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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

Wow, what an emotional chapter. Great job 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 29

Awww poor Bella one thing after another

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella cannot catch a break.
Time is currently not on her side.
Who's running the company?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2021 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Edward and Bella.... 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2021 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 29

This chapter really brought on my water works.   It sounds like Edward figured out what his wrong assumptions might have cost him.   Or maybe Emmett told him?   Hmm.....

He is going to full of more self loathing after this situation.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh No!! Edward jumping to anger and conclusions again. Perhaps he needs to see someone before Bella runs back.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2021 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

wow, he really has trust issues

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh no. I hope it doesn't take long for Edward to listen 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well, Edward has done it again.  He did not listen to Bella and said hurtful things that he can't take back. Edward already promised that he wouldn't hurt Bella again. Can't wait for the update.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2021 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

He should have listened to Bella 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh wow, yet another great chapter however, I can't believe you decided to go along this route.  I sincerely hope there are cameras in the office so this misunderstanding can all be cleared up but at the same time I wouldn't put it past Bella now to consult Esmee and possibly take Victoria up on her offer. 

Just a question though there will definitely be a HEA?  The amount of times Bella and Edward have had sex they have never taken any precautions, will she end up pregnant?  Just a thought that's all.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter already and hopefully all things will be resolved xxx

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward is an idiot.    Ugh....    Bella should be mad.     Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh no, Edward jumping to the wrong conclusions is never a good thing.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aw this is awful I'm sorry Edward had to see James hands on Bella..I don't know if he will believe Bella that nothing happen between them..I'm sorry Bella didn't  just go to dinner with Edward and his family..Thank you  for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Aw this is awful I'm sorry Edward had to see James hands on Bella..I don't know if he will believe Bella that nothing happen between them..I'm sorry Bella didn't  just go to dinner with Edward and his family..Thank you  for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2021 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh man...these two can't seem to get psat the drama!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2021 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 28

Does Bella seek out Esme?
There must be cameras at the office. Emmett needs to ask for copies from Rosalie to review what happened.
Wondering if Bella will seek employment elsewhere? Victoria has offered. So has Jane. Would she uproot Katie again?

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2021 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

Damn it Edward! How could be even think that considering how Bella feels about James. He KNOWS this. And he didn't even give Bella a chance. I know he's damaged and has a horrible past but I thought he trusted her. Ugh! SHE should be pissed at him. (PS... all venting is directed towards Edward... not the author. ;) I LOVE the author and her work.)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2021 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 28

I had a feeling you were going to go down  this road. I really wish you hadn't 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 27

I am surprised that Emmett asked that of Bella.  But if James does slip and do something then the quicker he is out. I kept waiting for James to do something at this beach party. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2021 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 27

I don't trust this James douche one bit.    Bella should always have a witness in the room with him at all times.   shudders....

It's so sad that Senna is ruining her child's friendships out of spite.   :(

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 27

Fun times 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved the chapter!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter,  i love how Edward is more relaxed and outgoing in social situations because Bella has brought out the best of him. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

Great job

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

I wouldn't want to work with James either. Senna is such a piece of work.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2021 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 27

Will James be able to keep it strictly professional?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2021 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2021 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Bella is in the wrong
Edward is her boss, and needed to to act like a boss.
He needs to understand that he did not nothing wrong the way he acted with his employees
I'm angry with all of them. not helping E to see that for once he acted right

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad they finally talked things out. James is such a nasty piece of work.   They need cameras and audio in the office to catch that stuff.  Awe for Carlisle & Esme and ily's. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 26

I'm relieved that Bella and Edward talked to each other and are on the mend.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

Big progress for Edward to say i love yous to his parents and seek out their guidance. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

They both have e been through alot.  Loved that Edward told both of his parents that he loved them. Bella could have always went home with Edward since Katie was spending the night away from home. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am glad they talk really love momma esme he said I love you to esme and Carlisle

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 26

Glad they made up but it was not really either of their faults what happended.  James need to screw up so he can get the boot!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 26

The biggest breakthrough for Edward was his statement of loving his adoptive parents.
The rest falls under the catagory of balancing a relationship in the work place.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2021 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 26

The biggest breakthrough for Edward was his statement of loving his adoptive parents.
The rest falls under the catagory of balancing a relationship in the work place.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad they resolved things

