Date: 02 Oct 2022 9:17 AM Title: Chicago
I think Irina was about to let the cat out of the bag, so-to-speak. Damn, that labor and delivery scene was intense. I hope it helps Bella to overcome her loss and try again. What an honor Sean and Bree bestowed on Edward and Bella; godparents. I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella getting away and reconnecting on their late honeymoon.
Date: 30 Sep 2022 7:48 PM Title: Chicago
Oh my!!!! A lot in this chapter. Rose and Emmett getting engaged. The baby shower. Alice. Carmen and Irina. Something is up with that. Charlie...what is his deal? Is he behind all the attacks. Bree going into labor. Bella being with her. Edward and Bella being Godparents. Now they are going on their honeymoon. I hope things are better with you.
Date: 30 Sep 2022 4:27 PM Title: Chicago
Tanner and Riley... I love it :D I am still preturbed with Edward. After everything they have been through, hell and back literly. And he is so damn standoffish.
Thank for the great update.
I hope life settles down for you. Things get better
Date: 17 Aug 2022 11:07 PM Title: It Gets Better
Poor Bella. What a convo she had with Alice. Alice is bat-shit crazy. Edward needs to give his wife some loving. Doesn't have to be full on sex, but he needs to show Bella some intimacy. Poor Leah. What happened to her is horrible. Edward needs to take a moment for himself and recharge.
Date: 17 Aug 2022 6:37 PM Title: It Gets Better
I don't blame Bella for being upset with Alice. For some reason I am worried that Alice is up to no good. The lady they think is stealing from Edward is just a decoy I think. I also think something is up with the Eleazar and his family. As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 12 Jul 2022 6:41 PM Title: Healing
Mourning the loss of a child is something you never get over, but you learn to move on and continue living. Bella and Edward need to have that talk before too much time gets in the way and it gets swept under the rug. Running Cullen Foundation could be just what Bella needs to get her groove back.
Date: 27 Jun 2022 7:05 PM Title: Acceptance
Thank you for the update..well done..Bella now knows what happen to her Mom & Charlie. Hopefully she will find out who her Father is. I hope he is not related to Edward. Hopefully he is from a friendy family to the Cullens. They don't need anymore drama..until you post again
Date: 26 Jun 2022 6:37 AM Title: Acceptance
Wow! So much revealed and poor Bella. Perez is/was an a**hole. Bella was a pawn in her Dad & Jacob's games. They not only abused her in every way but are murderers. Not just for Renee, but also for her & Edward's sweet child. And this interrogation? It was a farce and abusive. The authorities knew it, too. Why didn't Brady shut this farce down? And (like Bella) I wonder just who are her real bio-parents? I suspect it's someone either very rich, very powerful or both. Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2022 9:52 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Glad Rose was able to get through to her. They will be ok. Jessica's has been through a horrible situation. I can't remember, whi was it that did this to her?
Right! Rose was a lifesaver! I know poor Jess but look how far shes come! Read chp. 12 at the wedding it tells who but I guess after reading this one you now know it wasnt just him
Date: 06 Jun 2022 11:21 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 2
Thank you for an amazing chapter. It was well worth the wait. What a heartbreaking chapter it is tho. Poor Jessica... Poor Bella and Edward... they're starting to find their way back to each other finally. I don't think there is anything harder than losing a child. Please update again soon.
Thank you for your review! I know I could not imagine losing one. Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Apr 2022 9:16 AM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Oh man, this chapter tore up my feels. Edward needs to stop waiting for Bella to make the first move to talk to him about things. He needs to open that line of communication. Bella needs warned and prepped for the feds.
Thanks for the chapter.
Thanks for reviewing and reading!
Date: 01 Apr 2022 10:22 PM Title: Five Stages of Grief Part 1
Bella needs Edward. They both need each other. Why are they not turning to each other?????? Edward doesn't want to appear weak. He NEEDS to get over that. I hope Rosealie can help both of them.
I'm hoping to explain this more soon on why they were acting so stubborn. Rose was a lifesaver! Thanks for reading
Date: 18 Feb 2022 6:16 PM Title: A Bloody End
I'm glad Jacob and Charlie suffered. They deserved all the pain. I hope Bella and the baby are ok. I worry that Leah with never recover. Could the blood be Leah's, were she tried to kill herself????
It was a long time coming wasn't it!! Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 5:02 PM Title: A Bloody End
Thank you for the update..well done..Very good chapter Jacob got what he deseved. I wish Edward could have branded him also but the carving will have to do. Charlie should have been hurt a little more but he got a good beat down. I can't wait for the next chapter but I think it's going to be hard. I don't want the bllod to be Bella's or the baby. jacob & Charlie should not win. Bella deserves better. Until you post again
Thanks for your review ☺️ the dude wasn't going to get away with branding our girl. Thanks for readingm
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:49 PM Title: A Bloody End
So, who are Bella's parents? And how did Renee & Charlie come to have her as a newborn? I hope that Bella doesn't lose the baby. In a way, it would mean both Jacob & Charlie won. I would hate that. I fear Leah will never be sane again. Mentally and emotionally never being able to distinquish between her nightmare and reality.
Renee is her mother. Sorry if that was confusing Charlie just isn't her father. Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Feb 2022 4:32 PM Title: A Bloody End
Charlie and Jacob are dead... they are buring the compound to the ground. All good things..
Bella loosing the baby... I hope doesn't shove his head up his ass and is there for Bella. They both need to grieve.
Looking forward to more ...
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 8:31 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
I am glad Bella at least got to slap Jacob. I wish she could do more. I hope Bella is ok. Also the baby. Glad Edward got there before jacob had a chance to hirt Bella. I like that Jacob knows his mark has been removed from Bella's body.
Right! I thought that was a great thing. Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2022 6:25 PM Title: A Bloody New Years Part 3
On wow, what a great chapter. I can't believe you let it on a cliffhanger. I hope you drag it out with the torture of Jacob and Charlie. Please don't let Bella loose the baby, it would kill her and Edward. Until you post the next chapter x
Thanks for reading!