Date: 13 Jul 2021 8:29 AM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
fun times he is trying but he is not that good at it lol
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:57 AM Title: The Day After
he cant keep her out of his mind
Date: 13 Jul 2021 7:22 AM Title: Terms
she knows a good thing
Date: 11 Jul 2021 10:28 PM Title: Halloween at Midnight Sun Part 1
Omg. Everyone is going nuts. Too much laughing out loud.
Author's Response: lol. you the real MVP thank you for the review!
Date: 15 Jun 2021 2:50 AM Title: Accusations
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 14 Jun 2021 6:32 AM Title: Accusations
Yikes horrible family! One story at a time
Date: 14 Jun 2021 6:32 AM Title: Accusations
Yikes horrible family! One story at a time
Date: 13 Jun 2021 9:17 PM Title: Accusations
Oh wow, lots of information in this chapter.
Date: 13 Jun 2021 2:50 AM Title: Accusations
Wow so much new info. My head is in overload
Author's Response:
Hope it wasn't too bad ;)
Date: 07 Jun 2021 6:30 PM Title: Is this the Love?
Glad she got away from Charlie and the Feds. Lawsuit indeed. ROFL for Charlie having to now go tell Jacob she's been married for months.
Woo Hoo. Happy Lemon Dance
Author's Response:
I love getting your reviews!!
Date: 07 Jun 2021 6:06 PM Title: To Russia
Poor Em. Hopefully he pulls his head out of his arse soon.
Ack for Dem getting away and the feds.
Date: 07 Jun 2021 4:58 PM Title: Changes
Glad she finally told him off. Oh no, Rose left? ack
Date: 07 Jun 2021 3:23 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 06 Jun 2021 6:24 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Thank you for the update..Well done 🤗🤗🤗🤗 Oh my I'm happy things worked out for Edward & Bella at first I was like oh no Charlie is there they are going to take Bella thank God she held her cool and told them she wasn't missing 😂😂😂Thank God Jenks finally showed up..I love the agent on Bella side she didnt play kick the cop out that shouldn't have been there and Charlie to🤣 I could just picture his face. Edward and Bella have consummated their marriage yay!! Jacob can't have her now. Edward would never let her go..Well done BRAVO!!! UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review!
Date: 05 Jun 2021 5:34 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it. It took Jenks long enough to get there, geez. I hope Seth is okay.
Author's Response: right??? like what was he doing lol .Thanks!
Date: 05 Jun 2021 4:13 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Oh my!!!!! This was the best chapter. I am glad she didn't let Charlie know how upset and am scared she was. He is such an ass. I believe the cop and the male FBI are working for Jacob. Can't wait to hear what Jacob's reaction will be when he finds out she is married to Edward. Lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!!! I love hearing from you!
Date: 05 Jun 2021 1:48 AM Title: Is this the Love?
Loved it!! But now Charlie is going to really be hot on her tail
Date: 31 May 2021 7:01 PM Title: To Russia
Why do the FEDS have Bella????
Date: 31 May 2021 2:24 PM Title: To Russia
Thank you for the update..Well done..I can't wait to see what happens next.. until you post again
Date: 29 May 2021 6:06 AM Title: Alice
Loved it. I was worried Alice was going to be a bitch but yay Bella made a friend
Date: 29 May 2021 5:51 AM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
I love that she isn't a pushover and gives him hell.
Date: 29 May 2021 5:36 AM Title: The Day After
Love this
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 29 May 2021 4:46 AM Title: Midnight Sun
Looks very interesting
Date: 28 May 2021 9:26 PM Title: To Russia
Loving this story, glad most of the enemy are dead, I'm worried Demetri is still alive too. Holy crap the feds have Bella.
Date: 24 May 2021 6:54 PM Title: Changes
Loving this story. Glad she stood up to Mrs. Cope.
Date: 24 May 2021 5:42 PM Title: Changes
I am glad the Bella put Ms. Cope in her place. Also glad she stood up to Edward.
Date: 23 May 2021 11:23 AM Title: Changes
Thank you for the update..Well done..Mrs Cope is down to 1 day a week or did Edward let her go? I hope Rose and Emmett work it out. I hope Bella heals fast so her & Edward can get together . Until you post again
Date: 28 Apr 2021 11:11 PM Title: Official Part 2
When the next chapter coming out
Author's Response: soon! not sure of a date yet.
