama! Hanging on your words! Great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) It makes me so happy to hear the story is keeping you hooked xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
Thank yu for all the updates..I can't beleive whats happening..Did marcus kill his site and her husband? Did he really think that would help his cause? Bella stay strong, I with you about Irina. Untll you post again
Author's Response:
I'm like you like the updates:) You picked up on that subtle clue, huh? There's more to come on Edwards parents death in the coming chapters xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well, not totally surprised. I knew Carlisle was a stretch but he has always treated Bella with such disapproval and distain for someone who is carrying his grandchild. However, Marcus & James - well, that's a pair made in . . . well, the opposite of heaven. *ha* They both seem to be a bit unhinged. I knew that Irina had to be involved somehow and am not surprised about her. I know Edward will rise to this challenge but I'm curious just how our dear Bella will exact her own type of justice/revenge. I'm looking forward to it. :)
Author's Response:
Carlisle was a few peoples prime suspect but I would be extra mean for it to be him after his heart to heart with Bella a few chapters back. Edward is back in the next chapter so it's going to kick off! As for Bella... she's coming into her own:) xx
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2020 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
wow, loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, glad to hear you're liking it xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sneaky sneaky sneaky. Ya got me with Marcus. Glad B is being smart about staying calm and asking lots of questions.
Author's Response:
Damn Marcus! He's going to pay for his betrayal, that's for sure. Bella is coming into her own too; she's not the shrinking violet she once was xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
I guessed Marcus but not the whole story....great.
Author's Response:
A few people guessed Marcus. I'm glad I was able to keep some part of the story a surprise :) xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward is hopefully smart enough to figure out it’s not the Russians I hope
Author's Response:
You will find out in the next chapter, I promise :) Let's put it this way he won't be pleased he's been played xx
Date: 27 Dec 2020 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 31
shit wheelchair beating time for those as**holes >:(
Author's Response:
Get your wheelchair at the ready - it's about to kick off in the next chapter! The boys are back...xx
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wishing you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year ! Love your story can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Bri.I hope you had a lovely Christmas too. The next chapters coming later today xx
Date: 24 Dec 2020 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
I was hoping we would get something on Bella and Rose, at least them starting to look for them. I get that you had to get why Edward acted like he did, but I would have rather seen him explaining to Bella why he acted the way he did.
Author's Response:
Edwards pov was a sort of bonus chapter. The next update picks up with the girls and we finally get to find out who's behind all this xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Glad Edward realizes how wrong he was about Bella.
Author's Response:
He really does! It doesn't make what he said or did right but hopefully this chapter helps explain why he flew off the handle xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
Enjoy the holiday!!! Looking forward to Edward having his Bella and baby back!!
Author's Response:
Happy holidays to you too :) it won't be an instant fix but we have some progress by the end of the next chapter ... xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Sure hope Ben's not in on it. I like him. At least Em talked some sense into him.
While I love seeing E's POV, Ya still killin me with the cliffy last chapter.
Author's Response:
Haha that cliffy was evil but don't worry all will be revealed very soon! I'm updating today!!! And we will finally get some answers about who's behind all this... x
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2020 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
Yea, I don't think Edward will take kindly to being made a tool. At this particular point, (if it's a man) Carlisle or Marcus. If it's a woman, Irina (or the person she was talking to in the bathroom) in a wig, of course. I'm wondering. Did we ever really know under what circumstances Edward's parents died? Was it an accident or a hit job? I don't remember the details of their deaths ever being eluded to during the story. Maybe I've forgotten it if it was told. *shrugs*
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Edward will be out for blood for being tricked!
it's funny you mention Edwards parents, as that gets touched upon (very briefly) in the next chapter. I've kept that side of Edwards story very vague for now - if I remember correctly it was only in Bella and Edwards date in chapter 21 that he spoke about it. But there will be more on this later ;) xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my. Merry Christmas to us. Thank heavens. I get why he flew off the handle before, but I still want to smack him. Can't wait for the next chapter! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Merry Christmas! I hope you had a lovely Christmas :) I'm glad this chapter helped explain why Edward flew off the handle. It doesn't make what he said okay but it gives you an idea why he reacted like he did xx
Date: 23 Dec 2020 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
As happy as I am to have Edwards point of view I'm still angry that we don't know who the big boss is
Author's Response:
That's coming very soon, I promise! I'm sticking to my Sunday updates so you will find out today who's behind all this xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
Omg, evil cliffy. Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It makes me so happy to hear people are still enjoying the story xx
Date: 21 Dec 2020 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG That was just evil woman!!!
