Date: 03 Oct 2022 2:13 AM Title: Chicago
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 02 Oct 2022 9:17 AM Title: Chicago
I think Irina was about to let the cat out of the bag, so-to-speak. Damn, that labor and delivery scene was intense. I hope it helps Bella to overcome her loss and try again. What an honor Sean and Bree bestowed on Edward and Bella; godparents. I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella getting away and reconnecting on their late honeymoon.
Sherry
Date: 30 Sep 2022 9:35 PM Title: Chicago
I really enjoyed this chapter. Alice sucks lol and I hope we find out what Irina was trying to tell Bella soon. I'm glad Bella was with Bree and that everything ultimately went okay. Excited for the next chapter.
Date: 30 Sep 2022 7:48 PM Title: Chicago
Oh my!!!! A lot in this chapter. Rose and Emmett getting engaged. The baby shower. Alice. Carmen and Irina. Something is up with that. Charlie...what is his deal? Is he behind all the attacks. Bree going into labor. Bella being with her. Edward and Bella being Godparents. Now they are going on their honeymoon. I hope things are better with you.
Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:27 PM Title: Chicago
Tanner and Riley... I love it :D I am still preturbed with Edward. After everything they have been through, hell and back literly. And he is so damn standoffish.
Thank for the great update.
I hope life settles down for you. Things get better
Date: 30 Sep 2022 12:45 PM Title: Chicago
Seems like the Denali's are up to something.
Glad E & B are getting away
Date: 04 Sep 2022 4:14 AM Title: New& Improved
Edward and Bella need to talk things out more than anything else at the moment.
Sherry
Date: 03 Sep 2022 5:15 AM Title: New& Improved
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2022 6:14 PM Title: New& Improved
Thank you for the update..well done..I hope they can re connect. I want Edward to find out who is stealing from him..until you post again
Date: 02 Sep 2022 12:22 AM Title: New& Improved
he needs to tell her why he's so scared and that he's not ready. i hope things get worked out in the next chapter.
Date: 01 Sep 2022 7:42 PM Title: New& Improved
Edward is definitely being an asshole. They BOTH need to talk to each other.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2022 2:48 PM Title: New& Improved
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 01 Sep 2022 2:15 PM Title: New& Improved
Yea, these two diff need to talk... fight or what the eff ever. But he is breaking her heart with his refusal to of her.
Thanks for the great update.
Date: 23 Aug 2022 5:12 PM Title: It Gets Better
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2022 7:46 AM Title: It Gets Better
Love this story!
Date: 17 Aug 2022 11:07 PM Title: It Gets Better
Poor Bella. What a convo she had with Alice. Alice is bat-shit crazy. Edward needs to give his wife some loving. Doesn't have to be full on sex, but he needs to show Bella some intimacy. Poor Leah. What happened to her is horrible. Edward needs to take a moment for himself and recharge.
Sherry
Date: 17 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: It Gets Better
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Alice. For some reason I am worried that Alice is up to no good. The lady they think is stealing from Edward is just a decoy I think. I also think something is up with the Eleazar and his family. As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 17 Aug 2022 2:08 PM Title: It Gets Better
Alice telling Bella all of that took guts. Most of us don't say what we truly think. I guess that is why we have a filter.
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 12 Jul 2022 6:41 PM Title: Healing
Mourning the loss of a child is something you never get over, but you learn to move on and continue living. Bella and Edward need to have that talk before too much time gets in the way and it gets swept under the rug. Running Cullen Foundation could be just what Bella needs to get her groove back.
Sherry
Date: 12 Jul 2022 4:06 AM Title: Healing
Oh wow... Her and James cleared the air. I am glad. Not that I thought there was anything going on with them.
Esme's offer I didn't expect, but it might be a good thing.
Loved it and looking forward to more :D
Date: 12 Jul 2022 1:06 AM Title: Healing
I am glad Bella did ok leaving the house. Also with going to Esme's and talking to her and Alice.
Date: 11 Jul 2022 9:06 PM Title: Healing
Thanks for the update, can't wait for more :) !
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 6:58 PM Title: Healing
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2022 6:55 PM Title: Healing
Loving this story, so glad Bella is getting better
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2022 7:03 AM Title: Acceptance
Time gives for some healing. However, the scar never goes away. Bella was SO unbelievably strong in this chapter. That Agent Perez needs to be strung up!