Date: 25 Apr 2021 7:06 PM Title: Official Part 2
B does need to take her safety more diligently.
Date: 23 Apr 2021 5:51 AM Title: Official Part 2
Love your story! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 21 Apr 2021 12:30 AM Title: Official Part 2
Wow, lots happened. Loving this story.
Date: 19 Apr 2021 10:10 PM Title: Official Part 2
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 19 Apr 2021 8:27 PM Title: Official Part 2
Wow!! Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait to see what happens nex.. I know RL is getting in the way. I will be patient. I love the story..until you post again
Date: 19 Apr 2021 3:55 AM Title: Official Part 2
Did Aro's sons kill him? Did they make it look like Edward or someone in one of the families di it?
Date: 06 Apr 2021 2:05 AM Title: Official Part 1
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 15 Mar 2021 5:32 AM Title: Official Part 1
I think Bella & Edward will be an extremely well-matched couple. BOTH of them WILL overcome their families, their heritage and their enemies. I am looking forward to where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kindd review!
Date: 13 Mar 2021 2:28 PM Title: Official Part 1
Thank you for the update well done!!!until you post again
Date: 13 Mar 2021 2:13 PM Title: Official Part 1
Glad the scum are gone. Hmmm wonder who the man at the wedding is.
Date: 13 Mar 2021 8:52 AM Title: Official Part 1
Yes!!! Great chapter!
Date: 13 Mar 2021 2:38 AM Title: Official Part 1
Why did Aro look like he had seen a ghost??????
Date: 12 Mar 2021 10:54 PM Title: Official Part 1
Loving this story, it's awesome.
Date: 05 Mar 2021 3:28 AM Title: Scars
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 02 Mar 2021 10:25 PM Title: Scars
Oh my. So much in this chapter. Edward needs to quit worrying about coming off weak just cause he loves Bella. What did Edward's dad do to him? What was with the comment about Edward's dad really messed him up?????
Date: 28 Feb 2021 10:54 PM Title: Scars
Wow go Bella. Glad the guys got there in time
Date: 28 Feb 2021 3:05 PM Title: Scars
Can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Feb 2021 6:41 AM Title: Terms
Oh wow!! Hopefully they will fall in love but obviously they aren't going to rush into it. Loving this so far.
Date: 28 Feb 2021 6:01 AM Title: Midnight Sun
Omg that was good in a I am freaking out for Bella!!
Date: 28 Feb 2021 5:27 AM Title: Should've Said No
Hmm why so much hate between him and Carlisle? Can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Feb 2021 9:46 AM Title: Scars
Thank you so much for this new chapter!
Date: 27 Feb 2021 3:19 AM Title: Scars
Can we murder Jacob Black now!
Date: 26 Feb 2021 10:31 PM Title: Scars
OMG, Bella has been through hell. I hope Edward makes every one who hurt her suffer a horrible, horrible existence. Loving this story.
Date: 26 Feb 2021 9:27 PM Title: Scars
Please make Jacob's death painful.
Date: 12 Feb 2021 12:16 AM Title: It really hits you
Dang it!!! Can't wait for more
Date: 10 Feb 2021 8:32 AM Title: It really hits you
That's where u end it oh that's cruel!
Date: 08 Feb 2021 4:33 AM Title: It really hits you
I hope Edward makes the traitors suffer for what they did to the girls.
Date: 07 Feb 2021 11:21 PM Title: It really hits you
Evil evil evil. Benji needs to die! Wow I can understand why rose is pissed.
Date: 07 Feb 2021 7:53 PM Title: It really hits you
I want to know what Jacob did to Bella and why she can't go without panties. I felt like something was off when Bella mentioned Benji was on his phone all the time. I am thinking that Jacob is with Benji. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
What happened to Bella will be revealed next chapter!
Date: 07 Feb 2021 4:10 AM Title: It really hits you
NOOOOOOOO! BELLLLAAAAA!
Date: 07 Feb 2021 1:47 AM Title: It really hits you
Jake
Author's Response:
Are you sure?!?
