Date: 20 Nov 2020 7:22 PM Title: Unofficial
Loved it can't wait for more





Date: 18 Nov 2020 9:25 PM Title: Unofficial
Holy hell Jacob is nuts, I think he's gone over the edge. At least Edward made a nice proposal for Bella that she can remember.
Date: 17 Nov 2020 6:19 PM Title: Unofficial
I am thinking Aro or one of his sons call Jacob. Edward is definitely falling for Bella.
Date: 17 Nov 2020 3:10 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
Alot in this chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:27 PM Title: Unofficial
I thought at least Esme would be happy, but at least we have Alice and Rose happy and Emmett. I love how close Emmett and Edward are. Jacob is pure evil! I know it will be down the line, but I'm looking forward to him getting what he deserves. Im loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter.





Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:11 AM Title: Unofficial
Jacob is batshit crazy
I wonder who the guy on the phone was
poor Leah
Carlisle is being a wanker. don't blame E for wanting to not be near him





Date: 16 Nov 2020 12:11 AM Title: Unofficial
Jacob is batshit crazy
I wonder who the guy on the phone was
poor Leah
Carlisle is being a wanker. don't blame E for wanting to not be near him
Date: 15 Nov 2020 6:05 PM Title: Unofficial
I think Edward is setting Jacob up.
I hope Edward meant what he said
Date: 12 Nov 2020 1:36 AM Title: Alice
Glad Aluce and Bella get along. See Edward, when you are nice things go alot better.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 9:03 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Well Edward if you treat her nicely then she will probably treat you nicely. Lol.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 7:44 PM Title: The Day After
Edward's falling under a love spell. Lol.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 12:28 PM Title: Terms
She must really be scared of Jacob to marry a man she just saw kill someone.
Date: 11 Nov 2020 3:40 AM Title: Midnight Sun
Oh no, what did James do to her. Poor Bella, always a danger magnetic .
Date: 11 Nov 2020 1:25 AM Title: Should've said no
This is very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Nov 2020 7:55 PM Title: Terms
Good plot. So many run on sentences make this hard to read.





Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:07 PM Title: It was a lot to handle
Thank you for the update...Aro's sons tried to be slick, but thank god carlisle is not slouch... I hope Bella say's yes to Edward I know she has concerns but Edward really likes her he just needs to show it. Rosalie is tuff and Emmett is in love with his girl. I'm sure thingd will work out for all of them..Edward needs to get Jacob & Charlie and give them a taste of there own medicine. I wonder what dirt Edward has on Aro? until you post again. Well done!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2020 2:36 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
Can't blame Bella for being confused. Rose needs to chill before she gets herself, Bella, or Em hurt





Date: 27 Oct 2020 1:29 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
At least he bought a ring he thought she would like. Em is trying to protect Rose, Bella and Edward.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 11:50 PM Title: Alice
Loving it, he's learning to be nicer.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 10:51 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Loving it.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 10:20 PM Title: The Day After
Oh, he's falling for Bella, loving it.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 9:44 PM Title: It was a lot to handle
There was so much going on in this chapter and I LOVED IT! I'm curious as to what Demetri was wanting to say. I always enjoy when the Cullen's get the upper hand with the Volturi. I can't wait for Edward to propose to Bella, but he needs to let her know he has some feelings for her. I can't wait for the next chapter!!





Date: 26 Oct 2020 8:51 PM Title: Terms
Hope they both grow into loving one another.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 7:56 PM Title: Midnight Sun
Loving this story.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 6:36 PM Title: Should've said no
Loving this story already.
Date: 26 Oct 2020 4:57 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 26 Oct 2020 1:49 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
More please.





Date: 26 Oct 2020 12:57 AM Title: It was a lot to handle
Loved it can't wait for more





Date: 25 Oct 2020 3:32 PM Title: Alice
Love your story can't wait to read more.





Date: 13 Oct 2020 2:56 AM Title: Alice
BELLA NEEDS TO FIND HER BALLS! NERVE OF THAT HOE THINKING EDWARD BELONGED TO HER. STILL... ALL IN ALL IT WAS A GOOD DAY FOR THEM.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 12 Oct 2020 8:15 PM Title: Alice
Glad Alice is so sweet. Ugh for Skankya
Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:53 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Thanks.
Date: 12 Oct 2020 4:27 PM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
Well at least they are each learning a bit. see ya next chapter
Date: 12 Oct 2020 3:57 PM Title: The Day After
Glad that E is trying to make her a little more comfortable. Don't blame him for not wanting food in libarary. Maybe make her a little reading nook





Date: 12 Oct 2020 6:41 AM Title: Feeling like a Prisoner
He likes the idea of having a wife more than he is letting on.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:53 AM Title: The Day After
James, Laurent and Victoria, they are giving me the hibby jibby, but am hoping for the best.
Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:53 AM Title: The Day After
James, Laurent and Victoria, they are giving me the hibby jibby, but am hoping for the best.





Date: 12 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: The Day After
HE'S SO MOODY.
Date: 11 Oct 2020 11:58 PM Title: Terms
I will marry him too given the opportunity.
Date: 11 Oct 2020 11:05 PM Title: Midnight Sun
Poor Bella' from fire to frying pan. I don't like this James, l bet he works for the vultori brothers or for himself.
Date: 11 Oct 2020 8:51 PM Title: Should've said no
Great first chapter, thanks.
Date: 08 Oct 2020 2:17 PM Title: Terms
Better the Devil you know. E is def the better choice. Glad Seth could ease E's mind a little.
Date: 08 Oct 2020 2:06 PM Title: Midnight Sun
Wowsers. Hangovers are not fun. naughty bella following Edward.
Date: 08 Oct 2020 1:55 PM Title: Should've said no
Hi. Admin Kelly here. Clo made you a banner for your story. I tried to email it to you, but the email associated with your pen name is coming back rejected. Shoot me an email at Admin@starslibrary.net and I send to you.
Date: 08 Oct 2020 1:54 PM Title: Should've said no
Good Start. And Yea, you can't fix stupid





Date: 06 Oct 2020 8:24 AM Title: Terms
ALL SHE HAS TO DO IS LOSE THE VIRGINITY. SHE'S GOING TO BE ONE BADASS MOBWIFE!! READ YOU SOON : )





Date: 06 Oct 2020 7:19 AM Title: Midnight Sun
DID HE REALLY HAVE TO HIT HER???? NOW SHE HAS TO MARRY HIM.....YAYYY!!!!!
Date: 05 Oct 2020 3:15 AM Title: Terms
They should sleep together at least once to get the specter of being a virgin from hanging over her head.
Date: 05 Oct 2020 3:12 AM Title: Terms
Love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 04 Oct 2020 4:14 PM Title: Midnight Sun
OMG!!! it's getting GOOD from the Start!!! Update soon PLEASE 🥰
Date: 04 Oct 2020 1:40 PM Title: Midnight Sun
Quite the introduction
Date: 04 Oct 2020 1:55 AM Title: Should've said no
Love it!!! Please update soon!





Date: 01 Oct 2020 4:57 AM Title: Should've said no
THIS BEING YOUR FIRST ATTEMPT AT WRITING..... YOUR OFF TO A GREAT START. IT WAS ENOUGH TO KNOW I WANT MORE!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
READ YOU SOON : )





Date: 27 Sep 2020 3:36 PM Title: Should've said no
OMG!!! Please update SOON!!! Can't wait for the next update 🥰🥰🥰🥰