Date: 01 Jul 2022 4:41 AM Title: Acceptance
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 01 Jul 2022 4:41 AM Title: Acceptance
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 7:05 PM Title: Acceptance
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella now knows what happen to her Mom & Charlie. Hopefully she will find out who her Father is. I hope he is not related to Edward. Hopefully he is from a friendy family to the Cullens. They don't need anymore drama..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 9:50 AM Title: Acceptance
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Jun 2022 3:46 AM Title: Acceptance
I'm glad they are talking to each other, finally. Can't wait to see who her birth father is.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2022 3:07 AM Title: Acceptance
Such a great story, glad they're talking and trying to come to terms with what happened.
Date: 26 Jun 2022 11:36 AM Title: Acceptance
Time heals all wounds. E/B will be okay, hopefully sooner than later. I'm anxious for her to meet her birth father.
Sherry
Date: 26 Jun 2022 7:39 AM Title: Acceptance
Loved it, so glad that Bella and Edward were able to talk hopefully things will get better for them now. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter as always x
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2022 6:37 AM Title: Acceptance
Wow! So much revealed and poor Bella. Perez is/was an a**hole. Bella was a pawn in her Dad & Jacob's games. They not only abused her in every way but are murderers. Not just for Renee, but also for her & Edward's sweet child. And this interrogation? It was a farce and abusive. The authorities knew it, too. Why didn't Brady shut this farce down? And (like Bella) I wonder just who are her real bio-parents? I suspect it's someone either very rich, very powerful or both. Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 26 Jun 2022 2:31 AM Title: Acceptance
I'm glad they're finally talking. Excited for more.
Date: 26 Jun 2022 1:12 AM Title: Acceptance
Man Perez was relentless. I wonder if she was a corrupt as the rest of them?? Could she had been involved to?
Her and Edward have a ways to go.
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2022 3:21 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
needed another tissue warning but it was well done...hurry back
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2022 5:13 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Thank you for the update..well done..until you post again
Date: 07 Jun 2022 12:15 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
good
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 10:52 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Poor Jessica
Author's Response:
Right but look how far shes come!
Date: 06 Jun 2022 9:52 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Glad Rose was able to get through to her. They will be ok. Jessica's has been through a horrible situation. I can't remember, whi was it that did this to her?
Author's Response:
Right! Rose was a lifesaver! I know poor Jess but look how far shes come! Read chp. 12 at the wedding it tells who but I guess after reading this one you now know it wasnt just him
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 12:02 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
So glad Rose was there to facilitate them getting to a place so they could talk and Jessica helped a lot too.
Author's Response:
YES THIS!!!!
Date: 06 Jun 2022 11:21 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Thank you for an amazing chapter. It was well worth the wait. What a heartbreaking chapter it is tho. Poor Jessica... Poor Bella and Edward... they're starting to find their way back to each other finally. I don't think there is anything harder than losing a child. Please update again soon.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I know I could not imagine losing one. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2022 3:22 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
I have loved this story and truly hope you plan on finishing it
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reviewing! I updated it last night.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2022 11:25 PM Title: Accusations
hope you are going to finish this
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2022 8:04 PM Title: Terms
I have started this and I am enjoying it but notice you have not updated in a while, so do you plan to or should I find another story?
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2022 3:49 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
good update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 04 Apr 2022 3:08 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:44 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Phew! I'm glad that he called Rose. That's what I was going to suggest.
Author's Response:
Right!!! ??
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:16 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Oh man, this chapter tore up my feels. Edward needs to stop waiting for Bella to make the first move to talk to him about things. He needs to open that line of communication. Bella needs warned and prepped for the feds.
Thanks for the chapter.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and reading!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 6:34 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
This chapter is heart breaking. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
It was hard to write but theres a reason! Thank you for reading
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2022 1:44 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
So sad for them both
Author's Response:
:(
Date: 01 Apr 2022 11:57 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Glad he called Rose. B & E need to talk to each other
Author's Response:
100%
Date: 01 Apr 2022 10:22 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Bella needs Edward. They both need each other. Why are they not turning to each other?????? Edward doesn't want to appear weak. He NEEDS to get over that. I hope Rosealie can help both of them.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping to explain this more soon on why they were acting so stubborn. Rose was a lifesaver! Thanks for reading
Date: 01 Apr 2022 9:46 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Glad E called Rose to help in the end.Jesica seems like a good kid.
