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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 11:51 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Irene trouble maker. Keep on writing

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2020 4:55 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Many a close calls in this chapter; all for different reasons. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Yikes. Irene is up to no good.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 4:36 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Rut-roh...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Aw, I'm gonna miss Mrs Cope. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2020 1:27 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 10:19 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Bella should pack Irene's bags for her 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 5:41 PM Title: Chapter Twelve

Whew.. send that heiffer packing and don't pay her fare. Let her work it off in a saloon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 9:15 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

Thank you for 2 in a row I would of lost my mind thinking Edward was doing something wrong.  I love how Rose was helping her leave lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Kick that skanky thing out of the house

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 8:50 AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Kick that skanky thing out of the house

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2020 7:26 AM Title: Chapter Twelve

angry

OMG  Irene needs a good hard kick in the arse.  Glad E threw her out.   What a biatch.

 

Phew for getting to Bella before it was too late.  Hope she doesn't get pneumonia or anything like that.  

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh no poor Bella, I sincerely hope Bella gives Edward a mouthful about how he is suddenly treating her, he should also be honest about his past relationships and maybe send Irene on her way due to the way she's behaving/treating Bella.  I hope there is a happy ending to all of this and Edward doesn't fall into Irene's trap.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

He should not have accepted the young woman in his home. She is not being a good guest. Poor Bella. Load your gun and get rid of her.

Reviewer: Tayjj44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:44 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

Time for Irene to leave. How can u see people working each day and she does nothing.  And Edward is so wrong to not be upfront with his previous relationship with her and the bad behavior started with him sitting his wife in the back of the buggy. Please update soon. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 8:01 PM Title: Chapter Eleven

hmm Bella is right to be wary, but Edward needs to man up and tell her whats what.  Glad she isn't tolerating Irenes nonsense.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2020 5:52 PM Title: Chapter Ten

WTF who is that?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2020 5:17 PM Title: Chapter Ten

Mrs Cope was an awesome lady.  Glad she could help even with her gone.  Oh now you silly with the ending.  Bet its a cousin or something from back home.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 6:48 AM Title: Chapter Ten

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 5:02 AM Title: Chapter Ten

So happy for them and so thanks full for Mrs C.  I hope Bella does not have to kill Edward now lol

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:42 PM Title: Chapter Ten

I'm loving it so far!

 

Thanks for writing the western!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2020 3:10 AM Title: Chapter Nine

You did a good job of a tough subject.  RIP Mrs. Cope your family will miss you.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter Nine

Glad the ranch is coming together.  Love the blanket idea.  Bella did well all things considered.  E was so nice talking to her in the end. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2020 9:40 PM Title: Chapter Nine

So sad..... 

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 11:26 PM Title: Chapter Nine

I absolutely loved this chapter. 

You captured the emotion perfectly.

The speech Edward made to Bella

about how the men interpreted 

Bellas actions was amazing.

I think she will find out that she has their 

complete loyalty as the Missus of the ranch.

Great Job

Thank You

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 6:05 PM Title: Chapter Nine

RIP Mrs cope

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 10:28 AM Title: Chapter Eight

 

J'aime ce chapitre. Je préfère de loin quand tout va bien pour nos amoureux. Je vous remercie.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 1:55 AM Title: Chapter Nine

how sad poor Mrs  she will be missed

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 11:38 PM Title: Chapter Nine

That life required a lot of hard work. I don't think I'd be up to the task. I can barely keep up here at my home, with all the conveniences we have now.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2020 2:50 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Awe its beautiful

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2020 9:14 AM Title: Chapter Eight

Great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2020 9:32 PM Title: Chapter Eight

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter Eight

wonderful

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter Eight

nice to see a pleasant Jessica for a change. Sounds like a lovely place for a honeymoon.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 8:29 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Finally, I'm all caught-up and looking forward to reading more. I appreicate your description of their wedding night. So many authors detail every single movement and draw it out to the point that a reader gets burned out on sex scenes. You did a fantastic job leading up to the wedding day. I'm curious as to where Edward has planned to take her on their honeymoon.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 4:52 AM Title: Chapter Six

I'm enjoying this fic.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2020 4:10 AM Title: Chapter Five

Things are moving along fairly quickly. Old wives tale traditions were something else back in those days.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 8:06 PM Title: Chapter Four