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2021 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward is the CEO of the company and he had an obligation to handle the incident in a specific way to not show partiality to his girlfriend.  I can see how she felt but she needs to consider where he was coming from too.  He can't put his company at risk. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2021 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward is the CEO of the company and he had an obligation to handle the incident in a specific way to not show partiality to his girlfriend.  I can see how she felt but she needs to consider where he was coming from too.  He can't put his company at risk. 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2021 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward is the CEO of the company and he had an obligation to handle the incident in a specific way to not show partiality to his girlfriend.  I can see how she felt but she needs to consider where he was coming from too.  He can't put his company at risk. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

James is an ass

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love wolf lodge. Went there when my kids were little. James is Def a sleeze.  I think Bella overreacted a little but Edward needs to make sure things are done right so they can get rid of him without a lawsuit. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2021 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 25

Bella's lack of experience in the work place, coupled with her loneliness from a lack of adult support, caused an irrational reaction to Edward the Boss as he processed his official action against another employee.
Edward's history will make him panic where their relationship is concerned. He's been abused in so many ways.
Esme did the right thing by talking Bella through the unique circumstances.
How is Emmett dealing with his team member accosting another employee?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for the update..Wow  James is really something else..I'm  sorry Edward didn't  beat the shit out of him..I know he couldn't  because of who he is in the company.  Im sure James will get whats coming to him.  Im happy Bella can work remotely..Until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for the update..Wow  James is really something else..I'm  sorry Edward didn't  beat the shit out of him..I know he couldn't  because of who he is in the company.  Im sure James will get whats coming to him.  Im happy Bella can work remotely..Until you post again 

Reviewer: canyaceme Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yes, Bella overreacted.  She was so caught up in her own drama that she didn't see what Edward was going through.  There needs to be a mugging with masked men catching James out and beating the holy s**t out of him.  That's the only thing he will understand .

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow it went from great to upset and angry but I understand her side and his

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow it went from great to upset and angry but I understand her side and his

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow it went from great to upset and angry but I understand her side and his

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love Esme

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

😊 Nice working vaca

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

😊 Nice working vaca

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter.  Love Esme helping Bella in such a motherly way 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

Lol. Dang that was a short party for them. I love Katie!

Reviewer: shannabanana1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

That Eataly place looks cool!

She overreacted, he had to separate the boss and the BF.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

I don't blame Bella for being upset with Edward.  I would have to. I understand that Edward was brought up different by he was kind of cold. He should have tried to explain to Bella a little more. I know Bella didn't really give him a chancee but he could have stopped her and they could have talked. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2021 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2021 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sometimes we learn way too much about workmates, friends, and neighbors when secrets are spilled. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 24

You did an awesome job with their love making. It was beautiful!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sounds like they had an awesome trip.   Glad Katie was OK.  

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

I enjoyed the update!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Beautiful chapter.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2021 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

The little group all got along and learned some 'interesting' thingfs about each other.   hehehe...

Bella and Edward were definitely hot together.   They should move in together soon.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

It seems everyone had a great time heheheheh lovely 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2021 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you for the update..Well done..James is a sleeze..I'm happy Bella was not in Her office alone when James came in..I'm happy they are having a great time in New York so far..Victoria wants Bella on her team I'm happy Bella decline the offer.  Edward and Bella are about to get to know each other a little better ..Kit Kat misses her sister Esme and Carlisle  are taking great care of her..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

We do not mind a hundred or so pages. Lol. The longer the better. Loving this story.  

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

I'm so relieved that everyone seems to be wary of James and documenting what he is doing.   ugh....   What a creeper....

Bella making Katie 'legally' safe and 'emotionally' safe by calling her lots makes her a great big sister.

Edward and Bella's sexy tension is being noticed by lots of people.   fans self....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Eww James is so nastily smarmy. Glad they are talking to Katie, keeping her in the loop with the possible delays. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

Firing James will be a huge endeavor.
Hell find a way to hurt Edward or Bella for sure.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

Cheers. Here's toasting to a sexy night for Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

Cheers. Here's toasting to a sexy night for Edward and Bella. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I love it they way they are how they are with Katie and family it's too sweet 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

Edward is so good to his girls. Loved the time Edward spent with Carlisle.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love how this new little family is coming together for each other in good times, bad times and healing times.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love how Edward's family have become that support network for katie and bella

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love how Edward's family have become that support network for katie and bella

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

The Grinch'so heart has definitely grown at least three sizes.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

Glad the Bella and Katie are getting te help they need.   Hope this trip will be ok for Katie.  A will is very smart

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

I love it so very much it's beautiful 

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Finally caught up on this latest chapter, I seriously hope James does not come between Edward and Bella especially now their relationship is progressing.  I hope Edward kicks James out if he starts to cause trouble.

 

Take care, stay safe and I'll eagerly be waiting for your next chapter x

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2021 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

I loved it wow what a chapter can't wait for the next

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