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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2020 10:06 PM Title: Chapter-39: Justification

Perfect comment with the prompt for emmett!

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Date: 22 Jun 2020 10:05 PM Title: Chapter-38: Close Call

Those prompts of marbles and then jack is very funny. 

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Date: 22 Jun 2020 9:54 PM Title: Chapter-37: It Keeps Piling On

Bella is about to lose her marbles too!

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Date: 22 Jun 2020 9:52 PM Title: Chapter-36: Mending Fences

The clock is ticking! Loved how u tied watch in there!

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Date: 22 Jun 2020 5:27 AM Title: Chapter-47: Phone Calls

James knows that Jane is up to now good

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Date: 21 Jun 2020 11:47 PM Title: Chapter-46: Discoveries

:) 

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Date: 21 Jun 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter-46: Discoveries

who is the nosey old jerk

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Date: 20 Jun 2020 9:30 AM Title: Chapter-44: Friendships

Love it

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Date: 20 Jun 2020 9:26 AM Title: Chapter-45: Pawn

She is good at being bad EVIL

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Date: 20 Jun 2020 7:39 AM Title: Chapter-45: Pawn

:) 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:34 PM Title: Chapter-35: Toxic Alliance

Jane screams to me “i’ll get you my pretty and your little dog too”

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:31 PM Title: Chapter-34: Kissed By The Viper

A flushed face is pink! Perfect!! I’m now wondering if seth is an evil little intern scientist himself. 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter-33: Bad News Travels Fast

I loved How you added cluster in there!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:24 PM Title: Chapter-32: Cinderella

Ashes ashes we all fall down. :)

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter-31: Rendezvous

You did great!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter-30: Misgivings

I did not see the word prompt in this one? Did i miss it?

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:12 PM Title: Chapter-29: Wildfire

Butt-load.....was that innuendo or just my mind thinking dirty? 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter-28: Alliance

Emmett is an interesting character.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:09 PM Title: Chapter-27: Ray of Sunshine

Again way to go with calibrate!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter-26: Regretful Reunions

Well maybe he’s bi? I’ll keep the dream alive in my imagination. Hahaha

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:03 PM Title: Chapter-25: The Hooded Monk

Yeah james that is called foreshadowing buddy!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 5:02 PM Title: Chapter-24: Frenemies

Is edward gay? That is a wonderful twist if so. I’ll take edward any way you serve him up! 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:58 PM Title: Chapter-23: Silence is Golden

He knows but does he realize she just called him ignorant to what is going to happen to him.  Love how you made it work!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter-22: Biting The Bullet

Another fun twist and another brilliant use of the word prompt!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:54 PM Title: Chapter-21: Doubtful

Cute little nerd edward! Love him! Yep james your turkey is done and you def. pulled the short end of the wishbone!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:51 PM Title: Chapter-20: Not What It Seems

So they are side by side in the office. Are they on the “sly” too? I’m really not begging for romance. I like the tone of this story. I just like imagining. Hahahaah

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:48 PM Title: Chapter-19: On The Prowl

45 words and you did it! This whole story is like watching an intense competition, you the writer againest the word prompt and words limit. You are showing off your talent! Thanks for sharing! 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:44 PM Title: Chapter-18: A Woman Scorned

James might just be signing his death certificate by telling her anything.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:41 PM Title: Chapter-17: Just A Number

Ms. Cope might not be an informant for long. 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter-16: Glitch

I knew it! Idiot! 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:38 PM Title: Chapter-15: New Direction

That was a little more touchng than just coworkers.....are they hiding a secret of their own?

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:36 PM Title: Chapter-14: Visitor

So it’s not just greed that she was after. 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:33 PM Title: Chapter-13: A New Monarch

Nice little twist you threw in there her being the wife. I think elves with only 100 words was your hardest prompt. At least with wishbone you had 300 words. Awesome job!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter-12: Ground Zero

Can he make enough antidote to go around.i’m betting he isn’t as prepared as he thinks.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:30 PM Title: Chapter-11: Theatrics

He was speaking the truth with that last statement!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:29 PM Title: Chapter-10: Endemic…?

And so it begins!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:29 PM Title: Chapter-9: Realization

Now that it’s done, i don’t think james or jane are any better. Nothing like evil breeds evil.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:26 PM Title: Chapter-8: Wish Upon a Turkey

I love that edwards is docile at work amoung collegues but holds his own while investigating. It’s def. a nice change!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:25 PM Title: Chapter-7: Partners in Crime

Jane you just couldn’t stay out of it!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:15 PM Title: Chapter-6: Anonymous

magnolia funeral home hahahahahha (evil laugh)

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:13 PM Title: Chapter-5:Patient Zero

Every prompt i’m expecting you to use it in one way and then you surprise me again and use it in a different definition and all in 100 words this time.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:09 PM Title: Chapter-4: Bon Voyage

You are knocking it out of the park....”springing into action.” In my head i was yelling back up and stay away from him or you are going to catch it.

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter-3: Onset

I loved how you worked in vintage rolex! 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter-2: Hero

He is a genius for telling the fbi first! If only that could have been part of our truth! If only you could re-write history!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 4:04 PM Title: Chapter-1: Reprobate

I’m excited to see what you do with these prompts!

