Date: 22 Oct 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Oh no poor Bella, I sincerely hope Bella gives Edward a mouthful about how he is suddenly treating her, he should also be honest about his past relationships and maybe send Irene on her way due to the way she's behaving/treating Bella. I hope there is a happy ending to all of this and Edward doesn't fall into Irene's trap.
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:44 PM Title: Chapter Eleven
Time for Irene to leave. How can u see people working each day and she does nothing. And Edward is so wrong to not be upfront with his previous relationship with her and the bad behavior started with him sitting his wife in the back of the buggy. Please update soon.
Date: 02 Oct 2020 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Nine
I absolutely loved this chapter.
You captured the emotion perfectly.
The speech Edward made to Bella
about how the men interpreted
Bellas actions was amazing.
I think she will find out that she has their
complete loyalty as the Missus of the ranch.
Date: 24 Aug 2020 8:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven
Finally, I'm all caught-up and looking forward to reading more. I appreicate your description of their wedding night. So many authors detail every single movement and draw it out to the point that a reader gets burned out on sex scenes. You did a fantastic job leading up to the wedding day. I'm curious as to where Edward has planned to take her on their honeymoon.