Date: 29 Jun 2020 9:53 AM Title: Found At Last
I like it.
i hate it when characters make comments like that: you're a rare thing you know, a woman who (whatever it might be). Like the only way to appreciate someone is to put down the rest of their sex/species.
But aside from that, I like it.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 12:06 PM Title: Hiding In Plain Sight
Interesting. Is Aro in on it or have all 6 developed some defense against his gift? 20 years is a long time to avoid a handshake
He's not in on it and they have used other means to control him,
glad you like it xx
Date: 21 Jun 2020 5:52 AM Title: Hiding In Plain Sight
Interested! Excited for an update! This is crazy. I want to know how they got Jasper down there, or even how they're keeping the other three silent. Esma I can understand but Rose and Emmett? Please tell me this'll be as much if a whirlwind as I think it will.
Do you have pre-written chapters, or is this a post-as-I-write-it update schedule?
Well I hope it will be, I usually write as I go, but it's on FFn and they are ahead by 3 chapters if that helps,
but I post every week and always finish my stories xx
Date: 20 Jun 2020 7:04 PM Title: Hiding In Plain Sight
WOW! What a start, can't wait for more. Please do NOT stop. You have wetted the apitite and it woud be as crule as Jasper's treatment to stop now. Thanks
You should know by now I never leave a story unfinished. Glad you liked the opening chapter xx
Date: 20 Jun 2020 3:51 PM Title: Hiding In Plain Sight
Wow great start. Not a J & B fan but think I might have to read bit more. Stars hates me so doubt you will see this review.
Thanks & Hi,
So happy you've decided to give it a try, hope you enjoy the rest xx