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Date: 03 Nov 2020 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 49

Poor Ginger 

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Date: 01 Nov 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 49

Ginger's story is gutting me.   ugh...    I'm glad that Edward has support to get through this and future events.    Thanks for writing and sharing..

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Date: 30 Oct 2020 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 29 Oct 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 47

Edward still has spme adjusting to do.  ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 29 Oct 2020 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 45

I knew Bella would just be happy to have edward back.   But I'm glad that he shared everything with her.  Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 29 Oct 2020 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

So Edward still rebelled.    That would have been so tough for Bella.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 28 Oct 2020 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Date: 28 Oct 2020 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 27 Oct 2020 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 44

Poor Bella 

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Date: 27 Oct 2020 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 26 Oct 2020 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 43

Poor Edward... he can't win with the driving.   At least he had a happy moment in the car.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Oct 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 24 Oct 2020 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 42

Maybe Edward has been taken out of his funky mood.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 24 Oct 2020 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

Edward and Bella getting close (again) with Edward's parents now that they know the secret is great.    Maybe Edward will get back to his true fascinated by Bella personality soon.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 24 Oct 2020 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 24 Oct 2020 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 40

I'm still worried about Edward's parents knowing the secret.    But Edward seems to be finding his way.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 39

I feel like Edward and Bella are making a bad decision telling Edward's parents the truth.   This is not gonna end well.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 39

Edward is crazy for telling his parents what he is.

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Date: 22 Oct 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 21 Oct 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh my

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

There is always some douche canoe bad driver when you aren't expecting it.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

 

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Date: 20 Oct 2020 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 37

Time moves on...   I wonder what, if anything, Elizabeth really knows about Bella.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2020 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 36

Elizabeth and Leah are sure trying to overstep.   Edward knows what he wants in a cake.   :)   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2020 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bella is getting along really well with Elizabeth.   Edward's parents sure don't want him to take a year off, huh?     

Poor Ginger though....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 17 Oct 2020 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 17 Oct 2020 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 17 Oct 2020 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 34

Edward can sure get the tongue's to wagging.    ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 16 Oct 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

Yay, they are finally engaged.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2020 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 32

Edward's hiding from Bella and rejecting her made her paranoid since he never has before.    Bella was a little bit of a brat though.   If only they could have communicated better.

Alice should just keep her nose out  of things as well.

Hopefully Edward asks Bella next time when it is just them.    The Cullens dont need to be there and they shouldn't want to intrude.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 15 Oct 2020 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 31

Redesigning the ring for Bella is really sweet.   Edward was kind of awkward at Thanksgiving.   LOL    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2020 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 30

How horrifying it would have beem to be a woman in that time.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 11 Oct 2020 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

Emmett is ridiculous.    Edward is setting a really bad precedent for playing Emmett's games.     

Bella and Edwar's sexy time is always hot, sexy and passionate.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 28

Awe....   Bella seems to have gotten invited into two families at once.    For a loner, one family invite would be overwhelming.   I can't imagine how it would feel to be accepted by two families.      Thank you for writing and sharing.

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Date: 10 Oct 2020 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 27

Bella and Edward both are learning a few things.  Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2020 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Maybe Jake has lost some of his judginess, but he and the other wolves have a way to go.     

Poor Edward getting scratched up by his kitten.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 08 Oct 2020 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 25

A lot can happen in a year.   I'm still worried about Edward's safety.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 06 Oct 2020 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

I wonder how the kings knew about Edward.    Who is the NARC?   Did Peter or Charlotte tell them?    I can't imagine anyone else knowing about Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2020 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

So Edwrd is not big on giving the benefit of the doubt, huh?    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 05 Oct 2020 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

I'm not worried about Tanya per say.....  But man, is she gross!    Ugh....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2020 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

Edward got closer with Jasper.   Yay!    And they discovered mutual vampires between them.   :)   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2020 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Edward,,,,  Having a box thrown at your dick probably hurts and being witnessed by others has got to be embarrassing.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 03 Oct 2020 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 02 Oct 2020 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

It would really suck to have everyone around you ignoting what you do or don't want in lieu of what THEY think is best for you.    

I like a cat scratch instead of a paper cut.   :)

And no one was hurt physically in this episode of "Forced Birthday Parties".    LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 02 Oct 2020 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 01 Oct 2020 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 18

Can't believe Bella and the others sent Emmett to help Edward shower.   ;)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Aww... my first thought was his parents are in Chicago,

they died in Chicago from the Spanish Influenza. What if you

have his parents die in some type of accident there to follow along with the original  twilight story line and then Edward is free to be a vampire.This shouldn't anger the

Wolves too much...

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe everyone agreed it was a good idea for human Edward to arm wrestle a vampire Emmett.    That did not turn out well.

At least Bella sort of accepts that Edward's fututre depends on what EDWARD wants it to be.   LOL     Why are vampires so mopey and emo in fics?    :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2020 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Emmett is rude as hell in this story.  Bella and Edward need to figure out how to put him in his place really quickly.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

The Cullens sure are pushy with their diet.   Edward getting lost in the woods looking for Bella because he is worried is funny and sweet at the same time.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

They are getting close enough to tease each other as well as being intimate.   Good sign.....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 26 Sep 2020 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so relieved that James and Victoria are BOTH ashed and gone.   Who would have thought Jacob anfd Leah would have helped Bella fight them?    

Edward;s mortification about his parent's sex lives made me giggle.     Hopefully Bella can put some more sexy thoughts in his head.    ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2020 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Edward.....   That doctor was a quack.    And Bella managed to feed from someone besides Edward.    Maybe knowing the degenerates are coming to Forks will give Bella, Edward and the wolves an advantage.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

I had to skip some sections of Edward's pain.   But I'm still with you.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Time really flew by for Bella.   I can't believe Leah acctually tried to get Edward and Bella back together.    Well.....She did try to get Edwar for herself first, but..... 

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2020 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful. Thank you for writing

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Date: 22 Sep 2020 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Leah is playing a new angle.   Hopefully it won't work.

Bella and Edward will get to talk about their bathtub time at night, but I hate that Edward's mom is gonna turn into a puppet bitch that's being manipulated by the wolves.   ugh...

Thanks for writing and sharing.   Stay safe.

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Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Hopefully Leah won't assault Edward or be a bitch anymore.

Edward beating a flummoxed Peter at chess made me giggle.   Bella and Edward had a little rough patch, but hopefully they are good now.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love that Bella and Edward are getting closer physically and emotionally.   This chapter made me smile.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 19 Sep 2020 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Leah is just making Edward and Bella get closer together faster.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 18 Sep 2020 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

The wolves really are intruding, judgmental assholes aren't they?     grrr....

Ed Sr. was kind of nosey too, wasn't he?   hehehehe.....      I am glad that both of Edward's parents like Bella though.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

They are getting closer.   Edward is getting a little more confidence.   And Edward's mom is getting to meet Bella soon.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 17 Sep 2020 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

I have a feeling Edward wouldn't offer his blood to just any vampire.    Jacob sure is annoying.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful. Thank you for writing

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow. Brilliant. Thank you for writing

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fascinating. I do like how you’re changing things. Thank you for writing

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyable read. Thank you for writing

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Date: 15 Sep 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving shy, smart, stuttering, vamp boook reading Edward.   Bella and Edward's first 'honest' conversation went very well.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 14 Sep 2020 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 14 Sep 2020 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella needs to talk more with Edward and get to know him so she won't drain him dry.   It's worrying that she can't drink from anyone else.    And Edward sure is shy.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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