Date: 20 Nov 2020 7:22 PM Title: Unofficial
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 18 Nov 2020 9:25 PM Title: Unofficial
Holy hell Jacob is nuts, I think he's gone over the edge. At least Edward made a nice proposal for Bella that she can remember.
Date: 17 Nov 2020 6:19 PM Title: Unofficial
I am thinking Aro or one of his sons call Jacob. Edward is definitely falling for Bella.
Date: 17 Nov 2020 3:10 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Alot in this chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:27 PM Title: Unofficial
I thought at least Esme would be happy, but at least we have Alice and Rose happy and Emmett. I love how close Emmett and Edward are. Jacob is pure evil! I know it will be down the line, but I'm looking forward to him getting what he deserves. Im loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:11 AM Title: Unofficial
Jacob is batshit crazy
I wonder who the guy on the phone was
poor Leah
Carlisle is being a wanker. don't blame E for wanting to not be near him
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:11 AM Title: Unofficial
Jacob is batshit crazy
I wonder who the guy on the phone was
poor Leah
Carlisle is being a wanker. don't blame E for wanting to not be near him
Date: 15 Nov 2020 6:05 PM Title: Unofficial
I think Edward is setting Jacob up.
I hope Edward meant what he said
Date: 12 Nov 2020 1:36 AM Title: Alice
Glad Aluce and Bella get along. See Edward, when you are nice things go alot better.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 9:03 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Well Edward if you treat her nicely then she will probably treat you nicely. Lol.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:44 PM Title: The Day After
Edward's falling under a love spell. Lol.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 12:28 PM Title: Terms
She must really be scared of Jacob to marry a man she just saw kill someone.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 3:40 AM Title: Midnight Sun
Oh no, what did James do to her. Poor Bella, always a danger magnetic .
Date: 11 Nov 2020 1:25 AM Title: Should've Said No
This is very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Nov 2020 7:55 PM Title: Terms
Good plot. So many run on sentences make this hard to read.
Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:07 PM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Thank you for the update...Aro's sons tried to be slick, but thank god carlisle is not slouch... I hope Bella say's yes to Edward I know she has concerns but Edward really likes her he just needs to show it. Rosalie is tuff and Emmett is in love with his girl. I'm sure thingd will work out for all of them..Edward needs to get Jacob & Charlie and give them a taste of there own medicine. I wonder what dirt Edward has on Aro? until you post again. Well done!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2020 2:36 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Can't blame Bella for being confused. Rose needs to chill before she gets herself, Bella, or Em hurt
Date: 27 Oct 2020 1:29 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
At least he bought a ring he thought she would like. Em is trying to protect Rose, Bella and Edward.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 11:50 PM Title: Alice
Loving it, he's learning to be nicer.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 10:51 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Loving it.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 10:20 PM Title: The Day After
Oh, he's falling for Bella, loving it.
Author's Response:
thank you!
Date: 26 Oct 2020 9:44 PM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
There was so much going on in this chapter and I LOVED IT! I'm curious as to what Demetri was wanting to say. I always enjoy when the Cullen's get the upper hand with the Volturi. I can't wait for Edward to propose to Bella, but he needs to let her know he has some feelings for her. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 26 Oct 2020 8:51 PM Title: Terms
Hope they both grow into loving one another.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 7:56 PM Title: Midnight Sun
Loving this story.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 6:36 PM Title: Should've Said No
Loving this story already.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 4:57 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 26 Oct 2020 1:49 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
More please.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 12:57 AM Title: It Was A Lot To Handle
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 25 Oct 2020 3:32 PM Title: Alice
Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 13 Oct 2020 2:56 AM Title: Alice
BELLA NEEDS TO FIND HER BALLS! NERVE OF THAT HOE THINKING EDWARD BELONGED TO HER. STILL... ALL IN ALL IT WAS A GOOD DAY FOR THEM.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 12 Oct 2020 8:15 PM Title: Alice
Glad Alice is so sweet. Ugh for Skankya
Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:53 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Thanks.
Date: 12 Oct 2020 4:27 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Well at least they are each learning a bit. see ya next chapter
Date: 12 Oct 2020 3:57 PM Title: The Day After
Glad that E is trying to make her a little more comfortable. Don't blame him for not wanting food in libarary. Maybe make her a little reading nook