The date is set.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 7:14 AM Title: Chapter Three

I'm enjoying this story so much.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Happy2beme Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Smn46@roadrunner.com

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 5:46 AM Title: Chapter Two

Bella's settling in fairly well.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 4:24 AM Title: Chapter One

Things are about to get shaken up at the ranch.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2020 3:29 AM Title: Prologue

Finally getting to start this one. Intriguing start. I'm looking forward to catching up and reading more.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 8:35 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Lovely wedding and chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter Seven

Wonderful time for them love it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2020 6:48 PM Title: Chapter Seven

Awww wonderful wedding build up and ending

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2020 3:19 PM Title: Chapter Seven

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2020 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Six

Wonderful to see everyone working together.  Rose and Angela are so sweet

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 9:46 PM Title: Chapter Six

:) 

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 2:22 PM Title: Chapter Six

Love this story..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter Six

i KNOW life back then was tough but I wish I could of had that kind of life other than no fan fiction what would I do lol

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2020 1:58 PM Title: Chapter Five

Aww for Ben and Angel .  Lol for the bundling bed

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2020 1:48 PM Title: Chapter Four

Roosters can be nice or evil .  We had one on the farm whose name was Mr. Nasty.  Charlie is a real piece of work.  Aww poor Sue & Leah have to work now... Not.  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter Five

Finally, I'm all caught-up. I'm actually looking forward to more. As many westerns I have read I've never read one where a bundling bag practice was ever mentioned; quiet interesting.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2020 4:42 AM Title: Chapter Four

Good riddance to the likes of Charlie and Sue. Bella's better off to be moving on with Edward.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter Three

I couldn't help but to smile as Edward wasted no time in claiming Bella for his own and made sure his men knew it.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 6:49 PM Title: Chapter Two

Bella appears to be settling well into her new life on the ranch.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 10:07 AM Title: Chapter One

I'm enjoying catching up on this story. Westerns have also intrigued me.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 8:41 AM Title: Prologue

I'm intrigued with the start of your western.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2020 2:07 PM Title: Chapter Five

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2020 8:44 AM Title: Chapter Five

I am so excited for them life is getting busy on the ranch

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2020 5:33 AM Title: Chapter Four

Charlie is an ass hole .  

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 7:58 PM Title: Chapter Four

:}

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter Four

:) I love

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Four

:)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:45 AM Title: Chapter Four

Charlie is despicable 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:45 AM Title: Chapter Four

Charlie is despicable 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 5:36 PM Title: Chapter Three

Great chapter

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:43 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting storyline

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 5:49 PM Title: Chapter Three

It’s a good chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2020 5:26 AM Title: Chapter Three

aww they are so cute together.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 8:55 PM Title: Chapter Two

Sounds like everyone is a real family there

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 7:25 PM Title: Chapter One

Lol for mrs cope not mentioning a girl

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 2:42 PM Title: Chapter Three

I really love this version.   Please update soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter Three

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 10:26 AM Title: Chapter Three

I love it Edward knew he had better make a move fast before everyone else tried to court her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:28 AM Title: Chapter Two

I am loving this so far and just cant wait for more thanks so much

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 3:11 AM Title: Chapter Two

:):)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 3:39 PM Title: Chapter Two

:) 

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2020 9:54 AM Title: Chapter Two

Thank You for sharing your work!! I want to know what is in the package!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter One

:):)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2020 10:14 PM Title: Chapter One

:) 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2020 12:37 PM Title: Prologue

Good start! That’s interesting. Kisses

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2020 12:37 PM Title: Prologue

Good start! That’s interesting. Kisses

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2020 8:02 AM Title: Chapter One

Surprise Surprise Surprise OMG

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2020 4:24 AM Title: Chapter One

He is smitten already.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2020 12:03 AM Title: Prologue

Westerns are one of my favorite fis genres. Mail Order Bride I reread each year. I look forward to your take on life in frontier Colorado.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 5:22 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 4:28 PM Title: Prologue

I'm ready for more! I love tales of the old west.

Reviewer: Grace89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 8:38 AM Title: Prologue

Yes! I've been waiting for a fic like this 😁 can't wait to see how it develops 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 1:13 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2020 11:42 PM Title: Prologue

Nice start . Can't wait to see where it goes.  Glad rose got away . 

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