Author's Response:
I know, right! I couldn't help myself- hopefully an early update makes up for the Cliffhanger!!!Xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 29
:O :O :O :O :O NEED MORE ASAP PLEASE
Author's Response:
I've just posted the next chapter- this time we're hearing from Edward!!! Xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
I hope you update soon, that being said. I think it's Irena makes sence since she had been staying in NY with James. I know you don't want to reveal to much but you can tell us soon.
Author's Response:
Believe me I know how frustrating it is but I promise all will be revealed soon. The next update is Edward pov but after that it's the big reveal!!!xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
So mean. Loved the chapter but please update soon!
Author's Response:
I know, right? I couldn't help myself hehe! All will be revealed soon. Next chapter we are catching up with Edward... xx
Author's Response:
I know, right? I couldn't help myself hehe! All will be revealed soon. Next chapter we are catching up with Edward... xx
Date: 20 Dec 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
My first thought was Garrett...maybe he didn't die. No one would
Think if him... I don't want to say Carlisle. not sure....
I like this story
Author's Response:
I like your thinking!! Your the only one to suggest that :)it's lovely to hear your enjoying the story - thank you!!x
Date: 19 Dec 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 29
Darnnnnn! Your cliff hangers are a beast!
Author's Response:
I think people either love them or hate them but I've gotta leave you guys with something to think about between updated :) xx
Date: 19 Dec 2020 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 29
Way to leave us hsnging. Carlisle? I hope not
Author's Response:
I know right, that cliffhanger was evil!!;) Carlisle is top of most people's list but are they right ... xx
Date: 19 Dec 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
Could it be Jacob?
Author's Response:
You're one of a few people to suggest him. All will be revealed soon xx
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2020 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG ! Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, that means a lot :) Next chapter is with my beta so hopefully the update won't be too long xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh come on! Please update soon
Author's Response:
It's all kicking off now! There's more revelations in the next chapter. xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG...Sam is in on it
Author's Response:
Damn Sam! We'll get to see who else is involved in the next chapter ... xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well is Sam with the other side or, is he tring to protect her? I would really hate to see one of the guys she trusted turned on her, and got Paul killed. I hope this is just elabort plan to get her to a save house without her causing trouble. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You'll get the answer to that in the next chapter... It's with my beta so hopefully the update won't be too long xx
Date: 15 Dec 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
poor Paul. Sam need to die.... slowly and painfully. f'ing jerk. Lemme guess Sam stole her bankcard and has been making suspicious purchases...like hotel rooms and other things that made E even more suspicious.
Author's Response:
Aww Paul :( You picked up on that, huh? We'll learn more in the next chapter xx
Date: 14 Dec 2020 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
I guess the Russians really want Edward for Irina. Sorry that Sam was a traitor
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, for reviewing :) We will learn who's behind all this in the next chapter xx
Date: 14 Dec 2020 3:04 AM Title: Prologue
<3 this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:) xx
Date: 08 Dec 2020 2:41 AM Title: Prologue
Ok so I think Rosalie is getting to know emmet I also believe that James or someone else was brainwashing Edward into believing she was cheering with James obio he planned everything I really hope Bella makes Edwards eat he’s hurtful words she should leave he’s ass and have him grovel on bloody knees for not believe in her and for hurting her with those awful words
Date: 08 Dec 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well if I was Balla I would leave and not let him know where I was going, I wouldn't even tell Rose, either. I know he's part of the mob and proble won't have a promblem finding her if he wants to, but that's what he should have to do to prove to her he loves and believes her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
All will be revealed - I'm about to load the next chapter so you can see what Bella did next xx
Date: 07 Dec 2020 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG you are killing me.
Author's Response:
The wait is over! Next chapter is about to load xx
Date: 07 Dec 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hate it when authors make characters do stupid things. Why on Earth didn't Bella text Edward to say James is here said you told me to meet him here. Why didn't you warn me when you know I don't like the guy?
Author's Response:
In Bellas defence she is still very naive- she has a lot to learn. Especially over the next couple of chapters xx
Date: 05 Dec 2020 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ack what a crappy time the family is having. Glad B is there for him.