Author's Response:
She is! thanks for reading
Date: 01 Apr 2022 7:48 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Oh wow... I cannot imagine! Poor Bella and Edward!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2022 11:15 AM Title: A Bloody End
Good story so far. Bella has a long road to recovery.
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
Date: 09 Mar 2022 12:19 PM Title: A Bloody End
R u going to finish the story? U end it on a cliffy and don't post for weeks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2022 7:41 AM Title: A Bloody End
I hope you are going to update soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2022 3:26 AM Title: A Bloody End
OMG great chapter ! I hope Bella didn't lose her baby. Can't wait for next chapter !
Date: 20 Feb 2022 2:05 AM Title: A Bloody End
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 20 Feb 2022 12:25 AM Title: A Bloody End
Jacob got what he deserved. Charlie didn't get enough. I'm hoping Bella didn't lose the baby.
Sherry
Date: 19 Feb 2022 12:41 PM Title: A Bloody End
Oh wow, absolutely loved it. I hope Bella and the baby are ok though. Thank you for the update, until next time x
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 11:47 PM Title: A Bloody End
Poor Bella. I hope she didn't lose her baby
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 11:38 PM Title: A Bloody End
Glad they are finally dead. Pathetic excuses for the male species.... I won't call them men.
Author's Response:
Definitely not!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 6:16 PM Title: A Bloody End
I'm glad Jacob and Charlie suffered. They deserved all the pain. I hope Bella and the baby are ok. I worry that Leah with never recover. Could the blood be Leah's, were she tried to kill herself????
Author's Response:
It was a long time coming wasn't it!! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: A Bloody End
Good rittens, that he gave them what they deserved.
Author's Response:
Right!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: A Bloody End
Thank you for the update..well done..Very good chapter Jacob got what he deseved. I wish Edward could have branded him also but the carving will have to do. Charlie should have been hurt a little more but he got a good beat down. I can't wait for the next chapter but I think it's going to be hard. I don't want the bllod to be Bella's or the baby. jacob & Charlie should not win. Bella deserves better. Until you post again
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review ☺️ the dude wasn't going to get away with branding our girl. Thanks for readingm
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:49 PM Title: A Bloody End
So, who are Bella's parents? And how did Renee & Charlie come to have her as a newborn? I hope that Bella doesn't lose the baby. In a way, it would mean both Jacob & Charlie won. I would hate that. I fear Leah will never be sane again. Mentally and emotionally never being able to distinquish between her nightmare and reality.
Author's Response:
Renee is her mother. Sorry if that was confusing Charlie just isn't her father. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:32 PM Title: A Bloody End
Charlie and Jacob are dead... they are buring the compound to the ground. All good things..
Bella loosing the baby... I hope doesn't shove his head up his ass and is there for Bella. They both need to grieve.
Looking forward to more ...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2022 5:37 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
OMG! I'm so invested in this story and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that both Bella and the baby are going to survive.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2022 8:44 AM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
Oh, I hate that cliffy after everything that went done. Please update soon.
Sherry
Author's Response:
Next chapter is up if ya havent read!
Date: 08 Feb 2022 4:00 AM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
Loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2022 12:34 AM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
I hope Bella is alright
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 Feb 2022 8:31 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
I am glad Bella at least got to slap Jacob. I wish she could do more. I hope Bella is ok. Also the baby. Glad Edward got there before jacob had a chance to hirt Bella. I like that Jacob knows his mark has been removed from Bella's body.
Author's Response:
Right! I thought that was a great thing. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2022 7:59 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
OMG love this chapter .But please get next one out soon lol
Author's Response:
It's out! If ya haven't read
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:25 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
On wow, what a great chapter. I can't believe you let it on a cliffhanger. I hope you drag it out with the torture of Jacob and Charlie. Please don't let Bella loose the baby, it would kill her and Edward. Until you post the next chapter x
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:05 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
good
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:45 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
Wow Charlie has even more to pay for. Poor Leah. Hope B will be ok. Wonder exactly Charlie was being blackmailed with.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2022 5:24 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
OMG, hope Bella is okay, and Edward gets revenge hurting Jacob and Charlie so they suffer.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 3:05 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
Oh wow...
Was Bella shot? Or is she loosing the baby??
Looking forward to more :D
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 1:49 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
Love this story, please update soon
Author's Response:
It's been updated! Check it out
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2022 12:51 AM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 2
so good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2022 9:59 PM Title: Jealousy&Remorse
wow I hve had family dinners with drama but not quite that bad