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter-44: Friendships

:) 

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Date: 19 Jun 2020 12:21 AM Title: Chapter-43: Briefing

:) 

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Date: 17 Jun 2020 7:56 AM Title: Chapter-43: Briefing

If only he could relax lol

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Date: 17 Jun 2020 7:54 AM Title: Chapter-42: Blabbermouth

and James know this first hand 

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Date: 16 Jun 2020 9:17 PM Title: Chapter-42: Blabbermouth

:) 

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Date: 16 Jun 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter-41: This I Promise You

:) 

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Date: 16 Jun 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter-40: Venus Fly Trap

:) 

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Date: 15 Jun 2020 6:02 AM Title: Chapter-41: This I Promise You

That was so sweet she is not giving up on him

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Date: 14 Jun 2020 4:52 AM Title: Chapter-40: Venus Fly Trap

Run Seth Run lol

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Date: 14 Jun 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter-39: Justification

They have a lot to prove

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Date: 12 Jun 2020 9:34 PM Title: Chapter-39: Justification

:) 

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Date: 12 Jun 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter-38: Close Call

:) 

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Date: 12 Jun 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter-37: It Keeps Piling On

:) 

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Date: 11 Jun 2020 8:46 AM Title: Chapter-38: Close Call

I think he told her everything 

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Date: 10 Jun 2020 4:41 AM Title: Chapter-37: It Keeps Piling On

Im with Bella about to lose her marbles lol

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Date: 08 Jun 2020 6:08 AM Title: Chapter-36: Mending Fences

That was sweet Emmett still cares about his friend

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Date: 08 Jun 2020 1:54 AM Title: Chapter-36: Mending Fences

:) 

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Date: 07 Jun 2020 9:47 PM Title: Chapter-35: Toxic Alliance

:) 

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Date: 07 Jun 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter-35: Toxic Alliance

She is a nasty ass bitch 

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Date: 07 Jun 2020 12:04 AM Title: Chapter-34: Kissed By The Viper

:) 

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Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter-33: Bad News Travels Fast

I would like Edward to smile at me like that

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Date: 04 Jun 2020 9:45 PM Title: Chapter-33: Bad News Travels Fast

:) 

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Date: 04 Jun 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter-32: Cinderella

:) 

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Date: 03 Jun 2020 9:31 PM Title: Chapter-32: Cinderella

lol Emmett is so smart

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Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:43 AM Title: Chapter-31: Rendezvous

He has a friend indeed

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Date: 03 Jun 2020 12:01 AM Title: Chapter-31: Rendezvous

:) 

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Date: 03 Jun 2020 12:00 AM Title: Chapter-30: Misgivings

:) 

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Date: 02 Jun 2020 6:19 AM Title: Chapter-30: Misgivings

He knows that she is evil maybe even more evil than he

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Date: 01 Jun 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter-29: Wildfire

Some people are just dumb ass dont pay attention to them I am loving this little story.  Thank so much for what you do.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 6:37 AM Title: Chapter-29: Wildfire

:) 

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Date: 31 May 2020 6:28 AM Title: Chapter-28: Alliance

love it lol

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Date: 30 May 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter-28: Alliance

:) 

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Date: 30 May 2020 4:53 PM Title: Chapter-28: Alliance

:}

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Date: 29 May 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter-27: Ray of Sunshine

:) 

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Date: 29 May 2020 5:29 AM Title: Chapter-27: Ray of Sunshine

He is messing with her head lol

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Date: 28 May 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter-26: Regretful Reunions

:) 

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Date: 28 May 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter-25: The Hooded Monk

:) 

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Date: 28 May 2020 3:19 AM Title: Chapter-26: Regretful Reunions

I love Mulder what happened to them 

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Date: 27 May 2020 10:07 AM Title: Chapter-25: The Hooded Monk

He knows his time is coming near lol

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Date: 26 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter-24: Frenemies

:) 

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Date: 26 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter-23: Silence is Golden

:) 

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Date: 26 May 2020 7:50 AM Title: Chapter-24: Frenemies

Emmett is not happy to see Edward???.  James is not a smart as Jane thinks opps

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Date: 26 May 2020 6:31 AM Title: Chapter-23: Silence is Golden

I dont think she believes him lol

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Date: 26 May 2020 6:28 AM Title: Chapter-21: Doubtful

OMFG

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Date: 25 May 2020 1:15 AM Title: Chapter-22: Biting The Bullet

Emmett is not happy with Edward

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Date: 24 May 2020 10:57 PM Title: Chapter-22: Biting The Bullet

:) 

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Date: 23 May 2020 6:56 PM Title: Chapter-21: Doubtful

:) 

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Date: 22 May 2020 11:37 AM Title: Chapter-20: Not What It Seems

:) 

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Date: 22 May 2020 7:51 AM Title: Chapter-20: Not What It Seems

OMG shit is real

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Date: 21 May 2020 10:54 PM Title: Chapter-19: On The Prowl

:) 

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Date: 21 May 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter-19: On The Prowl

Poor women 

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Date: 20 May 2020 9:39 PM Title: Chapter-18: A Woman Scorned

:) 

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Date: 20 May 2020 1:57 AM Title: Chapter-18: A Woman Scorned

she was used by her father and Aro but that is not a good reason to be crazy lol

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Date: 19 May 2020 11:35 AM Title: Chapter-17: Just A Number

:) 

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Date: 19 May 2020 2:46 AM Title: Chapter-17: Just A Number

Numbers are biger than that OMG

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