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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hurry please...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 8

Glad this is being updated.. thanks

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

Was Charlotte one of Vicky's minions?   Or was she there just out of curiosity with 3 other vamps (ho-bag)   LOL?   

Peter's gift barely got him to Maria's house before Bella woke up.     But he's just in time for some pain from Bella?    I wonder what her power is?    I can't wait to see.    Will Bella be happy and grateful that Maria killed Vicky and saved her when she calms down?    I hope so.

Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

Whew...   So Icky Vicky is dead, but 4 of her minions were snooping around and will probably be out for revenge now.      They also have Bella's human scent and maybe her address?   Although Bella was on the run, so she probably wasn't carrying much with her.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

Maria could tell from the 2 bite marks on Bella's arm what happened to her?   She's pretty smart, but she sure is worried.

Now what the heck did her mate, Fernando, find?    Did Vicky's ashes walk away?   I'm scared.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

So Peter knows OF Bella, but not Bella personally.   I wonder what lies Jasper told Peter about her...  Or was Jasper told lies about her as well.....    Maybe he heard about her some other way....   hmmm....

But whichever way he heard, Petrer is going to be pissed, huh?

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

So your version of Charlotte is a ho-bag?   LOL   Good for Peter for getting rid of her, but why kill the dude and not Char?    Hmmm....     sexist vampires....   grrr.....    hehehe.....

I see Peter DOES have the 'gift' I love to read for him.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

Maria and her mate both are panicing all to hell about silently changing Bella.   Does Peter have "Idreamofeddys" knowing shit power?    I love that.   Is that why he called?    Can't wait to see?

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hmm....    A 'retired' Maria is doubting her choice to change Bella.    Hopefully, her mate will support her choice to help Bella.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well...   That is a shocker.   Maria was impressed with Bella's spirit and courage?   That was the reason to change her?    I hope since she is mated now and hasn't changed anyone in 'decades', that Maria doesn't have nefarious reasons.    Hmmm.....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella goaded Vicky into charging, but that didn't work.   Was it Peter,  Charlotte, Maria, Jasper???    hmmm....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

Icky Vicky is not messing around with bringing the pain to Bella, huh?   Bella is bad ass brave for goading her into hurrying.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2020 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is so alone, terrified, but determined to end her running.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oooh Garrett as backup! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

ooh who was following her?  Volturi? 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

ooh you are ramping up the suspense 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ooh so Peter knows who she is. Ah yes the Major will not

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

Boo hiss, can't stand a cheater 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

Boo hiss, can't stand a cheater 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Lol gotta love Peter

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love Maria not being a psychopath in this.... At least so far. Lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

I was wondering who it would be when u said they

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Fuck indeed. Lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ouch.  Love snarky Bella. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yea I always thought Victoria would have gotten her before she started hanging out with the pack

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