Date: 02 Mar 2021 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved Loved Loved it
Date: 02 Mar 2021 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
Love the Times Square choice. Perfect announcement to the world.
Date: 02 Mar 2021 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 35
This brought tears to my eyes and my throat is tight with my emotion! Thanks so much for your story and I look forward to reading more of your work...
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bella is so naughty. Lol
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awe Micah is such a cutie. Glad E and Charlie had time to talk.
Date: 18 Feb 2021 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
Definitely want to continue
Date: 05 Feb 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Finally they are all together
Date: 04 Feb 2021 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad e told b about t. Aww for Charlie was able to get there.
Date: 31 Jan 2021 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
Sounds like Tamara is going down. Maybe they should tell the cops. Have them mention the name to the pushing guy and see if he spills
Date: 29 Jan 2021 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow just got finished reading this and it's so good. I can't wait to find out if it was Tamara. What is Edward going to think when it's one of his old whores that could have cost Bella her life? That he's the one who brought her into Bella's life. Great story so far. Looking forward to the next update.





Date: 26 Jan 2021 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for the update..I hope Bella will be ok and I hope they get Tamara if she is behind this..until you post again
Date: 25 Jan 2021 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
I didn't see that coming





Date: 20 Jan 2021 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow what a chapter, get to writing the next one or 20
Date: 18 Jan 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh wow poor Bella. Micah is freaked out bad I'm sure. Poor kid
Date: 18 Jan 2021 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
That took me by surprise...Oh please let Bella have quick recovery!
Date: 18 Jan 2021 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
My money is on the guy that got fired from the restaurant (maitre d?)for being so rude when Bella applied for work
Date: 10 Jan 2021 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oooh lemoniness yum
Date: 03 Jan 2021 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
love the flirty calls. Glad B finally called Charlie.





Date: 30 Dec 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Keep on writing, and
A Happier New Year!





Date: 28 Dec 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thnak you for the update..well done..until you post aagin
Date: 27 Dec 2020 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
So glad they talked
Date: 27 Dec 2020 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad she had Irene to talk too. LOL for E buying out the kitchen store. aww for a decent phone converstaion.
Date: 26 Dec 2020 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad he's opened up discussion again. Glad B has Irene
Date: 21 Dec 2020 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
PLEASE UPDATE SOON this story is fantastic
Date: 18 Dec 2020 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad to see Edward seems to have come to senses
Date: 18 Dec 2020 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother. I was 16 when mine passed away and I still miss her, though I am an old woman now.
I'll tell you what makes me feel young....reading fine stories like yours! Thanks for sharing this with us, I'm enjoying it so much. though I do get pissed off with Edward....





Date: 15 Dec 2020 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 13 Dec 2020 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh Edward...so I assume nothing untrue has been reported about him...
Date: 13 Dec 2020 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jeez, E is full of that little green monster ain't he.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
They both have a lot to learn about communication. Glad Esme was there to referee. Hope for more soon.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hopefully the reporter will make a trueful story and not make anyone out to be the villian. Glad she made Bella think about her Dad.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
aww what an awesome day with the gparents. LOL for how early kids get up. Glad I'm well past that.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad she's doing well. The food would be a def perk. As far as the rumors, I'm leaning towards Renee trying to get her 15 minutes of fame to hurt her daughter some more...... don't think its Sam, but paul maybe being jealous?!?! hmmm
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
GO Bella. Sadly people are going to be horrible to her. Hopefully no one at the restaurant will go off on her. The job will be gone before it starts. ROFL for Esme.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well at least she's trying for restaurants that wouldn't seem too redneck to her new inlaws (no idea what the word is when you aren't married). Nice that Joe would say that.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awww love Esme being Esme. Also love him having alpha with him. Think he's going to need him.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow. Having Alice as the nasty one is a new one. Love protective Emmett though.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hes probably right about the press and how to handle it. He def needs to talk to his parents soon.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
yea the papparazzi in this country are out of control and have no bounds. Freedom of the press never considered these scumbags. Yea he should have prepared Carlisle and Esme, but it is what it is.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
again.... Renee is a real piece of work.....Glad Charlie was there for her though.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
Renee is such a lovely person isnt she.......NOT
Date: 12 Dec 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella does seem scared of her own shadow. Glad Micah isn't messed up by being kept from his mom.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
So my thought was right...... however he went about it SOOOOO the wrong way. He should have just contacted Edward himself. He's a freakin cop for goodness sake. Just send him a pic of Micah would have done it. Although if I were Bella, I would have been on every news channel with the story. But that's just me. Glad they are taking alpha with them.
Date: 12 Dec 2020 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy..... Is Charlie being blackmailed by James..... or maybe both familes, hers and his, contrived all this to get them back together?!?!? Ack ya killin me.
Date: 11 Dec 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wowsers. Good to see his memories of that night
Date: 11 Dec 2020 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ohhh no. Charlie?!? Although I'm wondering if this is some sort of setup to get Bella to tell Edward
Date: 11 Dec 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oooh yea the suspect pool Def got a bit bigger.
Date: 11 Dec 2020 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm Mike and Renee? Hmmmm.
Date: 11 Dec 2020 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmmm I'm thinking more and more that Renee is involved in his kidnapping.
Date: 11 Dec 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Initially I can understand why she wouldn't tell him. His whole family was in the wind. Although later when she could contact him.....
Date: 07 Dec 2020 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
love it! please update!!!!





Date: 21 Nov 2020 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow never saw that coming!! Keep up the great work!!!
Date: 16 Nov 2020 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jared has met his match
Date: 16 Nov 2020 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope Charlie is not that sleazy





Date: 12 Nov 2020 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
New reader to your story..Well done..I hope things work out for them..I can't believe Charlie did that but I'm more upset with Renee what kind of mother is she? I can't wait for next update Micah will get to meet his other Grandfather Carlisle..until you post again





Date: 07 Nov 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Keep on writing
Date: 05 Nov 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline