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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 30 Sep 2020 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Aww... my first thought was his parents are in Chicago,

they died in Chicago from the Spanish Influenza. What if you

have his parents die in some type of accident there to follow along with the original  twilight story line and then Edward is free to be a vampire.This shouldn't anger the

Wolves too much...

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Date: 29 Sep 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe everyone agreed it was a good idea for human Edward to arm wrestle a vampire Emmett.    That did not turn out well.

At least Bella sort of accepts that Edward's fututre depends on what EDWARD wants it to be.   LOL     Why are vampires so mopey and emo in fics?    :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 29 Sep 2020 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

Emmett is rude as hell in this story.  Bella and Edward need to figure out how to put him in his place really quickly.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

The Cullens sure are pushy with their diet.   Edward getting lost in the woods looking for Bella because he is worried is funny and sweet at the same time.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

They are getting close enough to tease each other as well as being intimate.   Good sign.....    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 27 Sep 2020 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 26 Sep 2020 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so relieved that James and Victoria are BOTH ashed and gone.   Who would have thought Jacob anfd Leah would have helped Bella fight them?    

Edward;s mortification about his parent's sex lives made me giggle.     Hopefully Bella can put some more sexy thoughts in his head.    ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Sep 2020 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Edward.....   That doctor was a quack.    And Bella managed to feed from someone besides Edward.    Maybe knowing the degenerates are coming to Forks will give Bella, Edward and the wolves an advantage.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 24 Sep 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

I had to skip some sections of Edward's pain.   But I'm still with you.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 23 Sep 2020 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

Time really flew by for Bella.   I can't believe Leah acctually tried to get Edward and Bella back together.    Well.....She did try to get Edwar for herself first, but..... 

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2020 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful. Thank you for writing

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Date: 22 Sep 2020 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Leah is playing a new angle.   Hopefully it won't work.

Bella and Edward will get to talk about their bathtub time at night, but I hate that Edward's mom is gonna turn into a puppet bitch that's being manipulated by the wolves.   ugh...

Thanks for writing and sharing.   Stay safe.

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Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Hopefully Leah won't assault Edward or be a bitch anymore.

Edward beating a flummoxed Peter at chess made me giggle.   Bella and Edward had a little rough patch, but hopefully they are good now.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

I love that Bella and Edward are getting closer physically and emotionally.   This chapter made me smile.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 19 Sep 2020 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

Leah is just making Edward and Bella get closer together faster.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 18 Sep 2020 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

The wolves really are intruding, judgmental assholes aren't they?     grrr....

Ed Sr. was kind of nosey too, wasn't he?   hehehehe.....      I am glad that both of Edward's parents like Bella though.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4

They are getting closer.   Edward is getting a little more confidence.   And Edward's mom is getting to meet Bella soon.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 17 Sep 2020 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

I have a feeling Edward wouldn't offer his blood to just any vampire.    Jacob sure is annoying.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonderful. Thank you for writing

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow. Brilliant. Thank you for writing

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Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Fascinating. I do like how you’re changing things. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyable read. Thank you for writing

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving shy, smart, stuttering, vamp boook reading Edward.   Bella and Edward's first 'honest' conversation went very well.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 14 Sep 2020 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 14 Sep 2020 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bella needs to talk more with Edward and get to know him so she won't drain him dry.   It's worrying that she can't drink from anyone else.    And Edward sure is shy.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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