Date: 29 Nov 2020 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh wow. Well at least Edward and Emmett are OK.
Author's Response:
It was a bit of a shockers wasn't it? The next chapter is a tough one too xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2020 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
So much going on, loving it. Glad Rose was there for Bella she was so frightened.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much:) Glad you liked it . I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but let's just say this is the start of the drama ... xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad E got home ok. Think she needs to say something about James to him.
Author's Response:
A few people said this. And while it's not mentioned in the next chapter, let's just assume they had that conversation the morning after the raid:) xx
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hmm why do I think James was behind this showing up if cops. Nice that Carlisle talked with her.
Date: 23 Nov 2020 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ugh men like James just makes my skin crawl. Aww for shy Emmett. Nanna is awesome as is mama bear Esme.
Date: 22 Nov 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm going to assume James and Irina has something to do with the raid. And I'm sure that James helpfully pointed out Bella just to push Edwards buttons
Author's Response:
This isn't the last we've seen of James... He will be back! You will have to wait and see if you're correct about him and Irina working together xx
Date: 22 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think Rose nailed it... James. I have a feeling he or someone else will use Bella as a pawn to get to Edward. He showed how he would react to her being in danger when the cop grabbed her. But it seems that each adversity makes them closer and stronger. Can't wait to continue.
Author's Response:
I'd love to say this is only a small blip, but this is just the start of the drama. You will have to wait and see if you're correct about James being involved...
Thank you so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it:) xx
Date: 20 Nov 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
Omg that is where u end it ! I am late for work reading this story and I have to go all day wondering the back happen d great story!
Author's Response:
It was a bit mean to end there, but I couldn't resist...
I update every Sunday, so there's only a couple of days to wait for the next chapter.
Thanks so much for your message - I'm happy to hear you are liking the story and I hope you weren't too late for work hehe xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lol...The End...lmao I almost sent a search party out for you!
Thank you
Author's Response:
I know it was a mean trick to play ;) That chapter just sounded very final to me- I couldn't resist xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
so do you update more than once a week, because I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I update once a week - every sunday (apart from the odd exception) I wish I could post more, but I am a slooooow writer lol xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved the conversation between Bella and Carlisle. He really is a good man just watching out Edward. Of course there's drama! What's a Cullen family get together without drama?! I'm sure Edward has gotten himself in some extra trouble going after the office who was manhandling Bella. He just showed law enforcement his Achilles Heel, but it was obvious even before the cops interrupted the party. I love love love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I feel like Carlisle has been in the background a lot. It was about time he spoke to Bella- show he's not as intimidating as she thought. Up until now the story has been all about Edward and Bella. Now the next drama begins...
Thank you so much for your kind words- it means a lot:) xx
Date: 16 Nov 2020 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
I cannot process a quiet Emmett, which makes it all the more funny. James is obviously a slime ball. I wonder if he's going to try to corner Bella on her way to the bathroom. Hmmm. Momma Cullen is pissed and Irina should be very afraid! I love this story!
Date: 15 Nov 2020 7:25 AM Title: Prologue
I am loving your story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- It's lovely to hear new readers are finding and liking the story. I'm in the process of uploading the next chapter now, so there's not long to wait Xx
Date: 14 Nov 2020 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
She picked the black lace dress!!
Author's Response:
That she did- was it ever in doubt... xx
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2020 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the update..well done..Emmett quiet too cute..I love Nana she is to cute.. I wonder what James is up to? I'm sure we will find out soon. I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..until you post again
Author's Response:
Awkward Emmett is adorable! James, not so much! There is drama to come... Stay tuned for tomorrows update. Thanks for reviewing :)xx
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2020 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loving it, Bella is so funny first time for everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review- I'm glad you liked it :) xx
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love a happy giggley drunk, especially when it's Edward.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so happy they had this discussion and are on the same page. So Edward was waiting for her, too! I love that. His fierceness to protect Bella is such a turn on! I can't wait for the time when Bella and/or Edward give Irina the dressing down she deserves.
Date: 13 Nov 2020 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love how close Bella and Edward are getting! Nonna is awesome and I look forward to a lot more interactions with her. I'm sure it's gonna be Irina that upsets Bella.